No One Dared To Help The Alien Princess, Except The Human | HFY Sci-Fi Story
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Sagan Could've Convinced Her Father To Send The Royal Guard With them To Fight The Shadow Collective
Let me get this straight, the traitor is named Lord Zephyr and the King is named Zephyr too?
Maybe they are cousins?
Space station with streets? Um, ok. So uncle has a weapon held to the kings head and all of a sudden there is a huge gap between uncle and the king? The story fell apart. Dillon could have easily killed the uncle with his blaster which would have been trained on uncles head the whole time they were in the throne room. The throne room doesn't have electronic communication? What is this 1st century Rome? At Nix, where is Talon's elite guard? The numbers go up and down like a fractal. So Zara is free after being beaten previously? The text is breaking up and disjointed confusing the story. Nope nope nope. Zara would be a priority not dillon or sagan. So Zara gets to walk away without a thought? Stupid! Nope again. One piece of ancient tech, dohh.
Story written by Joe Biden...
Downvote for awful writing