A good start. Coming off a bit smarmy and condescending, but I think that's intentional. Who is your target audience, if you have one in mind? Also, the variations in cadence and volume in your speaking are volatile enough to make listening a bit difficult without following the video with a distracting degree of intensity, which is not helped by the jumpy frame rate capture of your head movement. Just thought a little criticism could be useful for future iterations ::: )
A good start. Coming off a bit smarmy and condescending, but I think that's intentional. Who is your target audience, if you have one in mind? Also, the variations in cadence and volume in your speaking are volatile enough to make listening a bit difficult without following the video with a distracting degree of intensity, which is not helped by the jumpy frame rate capture of your head movement. Just thought a little criticism could be useful for future iterations ::: )