A Step By Step Guide To Writing A PRTEZEL Paragraph For English Literature

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  • @amaara909
    @amaara909 Před 2 lety +489

    In’sha’Allah we all do well💕💕

  • @arsonfly252
    @arsonfly252 Před 2 lety +65

    the answer in full:
    Mr Birling in Act One of An Inspector Calls during his conversation with Gerald and Eric, displays patriarchal qualities. He believes that as a rich, capitalist man, he is extremely powerful, if not untouchable. This comes to light when Mr Birling explains how the Titanic is "unsinkable, absolutely unsinkable". The use of symbolism displays the power of Mr Birling, because this ship was no ordinary ship, it symbolised wealth, capitalism and progress; everything which makes Mr Birling powerful. Therefore, it appears that like the ship, Mr Birling also believes, his power can never be touched, can never sink. Furthermore, the repetition of "unsinkable" displays how certain Mr Birling is in his beliefs. He says it twice, almost back-to-back, which signifies a sense of emphasis, for him, this ship represents everything he believes. As a result, Mr Birling makes himself synonymous with the ship. If the ship cannot be defeated, neither can he.

  • @dantheman6279
    @dantheman6279 Před 2 lety +60

    I really wished I found you before language paper 1, you are really useful, thank you.

    • @bethanyadams
      @bethanyadams Před 2 lety +2

      same, been watching no stop for the last 2 days

  • @assassinod9462
    @assassinod9462 Před 2 lety +90

    This legend is the main reason why I am gonna smash my literature exam

  • @mahirmahadi5118
    @mahirmahadi5118 Před 2 lety +4

    the effect /connection between the titanic and Mr Birling was absolutely Brilliant

  • @humaidabdul7314
    @humaidabdul7314 Před 2 lety +67

    I don’t think he’s going to do Power and Conflict,but he is a great teacher.

    • @shahzarbukhlaw5963
      @shahzarbukhlaw5963 Před 2 lety +18

      @Abigail X yh except for some schools cough cough - mine, its soo dumb of them

    • @ajeahsamp9425
      @ajeahsamp9425 Před 2 lety +1

      that exam is after the holidays- he'll probably do it then

    • @user-gc6tv1bh1v
      @user-gc6tv1bh1v Před 2 lety +1

      @blue shot not for me I’m doing paper 1 AIC and Romeo and Juliet

    • @amaka.06
      @amaka.06 Před 2 lety +2

      Sadly I’m still doing poems I’m doing love and relationships

    • @unicornpet2225
      @unicornpet2225 Před rokem +1

      @@shahzarbukhlaw5963 samee

  • @nabiha6738
    @nabiha6738 Před 2 lety +2

    youre making so many resources for us honestly tysmmmm

  • @art4artssake352
    @art4artssake352 Před 2 lety +1

    Absolutely superb modelling!

  • @vivienschniererova1217
    @vivienschniererova1217 Před rokem +1

    THANK YOU SO SO SO SO SO SO MUCHHH !!! this has helped me a great deal !!!

  • @safwaanrahman9671
    @safwaanrahman9671 Před 2 lety +29

    Thanks sir. I finally regained my knowledge of English lit. I believe that I can finally smash this. As long as i stay positive, which I am now!😄

  • @nomsadube3232
    @nomsadube3232 Před rokem

    Wow you are such an eye opener ....thank you

  • @salmakadous8204
    @salmakadous8204 Před 2 lety

    He is a life saver tbh!

  • @nathankaiser2511
    @nathankaiser2511 Před rokem +5

    Thank you good teacher, brilliant analysis, with deep understanding Amen ❤❤❤

  • @pavnasipudi1777
    @pavnasipudi1777 Před 2 lety +1

    mr everything english solves all my life problems

  • @abdikadirali3325
    @abdikadirali3325 Před 2 lety +3

    Thank you so much Mr earthing english, you are helpful I wish you all the best my friend.

  • @eesarehman5848
    @eesarehman5848 Před 2 lety +22

    Thanks sir! Your tips are so much help! Thanks for this and inshallah we will smash this exam. Peace

  • @UnbeatenPlayzMinecraftandmore

    Thank you!!

  • @ttv_totemic9605
    @ttv_totemic9605 Před 2 lety +1

    thank you for everything

  • @JosephSeabourne
    @JosephSeabourne Před 2 lety +8

    This is really helpful, thank you! And oh I miss an inspector calls… my school chose to drop it. I actually understood that text. Now i’ve got to work with bloody jekyll 😭

    • @abdirahmaanibrahim869
      @abdirahmaanibrahim869 Před 2 lety +3

      thats a big L my school dropped jekyll thank goodness cuz that story i dont even knw where i am half the time

    • @bethaniie_
      @bethaniie_ Před 2 měsíci +1

      omggg I'd have gone mental, I love inspector calls so much lol

  • @ayeshahaque8155
    @ayeshahaque8155 Před 2 lety

    Mr Everything English the 🐐🐐🐐🐐🐐

  • @maxs3785
    @maxs3785 Před 2 lety +4

    If you could do a video on power and conflict that would be nice

  • @faizan7343
    @faizan7343 Před rokem +2

    Watching this 7 hours b4 my test. dw guys im only lowering the grade boundaries.

  • @mkdonalds7824
    @mkdonalds7824 Před měsícem +1

    Jazakallah khair

  • @jevyeboi2546
    @jevyeboi2546 Před rokem

    ma'shallah bruva 💪

  • @Ahmed22212
    @Ahmed22212 Před rokem

    thank you for this please make more video on Macbeth and Christmas Carrol

  • @alessiaazzopardi2043
    @alessiaazzopardi2043 Před 2 lety +1

    Hi sir, would you still talk about technique and explain it in an evaluation question, or would you do something different?

  • @sanjayneminathan8433
    @sanjayneminathan8433 Před 2 lety +1

    Love your vidoes sir , also can u use this for OCR

  • @sahil_edits0
    @sahil_edits0 Před měsícem

    thank you very much

  • @FC-kl2pm
    @FC-kl2pm Před 2 lety

    Your point you make about making a pointing in the paragraph, can we apply this to English language?

  • @lilyeveritt9798
    @lilyeveritt9798 Před 2 lety +1

    love u king

  • @isaacng4734
    @isaacng4734 Před 2 lety

    Sir's the goat

  • @alemi3d
    @alemi3d Před 2 lety +7

    People, theres something I dont understand: is Literature paper 1 (the one that is tomorrow) going to consist of two essay questions or one. (I am doing An Inspector calls and Macbeth)

    • @amberh5
      @amberh5 Před 2 lety +4

      Which exam board do you do?

  • @spiced1296
    @spiced1296 Před 2 lety +2

    Can you use this for power and conflict?

  • @contrate3104
    @contrate3104 Před 2 lety +1

    Please do power and conflict :)

  • @SabaAsad
    @SabaAsad Před rokem +1

    Can we use this technique in paper 1 question 2,3&4???? I mean in all?

  • @lloydlovesme7111
    @lloydlovesme7111 Před 2 lety +45

    Timestamps for those who want to know how sir writes his paragraphs:
    Point - 2:12
    Reference + Technique + Effect of Technique - 8:15
    Zoom in + Effect of Zoom in + Link back - 15:08

  • @aliajmal7638
    @aliajmal7638 Před 2 lety +3

    "I feel like SaltBae,"
    man i love this guy

  • @blakelam4251
    @blakelam4251 Před 8 měsíci +3

    Thank you so much this really helped out!
    I am currently year 10 and I am preparing for my first mock exam.
    This really helped me out as I was clueless about structuring my answers, but this guide me right through it.
    I really hope I can get a 9 on this first mock
    Thank You SOOOOOOOOOOO Much!

  • @Countdown420
    @Countdown420 Před 2 lety +2

    Thx

  • @bigchunguscricket4526
    @bigchunguscricket4526 Před 2 lety

    Can you maybe give advice for the OCR exam

  • @lisicblondon
    @lisicblondon Před rokem +1

    Hi Mr , can you please teacher more about how We write effects?

  • @hideakitempest6141
    @hideakitempest6141 Před 2 lety +6

    Hey Mr english everything, by using PRTEZEL can I still embed by quote (basically the reference) into my point?

  • @NitinSingh-zm4lj
    @NitinSingh-zm4lj Před 2 lety

    Thanks

  • @etiosaoviawe8306
    @etiosaoviawe8306 Před 2 lety

    Good evening Mr Everything, do I need to write a thesis statement for eng literature.

  • @edanoneill3706
    @edanoneill3706 Před 2 lety +16

    Do we only need to mention context and priestleys ideology in a couple of the paragraphs? Because my English teacher says that you should always talk about the context and what priestley believes/thinks in every paragraph

    • @Ascension721
      @Ascension721 Před 2 lety +7

      You dont need to include context every paragraph. Just a few times in the entire thing should be adequate (excluding 'sprinkling' AO3 references in, you should do that where possible).

  • @jamiewalker5272
    @jamiewalker5272 Před 2 lety +1

    Mreverythingenglish 🐐🐐

  • @corners1733
    @corners1733 Před rokem

    Nice

  • @dubzy8195
    @dubzy8195 Před 2 lety

    Sir what about the structure for english lit is it the same do you do PRTEZEL.

  • @a2j951
    @a2j951 Před 2 lety +1

    how many quotes should we aim for in a essay?

  • @ehsanahmad6147
    @ehsanahmad6147 Před 2 lety +2

    can you please do dr Jekyll and Hyde and Lord of the flies

  • @vekyyshi
    @vekyyshi Před 2 lety

    8:02 LOL, thank you for this video sir

  • @lcole55
    @lcole55 Před 2 lety

    How many lines for this prtzel para, btw your great

  • @revizionz8730
    @revizionz8730 Před 2 lety

    can you please do a structure paragraph for us
    this would e very helpful

  • @shakerkdkdkd12
    @shakerkdkdkd12 Před 2 lety +1

    Can I use this for Edexcel

  • @lawrencia5099
    @lawrencia5099 Před 2 lety +17

    Timing is the only issue for me

    • @aliyahelahi7885
      @aliyahelahi7885 Před 2 lety +4

      omg same!! I take so long . It’s mainly for subjects like history, English and re

    • @cloydxx
      @cloydxx Před 2 lety

      Then ask the teacher for extra time? Personally when I was in school the teachers knew in English exams I would write a lot if am given more time and so I had extra time, I still do now in college

    • @teamghozts2963
      @teamghozts2963 Před 2 lety

      you Don't need medical proof

  • @ibtesham2559
    @ibtesham2559 Před 2 lety +5

    When you write a paragraph from the given extract, do you have to also write where the part you are talking about is from?

  • @jjackson2983
    @jjackson2983 Před 2 lety +1

    Sir could you please do important Lord of the Flies quotes.

  • @papagunse9852
    @papagunse9852 Před 5 měsíci

    could this structure be used for an eduqas 40 marker?

  • @dukr22
    @dukr22 Před 2 lety +2

    Today I'm have my English literature exam and I hope everyone is doing well. I'm confident about this. We can do this.

  • @cw4490
    @cw4490 Před 2 lety +1

    You look fit in your 2019 videos

  • @ItzSlashyyy
    @ItzSlashyyy Před 2 lety +1

    how do i revise poetry?

  • @shirshir516
    @shirshir516 Před rokem

    Hi Mr. Everything English could you please put some context videos on CZcams is really difficult to understand please sir

  • @OrangeDude7
    @OrangeDude7 Před 2 lety +5

    when you say you show the examiner your knowledge of the play as you state 'in act 1' , could that be replaced without the act and scene number like Before the inspector arrives, Mr Birling ... or At the start of the play, Mr Birling ...

    • @Ascension721
      @Ascension721 Před 2 lety +1

      You could do that, but it won't be as concise and you may not get as many AO1 marks

    • @Dee-ux4vq
      @Dee-ux4vq Před 2 lety

      @@Ascension721 so how would I make it concise whilst showing I know the text and order of the text?

  • @alpherix3232
    @alpherix3232 Před 2 lety +8

    Lets start a "Love Mr Everything English Chain"

    • @a_fazl113
      @a_fazl113 Před 2 lety +7

      No

    • @fatmaasifawan5974
      @fatmaasifawan5974 Před 2 lety +1

      Lmao

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      @MI-lo2hj Před 2 lety +1

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    • @alpherix3232
      @alpherix3232 Před 2 lety

      @@MI-lo2hj I would actually make a DC for everyone who watches Mr Everything English, but it would be hard to promote it

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  • @hb_gamer0759
    @hb_gamer0759 Před 2 lety

    Should this structure be used the same for Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde paragraphs? As those questions are more "how far do you agree", so would this structure still be applicable?

    • @hb_gamer0759
      @hb_gamer0759 Před 2 lety

      and would this work for power and conflict poetry too?

    • @abdirahmaanibrahim869
      @abdirahmaanibrahim869 Před 2 lety

      @@hb_gamer0759 i think its essentially the same thing. you agree and then make your point and develop it using pretzel but im not too sure

  • @Gu66y453
    @Gu66y453 Před 2 lety

    can it be used for edexel

  • @adamkenealy2413
    @adamkenealy2413 Před 2 lety +23

    Just to let everyone know since 2017 the only characters that haven't come up is the Inspector and Gerald so I would advise you to revise both of them as normally you can pick between 2 questions one is normally a character question and one is usually a theme question.

    • @THENEWFOOTBALLSHOW
      @THENEWFOOTBALLSHOW Před 2 lety +2

      oh damn

    • @adamkenealy2413
      @adamkenealy2413 Před 2 lety +1

      @@bibinjoshua5852 no aqa

    • @poppybell9238
      @poppybell9238 Před 2 lety

      Lots of people say Gerald was 2021

    • @gcserevision6869
      @gcserevision6869 Před 2 lety +2

      @@bibinjoshua5852 for edexcel, eric hasnt come up yet, neither has sheila, but she came up as a joint question with gerald once, so im predicting it is going to be eric.

    • @issysomething1077
      @issysomething1077 Před 2 lety

      What exam board? I’m doing Eduqas

  • @wilson4198
    @wilson4198 Před 2 lety

    sir, don't you need tow quotes per paragraph???

  • @abdinboni1797
    @abdinboni1797 Před 2 lety

    chheers sir

  • @user-wf6iy5wc1w
    @user-wf6iy5wc1w Před měsícem +1

    doesnt pearson recoomend pee?..cause in da txt book itself...but pretzel works for lit further

  • @fatmaasifawan5974
    @fatmaasifawan5974 Před 2 lety +1

    Can you do of mice and men

  • @geekygirl0333
    @geekygirl0333 Před 2 lety +1

    How many of these paragraphs would be needed for a grade 9 on AQA? Thanks!!

    • @p2trappy990
      @p2trappy990 Před 2 lety +3

      3

    • @Yasin_2312
      @Yasin_2312 Před 2 lety +4

      I advise, that you do 2 para for the Extract you’ll be given, then 3 para on this

  • @Extremedulla
    @Extremedulla Před 8 měsíci

    Got mocks todayyy😅😅

  • @oluwatominiogunnorin5899
    @oluwatominiogunnorin5899 Před 2 lety +1

    Can you please do this for A Christmas carol in your livestream?

  • @henrybright6894
    @henrybright6894 Před 2 lety +2

    Can someone explain to me how to write a perfect introduction? As I can't use PRTEZEL for it.

    • @unknownperson4335
      @unknownperson4335 Před 2 lety +1

      I dont know how to write a perfect introduction but all you have to do is summarise your main points into kinda one whole. So that everytime u write a new paragraph it helps you link back to your main original point and acts as a guide so you don't start talking about random things and itt ensures that all your points in your paragraphs are interlinked. But it only needs to be 2-3 sentences and you don't even need to write one necessarily but it can help you :)

  • @asavtripple6
    @asavtripple6 Před 2 lety +7

    so does that mean as long as we use structual features, add contex, and have a good point and building this with a prtzel paragraph we can get a grade 9?

    • @JJ-fw7cy
      @JJ-fw7cy Před 2 lety +3

      Essentially 😆😆

    • @jdstop593
      @jdstop593 Před 2 lety +2

      A strong pass maybe not a 9

    • @notmoaath
      @notmoaath Před 2 lety +1

      easier said than done pal

    • @unicornpet2225
      @unicornpet2225 Před rokem

      @@jdstop593 so a grade 3-4 then?

    • @jdstop593
      @jdstop593 Před rokem +1

      @@unicornpet2225 yeah I used this method in my English and got a 5 I was predicted A 1 too

  • @midknight365
    @midknight365 Před 2 lety

    man said PRTEZEL is the structure I created lol its been used before this dude was even born i think haha

  • @ultimaterevision437
    @ultimaterevision437 Před 2 lety +1

    SIR PLEASE PREDICT AN INSPECTOR CALLS AND CHRISTMAS CAROL!!!???? PLEASE

  • @turanjakhobi3417
    @turanjakhobi3417 Před 2 lety

    is paper 1 inspector calls and a christmas carol?

  • @nigelsanthosh4084
    @nigelsanthosh4084 Před 2 lety

    what about a thesis statement

  • @javed8778
    @javed8778 Před 2 lety +2

    damn bro we have like 50 minutes and a prtezel takes like more than 10 mins i feel like ima flop dis

  • @Sean-rawlins
    @Sean-rawlins Před 28 dny

    10:00 effect =describe technique

  • @anastasiamwansa3981
    @anastasiamwansa3981 Před rokem

    Can this be used for poetry?

  • @undisputedstreamer8429
    @undisputedstreamer8429 Před 2 lety +4

    Where is the priest gang?
    Comment below.

  • @yaridiqbal2193
    @yaridiqbal2193 Před 2 lety

    7:59 I feel like salt bay😅

  • @ok3503
    @ok3503 Před 2 lety +2

    what bout the context ?

    • @bobstar2176
      @bobstar2176 Před 2 lety

      He talked about the titanic being a powerful wealthy ship at the time

  • @assassinod9462
    @assassinod9462 Před 2 lety +3

    Forgot to mention context lol

  • @erkanfnr
    @erkanfnr Před 2 lety +1

    how many prtezels? 3 or 4

    • @ese9010
      @ese9010 Před 2 lety

      He said you get 45 mins of writing and 10 min per paragraph, so 4

  • @lokielegend715
    @lokielegend715 Před 2 lety

    Marlone

  • @MREVERYTHINGEXPERIMENTS

    #MREVERYTHINGEXPERIMENTS

  • @lokielegend715
    @lokielegend715 Před 2 lety

    @ Marlone New

  • @abdulqayum2635
    @abdulqayum2635 Před 2 lety +1

    sir ur best friends with Mr bruff init or is it bigman salles

    • @shooosh8851
      @shooosh8851 Před 2 lety +1

      haha

    • @Patrick-ds8od
      @Patrick-ds8od Před 2 lety

      Salles > bruff

    • @shooosh8851
      @shooosh8851 Před 2 lety +1

      @@Patrick-ds8od no it’s everything english, mr bluff> mr salles

    • @abdulqayum2635
      @abdulqayum2635 Před 2 lety

      @@shooosh8851 yhh but mr everything english .. damnnn woo.. lmaoo

  • @Sean-rawlins
    @Sean-rawlins Před 28 dny

    a point ending

  • @fatzzzx792
    @fatzzzx792 Před rokem

    mocks tomorrow 💀💀

  • @knowntoache
    @knowntoache Před 2 lety +2

    Point
    Reference
    Technique
    Explain
    Zoom in
    Explain
    Link !

  • @AkxashPlayz
    @AkxashPlayz Před 2 lety

    What about the audience

  • @Sean-rawlins
    @Sean-rawlins Před 28 dny

    2:00

  • @Damianmackin
    @Damianmackin Před 2 lety +1

    sp mistake 3:51 character

  • @Sean-rawlins
    @Sean-rawlins Před 28 dny

    zoom in to a different technique

  • @broccoli513
    @broccoli513 Před 2 lety +1

    i feel like a PRTEZEL 'paragraph' will take up a whole page tho, like it defo wont be paragraph size, is that allowed?...to not write in paragraphs?

    • @abdirahmaanibrahim869
      @abdirahmaanibrahim869 Před 2 lety

      the paragraphs can be as long as you want im pretty sure however you must be aware of timing