what does OUTWEIGH mean in *do the advantages OUTWEIGH the disadvantages*//ielts writing task 2
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The question used in this video is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 2.
In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
▬ Contents of this video ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
0:00 Definition of “Outweigh”
03:10 Body Paragraph 1
06:08 Body Paragraph 2
08:51 Another Example
10:36 Introductory Paragraph
12:05 Conclusion Paragraph
12:32: Key Takeaways
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Hoping lesson on To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Thanks, Sapana. You may find these agree-or-disagree essays helpful: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/agree-disagree-essays/
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have you done a video for tasks just asking for the advantages and disadvantages cause i wonder if i should mention my opinion in this kind of task , and what should be the structure of the intro. and conc.
Sorry, I haven't but you can read sample essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/advantages-disadvantages-essay-structure/
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Hi Lili, I really liked your explanation. My question is:
Can I describe two advantages in one paragraph, for example:
Online educational environment has so many advantages like having an access to wide range of courses and personalized learning experience
I have never tried your method in an actual exam so I don't know if it works, sorry.
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Can you please tell me how to approach "To what extent do you agree or disagree?"
Hi, the easy way to answer it and get a high score is to either completely agree or completely disagree. I've published many essays of this type on my blog. You may find them helpful: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/agree-disagree-essays/
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Hi Lillie~ If I say advantages outweigh disadvantages, can I write 2 ideas for advantages and only 1 idea for disadvantges?
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I've never tried your method in an actual exam so I don't know, sorry.
May I know if we could make up statistics/figures as example? Sth similar to the numbers that u have given in the cost on driver's salary
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Hi Lilie, thanks for the video, very helpful. I was wondering if it is possible to hold a balanced view on this type of question? If so, how should I structure my essay? I came across an "outweigh" question in my last IELTS exam and I choose a balanced view by saying there are both advantages and disadvantages and they weigh the same...it wasn't until I finish the essay that I realize it was kinda stupid to say they weigh the same.....But I just don't know how to put this with a balanced view. Any suggestions? Thanks.
I don't think it's possible. To get a high score, you need to explain why one side carries more weight than the other.
@@LilieIELTS Hi maam, It can be advantage or disadvantage?
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@@richu6148 Glory to God i pass the exam. just got the result today
@@LilieIELTS Thanks much madam..just got the result of my exam today....Glory to God i pass..
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Hi Lillie, thank you for the tutorial. But I was just wondering, if we should write at least two advantages and disadvantages since the question says, "do you think advantageS outweigh disadvantageS?"
Also, is it okay to write advantages first and then disadvantages even when i think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
1. You can do that if the question is "does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages". Here's an sample essay: www.ieltsessaybank.com/paying-for-things-using-mobile-phone/
2. Better first discuss the side you disagree with.
Hope this helps.😊
Hi Lillie thank you so much for your explanation it helped me understand a lot but i want to know is it okay to just write one advantage and one disadvantage in this kind of essay?
Yes
Hey Lilie , I am so thankful for your videos. However your videos leave me unsure how good/well written my essay. I do not understand especially the 1 "topic idea" thing the most. Could you please have a look over my essay. I really need help. Thanks in advance:
One thinks in retrospect how primitive our use of cars and other transport means has been. Nowadays, vehicles have been dominated by automation, where the car moves. I do strongly believe that automation's benefits, like driverless vehicles, surpass its disadvantages.
Starting with its advantages, on one hand; having these vehicles bolster technological advances and one's future lifestyle, where one prospects to live in a modern world as supposed by our foresight. Secondly, saying that they utilize automated technology means they use electrical power instead of gasoline or any other carbon-emitting material, which is humane and friendly to our environment and mother earth. In addition, they are a way to eliminate traffic congestion and accidents. For instance, they employ software and radars that measure the length between 2 vehicles and calculate the jam on these roads to refrain these 2 problems from occurring.
On the other hand, they, indeed, have some implications. Take the loss of jobs for drivers as an example, it may seem that they are replacing us. However, they do create newer jobs for them, like learning how to enhance the software or radar systems, which is important for the manufacturers of these vehicles. Another implication might be one's distrust in the vehicle's implemented software or radars, but humans are more prone to failure and accidents than these algorithmic complex machines.
To conclude, it is true that driverless vehicles may have some disadvantages, but in my opinion it's negligible compared to the benefits they provide not only to us but also to our world.
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Within the next years, all vehicles including cars, trucks and buses will be driven by itself and there will be no driver except passengers. This essay will demonstrate how driverless vehicles make people’ life easier but will also this can lead to such problem if people can be fully trusted to autonomous vehicles. In my opinion, in the near future benefits of driverless vehicles will outweigh the disadvantages.
To commence, driveless or autonomous vehicles including every vehicle that you can see on road will make our life easier and more comfortable. Besides that, driverless cars will certainly diminish the ratio of traffic accidents compared to non-driverless vehicles. These vehicles can help us to reach the destinition point with ease. For instance, imagine you are in hurry and you do not have any time to check availability of roads from your phone but driverless car will make it for you.
On the other hand, relying on to robots in other words, the system which take actions without any human motion or access can lead to some trust issues. Driverless cars are still developing and engineers still do not have clue if we can trust driverless vehicles fully. Moreover, artifical intellegence (AI) is not totally trustable. For example, the traffic accident I have seen before in Australia, the man who decided to sleep in the car, crashed into a tree because of the misconception of car’ vision cameras.
To conclude, although we can count many advantages about driverless cars such things as making our life easier or relieve the workload that people take while they are driving, we need to be more careful than usual to any hardware crashes. In my opinion, eventually autonomous cars will replace with its brothers called fossil fuel vehicles with cutting-edge techonology.
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if a have a different opinion that driverless vehicles might result in higher rates of accidents if any unpredictable thing happens, and this endangers people's lives; I disagreed with the statement they gave at the beginning of the task, will this result in me getting a lower mark?
Hy your essay is great but whenever it's my time to write i am unable to develop new ideas and write in a proper way. So, can you suggest me any tips?
Hi, consuming news helps a lot. I recommend WSJ tech news briefing.
Hi, um can you make a video about how to develop ideas of essay, like I can generate the ideas but I can't not develop them.
This video may help: czcams.com/video/0JJHbByTYis/video.html
After one day i am going to give my ielt exam kindly suggest me which things i should not do in paper.?
Hello Lilie! I appreciate you making these videos to ease our IELTS journey!! Keep up the good works. I have a quick question regarding example part.
Can I give any personal experience as an example? For instance "I attended a concert last week"- this kind of reference.
Thanks for the kind words. No, don't use a personal example.
I have a question...in my writing ..I wrote all the advantages in 2 bps and mentioned in thesis and conclusion that though social media has disadvantages , merits are more significant
How many bands can I get?
thank you...
Mam is it good if we explain only one advantage along wirh one disadvantages in given paragraph
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Thank you so much😊 I scored 7
That's amazing! You scored a 7 on the writing test? What are your scores on the other three sections?
Hey Lilie, I have general IELTS exam on 19th may I have not prepared yet but I want to score clb 7 for my pr process How can I prepare in this short time help me.
@LilieIELTS ma am i am lacking coherence and cohesion what should I do to correct it
The way you explain its seems so easy but whenever i set to go to write i get frustrated. i didn't organise my idea please give some idea for overcome this problem.
I usually plan out my essay before start writing. I suggest that you practice planning. It may be difficult at the beginning but practice makes improvement.
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hello, I just have attended my ielts , in the writing part I didn't get much time for task 2 ... my bad ... in task 2, my starting and 1st paragraph were much informative and long, but 2nd paragraph was too short😔 just wrote On the other hand...then 1 long complex sentence😢
it was hard to finish but I wrote in line, just paraphrased why i disagree along with one reason.
some words had repeated 😞
I am totally disappointed for what I did😞 what band it would carry(just task 2) ?
Thank you madam
Hi Lillie, is the question 'to what extent do the advantages of ... outweigh the disadvantages of ...' the same as 'do the advantages of ... outweigh the disadvantages of ...'?
Yes, except that we need to use words like far or completely if the question contains to what extent: the advantage far/greatly/completely outweighs the disadvantage.
@@LilieIELTS so it means that I can also say ‘the disadvantages far outweigh the advantages’ right?
@@HanhNguyen-1213 yes.
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Do you know any IELTS Essay Correction Services that I can use to check my band?
I don't but I will publish a video on free apps for ielts preparation this evening.
It is very useful thank you how can i find your block please help me
Here you go: www.ieltsessaybank.com/
Best explanation I ever got for this kinda essay! Tomorrow is my exam. Im gonna kill it if I get this specific type of essay.🤣🤣🤣
Best of luck!✊ And don't forget to come back and tell us your test result.
@@LilieIELTS Lilie, wo ai ni ❤❤! I cant believe I got "outweigh" today😂😂😂 !! Why didnt I came accross your chanel before?!
Help me with this
Do we have to write both advantages and disadvantage in advantage or disadvantage question?? I am asking because you have written both on your site ielts essay bank
Hi, we need to write two advantages and two disadvantages if the question is "what are the advantages and disadvantages".
On February 25 this type question is given in IELTS exam
I hope you did well!
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Is it okay if we write 3 body paragraphs? One stating advantages, second disadvantages and the other with our thoughts ?? .
In this essay you writing advantages and your opinions in same paragraph . Does it meet the criteria of only one idea in one body paragraph??
Hi, I've never tried your method in an actual exam so I don't know. Yes, each of my body paragraph has only one main topic because the opinion sentence is also about the topic sentence.
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I have a structure in which I have to write 1 advantage and 2 disadvantages if I agree it is disadvantage and if I agree that it was advantage I have to write 2 advantage and 1 disadvantage so it is correct I have to follow this structure??
I've never tried your structure in a real exam so I can't answer your question.
Ok thanks
But ur video help me to write
to what extent do u think its benefits outweight draw baks...is it same as adantages outweigh disavantages ?
Yes, just make sure to use words like 'GREATLY outweigh' or 'FAR outweigh' to address 'to what extent'.
@@LilieIELTS ohh ok, thank you so much 😃
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Hi can you say what score did you get for writing? I assume
at least 7
Hi, I got a 7 twice on the writing test.
@@LilieIELTS Good
10 days left of my exam and here i am now i dont know anything about writing can i bring 6 in writing 😢
Mam can we totally on one side and write both Bp of either advantages or disadvantages
Sorry I can't answer your question. I have never tried your method in an actual exam.
@@LilieIELTS ok mam
Hi lilie..in intro you mention advantage far outweighs disadvantage..but later on in conclusion u said downside is greatlt outweighed by the upside..????
Isnt it is wrong..
It's correct. Note that in the conclusion, the passive voice 'is outweighed' is used.
@@LilieIELTS thanku lilie