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  • čas přidán 7. 06. 2023
  • "Tough is worth something in our business, but tough and stupid will get you into trouble eventually."
    Written toward the topic: "Space Towers"
    Video: • Space Towers
    As always, thanks to Isaac Arthur and the SFIA team for another great topic!
    This story is episode 6 in "The Misfits" series. If you haven't yet, you can check out the full series here: • The Misfits
    If you prefer to read rather than listen or would like to read along, full text of this and all my Sci-Fi Weeklies are available though my Substack: perowe.substack.com
    perowe.substack.com/p/drop-mine
    Now on Twitter: / perowe4
    Support (greatly appreciated): www.rowelit.com/support
    Sci-Fi Collections: www.rowelit.com/collections-s...
    More on this story: www.rowelit.com/drop-mine
    More on this project: www.rowelit.com/sci-fi-weeklies
    For the serious writers out there: Mechanics of Fiction Writing Series
    / @mechanicsoffiction
    About Rowe Writes: • Introducing: Rowe Writ...
    About this project: I am writing a weekly sci-fi story to the theme of Isaac Arthur’s SFIA videos. It’s a crazy challenging timeframe to create a good short story in, and to do so publicly is even more daunting. I’m just hoping some good stories come out of this, I have fun writing them, and most importantly, the audience enjoys!
    Thanks for stopping by!

Komentáře • 86

  • @RoweLit
    @RoweLit  Před rokem +14

    This story is Episode 6 in "The Misfits" series. If you'd like to catch up on all the episodes, you can check out that playlist here: czcams.com/play/PLWl-Jc_I2wPAsngY7MCID9sS_98Y2siT5.html
    This installment makes it official: Sebastian Pollack (aka Transom), Carolina Dreeson, and Maícon (the prime) will henceforth be considered regular characters in the Misfits series. So "the Crew" has been expanded beyond Burch and the rest of the gang aboard the Yankee-Chaos. And, in case you missed them this week, Burch and the rest of the crew will be back next week for Episode 7. I hope to see you then!

  • @georgehanson8596
    @georgehanson8596 Před rokem +15

    I am absolutely loving this series! Can't wait for more.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem +3

      Thanks, George. More next week!

  • @bewarethegreyghost
    @bewarethegreyghost Před rokem +11

    These just keep getting better. I listen to these initially in a random order, and now as they come out. My wife pointed out that Clem was the junkyard escapee. I had totally forgotten what that guys name was. I almost need a spreadsheet or flowchart to connect all the stories, but I think that would ruin some of the magic of bumbling through like I have. Keep up the good work, man.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem +3

      Thanks, greyghost! Eventually, I am going to have to get the spreadsheet going. Maybe I can get GPT to build me a model! Oh, man, I'd be afraid to even ask, because then it might start writing spinoffs! Aaaah!

    • @JohnKing00
      @JohnKing00 Před rokem +3

      I want a spreadsheet/flowchart too!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem +3

      @@JohnKing00 Me three! 🤣

    • @meb668
      @meb668 Před rokem

      me four, but I know what you mean about bumbling through, too. Having just a glimse into something epic, right? Sometimes nice not to have the big picture and bathe in the mystery. Hey, do mist and mystery have the same root somewhere, both veiling?

  • @ronbynum7304
    @ronbynum7304 Před rokem +4

    Another great story in the series. Thanks for sharing.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem +2

      Thanks, Ron! Glad you're enjoying them!

  • @veganmade
    @veganmade Před rokem +4

    Dang young man! I love the Misfits story and you make my Thursday nights best of the week! Greatly appreciated and many thanks✌️

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem +2

      Thanks, vg! So happy to do it. You won't have to wait long for the next one!

  • @noahproblemo1257
    @noahproblemo1257 Před 7 měsíci +1

    Absolutely love there is real, often poignant dialog that doesn’t rely on gratuitous cursing, F bombs or sex. Very few authors handle language as you do. How the different characters express themselves gives us an unusual sense of that character in the story.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 7 měsíci +1

      Cheers, Noah! 🙏😃 I like to treat them like they're real people, because in some universe, maybe even this one, doesn't quantum mechanics dictate that they are? 🤔😵‍💫

  • @sanecanadian2351
    @sanecanadian2351 Před rokem +2

    I just got back, from a night of camping in the rain with my son. We were testing out some new gear. Opened up my phone to find this. Now I can kick back and relax to another story. Thanks again for sharing these.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem +3

      Awesome! BTW, just finished up a looong comment on your other post. Glad you're enjoying!

  • @herbiehusker1889
    @herbiehusker1889 Před rokem +3

    Fantastic narration and story. Keep up the good work Mr. Rowe.

  • @charlesculpepper5058
    @charlesculpepper5058 Před rokem +3

    Thanks so much for your readings

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem +2

      My pleasure, charles. Glad you're enjoying!

  • @kennyjoe7asa
    @kennyjoe7asa Před rokem +2

    We are suppose to have thunderstorms this weekend and this story will no doubt come to my mind.Thanks P,#,

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem +1

      On the bright side, kennyjoe, if it gets bad you can always think about what's not falling out of the sky and flying through the air here on Earth😆
      Many thanks and much gratitude for the support☕☕☕🙏🙂

  • @sanecanadian2351
    @sanecanadian2351 Před rokem +3

    Well, I have to say you write better combat veteran characters than most writers. It's refreshing not to have to egnore a badly writen character to enjoy a story. You have no idea how many times I have read/heard another writing's SF character do something a boot wouldnt do. It breaks the emersion when someone doesn't fit into the role. You seem to do a lot of reaserch into your characters' development. Great work looking forward to the next one.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem +4

      Thanks, SC. Glad to hear it. If/when I get characters right, I think it's mostly about taking each character seriously--respecting their perspective. That's the goal anyway.

    • @sanecanadian2351
      @sanecanadian2351 Před rokem +2

      @@RoweLit I think Transom has become one of my favourites. Probably due to the fact you have humanised the SF guy. So many people forget that soldiers are people too. No matter how skilled and untouchable they are. At the end of the day, they have people they care about just like anyone else.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem +2

      He's one of my favorites too, SC. He's both fun to write and far more complex than meets the eye. It's also I case where I'm in a similar position to the reader at this point, because I'm in the dark about how his story will develop/end. I do expect he'll surprise me, probably often and a lot.

  • @mymusicmymoney
    @mymusicmymoney Před rokem +2

    Wow!

  • @soundwaveshadlow
    @soundwaveshadlow Před rokem +1

    Can't wait for the next part 🚀

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem +2

      Coming right up, shadlow!

  • @edpiv2233
    @edpiv2233 Před rokem +1

    I think the work is excellent. Thank you very much.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem +1

      Cheers, Ed! You're quite welcome. Glad you're enjoying!

  • @Gramma-rs1qb
    @Gramma-rs1qb Před 9 měsíci

    I'm really enjoying the Misfits series. Very good character development along with a great story line. Plus, I like manly men/intelligent women interaction - not so common in a lot of genres. I also enjoy reading the 'more about this story' sections. Keep up the good work!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 9 měsíci

      Thanks, Gramma! Glad you're enjoying!

  • @CricketCinema
    @CricketCinema Před 8 měsíci

    Another great story. I’m grateful. Thanks!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 8 měsíci

      Thanks, CC! Glad you enjoyed 🙏😃

  • @steveh7866
    @steveh7866 Před 7 měsíci

    Thank you for the upload - I managed 50 minutes - must admit it felt like hours, but realising this is author narrated, I look forward to rising popularity making other narrators record it. So often folks read their own work in a dead pan :)

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 7 měsíci +1

      Cheers, Steve! We writers tend to not be the most emotive group 😂 So that's a fair assessment.

    • @steveh7866
      @steveh7866 Před 7 měsíci

      @@RoweLit Pleased it didn't come across as criticism of the work, which is much appreciated. I had thought it reminded me of (most?) book readings I've attended and only twigged afterwards that it was just so. Heck, even many who start out as performers read in this style (Mike Harding springs to mind)

  • @mauricedamage425
    @mauricedamage425 Před 8 měsíci

    Starting out as a rag tag delivery crew turning into a galactic conspiracy, this is a wild ride.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 8 měsíci

      Cheers, Maurice! And it keeps getting wilder 😃😲

  • @m.j.johnsonbooks7856
    @m.j.johnsonbooks7856 Před 9 měsíci

    This was the second story of yours I ever listened to. Man, was I confused but I still enjoyed it. This time around it was even better.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 9 měsíci +1

      Thanks, MJ! I am always wondering about how much to explain or recap installment to installment, but I usually rely on the fact that people are much better at picking up an adventure in the middle than writers give them credit for. After all, if I can come into a movie halfway and figure it out and still enjoy it, the audience can too.

    • @m.j.johnsonbooks7856
      @m.j.johnsonbooks7856 Před 9 měsíci

      Yes, I think you balance it well. I actually picked up Misfits here, listened to the end then went back to the beginning. It was a total Star Wars order of 6, 7, 1, 2, 3, etc. I'm happy to have had a different experience.
      (This is, of course, with random other tales littered throughout the journey.) @@RoweLit

  • @petermelville8175
    @petermelville8175 Před rokem +1

    PE. You’re brilliant. The stories remind me or Asimov. Very concise and precise. No extra words needed for such vivid images. If you’ve published anything, please let me know where to find it

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem

      Wow, thanks, Peter! Humbled to hear my work reminds you of the best!
      You can find my first two sci-fi novels and my other works on my author page: www.amazon.com/stores/P.E.-Rowe/author/B07NXMPHB6?ref=ap_rdr&store_ref=ap_rdr&isDramIntegrated=true&shoppingPortalEnabled=true.
      Unfortunately, I don't have audiobook versions for my novels yet. I will, though, for my forthcoming novel. And, of course, the collections will all have audio versions, which all originate here.

  • @alfredsutton4412
    @alfredsutton4412 Před 10 měsíci

    I love ALL your stories. That's why I subscribed.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 10 měsíci

      I appreciate it, Alfred. Thanks!

  • @madderhat5852
    @madderhat5852 Před 10 měsíci

    The RoweVerse is an amazing place.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 10 měsíci +1

      Thanks, MH! As a resident since 2022, I have to say, I kinda like it too 😃

  • @axelhoogland9442
    @axelhoogland9442 Před rokem +1

    Another good story!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem +1

      Thanks, axel! More on the way 😃

  • @kjharky
    @kjharky Před 5 měsíci

    Going back for a second run, I love these characters.😊

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 5 měsíci

      Cheers, Karen! Getting ready for Season 2 myself!

  • @alistairborthwick2031
    @alistairborthwick2031 Před 10 měsíci

    Great episode.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 10 měsíci

      Cheers, Alistair! Glad you enjoyed it 😃

  • @michaelcalder8431
    @michaelcalder8431 Před 2 měsíci

    As ever - thanks for superior content.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 2 měsíci

      Thanks, Michael! Glad you're enjoying 😃🙏

  • @deant6361
    @deant6361 Před rokem +1

    Great thanks for sharing

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem +1

      Cheers, Dean! Happy to 😃

  • @tonybutcher8141
    @tonybutcher8141 Před 10 měsíci

    Thank you for another great story😊.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 10 měsíci

      Thank you, Tony! Glad you're enjoying 😃🙏

  • @alantaylor353
    @alantaylor353 Před rokem +1

    Awesome.. Thank you so much.!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem +1

      Thank you, Alan. Glad you enjoyed!

  • @KeithCarmichaelInFL
    @KeithCarmichaelInFL Před 8 měsíci

    Living in a hurricane prone area, this one resonated with me. The only thing that I feel you didn’t convey strongly enough was the constant roar of the wind. At those speeds it would have made hearing others talking (more like yelling) very difficult ( just for future reference). Great story though, especially the breakdown after the storm passed! Thanks for sharing!

  • @deant6361
    @deant6361 Před 10 měsíci

    Awesome

  • @itsmeandnotyousoha
    @itsmeandnotyousoha Před rokem +3

    Oooooooo❤

  • @dtl2081
    @dtl2081 Před měsícem

    Excellent

  • @MartinGugino
    @MartinGugino Před 8 měsíci

    Transom's attitude is so engaging.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 8 měsíci

      Thanks, Martin! He's one of my favorites to write. I never really know what he's going to do or say!

    • @MartinGugino
      @MartinGugino Před 7 měsíci

      @@RoweLit in one episode, he calls his pilot an idiot. Had to laugh. Wasn't expecting that.
      Disdain for near everybody

    • @MartinGugino
      @MartinGugino Před 7 měsíci

      I will have to go back and see how you managed to write that.

  • @mrtodddelaroderie
    @mrtodddelaroderie Před rokem +1

    Great story. I can't wait to learn more. I missed the release sorry. I have been following hopefully not the start ww 3 too closely. It is strange to watch the unfolding real-time of the Ukraine Russia NATO war.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před rokem +1

      Thanks, Todd! Always here for whenever you're ready 😄 As you note, there's always way more important stuff going on in the real world. Hopefully this can be a place people can find a brief reprieve.

  • @byrdhemenway1213
    @byrdhemenway1213 Před 4 měsíci

    Love ur work and izic author work inspiring
    Would love to watch movies of ur collaboration

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 4 měsíci

      Cheers, Byrd! Glad to hear you're enjoying 😃

  • @benjaminhayward5921
    @benjaminhayward5921 Před 11 měsíci

    Dude, I'm having to space these out so I don't burn through them too fast!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 11 měsíci +1

      Thanks, Benjamin! One a week is about my max 😂 Wish I could go faster, but I would🤯

  • @VickiNikolaidis
    @VickiNikolaidis Před 11 měsíci +1

    ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 11 měsíci +1

      Cheers, Vicki!

  • @user-jl8mp6lg4i
    @user-jl8mp6lg4i Před 5 měsíci

    Over night

  • @barrydysert2974
    @barrydysert2974 Před 3 měsíci

    😊😊😊🙏💜⚡

  • @user-et4fb7yu9e
    @user-et4fb7yu9e Před 4 měsíci

    Mark CEN CA 😂

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Před 4 měsíci

      Rowe THE GALAXY😃