The Order (2022) Short Horror Film
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- čas přidán 3. 12. 2022
- A food delivery driver struggling to make ends meet accepts an extremely high-paying gig. It's soon clear, however, that this order is anything but ordinary.
Spanish Subtitles by Maribel Monedero
#scary #creepy #horror #horrorshort #shorthorrorfilm #shorthorror #awardwinning #creepyshort #scaryshort #nosleep #nosleep #awardwinninghorrorshort #thechrysalis - Krátké a kreslené filmy
Fantastic storytelling and so well-crafted! And what a crazy ending. Amazing work all around!
Thanks so much, Tyler!
This is what short film is all about. All the fat trimmed off, great yet simple narrative, minimal dialogue. Polished production from start to finish.
Thank you so much!! Extremely kind of you
Good editing and really effective lightning. Loved how natural the main character felt (the conversation with the girlfriend was a nice touch to make her even more relatable). More, please!
Amazing short!! You always manage to blow my mind with the most incredible stories!!! And that ending... WOW!! It's a great honor to make Spanish subtitles for your amazing pieces!!
I mean, I was gonna say "I hate to do this, but..." and then just do it anyway, but I don't actually hate it, it's almost fun sometimes just to see how many people lose their minds over something that has naught to do with them. I'm talking about correcting you. I LOVE DOING IT! To be clear, I would appreciate if others did the same for me (if I were ever somehow to be mistaken about something) but, let's face it...not gonna happen, right? I know, of course it won't. But whether it's spelling, grammar, punctuation or some other bit of nothing that hasn't any real effect on what was actually said, I love to point the little things out that I see as an error because it's usually funny to me in some way, as to how or why that error was made. Now I'm guessing there's a good chance, judging solely on your name and your comment about Spanish subtitles, that English is not your native language, even though you communicate using English more effectively than 3 of my sisters do and English is the ONLY language they speak. So that adds another layer of humour to the fact that I think the expression you've meant to use is actually "You always manage to BLOW MY MIND...". Whereas, to say "BLOW MY BRAINS" is usually a euphemism for putting a pistol in one's mouth and pulling the trigger or...blowing their brains out! That simple li'l combining of two different idioms or euphemisms or however it comes about cracks me up to no end, and on SO MANY LEVELS. So thanks for the laugh! I'ma finish my drinks and go to bed soon.
@@SweetBabyJesusOnTheCross Yeah, thank you for the correction. It's "blow my mind," as you've stated. XD
@@maribelmonedero8670 no worries MnM, I do what I can for the Little People, I do what I can. 😏
another banger from mr. squid! one of the most disturbing things about this to me, personally, is wondering what would have happened if she didn't go through with it. was she already in too deep once she accepted the order? definitely a great short
Thank you so much! I was going for she tried to stop it once she realized what was being delivered but had to escape. She put the order through once she was safe since she needed that money but wished she had stopped it had she known
That was awesome!! Very well done!!
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
So I’m hiding in the comments by myself.
Whew! This was so NOT what I expected lol. Good job!
This was amazing. Loved it. The acting felt very natural too :D Glad I came across this
Thank you! The actress Malena is really talented, she did a great job for a non-speaking role which can be tricky
Really good story and extremely unique and creative, loved it!
Another amazing film. I have just watched two and I have loved them both. Subscribed and going to watch another :P
"Gross, horrifying, sick" - nice execution!
Great GREAT STORYTELLING on what goes on in real-life.. amazing!!!
That was an awesome film!!👍👍😁
Woah...mind blown 🤯
Good one!
My word!
Pretty good one. The lady is so sympathetic. The story´s creepy because it´s probably real. 😞
Wow, this was an excellent film! The storytelling was fantastic, as was the acting, and the soundscape was also great; it really aided in setting up the eerie atmosphere. I loved the shocking ending, especially the very ending reveal of the daycare; what a disturbing twist! Great job! I myself am a novice filmmaker and just recently released my first horror short, "The Master". Feel free to check it out if you wish; I'd love to get another filmmaker's opinion on it. Thank you!
Where do you find this music? It's almost like the 2 shorts I've seen are created due to the inspiration of the songs and then built around it.
Searching public domain archives with keywords, "my baby" for this one
Not bad, dope concept… prolly really happens
this was pretty good, can only imagine what you can cook up if you make an hour long film with a larger budget
seeing the people towards the end who orchestrated the whole thing was cool
also seeing the dude who delivered the baby at the very end before all of this happened was cool, i love when movies & shows do that sort of thing
only complaints i have
1. the monster being kinda goofy
2. the random scream face that had car audio over the chick's face when she was driving away from the monster was awkward and threw off my immersion
not sure what you were trying to display with the monster scene but i didn't get anything from it other than the story portion that a baby was sacrificed to it, the little jump scare was nice tho
3. the fact that the dude just stole & threw a baby away for only 500 bucks
4. some of the camera angles being really tight and constrained
5. most of the car shots inside the car are really left sided and feel kinda zoomed in. i'm not some expert in this shit but all of those face shots while in the car just feel off to me, feel like there's a better shot for that portion of the film
anyways, hope the feedback helped i'm just a random viewer tho, no experience in film creation or anything
Liked it... More please
Thank you!! Working on the next one now!
Sorry Danielle order cancelled. 💀☠
Haha, very nice comment
Dark😮
Not bad for $250
Good
I guess she didn't realize what was moving was the baby.
Pretty wild
Came from cory
LOVE THE CONTENT KEEP IT UP!
Thanks so much!! Will do! ❤
Wooooow
What happen to the food delivery woman in the end?
She made it out alive but terrified after getting paid
Great! Coryxkenshin needs to see this
Thank you! I That would be amazing
Can I join the Order? I got a fancy druid cape that my mom made for me, she says I need to get outside more.
Sic!
The fabled Squid Upload. Good times.
Well now..... I liked it
🖤🖤
Ok, that was messed up.
Lets get Cory over here!
That’s was cruel….
0:13etc.....Wow, these are such small delivery orders. I feel sorry for the driver already; I see that stuff around my complex. Why do people even ask someone to deliver food for such a small amount? Delivery fee, tip....Geez, go pick it up lol!
Don't mind me, I'm just decompressing after a long day! Now, back to the movie........
👍
This was really lazy story telling. There were so many holes it barely resembled a story
Holy actual shit-fuck! I thought my Dad upstairs was cruel, what with the hatred , starvation, and cancer, not to mention his design of human male genitalia... But you guys? You guys are off tha' fucking chain man. Like, just total masters! That was more soul-destroying, more emotionally-disturbing, and more appetite-suppressing (probably due to the vomit-inducing nature of it all) than anything He's put together since the Inquisition! And those guys were just nailing it! Like literally, they were nailing people to shit because of....well, whatever really. I'm sure they knew what they were doing. I know, i know, He's probably gonna crucify me for saying this, but you make him look just like any other lower case g. But please don't tell Him I said that....seriously, please don't. I ask this In The Name of My Daddy, Me, and That Creepy Dude Lurking About that does what exactly..? Cool.
🤦🏻♀️ So ein Müll !