How to Write an Awesome "Why This College?" Essay
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- čas přidán 27. 07. 2024
- The "Why us" or "Why this college" essay is a chance for you to demonstrate why you're a great match for a particular school. In this college essay guide, I'll cover how to write a great "Why us" essay, the most common mistakes to avoid, and some things you'll probably want to be sure you do. as well as a few of my favorite approaches.
📍Timestamps
00:00 - Intro
00:53 - Common mistakes to avoid
04:31 - How to find all the resources you need
07:07 - 3 approaches to writing a "Why us" essay
15:57 - What if you don't know what you want to study?
18:52 - 3 ways to make sure your essay is doing its job
19:45 - Additional resources
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The problem is that for most kids, they decide that they like particular college precisely because of things like the location, the campus, the size, ranking, athletics, the town, majors offered, etc. This is why I think the "why College X" essay is perhaps the worst supplemental essay topic used by colleges as it invites students to write the phoniest of all the phony essays they are forced to write. "I am excited to study thermodynamics with Professor Cohen after reading his article Thermodynamics In The 21st Century in New England Science Journal" even though the essay reader will never know that I found this information via a Google search and the reader has no idea one way or the other whether I actually read the article (I didn't). Essentially, the students who are able to be the most effective BS artists will win the admissions game. And it IS a game.
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I'm grinding through so much of your content on your CZcams and your website because it has provided so much structure to this entire college application process. As a result, I'm less likely to feel overwhelmed. Thank you so much Ethan !
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I love your cheerfulness and great spirit almost as much as the wonderful insights and tips! Thank you for helping out all those who are writing their hearts out to craft the essays in their final stretch moments!
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This is so good. Your mistake examples are so literal and funny! The students are definitely going to get this! :) Thanks for sharing!
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Your videos are so awesome because they immediately get my brain churning with ideas for my essays unlike any other tips channel. For someone with only 20k subscribers you put out more useful content that anyone else, thank you and keep making these wonderful videos!!
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Thanks a lot; just finished the why us for Warren Wilson College. Your tips were really helpful!
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😂 The comparison to a date really puts it in perspective for me! Thank you! This was incredibly helpful.
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i have watched all your videos. very informative. Thanks so much
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I just finished my personal essay for my common application and started with my supplemental essay and using your methods and tips I am going really fast. If I got accepted by the Universities I choose, I promise you are the only person that I will mention and thank i.e. after my parents😊. Thank you very very very much Mr. Ethan you have made my life easier.(not a lie)
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Thank you Ethan for helping me help students!
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The video editing is so gr8 than the other videos...lovin it
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Thank youu so much you inspired me to write my essay and it turned out ✨perfect✨
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A video on, "Why you need a scholarship essay" from a particular would very much be helpful...Could you share some tips on how to go about such an essay?
Check out this guide: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/how-to-write-a-scholarship-essay
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Honestly, you've given me so much great advice that I give you permission to use the work "lowkey" more
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“lowkey” was absolutely used correctly. hats off to the coolest college guy on the internet
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im writing an artist statement essay, and there are like 3 resources max, I pray for future students you will find a way in the future to help us with it!
Thanks for the suggestion! We'll make a note of it.
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I love how a great deal of this video is: it is called a "why this college essay" but don't write down the reasons you are most likely to want that college. Why have I (and I assume most people) chosen the schools I did? The ranking and location with consideration to the weather
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damn seeing all these sample essays makes me wonder if mine are good enough haha. I've got work to do.
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These videos are really helpful. Is it possible to go into depth with a specific university's essay prompt, e.g. UMichigan's Ross Admissions portfolio.
Thanks! We have crash courses for over 70 schools on the website here: www.collegeessayguy.com/supplemental-essays
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I’m not applying for a college, but instead this really good high school that offers majors I’m interested in. Although, this still really helps, thanks!
Awesome! Thanks for watching.
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If you don’t mind I have a question. Do you think it’s appropriate to directly mention their mission statement if you explain why it’s important to you? Or should it not be mentioned at all?
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Awesome tips. Please make one on why major.
Thanks for the tip. We have a guide for the "Why Major" essay here: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/why-major-college-essay
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Hi Ethan! Thanks so much for your step by step analyzing the WHY US ESSAY, it really helps me a lot. By the way, I just bought The Best 386 Colleges from The Princeton Review, which is the 2021 version. Can I still use that as a guide for students applied this year? Will it mislead me somehow?
Your 2021 version should work great! :)
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Wow, thank you! Glad you're here. :)
Hi Ethan, great content as always. Will you please clarify your 2nd point at the end during the "3 ways to make sure..." segment? You mention that students should bold their reasons but you never state that they should remove these bolded points before submitting their final versions on their applications. On your CEG website's guide to the "Why Us" essays, you specifically state not to leave the bolded words in the final draft and that you only did that in the examples to highlight the context. I've had students argue that "Ethan told me to bold my reasons in his video!" and so I'm just requesting a definitive answer right here, please. :)
Hi there! Thanks for asking. My definitive answer: Unbold before submitting!
Thank you Ethan! This video is so helpful for me ! !! I have a question that bothers me for a long time, which is: can I mention institutes, programs or labs that aren't in the specific college (such as the arts and science college) I am applying to? The essay requirement is "Considering the specific undergraduate school you have selected, describe how you intend to explore your academic and intellectual interests at the University of Pennsylvania".
That should be OK! Here's a free guide to the UPenn essays: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/upenn-university-pennsylvania-supplemental-essay
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You aren’t too old to say low-key 🌝. My calc teacher used to say it all the time
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it was great tonight
Thanks for watching!
Thank you for everything Ethan! I cannot find the chart´s link. Can you leave it here in the comments? I would love to use that chart to organize my why us essays.
Hey! Thanks for bringing this to our attention. The link to the chart is now included at the blog post linked in the description. Here is the direct link to the chart as well: docs.google.com/document/d/1SC43Y8HgsPlnlVmrzJkjmwFPKMiNnt07uix8m_p7zBw/edit?usp=sharing
Hope this helps!
Hey Ethan, Thanks for the video. if you don't mind I would like to ask you a question: for the essays that we don't have much room ( 150 to 250 words) How can we get that detailed information there?
It's possible. I recommend taking a no-fluff approach. Maybe you'll only mention 1 or 2 school-specific qualities in your essay compared to the usual 3-7.
For more help, take a look at my guide to the "Why us" essay here: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/why-this-college-essay
@@Collegeessayguy Thank you very much
The uni I am applying to has 5 different options to choose from for these supplemental essays. "Why us ?" is one of them but there is also another option to write about my strategy to solve an issue and i think i can do better on later but i don't have much idea on HOW to write that whereas for the "why us" essay, well your vid is so helpful. So, I am confused. Which one do you think is a better choice ? Plus, do uni prefer "why us" essay to other essays ?
The "Why us" essay is likely a good choice if there are multiple prompt options. Of course the choice is yours!
First I want to start by saying your videos are really helpful to me, thank you now my question is as an international student (Nigeria) Is it OK to include some of my traditional experiences in my essay?
Yes, that is OK!
hello Ethan, do you have any videos or points for international students who can't write essays in general.
Hi there! My upcoming online courses will help you write your college essays. More info on them here: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-courses (Note: they're pay-what-you-can, and we'll approve your request no matter how much!)
Can you make a video on how to write a essay on "why this major?".
Noted! Thank you
that is great
Thanks for watching!
I have a strength of writing pretty well. I’m no author though, nor in any profession I could use it for. I also feel like I could hone it more. What degree/major in college should I go for that could potentially lead to that pays thrivable income?
this video actually got me into NYU without even giving them my friggin SAT lmao
Awesome! Congrats to you!
When submitting essays to schools, should I highlight specific word/senetneces to draw the reader’s attention?
Thank you!
Nope! Most applications tend to not allow text formatting anyway. Hope this helps!
What if you're interested in applying to a school that is located outside of the US? Would it be okay to bring up location then?
Maybe. It's ultimately up to you! The more specific you can get, the better. :)
Great example essays. Can not find the chart anywhere...or anywhere that it is printable!
Thanks! The chart is linked in the blog post in the description. Here is a direct link to the chart which you can download/copy for your own use. docs.google.com/document/d/1SC43Y8HgsPlnlVmrzJkjmwFPKMiNnt07uix8m_p7zBw/edit?usp=sharing
I have a question. If I am a basketball player, in addition of the specific course I will attend, can't a talk about the basketball team of the university that I'll integrate without forgetting to state my admiration for the coach and some players?
And also can't I talk about specific character please???
It's your essay/application, so it's ultimately up to you. My advice to you is-answer the question(s) the prompt is asking. It's not always necessary to tie all your essays back to a sport or activity you engage in regularly. There are plenty of opportunities elsewhere in your application to make your point about those areas of your life. Try to keep your essays essential so that you're displaying what is important to you AND what the admissions officers are asking for.
Can I type my name at the portion of the common app general demanding for ED signature??
Yep, you'll have the option to do that when applying ED/EA/REA, depending on the school in Common App.
Question - if you are applying to a college that your parents went to or that you have a family connection to, how do you recommend incorporating that?
You'll have an chance to answer questions about this in the school's application itself, so you don't need to write about it in your essays.
I don't know what is low key, but I am sure ur low key is great
LOL thank you!
what do i do if i already wrote my main essay on how i fell in love with law? I plan on majoring in political science, but having discussed that in my personal essay already I feel like it would be repetitive? Should I talk about my other interests outside of Law and what the school offers for that? Or dive deeper into my law passion?
It might be a good idea to round yourself out in other parts of your application and mention other things besides your passion for law. :)
I believe you used "low key" correctly, not too old
LOL thanks for that!
When you said to "highlight in bold the reasons you want to attend"... should I keep the bolded reasons when I submit the essay or was this just for my analysis of my essay?
Up to you! If your application portal (like Common App, Scoir, etc.) lets you format the text, you can bold those sentences. Otherwise, submitting without formatting is totally fine and won't work against you.
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Please can you deal with statement of purpose for graduates?
Noted. Thanks for the suggestion.
My school is only giving me 100 words or fewer for this question ='(
We might have a free guide for the school's prompt you're asking about. Check here: www.collegeessayguy.com/supplemental-essays
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Ethan this is a great video🙏
Please help me!
I am an Ethiopian and I am really passionate to get into a US college. But last year I got rejected from 20 schools. I have alot of problems. Is there anyway I can get help from you
Hi there! Thanks for reaching out. My next round of online courses is starting in September; I'd love to have you join in. The courses are pay-what-you-can (and no one is turned away for lack of funds). In the courses there are opportunities to receive live feedback from me on your essays and to find a writing/accountability partner in our Discord community. Here's a link where you can learn more: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-courses
Also, I recommend trying to get in contact with your local Education USA center: educationusa.state.gov/find-advising-center
Hey Ethan!
So I assume that you've read Geronimo Stilton(GS). I actually I know what I'll study but I've always been interested in exploring and I still am because I feel that there's a LOT o stuff I don't know about. So I am planning to write my essay - just like Geronimo Stilton goes on adventures exploring different worlds(I mean parts of the world) I wish to explore the areas of study/culture etc etc in their college. Also I want to study CS which makes me relatable to GS as that dude is a journalist and he still explores different stuff and integrates it into his work in the form of publishing articles, as I want to integrate the different fields if study I'll be exploring into CS - which in my case this essay will be for Cornell and Princeton. And so I wanna write my essay this way.
What do you think about this? Would greatly appreciate an answer from you. And your advice has helped me a lot with writing my personal statement.
Thanks
PS: You can be a great beat boxer haha
Overall it could work! Just make sure you're relating the essay back to you rather than GS. Try outlining this topic to get a better idea if it'll work for you. :) Love the creativity!
Thank you so much Ethan for the response!
Greatly appreciate it. And love you and your content
I lvoe your jokes
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After watched couple dozens of videos just realized something. Doesn't Ethan looks like Steve?
If you instead of asking who is Steve and you just thought of Steve Jobs I believe he really does.
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does anyone know tips for shor 250-300 essays, can't seem to find it😭
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What would be some other good, impressive facts to get out of my school research?
Anything that is specific/unique to the school-- that way, whoever reads your essay knows you did some quality research. :)
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