Miraculous ladybug- Analysis:Rewriting Miraculous Ladybugs Lore-tales of ladybug and cat noir

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  • čas přidán 4. 09. 2024
  • Miraculous ladybug (tales of ladybug and cat noir) is certainly....... a show that is relatively popular. I decided to finally look a bit more closely at it, and see how we might be able to improve some of the writing tales of ladybug and cat noir
    This video took a bit longer than my others because I had to research a lot more for this video by actually catching up on Season 4 and 5 and just reading a lot more of the wiki

Komentáře • 40

  • @langdonledwig3734
    @langdonledwig3734 Před rokem +94

    If I rewrote it I would actually have Chloe be an anti-hero instead of completely resetting her character where she is still a bully but she at-least owns up to her mistakes

    • @clouddemon
      @clouddemon  Před rokem +26

      I really like that approach on her character, Chloe is without a doubt the most wasted character, and I feel like something was changed halfway through the planning for the season 3 finale and suddenly we erased her character

    • @goldentriforce29
      @goldentriforce29 Před 11 měsíci +6

      Agree. Having her as an anti-hero is a great idea. We don’t need a random new character to replace her. Also have Marinette and Adrien face consequences when they do something wrong

    • @langdonledwig3734
      @langdonledwig3734 Před 11 měsíci +8

      Another idea I have is have Adrien reveal to her that he is Cat Noir because he desperately needs someone to cover for him when he has to save the day plus it could be interesting

    • @JuniorGustabo
      @JuniorGustabo Před 8 měsíci +1

      Chloe deserves to be part of a better show.

  • @theblacksamruott
    @theblacksamruott Před rokem +52

    You know I always always questioned why did Gabe never give someone a healing power to revive his wife

    • @clouddemon
      @clouddemon  Před rokem +16

      bro I actually never considered that, why doesn't Gabe make good decisions ?

    • @theblacksamruott
      @theblacksamruott Před rokem +8

      @@clouddemon well then there wouldn't be a show that is the number one and only reason since we have never once herd fu the book or even the kawammis say "you can not use the miraculous to heal/revive people... oh wait we HAVE seen the ladybug revive people

    • @dianeadkins1281
      @dianeadkins1281 Před rokem +1

      His character has to be told what he can't think of himself, he thinks simple, Evolution told us that

  • @fatherplatypus2316
    @fatherplatypus2316 Před rokem +22

    In short: use the early concept. Seriously, everyone was 100 light years away better than what we have right now

    • @clouddemon
      @clouddemon  Před rokem +4

      Honestly, yeah, I kinda think the show would be much more charming if they used some of the early stuff lol

    • @assiaelkhayate-sl8hu
      @assiaelkhayate-sl8hu Před rokem +5

      True,for example Marinette had black hair and grey eyes,so gorgeous! The Yoyo included gadgets such as bombs,a stick,a rope,end else. Cat Noir had additional powers "Black Hole" and "Black Storm".
      There was the "Quantic Kids",some people that were supposed to be in Ladybug's team.

  • @speeddemon5339
    @speeddemon5339 Před 11 měsíci +13

    If I would rewrite the Miraculous show using my own style of it being a bit more Resident Evil esque. Blue hair ladybug person can still create things, but it’s more like Carnage creating things. She can create tools or abstract objects, but she can’t create exactly she wants to make yet. She can’t create things like a gun with gunpowder, she also can’t create metal objects or objects that aren’t made out of the Carnage like substance. Objects with bio-luminescence, metal detecting I guess, and anything that could potentially be done biologically she can incorporate into herself and any tools she makes. The limit to how much she can create is based on how much she has eaten. She still has her “quami” but it isn’t the concept of creation incarnated. That’s some information on how her powers would work.
    Her character is another story, I would make her more gain confidence over time, and also learn to be not as stalkerish.
    Cat noir would still have the destruction ability, but it would use a substance that can break down matter, like acid or nanobots.

    • @clouddemon
      @clouddemon  Před 11 měsíci +4

      Dude this sounds super cool I would totally watch that. It's so fun to listen to so many people thinking about how they would write the show! Looking at creative stuff like this is honestly awesome

  • @iamawesome4026
    @iamawesome4026 Před rokem +8

    I wish that the show let some order of the guardians came to Paris knowing about ladybug and cat noir actually train them how to be better heroes.

    • @clouddemon
      @clouddemon  Před rokem +1

      Yeah, so do I. Like, maybe it occurs to them " perhaps giving 15 year olds the power of god to protect a city might cause some problem"

  • @miss_chelles1338
    @miss_chelles1338 Před rokem +21

    Honestly, I would be i interested to see you make a series of this. 😌😂

  • @dianeadkins1281
    @dianeadkins1281 Před rokem +7

    Spoiler if you haven't seen episodes 1-9 on Disney
    Remember in Origins Master Fu said he got it wrong once? Episode 1 of season 5, Evolution explains why Master Fu gave the Miraculous' to them, and the reason why BunniX told her younger self she will get the Miraculous when she's as cool as her;
    time is a sensitive thing it must not be changed, it happens when it's supposed to
    Episodes 10 & 11 Kwami's Choice will air on 4/22/23 10 & 10.30 am Central time USA

    • @clouddemon
      @clouddemon  Před rokem +2

      I actually have seen Evolution, and personally, I really don't like it, or the explanation it gives. I find it very contradicting, and somewhat confusing, ( I need to rewatch the episode a few times to understand and even now I'm still not sure I get it). Although, I should have acknowledge that a bit more in the show. Thanks for bringing this to my attention!

  • @ayamesakamoto8046
    @ayamesakamoto8046 Před rokem +5

    I didn't even know that was a thing, that kwamis are created by concept or whatever

    • @clouddemon
      @clouddemon  Před rokem +3

      Neither did I, actually, in my original draft for this video, that was actually my idea. To base the kwamis off an singular idea when it came into concept, but after checking the wiki, I literally had to rewrite my script haha bc the show uses that itself. I don't think they made a reference in the show either, which is weird, but thats what the wiki told me

  • @langdonledwig3734
    @langdonledwig3734 Před rokem +20

    Honestly the show was best in season 2 and 3 then it went down hill after the season 3 finale

    • @clouddemon
      @clouddemon  Před rokem +12

      Idk man Miraculous Ladybug is kinda like a fever dream for me, I don't know when it stopped being good but I do know that I'm here now watching Marinette sniff Adrien's pillow and slowly dying on the inside

    • @ItzZay1
      @ItzZay1 Před 5 měsíci +1

      @@clouddemonExactly! It just got so bad for some reason

  • @3rebella
    @3rebella Před rokem +51

    No way you're doing Astruc's job better than him

    • @clouddemon
      @clouddemon  Před rokem +7

      Haha, thanks! Honestly, this shows has potential, but I feel like it's constantly held back by the showrunners

    • @LitaliCat
      @LitaliCat Před 8 měsíci +1

      Trust me, everyone can take this show and make it successful, im doing it, and im only 15

  • @introvert.7487
    @introvert.7487 Před rokem +6

    I had to like the video once you said you loved watching fandoms burn to the ground 😂😂

    • @clouddemon
      @clouddemon  Před rokem +5

      bro when elation aired I was laughing manically while watching tumblr lose their minds

  • @LitaliCat
    @LitaliCat Před 8 měsíci +3

    Something im doing in my rewrite is that im "nerfing" the butterfly miraculous, making the the ladybug miraculous make more sense and buffing the other miraculouses
    for example: the fox miraculous isluises dont dissapear with touch and has a "flashback" power that if you are in a place you can create a flashback to a noment that happened in the same place so when gabriel gave lila the power to create iluisnes there was a chaek, because he cant copy another kwami's power. the chek was that her iluisens dissapear with touch so when he gets the miracalouses in season 5 there it will have more value. other reason why it storeger to akumited someone with a miraculous

    • @clouddemon
      @clouddemon  Před 8 měsíci

      That's kinda interesting, I wonder how the other miraculous would act with that in mind

  • @thatonkgau5221
    @thatonkgau5221 Před 2 měsíci +2

    Miraculous has so much potential with its lore and characters but it's wasted by its creator. I swear Astuc has no idea what he's doing at all he just wants to maintain the status quo and keep the love triangle going. I think instead of Marinette Adrian should be the main character as he's way more interesting. I mean his dad's the main villain he has more character potential.

    • @clouddemon
      @clouddemon  Před měsícem +1

      I agree, I think the creator has no idea what he's doing

  • @princecharming8125
    @princecharming8125 Před rokem +4

    In my stuff a kwami can be created by a far stronger power on the level of God almighty

    • @clouddemon
      @clouddemon  Před rokem +2

      I don't remember that but your probably right, I got a lot of the info for the lore through the wiki and my basic knowledge so something might have slipped through the cracks

  • @ninjamoncaudle5320
    @ninjamoncaudle5320 Před měsícem

    Eeeehh I wouldn’t say the fnaf fandom has burned down
    More like, got into a REALLY intense bar fight. It’s in bad shape, but it’s still kicking.

  • @DishonorableMentions452
    @DishonorableMentions452 Před rokem +4

    Who else loves s5