this isnt real music and i assume the person who made this knows this isnt lmao, this is literally made on kinemaster and u can hear the stretching on the amen loop. (by real music I mean this is a mashup)
Lmfao this is a terrible attitude to have about art. just because something is low quality or someone is making it from a different skill level doesn't make it bad. You're more than welcome to not enjoy it but its a pretty awful thing to say that someone's work is "not real music" have you listened to anything other than pop you troglodyte purist? There's plenty of music that sounds "worse" than this and critics would consider it to be theoretically genuis. Art is subjective and there is not such thing as art that "isn't real art"
the amen break "not fitting" with the guitar is a pretty subjective criticism. i think it does. the amen break stretching doesn't really mean anything - it isn't particularly a bad thing. you don't know "everything about music." quit being pretentious.
Shit's not even confusing, considering the name is "dumbfvckgirl", I'm gonna guess "300 pills and a 12 gauge" is just le funny 9gag suicide cause XDDD!!! (shit's corny asf)
I can hear what you are looking for and whilst I personally don't quite think its there I can feel the emotions its conveying and that makes it pretty good, keep going
I have no taste for breakcore or whatever modern genres are yet I get recommended cool stuff like this Also the sexual tension between my mouth and the winchester shotgun loaded with 12 gauge slugs at the other side of my room
There's something here, at least, I see it. Its not a fleshed out musical idea , maybe it was intentional and maybe it wasn't, but this led me to some interesting songwriting decisions. Rapidly shifting tempos over a melancholy guitar riff, very grungy... So, I fvck with it - even if it does sound unfinished.
To each their own man, I happen to like it. It's different. I'd take this over some generic cookie-cutter bullshit in a heartbeat. Keep experimenting pls it's cool
Love it. If someone finds this too experimental and weird (The guitar and drums don't match up 😢 😢😢😢 )they really gotta get out of their box. And frankly i dont care if it didnt take much effort. All i care sbout is the mood it creates And this creates an interesting mood. Good job
it is bad, but one day you’re gonna create an alright one, next, you’re gonna create a decent one, next you’re gonna create a good one, and next you are gonna create a great one. So look at the hate comments as your motivation.
I think its great, because i like it. You are the hatecomment disguised under "reasonableness". You are what kills motivation, because you dont say good job, you say one day its not gonna be shit...
I like this a lot. I gotta disagree with some of the other comments here. I'm not always a huge fan of amen break because it's so widespread, but I think it's used interestingly here. I also think it's slower tempo fits with the droning guitar.
A lot of people are going to attempt to compensate for the pinned comment and brownnose you, don't listen to the brainless empty positivity feedback. As crass and callous as nfqs is, he is probably the most honest one here. You have potential as long as you keep striving to improve, don't let these contrarians deprive you of the will to succeed because in the end, they won't listen to your other works, they won't follow you, they'll just give you some of their own entropy and stagnation. It doesn't matter how good this is, not in my telling of this story, but improve based on what's holding you back, that's all that matters.
I like to experience music with attention, I personally enjoyed the emotion this song gives, even tho I wished it was a little longer and had more elements in between but that's just me, it offers enough for some replays, also keep improving, ignore the positive hollow comments and don't let the negatives change your direction, re inforce it and blast their ears with that they hate, that's how music has prevail in all ages, insist in making them mad!
Weird hate but oh well. Unpolished stuff is great, I like that the drums sort of lag and then play catch up. Messes with the timing, but not so much that it's impossible to listen to. Gud shid 👌
Ignore the people being dicks. The only real issues are the drum fills. They're inconsistent with the tempo, but just learn, and get better at what you do.
I love the human error and how noticeable off beat it is but in a good way, I love the riff the percs are so just good, it sounds just someone having fun and I love it
this is fire as hell, ive come back to this song multiple times this week. i dont know where all the hate is cropping up all of a sudden, but it seems like an intentional group effort. either way, keep doing you
i dig this, seriously. it's a simple starting point if you're new to producing breakcore, but please know i fw this. saw someone in the comments point out how the drums lag and play catch up with the guitar and i like what that does sonically, puts you on the edge, and though it's a simple loop it really does give you the vibe that something is about to tip over. love what this has going for it. keep going!
This is a whole mood, it just needs to be longer. Copy, paste, add a new element, switch up the break a bit, gold. Those last two bars are already a good transition, just repeat them again. PS: I'm not a musician. Take me with a grain of salt.
I can see where youre going with this but i feel like the very simple use of the amen break really brings it down, make it go faster, make it break, loop it at a specific section, add more flare to it. I kind of dig in the vibe this is going for but it just needs that extra effort and thought put into it.
Don't listen to the haters this is unique in the coolest way I've heard in years. This is awesome. I have to try and play this groove on my kit tomorrow, it's too good
this track is like a brilliant sandwich that lacks a few ingredients, i see how it could be brought up to perfection but as unfortunate as it is i am not that guy with the predispositions to do so. try to evaluate on it once more and perhaps release a second version/remix lasting a bit longer, longer riffs, bakcground suppresion once or twice to bring the guitar up front for a moment and having more ups and downs moments. dont get me wrong i know nothing about music im just giving you a viewpoint through the eyes of a simple man. i really like that piece, would love to hear more from it
Been a fan for a good minute. This is exactly the kind of stuff that itches my brain -- the slower and more badass sounding drum and bass. Keep up the awesome work! (And more stuff like this would be lit) (Also obligatory "upload this to Spotify")
it gives of a sort of like laid of anxiety that you have been putting away for a long time and its just catching up. it isnt a panic attack but it may be if it continues for a week. a sort of background anxiety.
![if life was fair, we'd be together [FULL ALBUM]](/img/n.gif)
mid, 4/10 this sounds like a newgrounds loop (especially because the amen break is so loud) and the amen break just doesnt fit with the guitar.
this isnt real music and i assume the person who made this knows this isnt lmao, this is literally made on kinemaster and u can hear the stretching on the amen loop. (by real music I mean this is a mashup)
Lmfao this is a terrible attitude to have about art. just because something is low quality or someone is making it from a different skill level doesn't make it bad. You're more than welcome to not enjoy it but its a pretty awful thing to say that someone's work is "not real music" have you listened to anything other than pop you troglodyte purist? There's plenty of music that sounds "worse" than this and critics would consider it to be theoretically genuis. Art is subjective and there is not such thing as art that "isn't real art"
@@nfqsstfu about "real music" annoying ass, real music doesn't exist it's all fake
the amen break "not fitting" with the guitar is a pretty subjective criticism. i think it does. the amen break stretching doesn't really mean anything - it isn't particularly a bad thing. you don't know "everything about music." quit being pretentious.
i agree with nfqs
I'm loving this trend of youtube recommending me more and more unrecognized stuff like this. There is something unexplainably human about it.
Im in the same spot
Same! I’ve been seeing really good and bizarre content from random channels
Feeling blessed
Same.
I’m in the same boat, this kinda stuff just hits different ya know?
when nobody got me i know kinemaster got me
the kinemaster logo adds uniqueness (im broke)
@@dumbfvckgirl I use the free version of fl studio and davinci resolve for making music, they are both really good for being free
I like how everybody just assumes that something w a confusing title is just the most fire song ever recorded
Shit's not even confusing, considering the name is "dumbfvckgirl", I'm gonna guess "300 pills and a 12 gauge" is just le funny 9gag suicide cause XDDD!!! (shit's corny asf)
I can hear what you are looking for and whilst I personally don't quite think its there I can feel the emotions its conveying and that makes it pretty good, keep going
This is exactly what I was thinking, well-put
Ay I like it
Respectful and well stated criticism, awesome
I have no taste for breakcore or whatever modern genres are yet I get recommended cool stuff like this
Also the sexual tension between my mouth and the winchester shotgun loaded with 12 gauge slugs at the other side of my room
breakcore isnt really that modern
@@hyllo I dont know anything about music tbh my bad
@@alexeipino3994 dw! it emerged in mid 90's
originated from hip hop and now a breeding ground for depressed femboys. amen.
I came here for some Nirvana.
I get breakcore.
I’m not mad.
I’m happy
i dont give a damn about “music theory” i like the tune
I really like the grungier and more focused execution of this song.
taken inspiration from my love of indie music (mostly cardigans, abba and boa)
all awesome artists to be inspired by, especially boa they’re so fucking good frrrr😭❤️
wheres the art from?
lliterally where? you cant even fit the inspiration of that into here, how did those artists change anything about this project
This kinda reminds me of punk rock when it was still punk rock. I'm not saying this is punk, but just that it reminds me of it.
very agressive, very grungy.. great atmosphere in here
all I can say is that this shit fucking slaps, the dissorientation of it is something hella unique, you gotta make more songs like this
this sounds like smth that would play on a need for speed main menu, i love it
Yooo actually tho
never expected to get nirvana vibes from breakcore music
This song makes me feel like I'm trying to start up a push mower and it just won't start.
There's something here, at least, I see it.
Its not a fleshed out musical idea , maybe it was intentional and maybe it wasn't, but this led me to some interesting songwriting decisions.
Rapidly shifting tempos over a melancholy guitar riff, very grungy...
So, I fvck with it - even if it does sound unfinished.
why is the comment section acting like they have a decade in music production
this feels like the hazy memory of an obscure nirvana song while out of your mind at 3am
good work
keep experimenting, you will find the golden spot eventually
Three mins ago? Algorithm going off rn
this feels like if Nirvana and hkmori fused, interested is seeing some faster/more produced songs in this style
I like it a lot, I think theres work to be done on the mixing but this track sounds really inspired.
the title is what they're gonna name my biography
Jokes aside, I hope that biography doesn't come to be
To each their own man, I happen to like it. It's different. I'd take this over some generic cookie-cutter bullshit in a heartbeat. Keep experimenting pls it's cool
i vibe with this, it does feel like some things might need to change but i dunno what
okay i notice how that can be worded weird meant that in like a feels like its missing something sorry if that came off as mean aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Love it.
If someone finds this too experimental and weird (The guitar and drums don't match up 😢 😢😢😢 )they really gotta get out of their box.
And frankly i dont care if it didnt take much effort. All i care sbout is the mood it creates
And this creates an interesting mood. Good job
Sick, cant wait for the longer version with lyrics.
just ignore that pinned comment, because that guy probably never listened to breakcore
pretty dope
This one was a warm encounter
kurt cobussy
NAH💀
This is a great demo. I can imagine how amazing it would sound if a few things were tweaked here and there
Forget the haters do you
I was hoping this song was about playing footsie with a 12 gauge.
Fucking rips though.
Bro was certainly cooking
Sounds like a good night for Kurt Cobain
song so good had to take 300 percs to get the true experience
It's certainly interesting, feels maybe a bit off beat in a way that could work if it was a more consistent polyrhythm
Попробуй поймать какой-то более четкий ритм закинув 300 таблеток, думаю эта работа и не должна быть более мелодичной, это звучит абсурдно
I just want to find one breakcore song with drums that don't pierce my eardrums reeee but good song dude!!
I believe drum’n’bass is what you are looking for
@@jordantwelling ngl, the bass on this is well leveled. It's largely the beat machine stuff, I think.
Haha opposite of what i want, i want music so speedy and loud that ears bleed and all sense is lost :)
@@astha_yadav I recommend I broke my robot, ruby my dear, and Igorrr, they are all great at that kind of stuff! :D
@@astha_yadav I've got the tism so as much as I want it too, I can't have it.
It’s thunder storming really bad outside of my house and I’m on my porch listening to this and I feel cool
this gotta be an 11/4 time signature
it is bad, but one day you’re gonna create an alright one, next, you’re gonna create a decent one, next you’re gonna create a good one, and next you are gonna create a great one. So look at the hate comments as your motivation.
I think its great, because i like it. You are the hatecomment disguised under "reasonableness". You are what kills motivation, because you dont say good job, you say one day its not gonna be shit...
She Kurt on me til I Cobain
I like this a lot. I gotta disagree with some of the other comments here. I'm not always a huge fan of amen break because it's so widespread, but I think it's used interestingly here. I also think it's slower tempo fits with the droning guitar.
i would love to hear this with more polish, its so epic
polish??? LETS GOOO POLAND 🇮🇩🇮🇩🇮🇩🇮🇩
@@user-oi7mo6xk4w indonesia flag lmao
POLAND?????!!!@! WHAT THE FUCK IS A GOOD ECONOMY????????
Kurt Cobain ahh title
Make the drums a faster and more rapid, your gonna get that breakcore sound. This still slaps tho
A lot of people are going to attempt to compensate for the pinned comment and brownnose you, don't listen to the brainless empty positivity feedback. As crass and callous as nfqs is, he is probably the most honest one here. You have potential as long as you keep striving to improve, don't let these contrarians deprive you of the will to succeed because in the end, they won't listen to your other works, they won't follow you, they'll just give you some of their own entropy and stagnation. It doesn't matter how good this is, not in my telling of this story, but improve based on what's holding you back, that's all that matters.
exactly my thoughts dawg
Didnt know i needed this until it hit my screen, thank you for making this.
goes hard overall, feels like it's missing something but couldn't tell you what. thanks for uploading though, subbed
what fucking time signature is this in am i high?!
so real
this sounds really cool
i kinda wish there was more stuff in the song and it was longer tho
good shit, keep cooking
name goes hard
this would sound fucking fire without those random breaks
yes but it also sounds fire with the breaks. I want to play this groove it's so original
czcams.com/video/4o8ZTVYOmDo/video.html Honestly I love the breaks, buuut I thought the same thing XD
Such an unhinged energy. Well done, I like it.
Wish this was longer
This.
"In my restless dreams, I see that town."
I like to experience music with attention, I personally enjoyed the emotion this song gives, even tho I wished it was a little longer and had more elements in between but that's just me, it offers enough for some replays, also keep improving, ignore the positive hollow comments and don't let the negatives change your direction, re inforce it and blast their ears with that they hate, that's how music has prevail in all ages, insist in making them mad!
Weird hate but oh well.
Unpolished stuff is great, I like that the drums sort of lag and then play catch up. Messes with the timing, but not so much that it's impossible to listen to.
Gud shid 👌
Ignore the people being dicks. The only real issues are the drum fills. They're inconsistent with the tempo, but just learn, and get better at what you do.
going on repeat for hours btw
Keep your talent hidden 🗣️🔥🔥🔥🔥💖💕
I like it but it feels like CZcams compression did it dirty
300 pills and a 12 gauge shotgun... I wonder what our friend, the uploader, is up to.
earning 70k
The breaks are super expressive, love it
Keep it up dude
I love the human error and how noticeable off beat it is but in a good way, I love the riff the percs are so just good, it sounds just someone having fun and I love it
This beat is interdimensional
I want to start creating too, but the depression is killing me. New subscriber by the way
it's good to be critical. this is how we get masterpieces of art. but it's also definitely valid to note that this slaps and I really liked it
this is fire as hell, ive come back to this song multiple times this week. i dont know where all the hate is cropping up all of a sudden, but it seems like an intentional group effort. either way, keep doing you
i dig this, seriously. it's a simple starting point if you're new to producing breakcore, but please know i fw this. saw someone in the comments point out how the drums lag and play catch up with the guitar and i like what that does sonically, puts you on the edge, and though it's a simple loop it really does give you the vibe that something is about to tip over. love what this has going for it. keep going!
Fuck the haters, I've never really heard breakcore that doesn't sound like every single other breakcore song ever. This is rad.
Really cool! Nirvana vibes with a bit of breakcore and cp2077. sounds like the main menu for a cult classic video game.
bro, please don't abbreviate cyberpunk
@@dookie771LMFAOOO
Interesting I like that it throws me off guard
This is a whole mood, it just needs to be longer. Copy, paste, add a new element, switch up the break a bit, gold. Those last two bars are already a good transition, just repeat them again.
PS: I'm not a musician. Take me with a grain of salt.
This is what I personally feel too
Same
Now this is a song title
I can see where youre going with this but i feel like the very simple use of the amen break really brings it down, make it go faster, make it break, loop it at a specific section, add more flare to it. I kind of dig in the vibe this is going for but it just needs that extra effort and thought put into it.
Has potential, the slower beat fits in pretty well keep it up :)
i love the polyrithm with the amen break and the rest of the song
(not polyrhythm)
My only problem with this is the fact that it's not longer.
The scav loadout I get in tarkov:
this song is a yellow shade above lime green and tastes like amphetamines
I thought twelve gauge was referring to string gauge at first 😭
love it
I fuck with this so hard because it sounds like my mind
Badass
Crazy how this stuff pops up when im on the verge of suicide
same
This is fire ngl, keep up the good work please!
Don't listen to the haters this is unique in the coolest way I've heard in years. This is awesome. I have to try and play this groove on my kit tomorrow, it's too good
8/10 have a cool loop and the break hits well, i just find the amen havent work well with the guitar, a little more of cook and will be a banger
The artwork and the song are fucking RAW! Love it!
this track is like a brilliant sandwich that lacks a few ingredients, i see how it could be brought up to perfection but as unfortunate as it is i am not that guy with the predispositions to do so. try to evaluate on it once more and perhaps release a second version/remix lasting a bit longer, longer riffs, bakcground suppresion once or twice to bring the guitar up front for a moment and having more ups and downs moments. dont get me wrong i know nothing about music im just giving you a viewpoint through the eyes of a simple man. i really like that piece, would love to hear more from it
My only wish is that it were longer
What the hell is this?!?! Why is the cover the name AND the song a banger at the same time?!?!??!
The title and artwork was way too intriguing. Now im hooked
this is the good stuff
Brought me back to the early 2000’s, great job
this is so dang cool, probably the best breakcore song I've ever heard
Been a fan for a good minute. This is exactly the kind of stuff that itches my brain -- the slower and more badass sounding drum and bass. Keep up the awesome work!
(And more stuff like this would be lit)
(Also obligatory "upload this to Spotify")
it gives of a sort of like laid of anxiety that you have been putting away for a long time and its just catching up. it isnt a panic attack but it may be if it continues for a week. a sort of background anxiety.
I loved this! I wish it was on Spotify I'd listen to it all the time