Fanboy Rewrites "The Amazing Spider-Man 2"
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Timestamps:
0:00 - Opening
1:03 - Intro
4:07 - Act 1
4:43 - @Comic Drake
5:45 - Act 1 (cont.)
8:09 - @Panels to Pixels
9:07 - Act 1 (cont.)
11:34 - @Matt Draper
12:36 - Act 1 (cont.)
15:49 - @HiTop Films
17:18 - Act 2
19:57 - @Critical Rants
20:42 - Act 2 (cont.)
23:26 - @film caffeine
24:08 - Act 2 (cont.)
27:10 - @Owen Likes Comics
28:11 - Act 3
29:53 - @FEAR Vlaire
30:42 - Act 3 (cont.)
32:40 - @HiTop Films
33:57 - Act 3 (cont.)
40:19 - Credits Scene
41:22 - TASM3 Pitch
43:12 - Conclusion
44:52 - Outro
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It's rewrite time...
Good job on this video it’s really great 👍
great fricken job on the video man
The video is amazing
This is incredible. Glad you did this as Andrew Garfield's spider-man is probably the best, just stuck in awful movies. Inspired me to start writing my own Spider-Man show, as I've always felt it works better in that medium.
The funny thing was I was thinking of rewriting the tasm series and my tasm2 rewrite was going to be similar to this
It's honestly disgusting how Sony treated Andrew. He gave it his all into the role, and if I had to choose between seeing Toby's Spidey or Andrew's Spidey again, I'd go Andrew. Because he more than deserves another chance
I agree, Andrew Garfield is my favorite Spider-Man too
You might not have to wait that long
@@ahmadalaama7217
Are they doing that crossover people are talking about?
@@AmitCinematicUniverse probably
@@ahmadalaama7217
I hope they will not only do respect to Andrew Peter, but also let him teach Tom Peter a few things about life and being Spider-Man.
Thank you so much for having me! It turned out amazing!
Thanks so much for being a part of it!
hey drake
This is a scene where two chads come together.
Comic Drake! :) How are you? It's great to see you here! Hope you're having a wonderful day! :)
ahhh this should be good.
Damn, this rewrite actually hit home for me. Just the cocoon scene with Max and Peter pulled at the heartstrings for me. Thank you
Chills. Every time.
Same here
@sendcutswhat?
@@helenahern He's just trying to be angry about something. Probably attention seeking, and also hating.
Watching this after No Way Home really hits hard.
Andrew’s spider man really deserved better.
'holy shit, osborn, i didnt know you invited spider-man to the party!'
God damnit flash
I want that line in a live action spiderman movie one day. If that line isn't in any movie I won't die happy.
I felt as if Flash understood it was Peter but just hid it
@@aryan7767 i'd personally add in a shot where flash nodded at spider-man Before he say the line, as in (Don't worry bro, i got you) sort of thing.
@@Patara. That would be sick tbh
Dude......this is gold. I LOVE that Max isn’t really a villain. He’s not trying to hurt anybody or anything, he can’t control these powers and he’s just looking for help. Please make an amazing Spider-Man 3 prewrite that’s fully fleshed out and stuff
He doesn't have enough confidence.
Isn’t that villain trope a bit tired?
@@yooooo8600yeah and who knows, maybe electro and spidey could team up against the sinister six
I loved just about everything in this rewrite, the only thing I think is missing is enough scenes with Peter and Gwen because that was the best part of the film to begin with.
to be honest it wasn't the BEST part, but it was okay. Respect your opinion though.
@@feredox6655 what was the "BEST part" in your opinion? I think the relationship they shared were some of the best moments in this franchise and one of the reasons why Gwen's death hit so hard... that and Andrew Garfield crushing it! lol
Peter and gwen were to a lot of people the heart of the films and the direct example of mark webbs work, so to cut that out removes some of the personal parts that have made spider-man such an impactful character.
@@simonegalagar6751 the best part was 100% the scenes of Spider-Man being Spider-Man. The opening swing, Peter helping the kid from the bullies... Ect.
@@themarvelboy3818 those were good bits, seeing new york city being an actual place in the movie really showed off the "friendly neighbourhood" of this spider-man
Imagine having an actor of Andrew Garfield's talent and giving him a shit script to sell toys. Good job Ari.
If this was a real thing, like if this came out in 2014, this Peter would be my favorite.
If it was like this then this would be the definite Spider-Man movie series
@@then00dleman if this was the movie we got in 2014 people would have compared this to Spider-Man 2 ( 2004) people would likely talk more about this than comparing Toby to Andrew to Tom which is doubtful but hey
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There is so many things that would have been different if this was the real thing. First off, Spiderman would have never gotten into the MCU, atleast not for a while. With the success of this movie, Sony would have had a succesfull Spiderman Universe of their own and wouldnt feel the need to include him in the avengers. Also, Tom Holland would be tens of millions less richer because he would have never been casted as Spiderman. I think instead of Holland being Iron Boy junior, they might have maybe even gone back to Harley Keener, and him reconnecting with Iron Man to play the father/son dynamic Tony had with Peter. Harley could have been Thanos snapped in Tonys arms and could have played that entire arc maybe even better than Tom Holland.
I also feel if this movie was a success, the only way you'd see Spiderman in the MCU is during an event like in No Way Home, Dr Strange would bring in Andrew and Tobys Spidermen to help him with something.
@@matclash4736 Maybe in an alternate universe, that scenario did play out. But we got to see spiderman fight thanos so there is that
Did anyone else have the biggest freaking smile on their faces when he said, “your the amazing Spider-Man”
Yees get this man a job as movie writer
Why did you have to call me out like that
I was so happy🙂
you’re gonna love nwh
@@loganblakemusic OMFG YEAH
I actually almost CRIED when Spidey had that one-on-one chat with Max. That speech not only applies to Max, but in a way everyone else.
Nothing is more powerful than hearing “It’s gonna be ok. I’m here for you.”
Same. I needed to hear that from Spider-Man many times in grade school. Since I looked up to Spidey and how he gave me hope. It feels different when you HEAR the words as opposed to reading them.
Best part of the video
This is the movie that Andrew Garfield deserverd
I loved this whole rewrite. You captured the feeling that I feel was missing in the MCU spider movies. Spider man helps not just the world, but also helps the little guys too. I mean the little guy in this rewrite is more like a sparky guy but you get what I mean.
A little guy named Sparkles!?
@@JustAthel i understood that reference
i honestly didn’t like this rewrite… introducing mj felt unnecessary, there’s alot of filler up too, and black cat also felt unnecessary, could’ve been better
@@ultrax5083 ok?
*"Thats a nice video... Did your husband make it for you"*
Yes actually thanks for asking
Its funny, back then it was a funny joke, and now it could totally be serious.
Wait are Beskar sw are you hating on the video or are you just making a joke?
@@ytchris4107 not it was a great video
@@ytchris4107 making a joke
Imo, everything about this rewrite was awesome except for Gwen.
Gwen and her interactions with Pete are the single thing that made both TASM movies amazing, despite the poor writing and company interference.
Here you just made her remind me of Kirsten Dunst's MJ. If she for real told Peter that they need to break up because she got into one dangerous situation, it would make their entire relationship from the 1st movie a lie. It makes no sense and tbh kinda ruins her as a character.
How would you write it? Would you keep them together by the end?
I agree.
@@monsoon1303 prolly just add more scenes with the two characters together, just keep the relationship, for the most part, the same.
Most people don’t actually know how to write women
@@yooooo8600 Yeah, not even women themselves know how to do it right (example: VivziePop).
“A more grounded Spider-Man story”
So......what Marc Webb (director) wanted to do originally. Okay
To bad the original movie is garbage
And not amazing but this rewrite IS amazing
We can now see Troyoboyo's take on the hit film: the mediocre angular stickbug-man 2
Don’t you mean the mediocre angular stickbug (no hyphen)man 20
I think that ending the first amazing Spider-Man film with that swing in the moonlight, and then starting this one with a new suit and daylight swinging would’ve been a perfect idea. Shame they only did part of that.
I listened to the audio commentary, suspiciously not including director Marc Webb by the way. Just a few writers and producers. According to them, they wanted to open the movie in a completely different way compared to most superhero movies. In fact they even admit they intentionally shot it to look like a standard action scene.
Yeah, terrible idea.
@@m1k3l1f3 Yeah they really didn’t need to think that hard. I mean if you cut out that whole Jason Bourne action scene you already have the perfect opening. Being different doesn’t mean it’s good, guys.
Now after this, I wanna see a series like "Fanboy Writes" where you build off the stories made from your rewritten/prewritten stories into fully fledged written out universes. That would be sooo cool!
I'm working 3 jobs atm as well as trying to be a musician in this chaotic time. I cried during the speech Peter gave to Electro. Right here, this channel, these characters is why we need superheroes now more than ever. Much love.
It's my fav Spider-Man movie
Gorgeous suit, awesome fight scenes, great Peter and Gwen drama, such chemistry
In the end it still just doesn't work, but I still love it
And that’s ok, because everybody has different tastes in film
Imagine the suit with black instead of blue 😍😍😍😍
I respectfully disagree. Its a terrible movie, but its the little things that make it sort of not too bad.
não fazia ideia de que vc acompanhava canais de vídeo essay Kkkkkkk
I didn't really like the suit too much. Its too comic-booky. I really like the modern take in FFH and HC. I don't want an exact representation.
EDIT: I changed my mind. This is my favorite suit!
I really like this story, I love what you did with Electro, and with black cat. Some constructive criticism: I feel like the story with Gwen in the original and I think maybe this remake of the movie could do without the mj scene, maybe hold that off for the future maybe having the 3rd movie focus on Peter's grief of Gwen and going through it with the sinister 6 setup and with Peter at his low the movie exploring (spoiler to no way home) his dark phase, he stops pulling his punches , makes a lot of mistakes. At the cost of lives. The next movie follows after the events of no way home, explaining how the spell affects his universe, he calls back to the movie a couple times maybe. It would be fun to then introduce mj. After everything, Peter can still find love, there's hope.
i love that idea but i dont know if i can handle andrew's peter being with someone other than emma's gwen
Maybe there needs to be universe where he marries gwen stacy instead of mj
This fixes the continuity issue in Spiderman NWH in which Max never actually found out about Peter's identity
Maybe harry knew Peter is spiderman from them in the apartment and told electro who spiderman is
Holy .... This was Amazing! Glad I payed for the patreon! Quick question: How do we get SONY to hire you?
Thank you so so much! And honestly your guess is as good as mine maybe if this gets a shit ton of views they'll notice
excuse me while i make a few million bots brb
@@finnthomas7014 , I’ll help you out
@@troyoboyo17let's pray the algorithm hears our prayers
@@troyoboyo17 Hey, I'm surprised you wrote Mary Jane into your story. :) Because Mary jane WAS actually going to be in the actual film and played by Shailene Woodley before all her scenes were cut on account of Emma Stone. :( There were actual onset photos of her as well.
I like how this rewrite was more of a connection than a conflict for Spider-Man and Electro. This was beautiful man 10/10!
I umm... I’m crying
Right! He's such a good story builder, and I would looove to see this adapted to a movie! (WITHOUT STUDIO INTERFERENCE)
I legitimately teared up at the end with his scene between Peter and Max.
@@JozannaHanawalt Same, it was amazing (Pun intended)
10/10 is reaching lol... he turned a Spider-Man Villain into a side kick essentially. Not enough stakes in this version. Still better than what we got originally though
That opening with Stan Lee hit hard, man.
I'm glad he realized how much he affected the world, and that he was happy as an entertainer of the people.
We miss you Stan
Anyone else felt like crying? The part where Hightop showed us Peter talk to Max about power and responsibility, it's an amazing re-write.
Troyoboyo17: *puts out a premiere for an anticipated rewrite
Me: “YOU’RE A FRAUD TROYOBOYO”
*proceeds to set reminder for the video
*flips table*
🤦♂️
@@tanukajit *pulls e brake*
RRR
My respect for people who talk about their mental health fucking skyrockets when they are being honest about what they are going through. Thanks my dude
People who talk about their mental health are whiny.
@@danielhart7435 you ok buddy?
@@danielhart7435 lol?
Ironic
I find it hilarious that Andrew Garfield’s Peter feels like if a teenage Tony Stark got bit by a radioactive spider. A lot cooler, smoother, cocky and slightly arrogant. And then Tom Holland’s Spider-Man feels like if Peter became Iron Boy instead of Spider-Man.
Yes! Maybe thats why i loved tasm so much, it finally felt like when he was a superhero, he got the recognition he deserved! In the mcu kinda spider-man we have so much heroes that peter cannot be this big one who people look up to. As if he’s just another superhero in this world, which imo sucks.
@@lucasaranagy5767 I think they're trying to slowly build Spider-Man up as his own hero. This is just the beginning of his journey and yea the execution kinda sucks (ngl) but hopefully his next trilogy will be him finally stepping into his own. Tom is a great actor but he desperately needs a better script imo :))
@@boystelllies1833 WHAT ABOUT ANDREW GARFIELD, DID YOU GIVE HIM A CHANCE..DID YOU?! ANSWER ME!!!
@@joegoldberg3481 Sony: What does it matter to you anyway!?
@@thebadger622 EVERYTHING!!!!
I love, “With a Big Wheel.”
Edit: I just finished the whole video and oh my God! That was an Amazing Spider-Man story. You managed to keep the true themes of Spider-Man while having a compelling story at the same time. Props to you, man! Keep it up!
the monologue you wrote for peter to say to electro literally broke my heart and made me cry. this rewrite is amazing.
Tbh, I really like your rewrite. Many rewrites of TASM 2 are pretty different. Yours is SPECIAL, UNIQUE, because it personally touched me right in the chest. I really like how your interpretation of Electro is more relatable imo than a generic ridiculous villain. The rewrite too really keeps the TASM series as it should be. It's... *sigh* I honestly don't know what to say lmao. All I could say is that. It's a beautiful video and I cried a little bit. Just, great.
It fits the theme it was headin for.. realistic, dark, deep, and meaningfull.. they got the best cast on this movie for shore.. andrew is amazing, emma stones chemistry is unbeatable with anybody else, jamie is such a loving character and would be perfect for a sympathetic villain, dehaan is.. wow hes just such an amazing actor i mean have yall seen chronicles?? Man, it gives me goosebumps, and too include flash is actually amazing and impressive since he was a classic bully but to add the note that his relationship with peter is growing beautifully and naturally from the 1st film. Honestly props to marc for trying his best.. his films rlly shows taht he cares for character and their arc, also their relationship which why his adaptation felt more chemistry then raimis version.
Either way both of them got fucked by sony. If only they were free to take the projects themself and not have sony interfere.. we couldve got and amazing take on spiderman 3. Or if that still fails, we couldve got a release on spiderman 4. It wouldve resulted in tobeys version that is succesfull and believe me they did if not for sony shitting on them. AND if tobeys version still fails and have andrew to take over the adaptation and ALSO learning from past mistakes.. sony shouldve not interfiered with anything and let them do their jobs.. his adaptation wouldve been amazing and they dont have to do a reboot onntom holland again. (adding to the note that andrews writing is too much)
I also would like if sony gave andrew another chance and continued tasm 3 even though its kinda hard seeing them together again. They wasted so much on him and even if he doesnt have a trilogy, i wouldve like him to show up in future spiderman relater franchises like maybe tom hardy's venom or a new take on miles morales. Its just sad seeing him with a shit of a duology. and tobey got his legendary trilogy and holland is starting a new fucking trilogy.. if i wouldve ranked them fully, i wouldve gone with the same direction as their timeline. So tobey comes 1st, andrew 2nd for his failed tasm trilogy project unfortunately, and holland comes out last cuz his adaptation just feels less of a spiderman.
I absolutely loved it! This takes the TASM franchise out of the “Beat the villain up at the last act” formula
Yeah so cliche this is what being spiderman is all about electro is known to be in freakish accidents we feel bad for
just wanted to add something. your rewrites have this amazing, homely element to it. They feel so personal, and so character-focused, which I really appreciate and I really believe that is the approach comic-book superheroes should take. Also, your third acts and epilogues in all your rewrites are super fantastic. I was really getting some kind of spider-man Blue vibes when you were talking about the party at Harry Osborn's new apartment in the 3rd act.
Minor Nitpick though. I always feel your stories lack a bit of tension and urgency in terms of the antagonist. For your superman story pitch, it actually worked because superman is that iconic, legendary type of character who really deserved that kind of human story. For this particular rewrite, I really didn't feel that there was enough of an antagonist. And I dont necessarily mean as a physical villain. I mean even an overlooming guilt or something, I am sorry I cant articulate it better. Peter being confused about what spiderman really means to people is, in my opinion, not strong enough to be the ONLY overarching hurdle in a story. but other than that, fantastic work and I am recommending it to all my friends to watch.
*Holy Shit Osborne I didn’t know you invite Spiderman to this party*
Me: 😂😭😂
Damn why doesn't Marvel hire troyoboyo to write Spider-Man projects? I swear everyone of these videos are amazing
Couldn’t tell you! If these companies were smart they would hire troyoboyo, HiTop films, and Nando V Movies
@@bigman0822 Don't forget Browntable!
@@wchambers11 yep! Browntable too
@@bigman0822 mmmmmmmmm, I agree with 2/3 Hitops isn't the best for me, he tends to... shift things whenever they don't fit his videos (see his hate for Spider-Man Far from home video) Like, for example, saying "There was no consequences" -_- Besides some of his stuff on MCU I do like him mostly.
@@theedge747 I mean there weren’t any consequences. He left a school trip in EUROPE! He should at least be suspended for a couple weeks. You can’t bail on a school trip. The whole mysterio revealing Peters identity will end up being a retcon anyway
Andrew spiderman deserves to come back in the Mcu Spiderman 3 and more screentime with Tom Holland interacting with each other.
Honestly, I would've liked it if they used the TASM 1 post credit scene to tease Harry.
This TASM 2 rewrite is awesome and I can’t wait for the rewrite of TASM 3.
Wait
@@obama_cricket I will
How is there gonna be a "rewrite" of tasm3 when it doesn't exist
I get it now, shut the fuck up redditor ffs
@@neow6289 that’s the joke😑
@@neow6289 r/woosh
T'Challa after seeing the video: " Someone get this man a movie job "
This story has a lot of meaning behind it and it really is amazing how you develop Peter's character here.
Dude you’re re-writes are soo good! I always wish that the actual movies were more like them. I even found myself crying by the end of this one.
Legit the best essay you've done- you've taken something most of us dislike and turned it into something genuinely heartfelt and sincere. Kinda bookends the TASM2 fixation I've had for a while.
Well damn I felt like I just watched a whole movie
Exactly
You did
@@TheLexoDex he didn’t he watched a video on a movie script
@@National7575 and its still better than the goddamn tasm 2 movie💀like no shit i cried on this video and it aint even an actuall movie ffs its a masterpiece. Shame on sony for fucking up everything. The reason why spiderman 4 isnt out, its because of sony. The reason why andrew became the rebooted spiderman is because sony fucked up tobey. BUT, they couldve done something like this instead of shitting on marc webb that ended on rebooting another spiderman (tom holland).
Tbh ion rlly like holland's spiderman. They rlly took out everything that makes spiderman, well spiderman. And im rlly sad on andrew cuz andrew's version couldve been EVERYTHING. Hes perfect. My opinion on tobey, hes a classic i mean u cant get over spiderman 2 cant ya its litterally iconic and a masterpiece. But again, sony interfiered with spiderman 3 and resulted on a big fail and they blamed it on raimi.. raimi even took the blame and planned to make spiderman 4 to redeem his big fail with spiderman 3. Again, he canceled it due to him feeling that hes unable to make it on time. Its a sad parting on the trilogy considering 2 of the movies are succesfull but fucking sony messes up everything (fuck u avi rad). Hed rather just cancel it instead of reliecing it bcuz hes afraid that this one wouldnt meet their expectation even though it could been better that spidsrman 3, it wouldnt match CLOSE with spiderman 1 and 2. Rlly shows what kind of a filmaker he is. He rlly cares about his work.
Back to andrew, dang hes honestly couldve been the perfect adaptation/reboot. Unlike other ppl, i actually like andrews take on peter. Screams more teenager than tobeys akward nerd even though its still iconic. One of the factor that mcu spiderman failed to do. Man and andrews arc where he started on revenge but slowly using his abilities for good instead.. 1st movie got me goosebumps especially with his acting skills. That why andrews my fav, hes passion on acting brings everything together, unlike tobey (no offense) whos acting kiiindaa fell flat to me. Im rlly sad they fucked up on andrews movie (BECAUSE STUDIO INTERFERIENCE) and its all on sony to blame. Also the fact that they shit on him so much.. i rlly hope theyr on tasm 3 rn cuz tasm 3 couldve been a redeem on andrews take.. if not, just release the cuts we got on tasm 3 so were not left off andrew smashing a sewer cap on rhinos fuckin head. Not to mention how hes doing after gwen's death. Also finishing andrews trilogy cuz god, tobey got his trilogy finished and FUCKIN TOM HOLLAND IS STARTING A NEW ONE?? GIVE MY MAN A CHANCE FFS I FEEL BAD FOR HIM AND ITS NOT EVEN HIS FAULT. AGAIN FUCK U SONY, AND AVI FUCKIN RAD
Whatever all of these about, i dont wanna know tasm 2, this video is cannon periodt. Aint nobody can tell me andrew is fired or shit. Hes the best one no cap and i am so mad on sony ong
This was the real movie
This movie nailed in nearly every aspect of a film except for the script, imagine if we had a good storyline, this movie would have been so good.
I always find myself coming back to this video, I know this is a fan-made rewrite, but this genuinely is one of my favorite Spidey stories. You should be proud Troy
The Spectacular Spider-Man movie we didn't know we needed.
man whenever someone mentions spectacular spiderman, I cry . I literally cry. why does the good shit always get cancelled. daredevil. spectacular spiderman. man fuck
@@aryan7767 bro same but not really cry i love i, should’ve got a season 3
This really is the biggest crossover since Endgame
PLEASE MAKE A THIRD TASM VIDEO THIS WAS SO GOOD
I love how you definitely took some inspirations from Spider-Man: Blue. From the apartment to the flash tompson stuff to how harry acts!
I know this movie was a lot worse because it was shoving in so many Easter eggs but I wouldn’t mind. quick mention of Matt Murdock as the lawyer who got Max a psychiatric treatment instead of a life sentence?
Yeah and we could see a little team up maybe with miles as well
not sure they could have done that legally at the time but it would have been good world building, showing that spider-man isnt the only hero of that universe
that would have been fantastic. Maybe a pan shot where we dont actually hear or see matt but they mention him as the blind lawyer guy who was damn useful. MAN FUCK. #SAVEDAREDEVIL
You turned this movie from a shitshow into an actual masterpiece thank you.
I feel it just a bit to different kind of forced
@@jathancarmona8524 what feels forced
@@shubby21 I think it just changes to much from the original
@@jathancarmona8524 thats the point the movie was terrible...
@@kavenuchiha7188 I thought it was fine but I feel he could it have made it better from just changing parts of the movie not like the whole thing
This was an incredible video, I legit started tearing up at ur scene with Peter and Max talking made me tear up. 😭😭
Literally one of my favorite stories of Spider-Man. I'm being dead serious when I say this made me tear up and I can't explain how much I adore this story. I love it. You did amazing. I so wished that that THIS was the story we got.
only Spider-Man SUPERNERDS like me will understand the Big Wheel reference.
I do XD the most absurd villain, along with skin head and the spot
That part actually got me wheezing. Spider-Man Nerd gang rise up.
I got it
@@bucketones yessir
@@blankfilms1638 Hey! Don’t forget the wall XD. But tbh in my perspective, if used right The Spot can be like one of Spidey’s Strongest Villains.
That Miles Morales add in gave me goosebumps. Kinda makes me sad, this was such a great rewrite and I would’ve loved for it to go down this way because I much as I like Tom Holland, Andrew Garfield was just sooooo greatZ
I would have liked to see a third amazing spider-man/sinister six movie in this universe, but was fine with that not happening as well. After hearing this, I would have been DEVASTATED if this was the second amazing spider-man movie we got, and they didn't continue the story. Seriously, what you came up with was fantastic! Absolutely loved it.
Amazing story u truly understood what Spider-Man stands for it’s hope.
So basically your pitch is a long therapy session...
AND I AM SO HERE FOR IT! I'd take a movie as heartfelt as this over a dozen CGI battles.
21:06 I know that villain! Man, I was not expected a reference that obscure.
big wheel represent
Aw man would of loved a continuation of the first rewrite
I’m so glad I could catch this before it got old, thanks for making this incredible video
your rewrite made me realise how bad the movie really was, the potential they had and they threw it away... in my opinion of course people can hate the sam sm movies and thats okay u do u
What about a rewrite on the 2015 fantastic four movie?
I WOULD LOVE THAT
@Unnamed Flamingo thanks
@@singulariteas thank you
Yes! That movie had so much potential.
@@landendrake1696 absolutely because if you seen Jeremy Slater’s original script of the movie?
There were some things I wasn’t too crazy about, but that cocoon scene legit made me shed a few tears. Awesome video. Just goes to show how talented so many CZcamsrs are.
This is amazing! The emotion packed into Electros story works so well. And I love how it’s intertwined with Spider-Man’s life.
TASM 2 was Garbage. But I don't blame the actors, I blame SONY And Avi Arad!
Ditto
Same I liked all the actors in the movie and I noticed that this movie lacked the marc webb touch which could have made this movie just as good and as relatable as the first
Avi Arad IS pretty unhealthy to Spider-Man movies
Such assholes.
exactly. Those idiots didn't learn anything from spiderman 3. But TASM was amazing
I love the direction you went with electro, not every superhero movie has to have an evil dude. Some people can fall into unfortunate situations and just need some help and I’m glad you highlighted that :) great rewrite
Literal chills bro. What an amazing story you've managed to tell. Thank you for making this for every genuine Spider-Man fan it's absolutely AMAZING
Omg!!, this was amazing!, we definitely need a Tasm3 video, please. You’re doing an amazing job writing and rewriting.
I have no words, the message you include in this Rewrite is so deep, you made a great work!!! Your
Max Dillon is amazing and the struggles of Peter are also perfectly done.
TROBOYO ROCKS ❤️❤️❤️
Oh my god Troy
HOW DO YOU DO IT
HOW DO YOU MAKE SUCH A TRASH FILM INTO A HEARTFELT MASTERPIECE
HONESTLY THIS VIDEO WAS AMAZING YOU KILLED IT AGAIN GREAT JOB BRO
Ikr
You guys use the word "masterpiece" too loosely lmao. Imagine calling a Spider-Man movie with no villains a masterpiece
@@jordanhawkes5483 villains and fighting arent always the good thing. Its fake fans like you that made Spider-Man 3 and tasm2 like this. Its about connections. Emotions. Its not always about fighting.
@@ZinxTheSlayer Fake fans ?? Lmaoo.... a super hero requires a super villain idiot.
@@jordanhawkes5483 he already had one in 1. A superhero also doesnt require a super villain they require buildup and plot moron.
This is the movie that I needed right now. I'm just going through so much, having just graduated high school, almost failing my permit test multiple times, and college just around the corner. And my mental health is at an all time low, and the way Peter talked to Max in this rewrite really touched me, and I cried while watching the conclusion of the video. Thank you Troy.
Why am i just now seeing this channel? This is simply fantastic!! Love how the music is used as if its in the movie. So immersive and fun
Seeing that last clip of Andrew Garfield talking about how much the character means to him really hit hard. He's just like all of us. And it really sucks to see what how hurt he was after the whole thing was over. If he never gets a second chance in the MCU I'll be beyond disappointed.
dmn ive never been in the "waiting room" for a youtube video, but bcs of the rest of the comments i believe this will be "amazing" :)
Please make your TASM3 pitch into a full video. This entire thing was amazing, and the way you wrote Electro was perfect. I would love to see you tackle Goblin and other stuff.
Bro you better do a TASM 4 pitch, the TASM 3 pitch at the end was 10/10 you should do a series of pitches, like a TASM 4 - 5 pitch and then a Raimi series Spider-Man 4 - 6!!! That'd be so effin cool dude and I would really really REALLY love 2 c it
"*With great power.. comes great responsability*".... sony couldn't handle that responsabiliy to make a trilogy
The amazing spider-man 2: "They love me"
i am so happy this exists.u have made a masterpiece of a video which will keep me entertained for a long time. thank u for making this
Please do a third one too, maybe even a fancast for the characters that haven't shown up yet in the first 2 movies
I really want to see an in-depth video about your TASM3 pitch. I want to see the ins and outs of what you would do with it because I know it would be absolutely FANTASTIC. Your rewrites and prewrites of movies have shown that you know how to come up with some goddamn near perfect ideas and plots
He needs to direct the next spider man trilogy
now i want a troyoboyo17 cut of this movie
I just wanted to let you know that your video has inspired me. I am working on my own project (not Spider-Man related) and have been having a hard time with the central plot and character development but your video really have me some good ideas for what to do, I just want to thank you so much for releasing this and I hope someday you get the chance to do something truly "amazing"
Absoulutely fantastic video it always broke my heart that andrew garfield never got a fair shot at the charachter despite being so passionate and i feel like this not only does him justice but is also just an amazing celebration pf the charachter we all love so dearly thank you for making this it brought a tear to my eye spectacular video
I literally just watched your Rewriting TASM video yesterday! It was amazing, told some friends about it. What a coincidence you upload the TASM 2 rewrite today! Can’t wait to watch this!!!
Edit: WOW. I am amazed. I'm literally beyond words right now, so I'm going to do my best. I never cry, but this story damn near made me cry 3x. The first time this video almost made me tear up was at 31:14. The build up, the possible scene it could have been, how the dialogue sounds exactly like what Andrew's Peter would say (I can literally imagine it)! The fact that Max cannot control his powers and that he's struggling is just something you nail!
Second part I almost teared up at was 37:04. Spidey being this symbol of hope and talking to Max. Creating this web wall/cocoon, unmasking himself for Max. It's so full of heart! It's just amazing, oh my god. You honestly amaze me!
Third time I almost teared up here was at 38:00 where Max braces for the harsh reality of life, yet it turns out the crowd cheers! I'm glad you treat Max the complete opposite of a villain! Great, GREAT work!!! I would love to see your TASM 3 - 5 film ideas! I'm DYING for more of these stories!
this is a straight up documentary, lovin it bro
All the individual interviews reminds me of that one episode of Spectacular Spider-Man where everyone’s being interviewed at Flash’s party
*FINALLY! THE CHAD "BIG WHEEL" HIMSELF GETS THE RECOGNITION HE DESERVES!*
oh and I guess the video was pretty good too.
This review gets a 5/5 cause it has big-wheel. No big wheel then shit movie
I'm a bigger chad, I was your 69'th like and THAT will be the only meaningful thing I do in life.
The Time is Coming. The Time is coming.
The rewrite is upon us
The time has come. And so have I.
@@stanleysmooth You are now a legend.
I was hearing the video on the background while I did some homework and it got so interesting that I stood doing my homework to pay atention to the video. That scene whit Max in the cocoon made me cry ❤.
Great video! A hug all the way from México
I know I’m late for the party but..
This is my first time watching your channel, and I absolutely LOVE this video! If you ever make a continuation of this story in a TASM3, I would one HUNDRED percent watch it.
I’m gonna watch this video 6 more times after it’s out .p.s if you have to take a break after this video we totally get it
"You've first got to be a good man, man."
Troyo that was the best video re write I’ve ever seen hands down
Only just found this but what an enjoyable video, would've loved to have seen this version brought to the big screen. Loved how you decided to re-write Electro so he wasn't the "villain" but rather someone who just needed help, and who Peter could definitely just talk to if they had enough time with each other