the answer in full: Mr Birling in Act One of An Inspector Calls during his conversation with Gerald and Eric, displays patriarchal qualities. He believes that as a rich, capitalist man, he is extremely powerful, if not untouchable. This comes to light when Mr Birling explains how the Titanic is "unsinkable, absolutely unsinkable". The use of symbolism displays the power of Mr Birling, because this ship was no ordinary ship, it symbolised wealth, capitalism and progress; everything which makes Mr Birling powerful. Therefore, it appears that like the ship, Mr Birling also believes, his power can never be touched, can never sink. Furthermore, the repetition of "unsinkable" displays how certain Mr Birling is in his beliefs. He says it twice, almost back-to-back, which signifies a sense of emphasis, for him, this ship represents everything he believes. As a result, Mr Birling makes himself synonymous with the ship. If the ship cannot be defeated, neither can he.
This is really helpful, thank you! And oh I miss an inspector calls… my school chose to drop it. I actually understood that text. Now i’ve got to work with bloody jekyll 😭
Timestamps for those who want to know how sir writes his paragraphs: Point - 2:12 Reference + Technique + Effect of Technique - 8:15 Zoom in + Effect of Zoom in + Link back - 15:08
People, theres something I dont understand: is Literature paper 1 (the one that is tomorrow) going to consist of two essay questions or one. (I am doing An Inspector calls and Macbeth)
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Then ask the teacher for extra time? Personally when I was in school the teachers knew in English exams I would write a lot if am given more time and so I had extra time, I still do now in college
Do we only need to mention context and priestleys ideology in a couple of the paragraphs? Because my English teacher says that you should always talk about the context and what priestley believes/thinks in every paragraph
You dont need to include context every paragraph. Just a few times in the entire thing should be adequate (excluding 'sprinkling' AO3 references in, you should do that where possible).
Just to let everyone know since 2017 the only characters that haven't come up is the Inspector and Gerald so I would advise you to revise both of them as normally you can pick between 2 questions one is normally a character question and one is usually a theme question.
@@bibinjoshua5852 for edexcel, eric hasnt come up yet, neither has sheila, but she came up as a joint question with gerald once, so im predicting it is going to be eric.
when you say you show the examiner your knowledge of the play as you state 'in act 1' , could that be replaced without the act and scene number like Before the inspector arrives, Mr Birling ... or At the start of the play, Mr Birling ...
Should this structure be used the same for Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde paragraphs? As those questions are more "how far do you agree", so would this structure still be applicable?
I dont know how to write a perfect introduction but all you have to do is summarise your main points into kinda one whole. So that everytime u write a new paragraph it helps you link back to your main original point and acts as a guide so you don't start talking about random things and itt ensures that all your points in your paragraphs are interlinked. But it only needs to be 2-3 sentences and you don't even need to write one necessarily but it can help you :)
so does that mean as long as we use structual features, add contex, and have a good point and building this with a prtzel paragraph we can get a grade 9?
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the answer in full:
Mr Birling in Act One of An Inspector Calls during his conversation with Gerald and Eric, displays patriarchal qualities. He believes that as a rich, capitalist man, he is extremely powerful, if not untouchable. This comes to light when Mr Birling explains how the Titanic is "unsinkable, absolutely unsinkable". The use of symbolism displays the power of Mr Birling, because this ship was no ordinary ship, it symbolised wealth, capitalism and progress; everything which makes Mr Birling powerful. Therefore, it appears that like the ship, Mr Birling also believes, his power can never be touched, can never sink. Furthermore, the repetition of "unsinkable" displays how certain Mr Birling is in his beliefs. He says it twice, almost back-to-back, which signifies a sense of emphasis, for him, this ship represents everything he believes. As a result, Mr Birling makes himself synonymous with the ship. If the ship cannot be defeated, neither can he.
How many paragraphs should we do
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The quote also uses dramatic irony bc the audience knows the titanic sank so it makes mr.Birling look like a idoit
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I don’t think he’s going to do Power and Conflict,but he is a great teacher.
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This is really helpful, thank you! And oh I miss an inspector calls… my school chose to drop it. I actually understood that text. Now i’ve got to work with bloody jekyll 😭
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Timestamps for those who want to know how sir writes his paragraphs:
Point - 2:12
Reference + Technique + Effect of Technique - 8:15
Zoom in + Effect of Zoom in + Link back - 15:08
Thank you!!
If you could do a video on power and conflict that would be nice
Watching this 7 hours b4 my test. dw guys im only lowering the grade boundaries.
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Please do power and conflict :)
Your point you make about making a pointing in the paragraph, can we apply this to English language?
Hi sir, would you still talk about technique and explain it in an evaluation question, or would you do something different?
People, theres something I dont understand: is Literature paper 1 (the one that is tomorrow) going to consist of two essay questions or one. (I am doing An Inspector calls and Macbeth)
Which exam board do you do?
Can you use this for power and conflict?
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how many quotes should we aim for in a essay?
Can you maybe give advice for the OCR exam
Thank you so much this really helped out!
I am currently year 10 and I am preparing for my first mock exam.
This really helped me out as I was clueless about structuring my answers, but this guide me right through it.
I really hope I can get a 9 on this first mock
Thank You SOOOOOOOOOOO Much!
Hi Mr , can you please teacher more about how We write effects?
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Good evening Mr Everything, do I need to write a thesis statement for eng literature.
can you please do dr Jekyll and Hyde and Lord of the flies
Can we use this technique in paper 1 question 2,3&4???? I mean in all?
Thanks
Timing is the only issue for me
omg same!! I take so long . It’s mainly for subjects like history, English and re
Then ask the teacher for extra time? Personally when I was in school the teachers knew in English exams I would write a lot if am given more time and so I had extra time, I still do now in college
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can you please do a structure paragraph for us
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could this structure be used for an eduqas 40 marker?
Sir could you please do important Lord of the Flies quotes.
Do we only need to mention context and priestleys ideology in a couple of the paragraphs? Because my English teacher says that you should always talk about the context and what priestley believes/thinks in every paragraph
You dont need to include context every paragraph. Just a few times in the entire thing should be adequate (excluding 'sprinkling' AO3 references in, you should do that where possible).
Sir what about the structure for english lit is it the same do you do PRTEZEL.
how do i revise poetry?
Just to let everyone know since 2017 the only characters that haven't come up is the Inspector and Gerald so I would advise you to revise both of them as normally you can pick between 2 questions one is normally a character question and one is usually a theme question.
oh damn
@@bibinjoshua5852 no aqa
Lots of people say Gerald was 2021
@@bibinjoshua5852 for edexcel, eric hasnt come up yet, neither has sheila, but she came up as a joint question with gerald once, so im predicting it is going to be eric.
What exam board? I’m doing Eduqas
Today I'm have my English literature exam and I hope everyone is doing well. I'm confident about this. We can do this.
can it be used for edexel
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How many lines for this prtzel para, btw your great
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Hey Mr english everything, by using PRTEZEL can I still embed by quote (basically the reference) into my point?
yes.
Can I use this for Edexcel
When you write a paragraph from the given extract, do you have to also write where the part you are talking about is from?
Check out here 4:34
@@rajeemmiah8397 Thanks
they will normally tell you where the extract is from
its best if u can yes
sir, don't you need tow quotes per paragraph???
when you say you show the examiner your knowledge of the play as you state 'in act 1' , could that be replaced without the act and scene number like Before the inspector arrives, Mr Birling ... or At the start of the play, Mr Birling ...
You could do that, but it won't be as concise and you may not get as many AO1 marks
@@Ascension721 so how would I make it concise whilst showing I know the text and order of the text?
Can you do of mice and men
Should this structure be used the same for Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde paragraphs? As those questions are more "how far do you agree", so would this structure still be applicable?
and would this work for power and conflict poetry too?
@@hb_gamer0759 i think its essentially the same thing. you agree and then make your point and develop it using pretzel but im not too sure
Hi Mr. Everything English could you please put some context videos on CZcams is really difficult to understand please sir
what about a thesis statement
SIR PLEASE PREDICT AN INSPECTOR CALLS AND CHRISTMAS CAROL!!!???? PLEASE
10:00 effect =describe technique
man said PRTEZEL is the structure I created lol its been used before this dude was even born i think haha
How many of these paragraphs would be needed for a grade 9 on AQA? Thanks!!
3
I advise, that you do 2 para for the Extract you’ll be given, then 3 para on this
Can someone explain to me how to write a perfect introduction? As I can't use PRTEZEL for it.
I dont know how to write a perfect introduction but all you have to do is summarise your main points into kinda one whole. So that everytime u write a new paragraph it helps you link back to your main original point and acts as a guide so you don't start talking about random things and itt ensures that all your points in your paragraphs are interlinked. But it only needs to be 2-3 sentences and you don't even need to write one necessarily but it can help you :)
is paper 1 inspector calls and a christmas carol?
Can you please do this for A Christmas carol in your livestream?
no hes doing inspector calls cuz he does aqa
Carol is AQA
@@abdirahmaanibrahim869 a christmas carol is AQA
so does that mean as long as we use structual features, add contex, and have a good point and building this with a prtzel paragraph we can get a grade 9?
Essentially 😆😆
A strong pass maybe not a 9
easier said than done pal
@@jdstop593 so a grade 3-4 then?
@@unicornpet2225 yeah I used this method in my English and got a 5 I was predicted A 1 too
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doesnt pearson recoomend pee?..cause in da txt book itself...but pretzel works for lit further
what bout the context ?
He talked about the titanic being a powerful wealthy ship at the time
Can this be used for poetry?
he has videos for poetry
damn bro we have like 50 minutes and a prtezel takes like more than 10 mins i feel like ima flop dis
Where is the priest gang?
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Forgot to mention context lol
The context was that the Titanic was seen as powerful and a ship for the wealthy.
Titanic was the context.
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What about the audience
zoom in to a different technique
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how many prtezels? 3 or 4
He said you get 45 mins of writing and 10 min per paragraph, so 4
a point ending
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i feel like a PRTEZEL 'paragraph' will take up a whole page tho, like it defo wont be paragraph size, is that allowed?...to not write in paragraphs?
the paragraphs can be as long as you want im pretty sure however you must be aware of timing