Top 5 mistakes in IELTS writing Task 2

In this video i am going to explain top 5 mistakes of Ielts writing task 2 .
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Well done 👍 sir

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Really nice

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Sir pher words ka challenge kasy pora hoga

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Salam sir how can i join your online writing session ,i m from Pakistan because WhatsApp not showing for me on your given number ..