It's amazing how those old dolls drive people into a proper fear. I've got an old suitcase with about 10 old dolls from my grandma in the 1880's, they are well spooky. Great short with intense atmosphere, well done.
That doll baby got on the latest Fenty Beauty before me. And rocking it like a BOSS! thats dress is f 'd up tho. I m not feeling that victorian age mess.
So this is just Constructional Criticism. Please understand I don't want to seem like a dick. The story itself seemed pretty creepy although the acting did not portrait the story well. When Lucy is in her dream she just does not seem scared what so ever, as well as when she wakes up she doesn't even act like it was a nightmare. The brother then comes into the room asking what is wrong. How would he even know something happened when she woke up in silence? Another thing is how she interacted with the doll in the hallway. The paper started to move like wind was blowing it, but she didn't even check if there was a breeze. She must have just assumed there was. If that was anybody in this world they would have been extremely curious. I am not a story teller or an actor, never was in drama in high school but these are minor things that i have noticed. I hope you can see where I am coming from. I can't seem to decide to leave a like or dislike. I went ahead and liked it anyways... Mainly because of the story. I would hope that you guys would try to remake the story, adding a few things in it along take a few things out. Thank you so much for reading and have an amazing day... SMILEY FACE :)
Logan Biinski Thank you! I thought the same thing! Great storyline I just felt like they focused on unnecessary details while neglecting the important parts! So disappointing because I really thought it could have been executed a lot better!
Also why would you burn some religious artifacts with said creepy doll and not the doll itself?? And they left the fireplace going all night when they went to bed?! Safety hazard!!
I still cant believe I havent seen a comment about the red hot chili peppers porcelain song they used at the end of this video. I loved the short just for that song
I love the scenes when Lucy says "let's burn them," and the next thing you see is her and Sam, side by side, all in. Poor decision, but strong family bond. Adore those two. Ah well... Also, maximum emotional effect with minimal "effects" - great piece of work here.
And that's why I have never liked those creepy porcelain dolls , ever ! Good work tho guys and the actors were surprisingly good as well . Keep up the great work 👏👏👏
The storyline at the beginning was great but after about 3-4min started to get a bit boring and focused on unnecessary details of the storyline! Started off good but lost me after about 4min!
YEP ANYWAYS ARE YOU SAVED CHANTELLE ADLINGTON ? HAVE YOU ACCEPT JESUS AS YOUR LORD AND SAVIOR AND RECEIVE ETERNAL LIFE I COULDN'T IMAGINE HEAVEN WITHOUT YOU
Wowww. The horror itself ain’t so bad but the idea per se is breathtaking. Deserves a whole length of a movie. Why dolls, toys and whatnot are so intriguing, disturbing and at some point, enchanting to us viewers ?
I enjoyed this short. I feel like a lot of the comments said what I had to say in terms of criticism. What I liked about this a lot was the "Do Not Disturb" paper written on the wooden box. I know a lot of people said they wouldn't have touched it, but it all comes down to curiosity. I know for sure it would have bitten at me A LOT. I remember there was this one time I was in my grandparent's house, and their house is pretty old. While in the attic, I came across something similar (not saying it could have been some ghost or something lol) and it said "Do Not Disturb" written on it. It ate away at me to NOT open it, but I was reminded by things like THIS on why you should never let curiosity get the best of you. I still up 'till this day, wonder what could have been in that box.
This video is why I don't purchase nor play with dolls, no matter what material they are made from, plastic nor porcelain. With that said, this movie was very well done ! ! ! ! I gave it a 10 out of 10, for scaring the hell out of me.
This was so bad that it was still entertaining. I agree that burning the Bible page and cross was the BEST worst idea ever... I don’t know why I didn’t think of that. Thought for sure the doll was going in!
Finds a creepy box with a haunted doll in the attic *Puts the box in the middle of the room *Burns the Cross and the Bible page *Takes a nap near the doll *Is shocked when the doll wanders the house and tries to kill her
I may be in a minority group here but, everytime I saw that doll, I laughed! 😂 It didn't scare me at all! That might be because it was motionless, (except off camera). The acting wasn't exactly top notch either! I did enjoy watching this through. I sorta treated it like a comedy. Probably not the reaction the film makers were hoping for! 🤷
Ok, as I am SURE others also want to know...why not burn the damn DOLL? Rather than the only things that were apparently keeping it in it's place until it was disturbed! Other than that? I think you did a great job! It really had a "big screen" vibe to it!
Dolls are way creepier than clowns. Very effective! The whole package- shot composition,acting,story and one of the nastiest looking dolls ever! You knew there would be trouble when they burned the cross and Bible page and left the doll alone. Great little gem!
This deserves way more views, likes and comments. holy shit that was really good and surprised me, and let me tell ya this was way better than the movie Annabelle. I thought this short would be bad and cheesy but holy shit that surprised me, creeped me out too. What made it better is knowing how low budget this was and you guys pulled it off so well, awesome job!
I just found this three years later... I made a short film before this film came out called, "Porcelain" about a doll too. We didn't burn stuff though.
Wow! This little gem is creepier than most of what gets uploaded here. The characters' actions & motivation were a little shaky (why not burn the doll along with the crucifix?), but the overall effect is better than all those other shorts that rely on jump scares & grotesque makeup to deliver their shocks. I'd like to see this developed a little more.
6:58 damn sure this scene gonna be there in every horror film .....idk whether there's a ghost or not but this knocking door sound must includes in a horror film....why why.....ghosts could enter without knocking doors....how foolish ....ghosts having permissions to allow lol..😂
I don't mind stairs to an attic. But I'd never want those pull-down stairs. You climb to the top, you're eye-level with the floor, and see a head staring back at you.
White girl: *sees a suspicious "do no disturb" sign in a dark, dusty old attic.* White girl: *decided to disturb it anyways* Black girl: *sees a suspicious "do no disturb" sign in a dark, dusty old attic.* Black girl: *relocates to a new home that is far away from the haunted house* Also...why the hell would you burn everything except for the doll? ARE YOU CRAZY? The acting could have been better but other than that It was interesting to watch.
the doll herself has the most brain cells of anyone appearing in this film
Right :-)
I agree
kimberly michelle why is That?
Exactly through the whole thing I was written for the doll
I agree with you.
There's a demon doll running around my house, sounds like a lovely time to take a little nap!
hahahhaha
Nap hell! It's time to go!
You funny.. Did you hear the way it laughed when she took the bible and cross off.
*SO RIGHT!!!*
Like real smart uh.
Taking a nap next to the demonic doll...yeah, sounds the right thing to do!
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
😭
“Definitely demonic doll keeps getting around the house on its own”
*sets the doll safely on the chair and burns the bible page and cross
It is a lovely doll! Some of them do pranks but they are never 'demonic'and never to be burnt. There is no corpus on the cross, so that is all right.
I have a haunted doll it makes noise but it stays words I put it.
She just HAD to disturb it
@Sierra IKR!
She leaves then looks back why would you look back
That's what they do .. fuck with unknown shit lol
This doll looks more creepy and demented than Annabelle. Kudos to you for that alone. I really liked this. Thanks!
why in the world would they burn the cross and bible page INSTEAD of the doll? :))))
ikr
I wondered the same thing. They did not read the verses to understand the reasoning.
Or just burn all of it or throw all of it away...
I wonder
apo calypse
My thoughts exactly. 🤷🏿♀️
It's amazing how those old dolls drive people into a proper fear. I've got an old suitcase with about 10 old dolls from my grandma in the 1880's, they are well spooky. Great short with intense atmosphere, well done.
"DO NOT DISTURB"
*disturbs*
hey
Purrrrr...Meow
hun, we all know that won't work, that's called reverse psychology. that doll definitely know what the hell she's doin when she wrote that sign lol :p
Sam: Whoa... that's a creepy doll
Lucy: There's a cross and a bible page... let's burn it.
Creepy Demon Doll: Ohh ho ho maaaan... too frikken easy!!
Lol 🤣
Lolllll🤣🤣
Doll: Jesus, I could strangle these two with a cordless phone.
@@redvelvetrose 😂
RULE NUMBER 1: DONT GO IN THE ATTIC OR ANY OTHER DARK CREEPY PLACES
Animating Creating rule#2 dont touch a box that specifically says "Do not disturb" especially if there is a creepy ass doll in it
Animating Creating hell yeah run the other way
Especially when you think there are rats running around
exactly ppl these days
Rule number 3: If you heard something weird in your dark attic NEVER investigate or else something Will haunt you
hey Sam the power went out and the doll moved by its self Lets split up.
Tyler's world lol but pretty sure they're siblings
doesn't mean they should split up O_O it's one of the worse decisions anyone can make in a horror film
two brilliant minds they have..doesnt equal one
Fr that's so slow y would u split up
Thats what they always do like stick together it makes me laugh
Things people say in horror movies that no one would say in the same situation…”Let’s split up. I’ll search the basement, you take the attic.”
Why in the world would you burn the cross and a page of the bible instead of that butted doll 😂🤦🏽♀️
O' Ryan Headford Ikr that was so stupid
Glad I read this....saved me some time; clearly this makes no sense. Besides, I burn all dolls on principle: they're creepy.
चतद
Absolutely
My thoughts exactly!
damn, that dolls eyeliner/brow game is better then mine
xela g I
xela g LOL 😂😂😂😂😂
loool
That doll baby got on the latest Fenty Beauty before me. And rocking it like a BOSS! thats dress is f 'd up tho. I m not feeling that victorian age mess.
Than*
Now these days Annabelle is everywhere
Haaaaahaaaa make me laughing be patient's to play
I had much fun while reading comments
burn the cross and bible.. but not the spooky doll?
My thought, too!
What I said oh my gosh 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
yes when the doll is possessed this things happens
yeah ikr
The sister acts like the doll possessed her and she kept looking for the creepy thing.
I would also be mad if someone drew a moustache on my face.
Thats why i dont disturb my wife when she is sleeping
So this is just Constructional Criticism. Please understand I don't want to seem like a dick. The story itself seemed pretty creepy although the acting did not portrait the story well. When Lucy is in her dream she just does not seem scared what so ever, as well as when she wakes up she doesn't even act like it was a nightmare. The brother then comes into the room asking what is wrong. How would he even know something happened when she woke up in silence?
Another thing is how she interacted with the doll in the hallway. The paper started to move like wind was blowing it, but she didn't even check if there was a breeze. She must have just assumed there was. If that was anybody in this world they would have been extremely curious.
I am not a story teller or an actor, never was in drama in high school but these are minor things that i have noticed. I hope you can see where I am coming from. I can't seem to decide to leave a like or dislike. I went ahead and liked it anyways... Mainly because of the story. I would hope that you guys would try to remake the story, adding a few things in it along take a few things out.
Thank you so much for reading and have an amazing day... SMILEY FACE :)
Logan Biinski Thank you! I thought the same thing! Great storyline I just felt like they focused on unnecessary details while neglecting the important parts! So disappointing because I really thought it could have been executed a lot better!
It also ended kind of quick and then jumps to 6 years later? Great story and the doll was super creepy, make up was done well also
Also why would you burn some religious artifacts with said creepy doll and not the doll itself?? And they left the fireplace going all night when they went to bed?! Safety hazard!!
Logan Biinski I understand your perception and I understand your points of view totally.
_DankHowell_ ..........
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I like you.
Let's burn this stuff...NOT THE DOLL....this stuff. 😒
Can we please take a moment to appreciate the young lady in the intro jamming out to The Beatles
Lmao right
Alaska Young We might as well, being that was the last smart thing she did.
I still cant believe I havent seen a comment about the red hot chili peppers porcelain song they used at the end of this video. I loved the short just for that song
Yes that was super creepy 😲
I got a pop tart commercial right when he pointed up and it was just perfect timing!
5:14 why does the doll look like one of the 3 musketeers? 😂
Damm i can't stop laughing now
Fire: I can kill you, Doll
Doll: Hold my beer
I love the scenes when Lucy says "let's burn them," and the next thing you see is her and Sam, side by side, all in.
Poor decision, but strong family bond. Adore those two. Ah well...
Also, maximum emotional effect with minimal "effects" - great piece of work here.
The one thing you never do is burn a bible page and a cross and if you see it across a evil looking doll dont touch it
@@kimbratten4361 exactly! I thought they would burn the doll instead 🤦♀️
It’s best like tha 👨✈️ must always go down with his 🛳
Meaning tha cross tha bible & th doll 2 end this curse once 4 all🙏🏾
And that's why I have never liked those creepy porcelain dolls , ever !
Good work tho guys and the actors were surprisingly good as well . Keep up the great work 👏👏👏
Sam look creeper than the doll. And I mean before he got possessed.
I know these actors are young… But I thought the acting was quite poor.
Not believable at all 😖
too scary for me once I saw the doll. What's wrong with people minds, burning a cross with a warning attached.. Never a good idea.
Fr
and that DOLL spirit got out, did you see what she did to Sam eyes?
What I want to know is...where was the mom the whole time this was happening
EXACTLY
The storyline at the beginning was great but after about 3-4min started to get a bit boring and focused on unnecessary details of the storyline! Started off good but lost me after about 4min!
My favourite part was the Beatles playing at the start
YEP ANYWAYS ARE YOU SAVED CHANTELLE ADLINGTON ? HAVE YOU ACCEPT JESUS AS YOUR LORD AND SAVIOR AND RECEIVE ETERNAL LIFE I COULDN'T IMAGINE HEAVEN WITHOUT YOU
They said that doll is creepy but they are burning the holy page and the cross..... I didn't get it.....😑
Wowww. The horror itself ain’t so bad but the idea per se is breathtaking. Deserves a whole length of a movie.
Why dolls, toys and whatnot are so intriguing, disturbing and at some point, enchanting to us viewers ?
That's when I get the flamethrower after finding that thing in my attic
why they burn the cross and bible?...the sacred elements to protec against evil forces
Jorge Alberto Perez Duran lol right that was goofy
there was only ONE page... it's not like it was cluttering up the house or getting in the way... stupid people.
They know Not what they do.Dumb kids
Right stupid
Free Chuckey
I liked it, but seemed like they were just ripping off Annabelle and the Conjuring:(
Russell Behun that doll is much scarier than Annabelle
Russell Behun what happened at the end?
Except the Conjuring was a shit fucking movie
love the Beatles song at the beginning.
mike wood is that song by the Beatles?? I never knew.... but I heard the song b4. what's it called BTW?
@@anascoon-heisenberg3940 ticket to ride
@@bean7039 thank'ee
Unless they paid the royalties to use the song they are breaking the law.
I thought it was “A Hard Day’s Night”
I enjoyed this short. I feel like a lot of the comments said what I had to say in terms of criticism. What I liked about this a lot was the "Do Not Disturb" paper written on the wooden box. I know a lot of people said they wouldn't have touched it, but it all comes down to curiosity. I know for sure it would have bitten at me A LOT. I remember there was this one time I was in my grandparent's house, and their house is pretty old. While in the attic, I came across something similar (not saying it could have been some ghost or something lol) and it said "Do Not Disturb" written on it. It ate away at me to NOT open it, but I was reminded by things like THIS on why you should never let curiosity get the best of you. I still up 'till this day, wonder what could have been in that box.
Thanks Dametrias, we really appreciate your feedback! I so agree with you in terms of curiosity!
Everything u said was so true
100%
Agree. I’ve seen enough horror shorts and films to know not to interrupt anything like that.. lol
I would have been the dumb azz who opened it LOL
Dametrias Green probably just old fishing gear
My mom :- u r the dumbest girl in the world.
Me:- how about watching a short film?
My mom after watching this film:- fine I change my mind
This video is why I don't purchase nor play with dolls, no matter what material they are made from, plastic nor porcelain. With that said, this movie was very well done ! ! ! ! I gave it a 10 out of 10, for scaring the hell out of me.
This was so bad that it was still entertaining. I agree that burning the Bible page and cross was the BEST worst idea ever... I don’t know why I didn’t think of that. Thought for sure the doll was going in!
The doll got no chill....freaking running around the attic all the time
Can”t understand why they still keep the doll when it’s so old, creepy n unclean!
Ik
Cuz creepy shit like that is cool!
Finds a creepy box with a haunted doll in the attic
*Puts the box in the middle of the room
*Burns the Cross and the Bible page
*Takes a nap near the doll
*Is shocked when the doll wanders the house and tries to kill her
2:35 Annabelle straight into the M.f. trash can!
Dude this is so professional , I want full movies from you guys .
This doll sure is spooking me out.... Hey want to burn some holy relics? Please creators/writers, explain this to me?
12 minutes of my life that I'll never get back
I may be in a minority group here but, everytime I saw that doll, I laughed! 😂 It didn't scare me at all! That might be because it was motionless, (except off camera). The acting wasn't exactly top notch either! I did enjoy watching this through. I sorta treated it like a comedy. Probably not the reaction the film makers were hoping for! 🤷
Ok, as I am SURE others also want to know...why not burn the damn DOLL? Rather than the only things that were apparently keeping it in it's place until it was disturbed!
Other than that? I think you did a great job! It really had a "big screen" vibe to it!
This one didn't move me much still i applaud the effort
Billy Bees
I agree I would like to see this turn into a movie too
Dolls are way creepier than clowns. Very effective! The whole package- shot composition,acting,story and one of the nastiest looking dolls ever! You knew there would be trouble when they burned the cross and Bible page and left the doll alone. Great little gem!
power goes out and the first thing they want to do is separate? not smart.
This deserves way more views, likes and comments. holy shit that was really good and surprised me, and let me tell ya this was way better than the movie Annabelle. I thought this short would be bad and cheesy but holy shit that surprised me, creeped me out too. What made it better is knowing how low budget this was and you guys pulled it off so well, awesome job!
Thanks so much mate, the team really appreciates it :)
Oh Man thought she'd sit up at the end .
I just found this three years later... I made a short film before this film came out called, "Porcelain" about a doll too. We didn't burn stuff though.
*6 Years Casually Just Goes By*
Wow! This little gem is creepier than most of what gets uploaded here. The characters' actions & motivation were a little shaky (why not burn the doll along with the crucifix?), but the overall effect is better than all those other shorts that rely on jump scares & grotesque makeup to deliver their shocks. I'd like to see this developed a little more.
4:19 Sure why not set the creepy looking doll right in front of your eyes and go to sleep! Good luck!
I actually have a phobia fear of dolls but I still watch this to face my fear
I might not have "disturbed" the box at all.
I look after my Gothic Dolls,this one is spooky too😯
Ok
You are stupid
I want to work in showbusiness, to be the stylist of evil/possessed/killer dolls.
This is the only time when I think getting the main characters killed off is a good thing.
well I just love these short storys... I try to watch a few every night. thank you. some are good some are AH< this was??????
I would be calling for Sam and ask were he is
DexicGhost what happened to Sam at the end? why'd he point to that demon thing? was it to warn her or was he evil?
2019 anyone?
I love watching those short horror movies. Usually i don't comment them, but this one was so bad that i had to say it.
Horror films are more scary when the characters are actually intelligent and make a real effort. It makes the scary thing seem more dangerous
Liked for the Beatles music haha
Yaa the creepy thing is my mom has a room full of those dolls and my room is right next to hers and I'm watching this at night so Ya
Idk if you're brave are stupid for watching this, but I salute you for watching the whole thing 😂😂😂
Great music! The sounds later, though, are creepy.
The power goes out. Of course the power went out. The power always goes out!
8:34 IS THE DUDE HOLDING A CANDLE WHEN HE IS COMING FROM A THE PART OF THE HOUSE WHERE THERE WAS STILL LIGHT?
I'd love to see this turn into a movie great job guys❤️❤️❤️
when shes sitting at the desk during the day it reminds me of paranormal activity filming style
I really enjoyed this short film. The eerie atmosphere the house had ........creepy dolls, they're the worst.
Uh duh, the cross and the Bible page was keeping the spirit n the doll at Bay...
Koti jo kisses amen
6:58 damn sure this scene gonna be there in every horror film .....idk whether there's a ghost or not but this knocking door sound must includes in a horror film....why why.....ghosts could enter without knocking doors....how foolish ....ghosts having permissions to allow lol..😂
It's one of those horror films that makes no sense
When he pointed at the ceiling, i was like 'when you're in doubt and yo scaaeed aaf, scroll down the comments'
Avocado Writah lol right
So you burn the Bible page and the cross, but not the doll?? 🤦🏻♀️
that was realy creepy, and you found a really creepy doll, that the doll was laying together with cross and bible page was creepy too
This should be an actual horror *movie*
I don't mind stairs to an attic. But I'd never want those pull-down stairs. You climb to the top, you're eye-level with the floor, and see a head staring back at you.
Are they Crazy?! Throwing the cross & Bible page into 🔥🔥..they were on the doll for a Reason!
So, some people are sooo curious of the sign "DO NOT......" n burn the bible n cross that are suppose to protect...no words
Alfee Rahaman hmm??
Watching again ....
Great film of Mystery....
A note: There was a note 😳🙄🙄🤯
Where's Sam?🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣
this could make for a very good movie
This good
“Don't disturb "dang it 🤣we never listen
Don't Burn the only Protection. The Doll said Thankyou.Always. omgoooddddnesss.
White girl: *sees a suspicious "do no disturb" sign in a dark, dusty old attic.*
White girl: *decided to disturb it anyways*
Black girl: *sees a suspicious "do no disturb" sign in a dark, dusty old attic.*
Black girl: *relocates to a new home that is far away from the haunted house*
Also...why the hell would you burn everything except for the doll? ARE YOU CRAZY? The acting could have been better but other than that It was interesting to watch.
IKR white people always investigating I got that from dangmattsmith
Lol!! 😂 😂 😂 definitely yessssss! Smh
They don't listen to that type of music now they listen to Melanie Martinez xd
Wtf!!? They burn the cross but not the freezing doll!?😂
I'm sorry. Wait. What? Let's burn the only help we have to fight the demon doll while the demon doll watches? You got me f'ud up.