Major MISTAKES in IELTS General Writing Task 1 Letters

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  • These sample IELTS General Training Writing Task 1 answers contain some major mistakes. Try to find them! Download PDF: Phrases for Formal Letters bit.ly/ielts-formal-letters ☟click to show more☟
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Komentáře • 65

  • @FasTrackIELTS
    @FasTrackIELTS  Před 3 lety +6

    Don't forget to download the PHRASES FOR TASK 1 FORMAL LETTERS in PDF: bit.ly/ielts-formal-letters

  • @juligaba6335
    @juligaba6335 Před 3 lety +20

    Thanks to the help of your videos I got an 8 in my IELTS exam!
    Listening 9
    Reading 8.5
    Writing 6.5
    Speaking 7.5

  • @manjyotbrar
    @manjyotbrar Před 3 lety +20

    Hi, I watched your videos for few days and I got 8.5 in ielts, with 8 in writing 8.5 in all other 3 categories. Thanks

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Před 3 lety +2

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      @samanakram5341 Před 3 lety

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      @manjyotbrar Před 3 lety +2

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    • @samanakram5341
      @samanakram5341 Před 3 lety

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    @guru7941 Před 3 lety +1

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    @ell2654 Před 3 lety

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    @adammolnar134 Před 3 lety +7

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    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Před 3 lety +1

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  • @azizaaz7011
    @azizaaz7011 Před 3 lety +2

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  • @sheikhfaruk1887
    @sheikhfaruk1887 Před 3 lety

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  • @marlonjamelo8012
    @marlonjamelo8012 Před 2 lety

    thank you

  • @janettsiffo5721
    @janettsiffo5721 Před 3 lety +1

    Hi thank you for your videos they've been extremely helpful . My test is on the 6th of this month and I'm still a little bit confused about how to achieve a task responds. If you don't mind could you please enlighten me on this topic? I have a question in regards to task two general writing . If you get a question for example that's asks about your view are you allowed to
    # write just your opinion or write the two opinions and then state your view point.
    # And if that's the case how can you emphasize on your opinion in order to meet up with the task requirement of clearly stating your side of the question
    # thirdly which paragraph should come first?

  • @usmanmagaji5576
    @usmanmagaji5576 Před 3 lety

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  • @naumanshahid9723
    @naumanshahid9723 Před 3 lety

    What a great video it is, however writing style varies from one individual to the others. One should know when to use the formal and informal tone. What do you think about it?

  • @valerias.9621
    @valerias.9621 Před 3 lety +3

    Ася, спасибо большое за все ваши материалы! Благодаря вам вчера получила overall 8.0 (W.7, S.7,5, R.8,5, L.8,5). Очень полезно!

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      @valerias.9621 Před 3 lety

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  • @raissasianipar7171
    @raissasianipar7171 Před 3 lety

    Pronunciation of "via": {va-ya} or {vee-ya}? The origin of the word via in English is the ablative singular (viā) of the Latin word via, which meant “way.” -Raissa (Canada).

  • @amanpreetkaur2297
    @amanpreetkaur2297 Před rokem

    Hii
    I have one question if we buy your pack are listening and reading material???

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    👋Hello from Karakalpakstan.Could you put videos which is related to PRONUNCIATION ?

  • @parisatabrizi7194
    @parisatabrizi7194 Před 3 lety +2

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  • @Amrit_dhillon_
    @Amrit_dhillon_ Před 3 lety

    Mam please prepare academic task 1 methods of band 9 for us.

  • @marifig.6823
    @marifig.6823 Před 9 měsíci

    How to download? Thank you.

  • @rahulpradeepkumar9509
    @rahulpradeepkumar9509 Před 2 lety

    Hi Asiya,
    May i know if it is necessary to describe the three bullet points in 3 separate paragraphs?
    Rather can i write it down in a single paragraph and make sure the intro, body and conclusion is of almost the same no of words ?

    • @dorcasoziomaamah621
      @dorcasoziomaamah621 Před 2 lety

      First Pargaraph- Purpose of writing, second paragraph- first bullet point. Third paragraph- second bullet point. Last paragraph-third bullet point

  • @abinayak5263
    @abinayak5263 Před 3 lety +1

    I would like to say thank you from the core of my heart Asiya... I got overall score 7 in first attempt....😇 I wish you may evolve with more and more wonderful videos to help people around the world... 😇😊🤗 Thank you...

    • @neenuca6871
      @neenuca6871 Před 3 lety

      Hi Abinaya congrats could you please tell me how you prepared what are the materials you used

    • @abinayak5263
      @abinayak5263 Před 3 lety

      @@neenuca6871 Hi Neenu, thank you.. I didn't use particular materials... But I practiced a lot, many videos are available in you tube itself.., (you might be knowing) and while practising I applied all tips given by Asiya..
      Especially in writing, complex sentence formation was easy for me after following Asiya's tips..

    • @neenuca6871
      @neenuca6871 Před 3 lety +1

      @@abinayak5263 Thanks dear

    • @abinayak5263
      @abinayak5263 Před 3 lety

      Practice a lot.. Each time rectify mistakes... You will ace it.. All the best :)

  • @marvelous2022
    @marvelous2022 Před 3 lety

    Assalomu alaykum
    Im ur student from Uzbekistan 🇺🇿 u know ?
    I love u so much 🙂. And can u tech us How to write task 1 and task 2 in time because I spent for writing task 1 more than a hour 😢 . Thank you so much ....

  • @nishantjain4235
    @nishantjain4235 Před 2 lety

    Thank you, your videos are really incredible. I noticed one correction in your exhibition participation task, you have mentioned "my works" but this is grammatically incorrect, this should be "my work". Please correct me if there is an opportunity.

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Před 2 lety

      Indeed, in most cases "work" is uncountable. However, when you are talking about pieces of art or books, it's countable: complete works of Tolstoy, works of fiction, or Chopin’s piano works. Check the definition number 8 here www.oxfordlearnersdictionaries.com/definition/english/work_2

  • @ayshcandy7155
    @ayshcandy7155 Před 3 lety +1

    So much confusion... I've always confused between formal n semi formal... 😕

  • @victorhsu8487
    @victorhsu8487 Před 3 lety +1

    Hi there, the link of "PDF: Phrases for Formal Letters" is invalid. Could you please check and update it? Thanks.

  • @angel_with_wings
    @angel_with_wings Před 3 lety +1

    Globally, it has observed that every humankind living in this world are always governed by a power for their proper livelihood. The one and only cause for that is "we are living in a democratic world"... Ma'am is there any mistakes in this sentence... Can u please point out the mistakes please...

  • @cherrycandy6860
    @cherrycandy6860 Před rokem

    I watched your videos just 1 day before of my exam …. I need 6.5 ban but in 1 day by seeing your videos I got 7 ban thank you so much

  • @mukit3772
    @mukit3772 Před 3 lety

    Wow, that's wonderful. I've some doubts in expression of formal and informal Letter writing. You've solved that very good way. Btw, your links aren't working, please fix them.

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Před 3 lety

      Thank you for much for letting me know! Here's the correct link bit.ly/ielts-formal-letters I'm glad it was helpful!

  • @aidinkelishani5031
    @aidinkelishani5031 Před 3 lety

    The next month. "the" is missing in the sentence

  • @chamloizenan3626
    @chamloizenan3626 Před 3 lety

    Where should I start IELTs for beginner?

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Před 3 lety

      imho, this is a good place czcams.com/video/3gvJ_0qi_Tc/video.html

    • @chamloizenan3626
      @chamloizenan3626 Před 3 lety

      @@FasTrackIELTS Thanks for your reply.

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    @Dancer-MKDGTJ Před 3 lety

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      @sukhmanrai9667 Před 3 lety

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  • @evacherian464
    @evacherian464 Před 3 lety +2

    My exam on march 13 i am really scarred 😢😢😢

  • @roro6961
    @roro6961 Před 3 lety

    I seriously want to have 7.5 band in ilets but I know I cant 😭😭😭😭😭

    • @adelayoojo149
      @adelayoojo149 Před 3 lety

      You can, stop saying negative. Everyone can succeed and get their desired score just prepare in the best way you can

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  • @basitsaand8558
    @basitsaand8558 Před rokem

    dear words not completely 150 your writ 70