The Stranger -Ayki (STORYBOARD)
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- čas přidán 24. 02. 2024
- After 3 years, it's done... can you beleive it ? no ? me to :')
The character models aren't very consistent, because i've started this in 2021, be indulgent please!
[VA] Thanks very much to the voice actors. For their patience and their wonderful work.
Thanks also to my friend kellsoda_ without him we could never have such a natural english dialogue. He is an excellent translator.
Thank you for your support despite the years. I will continue as long as I have the motivation, I want to finish at least the arc with Ayki and his family. There are still 3 storyboards left for sure.
The next one should be quicker to make, I've already started and it will be shorter!
[VF ] // !// une vf devrait arriver sur ma chaine Koe studio prochainement, en attendant vous pouvez activer les sous-titres// !//
Merci infiniment à mes doubleurs. Pour leur patience et leur travail formidable.
Merci aussi à kellsoda_ sans qui ont aurait jamais pu avoir une version anglaise aussi naturelle. C'est un excélent traducteur.
Merci à vous, à votre suport toujours présent malgré les années. Je continuerai tant que j'en ai la motivation, je veux finir au moins l'arc avec Ayki et sa famille. Il y en a pour encore 3 storyboards pour sur.
La suite devrait être plus rapide, j'ai déjà comencé le suivant et il sera plus court !
☼ Credits ☼
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Voice Acting :
Cougar Macdowall as Ayki
BijitsuKuma as Aspen
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Musics :
Bitter Silence of Desolate Steps - Dahlias Tear
Dystopian Future - StlabStudioMusic
Industrial Monsters - Trapaholics
Soothsayer - Zack Hemsey
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English translation of the original script: kellsoda _
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Helper to color scene with the monster and Aspen : Sauketz
Moral support: AstraPiika and Hyllow-zenta
Cameo Characters : Sauketz, kellsoda_, rnelios, AstraPiiKa
Aspen Desing : Load-orihara - Krátké a kreslené filmy
![Titanium - Ayla [STORYBOARD]](/img/n.gif)
The cream cat aspen fights is probably Enki's mother. She has cream fur, green eyes and ice powers like Enki. We can her see at the beginning of the holy animatic and she looks identical, with the exception of nose color and the ear tear, which are probably results of art style changes and time she spend with the humans .
Yep, it's her !
But Ayki ignores it
@@Koerenn this is so exciting to find out omg
@@KoerennI thought the mother was white with red eyes?
@@Jackcat20 they are talking about Enki's mother lol
@@Jackcat20No, the white cat, Ayla, is Enki's partner. She's the mother of the black cat in the video
I hope so hard that Ayki learns the truth one day. I can't believe he already wasted years of his life on a misunderstanding :(
In his defense, it was when he was simply a kit, and it’s been YEARS and YEARS of life and death to prove himself to the humans.
Yes, he went to far during his fight with Enki but it’ll take longer than a few minutes of reunion to heal the emotional scars of Ayki’s perspective.
I'm so glad that Enki's mom is alive after all! I remember about the kittens that lived with Lust, I watched the three kittens and am glad the kitten is still alive and has gotten...so big
Oh my, this comment made me realize that Aspen is likely one of the kittens that were under Lusts care. In the end, everything comes back to her, doesn't it.
I've often seen a great parallel in these videos.
If you open the video "The worst place in the world" at the 1:26 mark, it's Keimi's kittens that Lust was taking care of. One of them became the so called "monsters" and the other one died. If you open the video "Your Fault - Lust" at the moment 0:12 - all three kittens are shown there, and one of them is Aspen (it is indicated by the coloring, even the paws).
Even Enki's mother I was shocked to see turned out to be alive. If we watch the video "Holy" - STORYBOARD at moment 0:12 - the mother is shown with 3 white stripes on her tail, green eyes.
From 4:34 to 4:48 - we see the same cat.... I wish I knew math like that ahahaha@@hpforever3563
@@hpforever3563 I wonder if Aspen knows that Ayki killed his siblings (unintentionally). While Lust was too busy taking her stupid revenge against Enki and Ayla, was she even thinking about her deceased love's kittens? That her actions caused the deaths of two of them and turned the other against her home (since all of them are connected with Ayki, because she coldly left the poor kitten behind)? Does she care AT ALL?! Mark my words: If she doesn't, she WILL!
I remember when the first storyboard was released and immediately fell in love with these characters. I'm so excited to see more of the story! It's so heartbreaking and tragic 😭 I hope Ayki finds out the truth and turns against the humans 🙏
Saaame omg! Seconding this!
this literally feels like a movie
WOW, KOERENN! This is getting even BETTER! What's gonna happen to poor Enki and Ayla? Does Ayki has salvation? Will they find out what Lust did? Will Enki and his mother meet again? What's Aspen's plan? I CANNOT WAIT! Your storyboards are a PIECE OF ART! 🥰
Soo true!
I know this is extremely sudden and you don’t even know who I am, but as a child I absolutely loved you. I used to go on my grandma’s iPad and watch your videos. A specific one to be exact. Something along the lines of “Youth”. I literally watched that same video at least thirteen times, and I know this comment won’t get noticed. Although, I truly appreciate you making such amazing and memorable memories for me. This might be stupid, but I just truly, truly thank you.
Thank you.
that was an Amazing watch!!! such a delight to see ayki come back and aspen make his debut
Thank you TuT You're the best you can't imagine how much i'm greatfull for the amazing work you did on the english script TwT
oh hey I just realized that Aspen is one of the kits of that one gal (I forgot her name) that Lust had a thing with... hopefully he doesn't find out about Ayki killing his siblings.
Or maybe he knows. He could very well be a double agent. Think about it, by helping Ayki, he gets revenge on the cats who couldn’t save his mother. This ingratiates him to Ayki, making Aspen seem trustworthy. But that also leaves Ayki vulnerable in his trust, giving Aspen to opportunity to eventually double cross or even kill him as well. His mother and siblings both avenged in a master stroke of manipulation and sabotage. Heck! It would be really painful if Aspen found out the truth about what happened to Ayki and DELIBERATELY withheld it from him until the last moment. Just when Ayki think he has won against the guild and his parents Aspen can destroy his entire worldview with the truth. Ayki would be left with the guilt of knowing he hurt the cats who wanted nothing more to love and cherish him, with no way to seek redemption. That would be cool!
Oooh yeah!!! I had the thought of Aspen potentially knowing about it and being a double agent against Ayki, but I never considered that he might hold it against the Guild as well. That WOULD be super neat if he double-crossed both sides and came out on top, and especially heart-rending if he finds out the truth abt Ayki’s past and uses it against him :’0
Guuuuuuuysss , I just rewatched some of the storyboards and realized that Aspen is Keimi’s son 🧍🏽♀️
Congratulations for all your hard work, Koerenn. I can't wait to learn more about these characters.
I jut love how I haven't seen anything from this storyline for years and only thing I needed to recognize it and remember all of it was the black and cream fur.
Oh my god, the intense music stopping completely when Ayki speaks to Aspen, telling him not the kill the cat is so bloody cool!! Every single update on this story is a gift 💙
ayki's gonna feel so stupid the moment he finds out this was all just a huge misunderstanding 😭
There was a time in my life when I was younger and I would constantly search the internet for hours on end to see what happens next, years before the lust animatic. I didn't know it simply hadn't gotten another part, or perhaps I was just a child in denial. I loved this story, it's such an extremely creative take on dystopian fantasy but there were elements such as humanity using cats for warcraft against their will that gave it such a realistic edge despite the clearly fictional world. This is phenomenal; the voice acting, the animations, the vibe staying true to the old animatics despite your new style, the action, the angles... god I could write an essay on this. I love these silly battle cats. My younger self would be screeching off the walls seeing this.
That was the best thing I've seen in 5 years Omg you're not normal I love you koerenn
Woahhh I can’t wait to watch this!! The "It All Fell Apart" MAP is one of my favorites!!
HOLY COWW!?? THIS IS AMAZING!! as soon as I saw Enki’s mother I was SHOCKED! but I wonder how Enki will think of Ayki for keeping his mother alive and using her.. I NEED TO SEE MOREE!!
Can't wait for new epsoide reeee
This series was my childhood!
Great work as always, Koerenn! Always love seeing this universe of characters.
You genuinely need to make a movie or a 24 minute episode explaining all of this lol
Godddd I love your storyboards so much, your story is so awesome 😭
I’ve be SO excited to see the end result!! This is amazing work Koerenn, watching the whole story unfold is truly incredible!!! Love it!
the fight cinematography was actually so well done and amazing!! and the voice actors suit the characters very well!! amazing as always and i cannot wait to see what else happens in the story!
I really happy! I was really waiting for this!! It was great, I have nothing to complain about.
I just recently rediscovered your old storyboard maps and work, I am pleasantly surprised to see this!!! The amount of dedication you put to these is amazing
OH MY GOODNESS yesss love to see more of these characters!! this is fantastically done!
I've been watching these storyboards since the beginning, and the amount of improvement and knowledge you've gained of certain techniques is insane!! I'm studying animation in art school right now, and you're truly an inspiration for me- can't wait to see more, whenever that may be!
glad to see something like this is still going on even after all this time, keep at it!!
I remembered when I was younger and I found your story, I'm so glad that you've come so far with it and I can't wait to see how it goes
This was INCREDIBLE!!! Awesome character design, beautiful animation, perfect voiceacting, it's all so good! I absolutely love that you're still continuing the story of these characters
Oh wow koerenn, this is just magnificent storyboard! Ahh and finally it is finished, I cannot wait to see what else you have in store for us.. And I just adore aspen!
Dude that animation goes crazy, your fr my new fav channel abt animations
I've been following this series since the Holy and Titanium storyboards and I'm so happy to see how it's grown! Gorgeous work, you've improved so much and come so far since then!
This is some reaaal good story telling man, was invested all the way through and now I'm iching for more from that cliffhanger!! Just brilliant 🔥
Incroyable ça va faire un moment que je te suis sur ce projet et je suis pas déçu d’avoir attendu. Continue comme ça
You did so amazing with this Koe, from the plot, the designs, the backgrounds, to the animation itself! This is genuinely so good, I'm in awe, your 3 years of intense work really do show! I'm always so happy to learn more about your characters, and seeing such dedication put into an original story is so inspiring ^_^ This was a delight to watch, thank you so much for your beautiful work, as always! So happy to see Experience No.7 back! ❤
So excited to see these guys again!! I remember watching Titanium and Holy for the first time. It was incredible. You’ve come so far and now here we are seeing more of Ayki! Can’t wait for the next story scenes
YOOOOO THIS IS SO COOL!!! I'm so happy to see more of them, the story is getting better and better
OMG OMG OMG!!!! I REMEMBER WATCHING YOUR STORYBOARDS WHEN I WAS A KID
I'm happy to see the improvement and new storyboard. This animation is so good!! I need more
I have already lost hope that there will be a continuation.. I am so glad that it finally came out! Thank you very much) I’m looking forward to what happens next in this story. I'm really really looking forward to it! I first saw this a few years ago and really liked the idea, I’m happy that you’re continuing it! Please don't stop, finish the story pleеееееase
I just got reminded back to Ayki's story after so long...
I can't wait for part 2!
You have all of my support Koereen!!
YOOOOOO LORE UPDATE IVE BEEN FOLLOWING THESE GUYS FOR YEAAAARS- Your content is actually what got me into animation, all those years ago
Koerenn You gave me motivation to keep making animations ❤❤❤
Ура, ура! Так давно вас не видела:)
Интересная история, хоть я плохо знаю английский, но мне понравилось!
Продолжайте в том же духе!
OMG WHAT!??! NEW STORYBOARD!??! I've been following this story for so many years now, and I love every new development that comes with it. This has just brought back so many old memories from watching the storyboards and piecing the story together with Enki, Ayla and Ayki. AAAAA I LOVE IT SO MUCH
Un plaisir de revoir ton travail sur cet univers après des années !
Oooh! This was amazing to watch! I love your art so much, you didn't use the "perfect shadowing" but you don't need to because it looks amazing whitout it too just as always!💜
(+I love how Aspen is so calm!)
WOAH!!!!!!!!!!! this is hardly a storyboard, its a full blown animated sequence!! this is GORGEOUS!!!
i loevd the part 2 and im really happy when come the Part 3 ❤❤❤
WOW I can't believe i'm so early! This is just straight up stunning, I can't wait to see more of this story
hey! I have been watching your channel for a long time and I am a big fan of your art style! this is incredible n so well animated! keep up the good work
DUDE THE ANIMATION THE PLOT THE DESIGNS HELLO THIS IS AMAZING
I was JUST thinking abt yr ocs yesterday and wondering when ud upload them again HELL YEAH
I've watched this series from the beginning, it's amazing to see the improvement, the fight scenes were amazing
wow this is a work of art lovely work!
THIS. IS. AMAZING!!!
Omg you’re back! Good luck for your futur projects and don’t over work yourself.
Also i though those monsters were dogs when i first saw "the titanium Ayla" video when i was a kid
Ouiii !!!!! J’ai hâte de voir d’autres vidéos comme ça !
DUDE THIS LOOKS AMAZING, THESE ANIMATICS KEEP GETTING BETTER AND BETTER. I really want a happy ending because itd suck to see ayla die but Im excited regardless, my child self is so happy RAH. im glad you keep working on this
Amazing Animation! I Love IT!! ❤
I love the storyboard! It made me want to get the print and pin of ayki! So far hes my fav character! ❤
Bravo ! C'était magnifique !
Me encantan tus vídeos y ame lo bien echo que esta. Que lindo haces tus dibujos y tus historias entretenidas ❤
AAA Koerenn, this is absolutely fantastic!! It is so nice to get another piece for this story 👀 The plot thickens...!
The PMV + limited AMV works so well! I love the way the characters move and not doing their lipsync must have saved a ton of time The backgrounds are so neat to look at - even if sketchy/simple, I like the detail you have included amongst them! It has always been a visual choice that has made the story more enhancing (and dangerous feeling?) to me~ It's so cool to see how deeply the variety of the characters are tied together and it is so nice you got to make another scene with voice actors and all
Wonderful job
hey cute! thanks for your comment!
My god, I love it so much! It is visually incredible, and those fight scenes daaaaamn, you have improved so much!
I’m excited for the rest of the story. 💗
PD: the credits gave me goosebumps
thank you so much !! The fight scenes was the reason why it takes so long haha!
@@KoerennIt was worth the wait
le rendu est super clean ! tu as gere omg ! ca promet pour la suite !!!!
its so cinematic! so happy to see more of this story
OMG THIS IS AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
this is good stuff. the fighting against the first monster looked so epic
I remember Holy. You really sparked my creativity
I get so excited each time that you post about experience n7 !! I’m so glad to see that they’re back ! You and your team did an amazing job. I now get why it did takes so long
Everything is perfect, the city’s backgrounds, the fight scenes, the different viewing angles of the scenes and especially the voices its like watching a real movie ✨✨💖
I can’t wait to see more of aspen 🤭
I’m curious about his true motive
And most of all I wonder if Ayki will ever forgive his parents or have some kind of reconciliation arc
All the hatred he has against them when they didn't do anything breaks me so bad 😔
I LOVE THIS SM OMG UR SO UNDERRATED
The next episode is gonna be crazy
I LOVE THE ANIMATION 😍😍😍😍💕💕💕💕
YOU’RE STILL UPLOADING HOLY SHIT??? I REMEMBER WATCHING YOU WHEN I WAS LIKE WHAT 7 OMG- YOU HAD A DIFFERENT NAME THO- EUCALYPTUS SPLASH OR SMT, you inspired my early art and story making sm instantly subbed!!
THIS IS AMAZING!!!
Oh mon dieu je m'y attendais tellement pas !! J'ai direct sauté sur la notif je suis trop contente que l'histoire continue et de pouvoir découvrir un peu plus Aspen !
C'était génial comme toujours, bravo pour ton travail !
J'ai à la fois hâte de voir la suite et en même temps j'ai très peur pour Enki et Ayla x')
Moi aussi je pensais pas finir cette semaine 😂 mais c'est chose faite enfin ! :D
Merci !!!
been following the story since it all fell apart was released and i just wanna say this is pure perfection
I like it a lot! Great job!!
this is amazing!
Its really perfect come a part 3 yes or no
I love it!!!♡
OMGGG THE ENKIS MOTHERRR IS ALIVE I LOOVE THAT DETAIL
This is just a masterpiece.
Omg that’s amazing!!!!
So GOOD!
Dam it's soo good ❤ plus you are my idol
An interesting and amazing story, I'm waiting for the sequel 👍😄
Dude i remember watching that one animatic u did years and years ago about these cats and i had no idea u still did
AHHHH ITS SO GOOD
this is amazing
that was so amazing I don’t even have the words
Ojalá que enki y ayki y ayla puedan volver a ser una familia..
i just know this is gonna blow up
I loved it i want to see more now it's intresting to see the story (sorry for my bad english)
I LOVE IT, I LOVEEEEEEEE IT
WAOHHHH I'am speak spanish but this is Beatiful!
Great Job :D
CAN'T WAIT TO SEE IT
Still so beautiful, I love it and what application do you use for your animations? I can't wait to see what happens next!💕