“I Say No” Squirrelflight Animatic
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- čas přidán 16. 11. 2020
- Squirrelflight cutting Bramblestar off, what I wish would happen but never will :’)
The song is “I Say No” from the Heathers(west end) musical!
I found the West End version of heathers around the same time Moonkitti posted her video on why Bramble is awful. Heard this song and instantly Squirrelflight came to mind.
Go check out Moon’s video! It’s very good and well made; • Bramblestar is Worse
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you know what's sad is that.. brambleclaw wasn't even supposed to be abusive, but idk how the Erin's accidentally wrote an abusive relationship
And it’s such a realistic depiction of one that you wonder if it’s an accident!
Seriously how do they "accidentally" do that? There's writer's who try and fail horribly
@@sunnydaisies500 thinking about it, maybe that’s why, y’know?
Perhaps by wanting to write abusive characters, writers still end up writing characters they want people to understand, but by writing a real personality for Bramblestar, they created a real person, an abusive one at that.
It makes me wonder if one of the writers was in an abusive relationship and if they think that's what love is.
c-can someone check in with them? like, are they ok??
Woah,
Holy moly, the emotion in this bad boy is incredible!!! Gave me goosebumps a few times here. I love this!!!
Tysm!! I love your work ;;
Wow! Blixemi! Can't believe ur here! I love your vids and you are 100% correct, this is a real work of art!
Please someone send this to Moonkitti
Same! This is honestly my favorite Warrior Cats animatic Ive ever seen (and Ive seen many!)
Ayy what's up Blix?
This is exactly what she needs to tell him
“I love it when you hold me close, but you won’t be satisfied until I overdose.”
Damn. Squirrelflight, we hate your mans.
Honest there's been multiple characters who gave horrible love interest choices. Like for example Dovewing has Bumblestripe or Tiger(heart)star. Erin Hunters have stated that Tiger(heart)star sees her as an object, and while I didn't see it the first time I read the books but Bumblestripe is being forceful to get in a relationship with her.
Yes, but they said that when they were still writing Omens of the Stars so it could've changed later on in the other serries that came afterward.
@@dogsandcatsrule3856 i feel like, if at all, Tigerheart was only like that at first. In Tigerheart's shadow, he was shown to truly love her - and, like, the book is in his POV, meaning it's his true thoughts.
@@dogsandcatsrule3856 bumblestripe gave me flashbacks to when annoying af guys would flirt wity me, and me being aroace absolutely hating how forceful and nasty they were.
Prob why squirrel and Dove are my favs 😍💓
@@jayus4516 However, I believe tigerhearts shadow was written by Kate Cary, who personally loved the idea of Tigerdove at the time(despite the ship absolutely ruining both Dove's and Tiger's character).
0:54 Omg, the way he looks so furious and then forces a sad expression so when he turns around he can try to manipulate her. That's actually terrifying.
And then he goes back to a angry expression. What a douchebag.
Remember back when everyone said that Squirrelflight was annoying and didn’t deserve her own book or the “love” that Brambleclaw gave to her
@@grousehound7912 Yeah, Bramble flipping sucks. Moonkitti made an hour long video about how much he sucks, the fact that it's an hour long should speak for itself.
I’m so glad we are all collectively agreeing how toxic Bramble is-
I know right?!😂
I like Bramblestar and Squirrelflight is a horrid mate
@@Meow_meow_0 are you saying Squirrelflight is in the wrong? Because if that’s what you’re saying, I agree to disagree. Bramble was very terrible in the way he treated Squirrelflight.
@@Meow_meow_0 yeah, sure. SquirrelFlight tricked Bramblestar into raising 3 kits that weren't his. But he literally would always talk down to her, bossed her around. And was overall the stereotypical Controlling boyfriend. Meanwhile ashfur treated Squirrel like a kid
@@Meow_meow_0 Why do you like him?
Wish we could get a scene like this in canon. This is GORGEOUS and it makes my heart swell. Squirrelflight has such a strong character that is dimmed down by Bramblestar every time they interact. She stands up for herself, is bold, is decisive, passionate. This animatic and its flawless execution really shows what Squirrelflight needs and how her character really is.
This song fits so well! Especially when it said, “blame your childhood, blame your dad, blame the life you never had. But hurting people, that’s your choice” Bramble has had a rough life, but that doesn’t give him any excuse to hurt Squirrel or anybody else, it doesn’t justify that for anyone. I love the style and all the emotion, this animatic is sooo good! You’ve really outdone yourself, I hope u keep creating more awesome stuff like this 😊😄
Doesnt give him the excuse to let a woman bleed out cause his wife "disobeyed" him lol. Or anything else he did
If only this could be in the books-
@@stardust_rosewolf ah yes, we just love abuse. Dont be a toxic shipper, not everyone is going to agree with your ship.
@@AverageDonaldDuckFan that person has left the same reply to almost all the comments and it’s honestly really annoying
@@negativedawn136 I'm reporting them for spam
@@AverageDonaldDuckFan Husky has been deleting most of their comments at least
@@AverageDonaldDuckFan what did they say?
Bramblestar may have apologized Squirrelflight's hope, but the way he did it raises red flags. "we shouldn't have let things get so bad", is what he said to Squirrelflightafter she came back to life. He used the word "we", and didn't even acknowledge his cruel behavior and put them both at equal fault as though Squirrelflight is somehow as bad as him. She is not.
She definitively is, if not worse. She’s just female and fans remove her from all her responsibilities for their relationship. She is just as bossy, hard headed, and emotionally manipulative as people accuse him of being. For him though they label him as abusive, for her, it’s “empowering” and “free spirited”
@@brinana3629 there is a CZcamsr who went into long depth as to how Squirrelflight is NOT as bad as Bramblestar. Moonkitti. You should check it out. And regardless, he has power over her and always has, and if he uses his power to treat her like a child if she doesn't stay quiet and obedient then the relationship is not healthy
@@brinana3629 Hello there. Must I mention the females that Fans absolutely attack and ridicule? No. They remove her from taking responsibility... because she has nothing to take responsibility for. She is not these things, and I challenge you to provide context.
@@MahkRonAKash the context is the books. You’re probably 12, but I urge you to actually look at her actions from another character’s perspective
@@brinana3629 21 actually.
Likewise, I urge you to actually make a point. Which specific scenes have given you this impression of her? What has she done? The lie? Hawkfrost? Her super edition? Where.
That's what I'm asking.
I love how her response to *”bUt I lOvE yOu!”* is basically just _”...bruh.”_
Fun fact, in the context for the musical JD points a gun at her and Veronica is like "dude you're just proving my point"
This. Is. AMAZINGGG!! And it illustrates Squirrelflight as a character so well! Not only does the artstyle flow so well and look so appealing, it's a very powerful message, one that I wish the series would stand to address. Sometimes relationships don't work out, sometimes people can't be fixed, and that's not your fault; you look out for YOURSELF. Who knows; maybe they'll come back actually changed, or maybe they never will see the light. But it's not your responsibility and you don't owe them anything anyway, especially after they hurt you. Even if they do change, it's your choice to be together with them again.
The Erins, of course, will never realize what they've made Bramblestar into, and will never do an arc like this. But it's so great to think about, and it works so well with Squirrelflight's hyperactive, outspoken, and strong personality. If only we could have Bramblestar legitimately reform into a good person to contrast with his father...but I guess we'll have to just hug Tawnypelt close to our hearts.
Thank you so so so much for making this animatic!! It's so well done, so thoughtful, so powerful, with such a good message...you are absolutely, 100% underrated!
Honestly. I mean Bramblestar is annoying too because he is angry with Squirrelflight for caring for leafpool’s kits as her own. That made me so angry. However, in the latest books it is not actually him who is being bossy and misleading and distructive. I don’t know who took him over, but no spoilers please if you know. I wanna find out for myself.
@@morningrosie3684 Oh I'm not talking specifically about Bramblestar with the kits or about him in the new arc. I don't know if you've seen it yet, but Moonkitti's video explains in excruciating detail why Bramblestar is abusive and why Squirrelflight needs to break up with him. Please watch it if you have time. czcams.com/video/pAv-CTp2AoQ/video.html
And you know what makes this so sad? The new team is fully capable of creating that message. Hell, they did it in Crowfeather's Trial with Nightcloud and Crowfeather. Why can't they just do what they did with Night and Crow in one book. It's been over 3 arcs of this nonsense.
@@morningrosie3684dude he was mad cause she deceived him and made him think they were his he had every right to mad!
@@FantasticFawnleap Yeah I know that now.
A lot of people like to blame Squirrelflight's hope for "ruining" Bramblestar, but his abuse towards Squirrelflight in that book really wasn't very out-of-character for him. Bramblestar has been abusive from the moment bramblesquirrel was introduced, only his abuse tactics are much less subtle in Squirrelflight's hope.
This was legitimately the thing that got me to cut ties with my abuser back in December, or at least it helped set things in motion for me. This was posted around the time I was starting to finally notice the red flags but I was too scared to leave, thinking he'd find a way to find me again or that I would be making a mistake.
I remember watching this and feeling so silly for projecting onto Squirrelflight, but also seeing how happy she looked at the end of the animatic, I guess that's when I realized I could be happy too. Even though it's not easy separating from someone you once cared so much about, they can still harbor a lot of toxicity and hatred that ultimately you're better off leaving behind-- something I definitely saw from Bramblestar as well as my actual abuser.
This might sound silly but thank you for this animatic, and for portraying the difficulty of leaving as well as the pure joy and euphoria you eventually feel once you're free. I guess I thought at the time that if a fictional cat in a youtube animation could do it, so could I :)
Oh my god, this is an amazing Animatic, I do really wish Squirrel cuts off Bramble because he has done a lot of bad stuff to her. You are so underrated and I am here to watch you grow!
Tbh I hope Squirrelflight either becomes leader or ditches the clans and goes with the Sisters.
I’d be really happy if she became leader
I don't really want Squirrelstar, no matter how much I love her, because she'll probs end up becoming Firestar 2.0 - but Squilf being in the sister's actually sounds awesome, I'd be down for it.
@@jayus4516 I feel like squilf would be kinda like firestar, but not exactly like him. She would have her faults and mistakes, and she is already doing really well as acting leader, she might continue it as squirrelstar
Sadly Bramble kinda became more like his dad than his siblings (Even Hawkfrost lol) even though that's the last thing he wanted. It would be cool if that was intentional, but I don't think it is.
I hate Bramblestar more than his dad and siblings.
nah, tigerstar was compelling to hate
Yeah I'm sad of the way he turned i used to love brambleclaw but seeing how awfully he is treating her... Man I miss those days :'( Shoo bramblestar
@@cantsalvagethis Tigerstar and Hawkfrost were more "traditionally" evil imo. They were murderers, and that made them easy to hate. I find Bramblestar more hate-able, though, because his is a nuanced evil. He is just as selfish and power hungry, but he's more clever. He can't control the four Clans, but he can control Squilf. He manipulates and abuses her emotionally, leaving the kind of scars that no one can see. Worse, because he is their leader, everyone else *knows* he's treating her terribly, but can't do anything about it. Even StarClan has pushed them together at every turn when Squilf didn't want that back in New Prophecy.
I hate him more because he and StarClan have worked so hard to isolate her. Sure, she *can* go to her friends and family, but they can't help. No one can help. Her choice is to be abused until the day she dies and Brambleclaw likely replaces her, or to leave ThunderClan, and probably all the Clans, entirely. She would have to leave her kits, her grand kits, her sister, her friends, the way of life, home, and people she has known her whole life. Even StarClan likely wouldn't forgive her for abandoning her Clan and the mate they chose for her. So I hate Bramble more. I find his evil so much more sinister, even if it is less destructive.
@@nellbell2568 I'm sure the writers didn't really have a plan for it and didn't intend it, but it seems like Starclan was just mercilessly sacrificing the personal lives of everyone to get the power of three prophecy to work. They shoved Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw together even though he was being horrible to Squilf, tricked Leafpool into thinking she should run away with Crowfeather so that the three would be born and Cinderpelt would die, made Squilf believe she could never have kits so that she would raise Jay Holly and Lion,forced Jawpaw to be a medicine cat when it was the last thing he wanted, the list goes on. It seems like Starclan, and more specifically, Spottedleaf and Yellowfang, have no regard for the feelings of the prophecy cats and their loved ones and just want to get everything over with in anyway they can.
*TLDR: Starclan has been manipulating everyone involved in the power of three prophecy with no regard for their lives and happiness*
I love how the whole community is it agreement that bramblestar is awful and squifl deserves so much more. Like literally *EVERYONE* it's great
*my friend thinks he is great 👀*
@@not.varmit149 HOW DARE YOU TELL MY SECRETS 😩
@@arjsksn8492 Why would anyone think he’s great?!
@@arjsksn8492 How could you ever like him?? He puts Squilf in a toxic relationship and when she argues with him or points something out he did wrong, Bramblestar *Yells* at her, and *guilt trips* her into saying sorry and apologizing.
And in SquirrelFlight's Hope, BrambleStar is willing to turn away an Almost-Dead, Passed-Out rogue that has done no harm to him or his clan, for no reason other then *Clan territory.* In all honesty, SquirrelFlight would've been better off if she got together with Ashfur.
Because NOW, whenever Squilf and Bramble-Bastard fight, he always ends up bringing the kits into it, and he also always brings AshFur into it. I can say with confidence that SquirrelFlight should break up with Bramble, because all he's doing is giving her Depression, and Anxiety, and Self Doubts!
Thank you for listening to my TedTalk.
@@frostfrogs Agree to Disagree
I love how proud of herself that Squirrelflight is. She got out of a toxic relationship, all on her own, that's huge! She should be proud of herself. I just wish she did this in the actual books. Great work with the animatic! The expressions were absolutely amazing!
This song easily applies to BOTH Ashfur and Bramblestar. Squirrelflight deserves far better.
Mmm yesss Heatherrrsss
Low-key tho, Squirrelflight has some Veronica vibes.
Also:
“BUT I LOVE YOU!”
“...dude”
I wish the Erin’s would address this toxic relationship. I’d love to see Squirrelflight ditch Bramblestar.
They really need to get cat divorced
I hate how StarClan said they were made for each other.
I love how Bramble shifts from being angry, to being sad or upset when he addresses Squilf. It really shows how he guilt trips her to do what he wants or to get her to stay with him or feel bad for him when all he wants is to control her. this animatic is so perfect, and gave me so much inspiration for my oc warriors book that I'm writing that has a couple a lot like this
I hate how Bramble treats Squilf. I also love how the fandom is aware of how Bramblestar is and ever since Moonkitti posted the Bramblebad video everyone just said “no ❤️” and how nobody is putting up with it anymore. This is going right into my AU where Squirrelflight ends up with Ashfur, just as a what-if.
Also, I do believe that someone asked the Erins about it and they still treated him like the golden child. Whether it was their intention or not, Bramble is clearly abusive, just want the Erins to see that.
Oh my gosh yes. They shouldve been together instead of Bramble! Ash definitely had problems, very minor easily fixable problems that couldve been solved with a talking and he only became a villain because the Erin's realized litterally nothing of substance was happening in the third arc
@ShutmonMayhem Neo I can keep that in mind! I'll make sure to check over Ashfur as well and if I see fit I can have her end up a single queen at the end
We should just have Squilf become a cool single lady 💅
@Rose Skywalker The Weirdo same here, it's probs would have ended similar to the relationship portrayed in the original movie version of the musical the song used here is from
Actually, neither of them were good for her. Moonkitty just recently made a video explaining why. I can give you a link if you want.
if you were to finish this i would literally be the happiest person on earth because this is just fantastic in every way
This is so beautiful!!! And so criminally underrated!!
My greatest hope is the Erin's see the entire fandom screeching desperately to get ride of bramblestar
EXCUSE ME WHY IS THIS SO UNDERRATED JSNSNSNDHDHEJEJWJWJWJKWKWKWKWKW
I absolutely love this! The detail, everything about it it’s just everything shehegefehwkw I don’t even know where to start, this is amazing!!!
YEYESYESYES if this would happen in Squirrelfight´s hope the book might be perfect but noooooooo
can we agree on the fact that Firestar's children have literal the most relationship problems
(I mean romantic relationship, the Crookedkit thing is pretty bad)
At least Leafpool and Crowfeather worked out their unsolved conflict...eventually. And hey, Sparkpelt didn’t inherit it
@@dragonstouch1042 Yeah...I suppose you are right. Man, Warriors is so deep and meaningful when you into it, isn't it?
Wow, this would be an amazing thing to actually happen, and just the emotions you're able to capture in this is so great!! Loved everything the SquirrelFlight did and her cutting Bramble off is perfect! Amazing job!!
i can’t even begin to explain to you how much i absolutely adore this video. the expressions, the movement, the angles, your wonderful style- all of it. it literally gives me chills. squirrelflight has been my favorite character since i was a kid first reading the books and this? this is what i want for her. squirrelflight is a phenomenal character who deserves so much better than she’s gotten and seeing all this appreciation for her in the fandom warms my heart.
Why do I feel like the only reason that Ashfur got into starclan was the fact that he tried to get squilf out of that relationship? like that's his only redeeming quality.
Sad flashbacks of when in TNP I felt bad for brambleclaw.... man poor squirrelflight
It is actually embarrassing how many times i watch this one a daily basis
okay
i love the message very much and all
but
OH MY GOD YOUR ABILITY TO DRAW EXPRESSIONS??
I LOVE THEM SO MUCH OMFG
i was too afraid to comment for a while but this is exactly how it feels to end an abusive relationship, this video has me so emotional & is a fantastic portrayal of the bittersweetness that comes with that,, ALL of the emotions are here & i really really REALLY love that. this animation is so special to me 🖤
Moonkitti would be very proud of this
YOOOO UNDERRATED AS HELL WOW
Underrated. This is absolutely underrated.
Bro how I am I just finding this now! This is incredible! I love the dramatic shots and the action, as well as the pain Squirrelflight is going through! Well done!
this must of taken FOREVER. it’s absolutely amazing and i hope it blows up soon.
HELL YES!! this is the energy ive been looking for! wow the emotions and facial expressions.. so powerful. squirrelflight deserves so much better
Everyone needs to see this amazing piece
This is so beautiful! I love the movements and the expressions are so good! And the idea itself is perfect! Woooh, all for this!!!
He went 'Veronica-' and I went 'wAIT a second-'
I knew this was Heathers as soon as Veronica was said
Sandstorm: YES!!!! FINALLY!!!!!
Firestar: *Unsheavs his claws * Bramblestar I recommend running! “He growls “
I need a finished version. It's that beautiful.
The *M O VE MENT* oh my LORD expressions? Amazing
Style? Perfect.
Choice to make him scowl before pouting showing that he's not actually sad but just trying to make her feel bad and manipulate her?
**GODLIKE**
Gonna place this into the animation inspiration playlist gently wrapped in a warm blanket and scented lavender.
If I was dying, lost out in the desert, and you put two doors in front of me
*one* labeled as *_"food, water, supplies and a ride back home"_*
*The other* labeled as *_"AU where squirrelflight says no"_*
I think I would probably die out there. Lost in that desert. Forever.
I love Heathers but I’ve never heard this song before! :0
I also adore your art style!
This is canon now and no one can tell me otherwise. This is soo good! Subbed!!
Also, Veronica is now my canon voice for Squilf. Love this queen so much.
This is so powerful and also...
Short Squirrelflight is the best Squirrelflight
Yessss! I always wanted someone to do her with this song!
I just wish BrambleASS got what he deserve.
Squirrelflight deserve better♥️
No she doesn’t!
I’m loving all the art coming out after Moonkitti’s video honestly, give Squilf what she deserves!!!
HI WOW THIS IS SO GOOD AND IT FITS THEM SO WELL???
WE LOVE SQUIRRELFLIGHT AAA
THE ANIMATION IS SO GOOD AND DYNAMIC AND JUST MMM AND THE EMOTIONS AND I’D LOVE TO ACTUALLY SEE THIS SO MUCH,,
AMAZING AA
DUUUUUUDE
THIS IS INCREDIBLE
Squirrelflight is better with Leafstar.
Change my mind.
20K!!!! I never would have expected it to get this much attention and I’m so glad you all enjoy it! Thank you so much
It’s now double that oh my god ;;
This is amazing! I love this so much and it would be beautiful for this to happen. I'm torn on the ship, I wish Bramblestar became the character I feel the writers see rather than what they made him, because that Bramble is cute with Squilf.
I love how she tells him he needs to grow up, because that's where I feel people miss the point. Yes Squilf was immature and demanding...when she was a CHILD! But she grew up, still having faults, but she isn't the child some still see her as and yet Bramblestar seems to regress more into how he should've been as a kit. Honestly, it seems like he acted more like an adult as a child but grew down.
I don't hold anything against those who still ship them, as quarrels being cute is a trope I do like as long as it doesn't cross the line, so I get it, but with everything I'm liking the ship less than I use to.
I abandoned the books for a few months and just jumped in during the broken code, can someone explain brambles abusive behaviors for me? I wanna know what he’s done bc I legit don’t remember enough about the books to put it together 😭
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I am so so glad somebody else thought this was a perfect song for squirrelflights!! I love your animatic!
This is just pure-fect, the song is JUST PURR-FECT
Holy shit! This fits her so well! I love it when Squirrelflight gets appreciated! This is also so good art!
Yay Heather's west end music and warriors in the same video
Petition for an au where Brambleass is the one to go to shadowclan and Squirrelflight gets in a HEALTHY relationship with Tawnypelt
*inhales*
where can i sign?
Okay, i have nothing against the ship, but can i just ask where Tawney/Squilf came from?? I thought Tawney found her extremely annoying - though, i haven't read the second series is quite a while since I don't have them lmao.
*chefs kiss* PERFECTION
THIS NEEDS TO HAPPEN CANONICALLY!!
This might be my favourite Squirrelflight animatic!!! This is everything I want for her,, amazing song choice too!!!
Not only does it fit perfectly but the message is amazing and true in situations in relationships
omgggg this is amazinggg, will it be like fully colored and animated? id LOVEEE that
I use an iPad and I made this with rough animator, I would if I could but mobile doesn’t give a lot in terms of editing and animation ;;
Wow, beautiful! I love the drawings) And I totally agree, I wish this happened in the books. Also, this animatic fits her character really well. Powerful message.
why am i crying.. great animatic
This made me look up alternate toms around the same age as Squirrel that she could have fallen for instead. Weaselfur or Gorsetail from WindClan? Stonestream or Voletooth from RiverClan? Even Reedwhisker?
I’d go Riverclan, we need something from them
I shipped her with Stormfur when I first read the second series. But he fell for Brook instead.
Always been a bigger fan of the West End Heathers! So awesome to see someone use it, especially with such amazing art and story! Good job!
Watching this after reading Squirrelflight;s hope just hits hard man 😭😭😭
Yknow its sad that most sane people in the fandom acknowledge that if she had to choose between Bramblestar and Ashfur, she would've been better off with Ashfur. Bramblestar is such an abusive prick to Squirrelflight for literally no reason and he loves to push the blame for his vile actions onto her. He only shows her love and "treats her better" in hard times and when he nearly loses her. I'm just waiting for the day for him to either A. _stop being an obnoxious and abusive asshole to her_ or B. for Squirrelflight to stand up for herself and to say no more to his abuse and leave him for good. I highly doubt any of those things will happen but I would love to see it happen. Squirrelflight deserves so much better than Brambleass
She wouldn't have been "better off" with Ashfur. He was smothering and if his reaction to rejection is anything to go off of, he would have been super entitled and controlling in the relationship. She shouldn't have to pick between them anyways, it isn't her job to cater to either of them.
The funny thing is this fits one of chars relationships. Ok, so Dove'Feather has a unique ability to see StarClan cats (Like Goose'Feather) she has gone against the code for so long to see a rouge named Cinder. (Who is actually from her clan, she just doesn't remember him) Cinder is super charming and kind but it goes downhill as he follows in his father's footsteps (Evil rouge who wants power.) and manipulates the blind Dove'Feather. Dove's clan finds out and forces her to break up with Cinder, which is hard for her due to the deep love she has for him. Black (Cinder's father) attacks the clan for this even though he was only going to kill Cinder in front of Dove to gain more control over Dove and the clans (Yes, he will never get any redemption.)
They all survive the attack, Black is wounded greatly and Dove is made DEP under her father's leadership. Another attack happens with the rouges and SC with them. Dove's father dies leaving her in a horrible mental state and has to lead a clan with injuried warriors and with no apps. Cinder sneaks up on Dove as she is receiving her nine lives. He says he's sorry for what he had done and says he'd do anything to earn her trust again, Dove agrees reluctantly. Cinder does do what he said, then Night'Fall comes out saying that Cinder is her son, Cinder doesn't believe her. Night'Fall tells Cinder how she was told by Black that he had killed him and his siblings (Jet & Moon'Fur. Moon is an SC med.) Cinder leaves the clan to confront his father.
Dove'Star still caring deeply for him tries to stop him, but it's no use. Black and Cinder fight, Black puts Cinder into a critical state leaving Dove to fight for him. The warriors of Dove's clan manage to get there just in time before Black is about to kill Cinder. Dove and Cinder are taken back to the clan camp, Cinder barely even alive. Dove stays up night after night day after day, paranoid for her clan and Cinder. One night she spots Black who challenges her to a fight for the clan (is this possible?) Dove nods in agreement. Black and Dove'Star fight long into the night when she finally kills Black after Cinder, her mother and Night'Sparrow (The med cat) come to her as she gives the final blow.
Cinder heals and is accepted into the clan, Dove'Star names him Cinder'Ash after his past becoming like "Ash". Dove and Cinder end up having kits after Dove'Star steps down from being leader, the new leader being her trusted friend OakClaw (Who will end up dying to save one of Dove's kits, from a fox. Although that kit still dies due to wounds and blood loss.) Dove forever has anxiety and tries as much as she can to give her kits freedom, even though she and Cinder argue a lot about this.
Dove and Cinder die together during an attack from badgers, but Dove is given by StarClan her leader name and is an important member of StarClan from there on out. Dove and Cinder's first born kit dies to white cough just after being named a warrior and the other leaves to pursue a prophecy from Dove'Star and Raven'Star.
(Should Cinder go to StarClan? Which Clan out of SkyClan and RiverClan should be Dove's clan? What should be Black's reason be to want power? Should Jet be like that psychopath of the family who is evil for no reason? (or because that's what he's been told his entire life.) Why should Cinder change his mind on siding with his father? Lastly, how should Cinder and Dove meet? and how should Dove's clan find out?)
Sorry that it was so long? But... is this a good storyline? be honest please, I'm kind of new to this kind of series 'w')
This took 43 mins to write out lol and some was just off the top of my head :P
This is amazing! I really love the art style and the emotion is amazing!
This is so accurate it hurts
I'm amazed!!! I absolutely adore what you did with Squirrelflight!! A lot of people represent her as very emotional and resigned, but I looooove how you did everything. This whole animatic is beautiful!!! I adore your art! You've earned a new subscriber
she looks so happy at the end *sniffles* it's what she deserves
I can honestly see this as a map! Love how you expressed squilfs emotions!
ohhhhh this is amazing even for a animatic the expression and a little animation is god damn amazing you did a wonderful job hoping if we can this in full animation this will a snother masterpiece
Dang this is so good!! And you're art style is just SO AMAzing! You' ve really inspired me
Fantastic job on those expressions!
This is incredible! What a perfect song for her! The movement is wonderful and the expressions shine through!
(SPOILERS)
This made me hope that after the events of the most recent book, Squirrelflight will be constantly fighting with Ashfur in the Dark Forest (or worse??) until finally Ashfur snaps and says something along the lines of “Can’t you see how he’s been treating you all these moons? How painful it’s been watching you get pushed around like an apprentice by him? Why can’t you see how controlling he’s been?” This makes Squirrelflight realize, and in the end she would still manage to bring Bramble back and get away from Ashfur, but hopefully break up once they return to the living.
wow! i love all of the emotions in the images! and i think you did so good with this! and to squirrelflight good job girl! :p :)
O.M.G THIS PROVES THAT ANIMATING IS WORTH ALL THE WORK PEOPLE DO!!!
This is so good! You put so much work into all those frames
I can’t wait to see the finished version! This resonates with my SOUL
I would love to fully colour and animate it, but I work on an iPad and the animation programs don’t allow me much freedom, o made this with rough animator
Wow, amazing work, I'm going into spoilers with these works, but they are so amazing, keep at good work ^^ Darn I really need to finish the Power of three
Omg yasss!
I wish squilf was like this. Stick it to that bramble butt!
🤣 ok srsly tho this is amazing, ur art style is beautiful
FINALLY! SQUIRRELBAB LETS OUT THE F E I S T!!
i love this
That was veeeeery good and you deserve more subscribers. Anyway, this was honestly a v good choice and this is exactly what Squilf needs to tell Bramblecuck tbh
Our short queen come out on top!