How to tell (sell) your story in 10 seconds - Ajay Vegesna | Craft Bytes (Deep Dive)
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- How to learn this subtle art of writing your entire story in just one sentence. Is it tough? How can we learn this powerful marketing tool and use it to our advantage. Enter the world of log lines!
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Log line Examples:
Baahubali 1 & 2: A lost heir who was raised by far away tribes returns to his kingdom to claim his throne by warring against the brutal king who destroyed his past.
Jersey: An upcoming cricketer who quits his promising sports career due to a fatal heart disease returns to cricket after 10 years to buy an indian jersey for his son and eventually dies as a hero by winning his son's love.
Rangasthalam: A partially deaf, jovial villager murders a cruel landlord and loyally serves a local MLA awaiting his recovery from coma to avenge his brother's death.
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- Ajay Vegesna
#Screewriting #Marketing #Logline
Your explanation in 3 words: super, fantastic, mind-blowing
Thank you 😊
This is not just bommalata. This is Bhagavadhgeetha for aspirants like me.
Thank you Lord Krishna for this cinemapodesam
అర్జున్ రెడ్డి : MBBS చదువుతున్న ఒక వ్యక్తి తనకు ఉన్న కోపం అనే లోపం వలన తను ప్రాణం గ ప్రేమించిన అమ్మాయి ప్రేమను కోల్పోతాడు .ఆ బాధను మర్చిపోవటానికి చెడు వ్యసనాలకి బానిసై న అతను వాటినుంచి బయట పడి తన ప్రేమను ఎలా పొందాడు .
Em chepthiri Em chepthiri.... Wow
Another name of logline
Is story line or thread o.k.
Na SIR.
Log line for bhahubali, the begining in my perspective :
"అత్త అహంకారి, కోడలు కి నోటి దూల, అధును చూసి ఆస్తి కొట్టేసిన పెద్ద కొడుకు, బలి అయిపోయిన చిన్న కొడుకు, అనాధ అయిన మనవడు".
జక్కన్న సీరియల్స్ తీయడం ఇంకా మానలేదు.
Just for laugh 🤣🤣🤣
Logline of Mahanati:
A leading actress loves an actor, becomes his 2nd wife later realizes that as her life's biggest mistake,becomes an alcoholic,ruins her carrer & ends life in a tragic way
Superb 👍👍👍
Log line :- ARJUN REDDY
the man who was combination of anger🔥 & love💞 ....leads to loss of love ,due to anger ...later depressed ,realized ,went for search of love ....he lost ... finally he gained it💞
"If you can't explain it simply, you don't understand it well enough." SUPERB Explanation Bro..
చెరసాలలో వున్నా తల్లి ని విడిపించి తన రాజ్యాన్ని తానూ పొందటం ....ఇలా రాయొచ్చ సర్
Vinaya vitheya rama - an younger brother who can do anything for his four elder brothers want to protect his family from gangster who has killed his youngest brother and also wants to kill him.
I didn't see arjun reddy and mahanati. So i make logline of vinaya vitheya rama.
కోమాలోకి వెళ్లిన ఒక మహానటి ఆత్మకథను ప్రచురించే భాద్యతలను స్వీకరించిన ఒక లేడీ జర్నలిస్ట్, ఆ నటి బాల్యం, యవ్వనం, ప్రేమ, పెళ్లి, పతనం వ్యవహారాలతో పాటు తనని తాను దొరకబుచ్చుకుంది.
words love story- Arya
He proposed she but she is in love with somebody.
One side love Supports their love.
One side becomes two side love.
Hi sir this mahesh ... Urs follower...
మీ suggestions నన్ను ఎంతో inspire చేయడంతో పాటు నాలో కొత్త confidence కల్గిస్తున్నాయి.. మీరిచ్చిన సూచనలు, సలహాలతోనే ఓ స్టోరీ రాస్తున్నాను. మీరిప్పుడు ఇస్తున్న సలహాలు, సూచనలు, confidence 9yeasr back దొరికింటే నెనేంటో ప్రూవ్ చేసుకునేవాడిని సర్.. but కృష్ణ నగర్ లో ఎదురైన అనుభవాలు.. ఇంట్లో problems నన్ను భయపెట్టాయి సర్.. కానీ మీరు చెప్పారు కదా... ప్రపంచంలో మిమ్మల్ని ఆపేది మిరే అని ఆ మాట నన్ను చాలా ఆలోచింప చేసింది సర్.. అందుకే నాలో passion ni నిద్రలేపాను సర్. నేను గెట్ ఇన్ అవుతానో లేదో తెలీదు సర్.. కానీ ఈ కాఫిడెన్స్ ని ఇలాగే ఉంచుకుంటాను.. సర్...
Thankyou sir...
సర్ అలాగే...స్టోరీ writing గురుంచి ఒక డౌట్ ఉంది సర్....
Hide & seek screen play ante emiti...
Examples ivvandi sir please...
Thank u...
హాయ్ బ్రో పరుచూరి గోపాలకృష్ణ గారి వీడియో చూడు చాలా బాగా చెప్పారు
Arjun reddy story in 6 word's
Arjun preeti premichukunaru, vidipoyarru,malli kalisharu👍
Main line adhe manam chinnapudu chusthuna routine line enno movie lu vachayi e line base chesukoni kani presentation veru screenplay veru screenplay oka mamulu katha ni kuda ekkado ko thisukoni veluthundhi adhe screenplay bagakokapothe oka thopu katha kuda distater lu avuthayi
Screenplay important bigil 😄
Arjun reddy my point of view
First 5 min arjun Reddy ni house lo nuchi pampicharu ani vishyam telusthadhi endhuku pampicharu question tho audince ki element of interest vachela chesaru
ACT-1
Introduction of arjun Reddy charcter
Anger management, fights, friends ,clg Life
Plotpoint-1 Thana life preethi entha important ho Amit fight tho chepatam dhini tharuvatha ACT 2 start avuthundhi
ACT 2(A)
Love between arjun and preethi
Vallu entha la love chesukunnaru pathi scene valla madhya bonding ni penchutha untayi enthala prema lo unnavallu kalavakapothe kachitanga shock avutham kadha
Adhe intervel valla ni vidakottaniki pedha pedha reason lu kuda levu just cast feeling
Intervel-thanu drugs thisukovatam heroine kosam pokapovatam
ACT 2 (B)
Preethi ki pelli ipovatam valla arjun alochalic, drugs Ela anni alavatu chesukovatam intlo nuchi vellipomantam thanu drink chesi operation cheyatam valla thana job kolipovtam vere girls tho unna preethi gurthuravtam this part is heart of the movie thanu antha la struggle ayyadu kabbati manaku ARJUN charcter anthala connect indhi
ACT 2 ki ACT 3 madhyalo plotpoint-2 vasthundhi ippudu daka arjun pain chusam anni loss avuthadu InkA edhe chupisthe chusevallku chiraku vasthundhi so charcter lo change ravali
Pp2 -valla nayanaamma chanipovtam
ACT 3
Valla nayanaamma ni champatam chala plus point endhuku ante arjun andharu kanna baga ardam chesukundhi tane kabbati alanti charater vellipothe kachitanga emotional avuthamu so akkada arjun change start avuthundhi total maripothadu preethi pregent iyna tananu pelli chesukovali Ani aanukuntadu true love definition ni convey chesaru
Kani ekkada oka manchi screenplay emotional ga andharu ki connect chestharu climax lo edharu kalishipotharu
Arjun women ki respect evatam job ki respect evatam elanti scenes tho InkA baga connect avutham arjun charcter ki
Mana ku telishina katha ki oka powerful charcter ni add chesi alanti charater painful struggle petti first half mass and love second half EMOTIONAL tho andharu ki nachela screenplay rasukunnaru excellent 👌
RAJAMOULI garu oka mata annaru katha lo emotion unte kachitanga hit avuthundhi ani adhi 100% true 👍
Nice... Bro
@@avurlanaveen1415 thank you
Super sir.. wonderfully explained 🙏👍
Tq...for clearing the doubts👍
A natural actress who has fallen in love with a man who already got married and a womanizer by his emotional betrayal she became alcoholic and lost his life in early stage of her life
arjun reddy - (logline) - a brilliant ,stubborn& aggressive medical student who have anger issues becomes an intense drug addict & destroys his career , following the marriage of his girlfriend belonging to an orthodox family. AJAY SIR PLEASE COMMENT ON THIS...u helped me a lot sir.....understanding the pattern of a film....love u sir...
We r sooo fortunate to have like u sir... Realy so thankful to u sir
Tnq so much sir ... Very informative
It was very useful sir..waiting for more videos
Thanks bro..chala baaga chepparu..plz make a video on "Script treatment" plz..
1st view mi video chala baguntay
A struggling female journalist started researching about the personal life of a former star actress who's in her death bed. In the process of knowing her she found love,courage,success,meaning of life and the untold story of a great human being.
🤔
@Vickyvarma Can I have ur contact
👌👌
@@satishgorle8757 u can contact me through instagram @thevickyguy-my id
Looks like mani fanboy ??
కట్టే కొట్టే తెచ్చే అంటే సీత కి తాళి కట్టాడు రావణాసురుడిని కొట్టాడు అయోధ్యకు తీసుకొచ్చాడు.
Was waiting for your video
Good morning sir
Ee video chusaaka naaku okkate anipinchindi...nenu more practice cheyyalani..
And "logline" gurinchi,adhbhuthamga
Vivarinchinanduku thank you so much sir 🙏
Thanks alot Ajay guruji 🙏🏻 teacher gurinchiii ekuva explain cheyalem 🙏🏻
Amma gurinchiii chepandi ante em cheptham adiii oka abbhuthamaina emotion 🙏🏻❤️🥰
Thank u I learnt a new point 🤝
Good encourage new talent sir
Super anna nuvu..
*LOGELINE*
350 సంవత్సరాల తర్వాత సూపర్ పవర్ ఉన్న విలన్నీ అంతం చేసి, తనతండ్రిని బతికించుకొని, తండ్రి ఆశయాన్ని పూర్తి చేస్తుంది. భైరవి దేవి సహాయంతో.
Tq sir encourage new talent
Thank you sooo much sir🤝🤝🤝
I want to correct one sentence from you. you don't mind ..katte kotte teche....tie,beat and bring.... Give three explanations about the three words... First word example is I think time means.. Rama ties mangalsutra to Sita... That is called katte...
Better explanation then holly wood writers good Sir 👍
అజయ్ గారూ నమస్తే, మీరు ' లాగ్ లైన్ ' గురించి 'టాగ్ లైన్ 'గురించి చెప్పిన విధానం బాగుంది.కట్టె కొట్టె తెచ్చె / వేని, వీది, వీచి,అనే పదాల
పదాల అంతర్గత కథా ఉదాహరణలీయటం ఇంకా బాగుంది. అలాగే ప్రసిద్ధ సినిమా కథల్ని చూపి విషయాన్ని సూటిగా అందించిన విధానమూ బాగుంది ధన్యవాదాలు
Thank you Raju garu
Thank You sir
Hello Ajay u have mention about treatment in this video and other video(about registering the script), can u plz elaborate it plz, Srikanth
Bro plot midha and central character midha oka detail video chepu bro.frnds evarikaina idea vunte replay lo chepandi😞
Thank you sir
Thanks sir,
How can we get clarity over shot division for the scene
Shortest log line ever.... "Someone wants something and has trouble getting it".
sir can u make video about treatment what exactly it is?
Thank-You So Much #AjayGaru
[ ✍️🎬🎥 ] thank you so much sir 🎬
Thanks boss
movie: MAHANATI
In search of an unknown person in a great actress life who's in coma a talented female journalist from a orthodox family finds and tells the world the greatness of that actress and wins in her life in every way
Suprb👌...Nag aswin intent ni correct ga ardm cheskunnav bro👍
Can I have ur contact
@@satishgorle8757 thanks for the appreciation :-)
@@satishgorle8757 urstruelymadhukiran@gmail.com
Sir, script coordinator VS version writer VS screenplay writer VS dialogue writer? Is their respective roles are fixed and what is their individual contributions for a shooting script (bound) ?
Mahanathi logline...
She don't know anything but anybody can point her she will give immediate answers to them ...and she is a quick learner....
(Mahanati)A Girl come from village,to want to became an actor. Fall in love with an famous actor who already married,But she won't give up to marry him.After that she became lost from family.And became an best actress in films .Her husband affire,become an emotional disturbance to her and lost every thing
(Or )
A famous actor loves an married actor his affair emotional disturbs her.Lost every thing
A boy obsessively loves a girl and became apart they succeed in love or not
(Arjun reddy)
Sir na degara stories unnai but na thinks towrds story writing correct or not anedi telitam ledu. Miru emaina suggestions isthara
How can we give treatment to an idea.tips for the converting an idea into full fledged script
How to include stakes in revenge story loglines?
మహానటి:- ఒక పెద్ద సినిమా హీరోయిన్, Romantic హీరోని ప్రేమించి, హీరో తన బలహీనతని దాచిపెట్టి తనని రెండవ పెళ్లి చేసుకున్నాడు.భర్త మీద ప్రేమతో సినిమాలు మానేసిన తాను మళ్లీ తిరిగి సినిమాల్లోకి వచ్చి గొప్పగా ఎదుగుతున్న సమయంలో హీరో బలహీనత ని పసిగట్టి భర్తకి దూరం అయ్యి మద్యం కి బానిస అయ్యి బాధలుపడి చనిపోతుంది.
Heroine -Protagonist
Romantic Hero-Antagonist
Stakes & obstacle- second marriage and alcohol addiction
Plot point -Return to movies
Premise-movies
What is treatment?
Can you please explain in coming episodes
A particular reason I n his own personal life changes by love and effiction
Sir meru bahubali movie ki chepina logline.... the lion king logline same okate...
If I'm did mistake plz let me know.
Sir scenic order gurinchi explain cheyandi
PLEASE MAKE VIDEO ON EXPLAINNG DIFFERENCE
BETWEEN STORY LINE ,LOG LINE AND THREAD PLEASE SIR.
Amelie lanti plotless stories ki interesting loglines ela rayachu..!?
Do not read any books nundi start chesi ipude complete ayindi sir mi previous videos chudaledhu soo just completed 1:20ki chudadam start chesthe 4:00 am avthundi sir
My interest alaa undi eroju enduko mi 1st video chudaganeee
Thank you soo much manchi information isthunna ndhuku sir
Hi Rajesh, Welcome to the world of Bommalaata. Thank you for your time and encouragement. Please do spread the joy of learning to other struggling souls too.
Logline for ARJUN REDDY : A young surgeon with anger issues becomes self destructive when his lover marries another person.
Logline for Mahanati: A successful actress falls in love with a selfish man and ruins her life.
Sir good explain sir please request sir some move example log line
అతను అనాధ
తినడానికి తిండి లేదు
తండ్రి లేడు
కానీ దేశానికి ఆర్థిక అధిపతి అయ్యాడు
Character arc gurunchi eppudu chebutaru.
నేను రైటర్ అవుదాం అనుకుంటున్నా. ఎలా ప్రొసీడ్ అవ్వాలి. కొంచం చెప్పండి సార్ ప్లీజ్
You used screenplay lock climax in the beginning
Thanku your cooperation sir iam small village person sir no any background sir i want writer sir
What is ment by treatment?
Can you show yes a treat ment.
Survival based story ki logline ela sir,,??
Protagonist, premise, stakes, plot ok but antagonist is situation kada,,?
Dear Ajay Garu, I will try to tell one thing in Six words.. keeping the aspirants in view..
YOU
MADE
OUR
WORK
MORE
EASIER
Thank you Sir..
ha ha thank u so much suresh..this is one of the best creative compliments i have ever received. - AJ
Mahanati :
Oka simple middle class journalist gatha konni nelalu ga coma lo unna fade out ayyina oka goppa actress life journey ni publish chesi. Caste and religion ni odinchi thana prema nu geluchukuntundhi.
Arjun reddy:
Oka avesaparudaina young doctor thana kopam valla thana life ni nasanam chesukuntaadu, anukoni tragedic situation tharuvatha thana kopaanni pakkana petti alochinchadam start chesi, malli thana normal life ni and thana pure love ni sadhinchukuntaadu.
ARJUN REDDY
a love deprived and ambitious surgeon seperated from family suffers his breakup in solitude and looses his profession until a series of incidents gets him back to his family and the love of his life
anna script register cheskunnaka, is it mandatory to register
for copy right
1.Thalli kiii icchina mata kosam tribals tho perigina hero maharaju nii champi yuvaraju avuthadu
2.koduku korika therchadaniki therigiranu anni thelisina chavutho yuddam chesi gelichadu(jersey)
Arjun Reddy: kopanni control chesukoleni honest hero thana premanu kolpoi doctorga professionlo kuda odipoi thana nannamma death tho change ai malli thana premanu geluchukuntadu.
Mahanati: thanu heroines industryloki ravadaniki help chesina vaadu ame carrier lonu, personal life lonu problems face ayyela chassi chivariki ame chavuku karanm avuthadu.
Sir any movie script upload file plz
Anna gowtham tinnanuri gaarini interview cheyyandanna plz plz and mahanati director nag Ashwin gaarini interview cheyyandanna.
A free spirit natured house surgeon falls in love with a different caste based girl.When she get married under dramatic situations he goes through extreme pain and ultimately loses his family,friends and profession in order to get over her.
Vicky Varma I like it
Tq
Superb 👍👍👍
Okka mukkalo story cheppali antaru meru emo evanni undali antaru avanni unte story peddaga untadi Kada bro
సర్ లాగ్ లైన్ అన్న స్టోరీ లైన్ ఒకటేనా
Arjun Reddy:
Protagonist is a surgeon with anger issues loses his love and will be abandoned from his family and goes through all the pain in the process of moving on and returns to his old love after demise of his grandmother.
Mahanati:
Protagonist is a small town girl who aspires to be a film actor and finds her love in the process of starting her career and marries him and reaches to the pinnacle of success in film industry. Eventually she loses her money, career and life because of her husband and close allies and wrong investments in film industry.
I smiled
he fired u
see why
it's my log line 😎
Sir, few stories engage the audience normally till climax but a brilliant twist or surprise in climax will make the story like a master peice.
Few examples : kancharapalem, pokiri, shutter Island, the usual suspects, the prestige etc...
I watched all of the above movies, my doubt is that when we are narrating this kind of story to a producer or any client, should we reveal the twist first as spoiler alert because we think that twist is crux of the story and with out that twist remaining story will be like routine thing or shouldn't we tell the twist by treating our client as an audian.......
How a narrator can deal this type of stories while narration ? Please share information if you have any idea or any experience about this kind of narrating a story ?
If you have opportunity of narrating the full story for 1 or 2 hours, then reveal the twist only in the end of the narration.
Sar Script rasaka logline rayala. Logline rasaka script rayala
Log line for my story:- two rowdy people grown up under their fathers freind .one fine day they come to know that they are going to die with in 10 hours. So they are trying to change their fate on swamy ji suggestion but their uncle killed them who lookafter them on time.
no one can change thier fate.
A medico who has problem of angry management disorder loves his junior and lost his girlfriend for a short time because of his drug addict nature eventually how can he regain his lost love
Main stake in Bahubali movie was his mother because if didn't win over brutal king he lost his mother so that had to win
The pursuing student in doctrate who have zero anger management fell in love with a girl in college and girl rejects him after loveing him because of him anger 🤬, and make him understand the true love in the end...
Sir,please tell me how to estimate the budget of a script nearly
S sir
A home surgeon with huge anger , loses his great love In past , gets back his love after facing pain and loss in his life .
Oka hyper link story structure or parallel ga multiple stories ni discuss chese screenplays,or oka complete life story ni discuss chese screenplays ki logline Ela rayachu ajay Garu..for example Super deluxe,Forrest gump,Boyhood,Vedam,malli raava films ki loglines ela rayocho cheppagalara..!
Yaa bro actually that time we taking the hook of subject antte assalu manam ahh story dwara emm cheppali anukuntunnamo adde log line
గిరిజన ప్రాంతాల్లో పెరిగే ఒక యువకుడు తన గతాన్ని కనుక్కోవడం అతను ఒక యువరాజు అని తెలుసుకొని రాజ్యం కి వెళ్లడం సింహాసనం ని అధిరోహించటం
Passive voice undodhhu kdhaa....babubali logline motham passive voice lone undhhii
He loved
She loved
They distroy
Is log line and synopsis are same?
No. watch this for better understanding czcams.com/video/3acZmgNfcjw/video.html
log line lo character names use cheyyakunda which names use cheyyali sir?
No need to use any names. It will describe the person that's it. "A young man who wants to..." , " A unmarried pregnant woman wants to take revenge..." , "A teenager who falls in love ...." ilaa begin modhalavu thaayi and migathaa description lo katha yokka log line mottham vasthundhi.
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Sir miru rasina script papers oka 10 Page's chupithara sir please please please please please please please please please