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    Writing college essays is tough. Here are some ways you can make sure yours stands out to admissions officers.
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Komentáƙe • 187

  • @jackadams8648
    @jackadams8648 Pƙed 3 lety +1199

    The iconic voice

    • @kangchan6349
      @kangchan6349 Pƙed 2 lety +10

      Ikr

    • @markpenny523
      @markpenny523 Pƙed 2 lety

      czcams.com/video/rw4z-rSwNjY/video.html, it is a video I found online talking about the origins of COVID, and that the video talks about the west is responsible for COVID, I don’t know if it is true but this video was 10 years ago, and it predicted many things that have become true since then. I love America, but I am with humanity if this is true, if you guys can share this it would be amazines

    • @josephstalin4202
      @josephstalin4202 Pƙed 2 lety +1

      What does it mean?

    • @apscafe
      @apscafe Pƙed rokem +1

      True

    • @apscafe
      @apscafe Pƙed rokem +3

      @@Pedri10_ voice does

  • @pxntirx
    @pxntirx Pƙed 3 lety +467

    I have been panicking about essay writing lately, thank you so much for posting this video!

    • @goharsguide
      @goharsguide  Pƙed 3 lety +80

      Of course! Glad I could help.

    • @markpenny523
      @markpenny523 Pƙed 2 lety +1

      czcams.com/video/rw4z-rSwNjY/video.html, it is a video I found online talking about the origins of COVID, and that the video talks about the west is responsible for COVID, I don’t know if it is true but this video was 10 years ago, and it predicted many things that have become true since then. I love America, but I am with humanity if this is true, if you guys can share this it would be amazinw

    • @zenmindset85
      @zenmindset85 Pƙed rokem +1

      @@Pedri10_ "Gohar" there you go PEDRO💀

    • @staysolidshades254
      @staysolidshades254 Pƙed rokem +5

      Romans 10:9 because, if you confess with your mouth that Jesus is Lord and believe in your heart that God raised him from the dead, you will be saved.dddd

    • @apscafe
      @apscafe Pƙed rokem +1

      Yes it's helpful

  • @lyr1x302
    @lyr1x302 Pƙed 2 lety +36

    Hey Gohar, thanks for giving me free essay tips it really helps me with persuasion and with my English class. Great work!

  • @kylehuang9456
    @kylehuang9456 Pƙed 3 lety +163

    Thank you Gohar for the amazing advice, it helped me get into my dream school!

    • @kyle.4215
      @kyle.4215 Pƙed 2 lety +1

      which js

    • @kangchan6349
      @kangchan6349 Pƙed 2 lety +1

      Good job im happy dor you

    • @markpenny523
      @markpenny523 Pƙed 2 lety

      czcams.com/video/rw4z-rSwNjY/video.html, it is a video I found online talking about the origins of COVID, and that the video talks about the west is responsible for COVID, I don’t know if it is true but this video was 10 years ago, and it predicted many things that have become true since then. I love America, but I am with humanity if this is true, if you guys can share this it would be amazines

    • @kyle.4215
      @kyle.4215 Pƙed 2 lety +7

      @@markpenny523 bot

    • @Rzacoe
      @Rzacoe Pƙed rokem +1

      Which school?

  • @LeonerdtheNerd
    @LeonerdtheNerd Pƙed 2 měsĂ­ci +3

    So basically be yourself, do not be generic and be specific, do not use boring stuff and be grammatically correct!

  • @user-op5wq7uv1b
    @user-op5wq7uv1b Pƙed 9 měsĂ­ci +6

    Thank you for the advice, it was really helpful. I won't be applying for college till a couple of years but I still wanted to get tips to prepare in advance. I was starting to doubt myself because of my educational background, but this video boosted my confidence. Please make a part 2

  • @milkandgrapes3933
    @milkandgrapes3933 Pƙed 2 lety +6

    Man this guy makes me motivated

  • @meow6918
    @meow6918 Pƙed 2 lety +11

    This man is speed-running CZcams, I watched Gohar yesterday, at 200k subs, now as of now he gained another 30k subs. Great! Keep up the good work.

  • @justinvalloso3919
    @justinvalloso3919 Pƙed rokem +3

    This video helps, I always over think myself when writing essays especially college admission essays, what's important is to be true to myself

  • @tai9165
    @tai9165 Pƙed 2 lety +2

    hello, I want to tell you how much ur videos helped me, I am so thankful to youu gohar !!

  • @shleiromar3032
    @shleiromar3032 Pƙed 2 lety +6

    Hello Gohar I really love all your video and the amount of information in them thank you so much ,

  • @matthewmichael5484
    @matthewmichael5484 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    OMG thank you SO MUCH for this help

  • @kripalamichhane2812
    @kripalamichhane2812 Pƙed 3 lety +3

    I got you on my Tiktok ‘s for you page and since then I’m following you everywhere !
    I was waiting for a bit long video and here it is đŸ„ł

  • @9-21__6
    @9-21__6 Pƙed 2 lety

    Very good description thank u for making this video

  • @MairaRidaa
    @MairaRidaa Pƙed 2 lety +1

    You helped me. TYSM. You are the best 👌 💓

  • @emperorqianlong6579
    @emperorqianlong6579 Pƙed 3 lety +31

    Pls consider a part 2. This is quite insightful

    • @its.twosday
      @its.twosday Pƙed rokem

      EMPEROR QIANLONG IN DA GOHAR COMMENT SECTION!??!!???!?!?!

    • @emperorqianlong6579
      @emperorqianlong6579 Pƙed rokem +3

      @@its.twosday i go to yale

    • @Kannedcorn
      @Kannedcorn Pƙed 11 měsĂ­ci

      @@emperorqianlong6579 lololol

  • @jinabalan8297
    @jinabalan8297 Pƙed 2 lety

    Thankyou so much for this video. I really need this

  • @dawnt1974
    @dawnt1974 Pƙed 2 lety

    You're so awesome! Thank you!

  • @vinchei
    @vinchei Pƙed 2 lety

    Thanks Dude!
    It really helped.

  • @navniverma3205
    @navniverma3205 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    I subscribed you because your videos are really helpful
    THANK YOU 💖

  • @fatoumatabintadiallo3922

    Without doubt you are the best!

  • @vincefattizzicoldwellbanke3401

    this has helped me a lot with my essay 😃

  • @monkington9615
    @monkington9615 Pƙed rokem +1

    I needed to know what a college essay was pointing to, thanks Gohar!
    For future me, HOW THE HELL DO I WRITE A ESSAY BETTER-

  • @Ani-kq4tr
    @Ani-kq4tr Pƙed 2 lety +8

    I’m causally a freshman watching this. Be back in a few years

  • @apscafe
    @apscafe Pƙed rokem

    I really am impressed

  • @shivankmahajan1071
    @shivankmahajan1071 Pƙed rokem

    Thank you so much gohar, even tho I'm going to be a junior in high school, I'm worried as hell about my essays for college

  • @MeTheDiamondMiner
    @MeTheDiamondMiner Pƙed 3 lety +57

    I've exchanged a few dms with you over Instagram about your content, but I gotta say, its pretty interesting to watch your content coming from someone whos already in college (It's still interesting). Maybe in the future, you can make some videos for people already in college.

    • @goharsguide
      @goharsguide  Pƙed 3 lety +37

      Means a lot! And yeah, I'm excited to see how I branch out in the future :) would love to make videos for college students someday

    • @sushirollart3722
      @sushirollart3722 Pƙed 2 lety

      Ignore the part where I said retarded I can’t edit it.

  • @samarkumar9496
    @samarkumar9496 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    Thanks a lot it helped

  • @watchneuraxz0
    @watchneuraxz0 Pƙed 10 měsĂ­ci

    Hi Gohar! Love your videos and keep it up!

  • @JusticeShepard
    @JusticeShepard Pƙed 3 lety +8

    Great video bro😎

  • @RoastedSquirrels
    @RoastedSquirrels Pƙed měsĂ­cem +1

    A legend was born

  • @omanshbainsla8670
    @omanshbainsla8670 Pƙed 3 lety +2

    my hero

  • @a.I.y.
    @a.I.y. Pƙed 2 lety +56

    Junior in highschool here! I've been binging your videos and I'm starting to apply for college scholarships. Are the rules any different when you're doing a scholarship essay? Are you supposed to make it more professional and less personal?

    • @-ik
      @-ik Pƙed 2 lety +4

      Better balance of both

    • @allenfr
      @allenfr Pƙed 10 měsĂ­ci +1

      hey what college did you get into? and if you cant respond good luck

  • @paulraj6094
    @paulraj6094 Pƙed rokem

    The amazing shorts video i ever seens 😊😊

  • @fastandbulbous6282
    @fastandbulbous6282 Pƙed 3 lety +3

    the king

  • @tasnimsarker4653
    @tasnimsarker4653 Pƙed rokem +1

    Thank you for these information, this helped me much. Would you please provide the lor sample, u mentioned in earlier videos.

  • @ibsatassew
    @ibsatassew Pƙed 3 lety +3

    Gohar man!

  • @user-dh2of2um8q
    @user-dh2of2um8q Pƙed 4 měsĂ­ci

    Now it is the end of regular decision for fall 2024, and i am here for my essay!!!

  • @marimood
    @marimood Pƙed rokem

    thank you!

  • @kaykaywilliams3454
    @kaykaywilliams3454 Pƙed 11 měsĂ­ci +1

    Thai was very helpful thanks

  • @Ayana781
    @Ayana781 Pƙed 2 lety

    Yes pls part 2

  • @nononono.
    @nononono. Pƙed rokem

    Part 2 would be helpful

  • @lilsanchez0068
    @lilsanchez0068 Pƙed 3 lety +4

    I’m taking part in a Program known as QuestBridge as a junior would you we willing to read my essay.
    It’s consist of being...
    Being Compared
    Being Criticized Negatively
    Effecting my Mental Toll
    Concluding : I bottle up my emotion show the world the happy person they want me to be when in reality it make angry the fact they’d mentally made me fear love and trust.

  • @egg_mittens
    @egg_mittens Pƙed 2 lety +130

    I'm British but considering applying to US colleges. How do admissions officers deal with culture differences for students applying overseas?

    • @ew8754
      @ew8754 Pƙed 2 lety +34

      don't you'll be broke just try for oxbridge

    • @markpenny523
      @markpenny523 Pƙed 2 lety

      czcams.com/video/rw4z-rSwNjY/video.html, it is a video I found online talking about the origins of COVID, and that the video talks about the west is responsible for COVID, I don’t know if it is true but this video was 10 years ago, and it predicted many things that have become true since then. I love America, but I am with humanity if this is true, if you guys can share this it would be amazine

    • @shuhanli
      @shuhanli Pƙed 2 lety +18

      I don't think culture matters too much, it's just about you and your personality! International students are welcome all around!

    • @mighty_spirit8532
      @mighty_spirit8532 Pƙed 2 lety +15

      16% of all harvard students are from abroad and then there are even more that come from immigrant parents. Plus British and American culture are extremely similar so even if so many weren't already from abroad I doubt you would have any problem with being from a different country.

    • @Pedri10_
      @Pedri10_ Pƙed 2 lety +1

      they will hate specifically you so dont do it

  • @dawnt1974
    @dawnt1974 Pƙed 2 lety

    A true service to the people!

  • @togoboyz5107
    @togoboyz5107 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    Ima use this in 3 years (:

  • @nusratjahan-lc4by
    @nusratjahan-lc4by Pƙed 8 měsĂ­ci +1

    I'm from Bangladesh thank you so much for your helpful video đŸ˜Šâ€â€

  • @so0y421
    @so0y421 Pƙed 3 lety +7

    why am i watching this i already got into college

  • @studymind8837
    @studymind8837 Pƙed rokem

    I didn't came here for any essays I came here to see the legend 🛐🛐 the legendary voice 💗

  • @kaushikmedum6455
    @kaushikmedum6455 Pƙed 10 měsĂ­ci

    part 2 please

  • @lucasstephensonhazra8922
    @lucasstephensonhazra8922 Pƙed 9 měsĂ­ci

    Hey Gohar. Thank you so much for your advice. I had a query regarding my College Essay Topic, that is "my growth from Alexithymia and Bend Down by the societal pressures, lack-of-confidence" to "have my own voice and identity, that is me as a Songwriter". I was thinking of how my cat (who sadly passed away in the 2021), helped me in doing this. What do u think about this topic?

  • @canudonut
    @canudonut Pƙed 8 měsĂ­ci

    Thanks my dibl will get a lot better

  • @1zzy_g4mer
    @1zzy_g4mer Pƙed rokem +3

    When the college asks, "why us?" Could you tell them a story? Or do you have to do something.

  • @seemayadav8665
    @seemayadav8665 Pƙed 9 měsĂ­ci

    What do you think about it gohar?
    i think it would only work for common app essay because the school specific essays are about specific topics about you and not about you.

  • @khoalinski
    @khoalinski Pƙed 2 lety +3

    Gohar. I was wondering if telling the story about your life is a good way to write an essay

  • @rahipotdar474
    @rahipotdar474 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    So that's really your voice!

  • @thomasdelavega
    @thomasdelavega Pƙed 2 lety

    Pt 2 pls

  • @user-nr6pu6ex3i
    @user-nr6pu6ex3i Pƙed 3 lety +4

    I wrote about how I almost died twice.... but he said to avoid taking about death ...

  • @BKDK847
    @BKDK847 Pƙed měsĂ­cem +2

    step 1: yap

  • @herlandhadi1996
    @herlandhadi1996 Pƙed 3 lety +3

    I'm 14 year old and really want know how can i get schoolarship from other country ?

  • @WompWomp2010
    @WompWomp2010 Pƙed 2 lety +6

    When your 11 years old and are watching it and taking note of everything 👁👄👁

  • @toolate2897
    @toolate2897 Pƙed rokem +1

    Should I include a joke at some point during my college essay, or is it too informal?

  • @miraculous_funedits4293
    @miraculous_funedits4293 Pƙed 2 lety +5

    Ok...ay....
    Is there anyone in 8th grade whatching how to write essay and Collage stuff so in future ur gonna know what to do in steed of whatching the the book thinking of should i die or sleep 👁👄👁, CUZ I AM IN LITERALLYYY 8TH GRADE and IM WHATCHING THIS đŸ‘đŸ‘„đŸ‘đŸ˜­đŸ€ŁđŸ€­đŸ™„

  • @lunathion294
    @lunathion294 Pƙed 2 lety +3

    The real question is
 did he make it into Stanford with his essay on volcanoes
.

    • @zerefragn5626
      @zerefragn5626 Pƙed 2 lety

      pretty sure he did i think i saw a video where he said he got into all the ivies ik stanford isnt an ivy but yeah

  • @carbonari0
    @carbonari0 Pƙed 2 lety

    Can you make a video on student employment in Harvard University

  • @roshansamuel6069
    @roshansamuel6069 Pƙed 2 lety

    Part 2

  • @LTakerwasfound
    @LTakerwasfound Pƙed 2 lety

    What about universities in the Uk? Like Oxford and Cambridge

  • @sienap09
    @sienap09 Pƙed rokem +2

    I am planning on applying for college in Germany. Hopefully getting into TUB (Technical University of Berlin). Is it a good school? And is Germany a good country to study in?

    • @offgeheninderrunde8523
      @offgeheninderrunde8523 Pƙed rokem

      Germany is a great country to study. Little cost and a great country. TU Berlin belongs to one of the elite universities in Germany but is not so known. TUM (Munich) is considered the best university in Germany and is probably as good as MIT Harvard Stanford etc. just does not do as well as the ratings for universities are better designed for them. I have no personal experience with the TUB but the university itself is certainly more than adequate. I Hope I could help you a bit.

    • @sienap09
      @sienap09 Pƙed rokem

      @@offgeheninderrunde8523 Thank you, this really helps a lot.

  • @Annsh175
    @Annsh175 Pƙed rokem +1

    Sir in my school teachers tell us to write an essay and it’s of 300 words

  • @wajibulshovelfood8938
    @wajibulshovelfood8938 Pƙed 2 lety +3

    Quite late, I guess, but we need a part two! Or does it already exist?

  • @lukosemathew685
    @lukosemathew685 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    Is it too late to ask for part 2?

  • @lianawei8711
    @lianawei8711 Pƙed rokem

    Yow, how to make an imagery essay when no using if descriptions and details? 😭

  • @zohaibgulawan9070
    @zohaibgulawan9070 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    I'm in year 12 and just wanna ask can for any chance i can read your essay?

  • @djmac206
    @djmac206 Pƙed rokem

    Should I begin practice writing my college essays as a Sophomore in high school? or wait just a bit.

    • @magentadolphin
      @magentadolphin Pƙed rokem +1

      Maybe write some simple outlines of stories/experiences you’ve had that you might want to share as your college essay?

  • @projectoce5414
    @projectoce5414 Pƙed 2 lety

    I’m in year 8 and he sounds like my teacher

  • @dilkeameer
    @dilkeameer Pƙed 11 měsĂ­ci

    Any suggestions for websites or apps where I can read some good essays to get an idea of the style of writing,

  • @hermelagirmaw7495
    @hermelagirmaw7495 Pƙed rokem +1

    How can I get in to Stanford from Africa

  • @UniversalFinanceClub
    @UniversalFinanceClub Pƙed 2 lety

    Is using paraphrasing tool fine to use?

  • @asmitakumari5993
    @asmitakumari5993 Pƙed rokem +1

    Hey! I live in India and I wanna apply for MIT, can I write my essay in British English?

  • @MrTodd2
    @MrTodd2 Pƙed 3 měsĂ­ci

    Gohar I remember when you did club penguin content

  • @DXRKVNE
    @DXRKVNE Pƙed 2 měsĂ­ci +2

    does this apply to high school

  • @sidneyibiom2867
    @sidneyibiom2867 Pƙed rokem

    Where do you write a college essay

  • @Charles10293
    @Charles10293 Pƙed 2 lety

    You should make Spotify podcast

  • @Taodei
    @Taodei Pƙed 2 lety

    Hi can I send you an essay for you to grade I'm in 6th grade and trying to get into a private school

  • @stacksmasherninja7266
    @stacksmasherninja7266 Pƙed 2 lety

    do these apply for grad school too ?

  • @swatikolhe8866
    @swatikolhe8866 Pƙed 10 měsĂ­ci

    Looking for help to write essay for my high school son 
. He is a average student. Please guide.

  • @night192
    @night192 Pƙed rokem

    Hey if anyone could help, I'd like some tips for film school?

  • @Nightmare-iq9tb
    @Nightmare-iq9tb Pƙed rokem

    Can i write math and physics puns in it ? Would i make the reader angry ?

  • @pankajadhas2696
    @pankajadhas2696 Pƙed 2 lety

    What streams and subjects do uh Study at MIT

  • @channeloft
    @channeloft Pƙed rokem

    4:49 What if ur teacher doesn't know you?

  • @rahimeenzahid1591
    @rahimeenzahid1591 Pƙed 2 lety

    How to contact you for essay editing?

  • @carrotsticks0643
    @carrotsticks0643 Pƙed 2 lety

    Me: supposed to be studying for an exam
    Also me: watching this

  • @Djenggot76
    @Djenggot76 Pƙed rokem

    nine collegs easy

  • @yonelatnafu4023
    @yonelatnafu4023 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    Im guilty of using alot of quotesđŸ€”đŸ˜“

  • @esco7536
    @esco7536 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    We could to Invite you to our team

  • @8-bit642
    @8-bit642 Pƙed rokem +1

    HOLA!

  • @graceandnails
    @graceandnails Pƙed 8 měsĂ­ci

    How did you edit this video?

  • @cooldogkd8336
    @cooldogkd8336 Pƙed 2 lety

    Hi

  • @power_0007
    @power_0007 Pƙed 9 měsĂ­ci

    why am i here? i've already finished college???

  • @RijjaMahnoor5678
    @RijjaMahnoor5678 Pƙed rokem

    Wow that’s alot