If these 3 spent 10 years plus training together, they'd be able to destroy the whole Jedi order themselves while discussing plans to destroy the sith and preparing lunch for a post order 66 plan B party
This what if is one of my favorites. It’s an alternate storyline that makes a whole lot of sense. I could see Yoda arriving at Ahch-To thinking that he would still be grandmaster only for the three to tell him that that is no longer a possibility since under his leadership, the Jedi became complacent, arrogant, and ended up becoming puppets of the senate, leading to their near extinction. They would show him scores of evidence over the last few decades where their reluctance to trust in the will of the force cost them thousands of Jedi. In his wisdom, Yoda would reluctantly step aside as he would realize that they were right. I would love for Disney to do Star Wars what if? Episodes. They would be way better than the Marvel ones.
@@thestarwarsgalaxy Disney wouldn't do it. Dave Filoni on the other hand... Here's the name i would suggest: "Star wars: A World Between Worlds" a look into a different world, from a certain point of view. It would be told from either the Force Priestess or Qui-Gon Jinn. It would be a way to look at non-cannon stories like "What If?" and Legends material. The show's only source of cannon would be that the future is always in motion and that while theses stories are not what happened in this universe, but could have happened, from a _Certain point of view._
Disney wouldn't do it. Dave Filoni on the other hand... Here's the name i would suggest: "Star wars: A World Between Worlds" a look into a different world, from a certain point of view. It would be told from either the Force Priestess or Qui-Gon Jinn. It would be a way to look at non-cannon stories like "What If?" and Legengs material. The show's only souce of cannon would be that the future is always in motion and that while these's stories are not what happened in this universe, but could have happened, _from a Certain point of view._
As always, I hope you enjoy! I’m still working on my craft with these, but I certainly enjoy them. Please consider leaving a like and subscribing, as it really helps this daily Star Wars community grow!
Love your premises. Don't know if you do prereads/read from script or not, but they help getting the right cadence. Like you've got pauses in the oddest spaces, and heavy intake breaths. Not being mean, just maybe no one's brought it up.
Force choke is a dark side specific ability (hence why cannon Anakin could do so even before completely falling). The light and dark are different from the balance where the dark is inherently imbalance and the light allied but not the balance. To understand what the balance is, you have to throw off the western idea if what light and dark good and evil is because the force is based on Taoism which is all about internal balance. If you can understand this point it will make your stories far more interesting and less one dimensional.
Oh the last few bits. You misunderstand, that the Will of the Force does not in any way, involve or approve of the Dark Side, and balance is not literal 50/50 good evil. When there are only force users who listen to the will of the Force, it is like a calm pool, but when a darksider vies for power, the Dark Side turns the balance in the Force into a stormy sea ~ for example; During the Vlone Wars, there was never so much death and violence, and thus the Dark Side was never stronger, and thus the Force was out of balance.
I think when Qui dont die and he had train Anakin. Anakin would never become evil. Qui Gon could fill the father role papls and use to trick anakin. With Qui Gon, Obi Wan and Anakin the Sith had it also harder... Also a Anakin trained by Qui Gon would be a beast...
Why? Nothing would change. Palpatine would still find him and lore him with the possibility of control over mortality. Everything about the clone wars and Anakin played right into his hand. Plus, Qui Gon admitted in the Phantom Menace that Obi Wan (a padawan) is wiser than he, meaning he knows he's reckless. This revisionist, ego stroking, clone wars fan fiction stuff wouldn't change anything.
jedi sending obi wan alone hey everyone its me the jedi council and welcome to jackass, today we are going to send obi wan alone to fight against someone a ex member labeled as a sith lord
This all reminds me of that massive 3 part rewrite of the prequals from years ago. It was something that stuck with me to this day. I love the whole concept of these smaller and more focused ideas though. Keep up the good work I'm here for the long haul. Would love a part 2!
I really enjoy your style of "What If" Star Wars. So many people would opt out to follow the same story beats and patterns as the films, but you've been really turning that on its head
Okay this was very good we definitely need to do a part 2 I would like it should be a little bit longer but it was very good I did enjoy the story keep up the good work and May the force be with you
I absolutely despise how Disney made Achtoo the site of the first jedi temple , the first jedi temple was on Tython !!!!! I seriously wish that Disney would stop F'ing with the story that we all love .
Even without a part 2 on this if there was one to exist the balance is most certainly the way to go. This by far is one of my favorite of your stories. Thank you for all your hard work
I’m still surprised to not have seen a video on Obi-wan training Asoka if Qui-Gon lived. I honestly think Asoka would’ve become evil or maybe the same because Qui-Gon still would’ve been there to guide Obi-wan in his training of Asoka.
This one was really good, and very original. I've just come up with another story idea. What if Vader found out about Leia shortly after she was born, took her from the Organas and raised her as his Sith apprentice, while not finding out about Luke until around the time he found out about him in canon? When Obi-wan found out that Vader had found Leia, would he stay in hiding on Tatooine and leave Luke with Owen and Beru, or would he take Luke with him to Dagobah to raise him as a Jedi with Yoda's help?
Very Impressive what if story! This or anything else would've been better than how it all turned out in canon for Qui-Gon and Anakin. The old Jedi order really was flawed and Palpatine was sorta using that to his advantage to manipulate Anakin easily little by little during the clone war HE set up himself.
Why? Nothing would change. Palpatine would still find him and lore him with the possibility of control over mortality. Everything about the clone wars and Anakin played right into his hand. Plus, Qui Gon admitted in the Phantom Menace that Obi Wan (a padawan) is wiser than he, meaning he knows he's reckless. This revisionist, ego stroking, clone wars fan fiction stuff wouldn't change anything.
@@ThreadBareHope1234 Some things WOULD have changed! Qui-Gon would've taught Anakin way better than Obi-Wan did cause in canon he developed more of a father & son bonding towards Anakin when they were on Tatooine but Obi-Wan was just way too strict on him about the damn rules of the council which were very wrong and they were too corrupted by the politics of the senate. Qui-Gon would've took Anakin away from all that and taught and raised him very well and he never would've let Palpatine manipulate him towards the dark side so easily as he did in canon.
Correct me if I miss understood the movies but the issue with sidious is that it's actually what he want to be killed in the movies, and the only reason for this that I understood, since he's litterally always asking to the Jedi to kill him, is that he would pocess the spirit of the one that kill him...
Excellent video. As a fellow voice actor, a piece of advice I would say would be just to take your time when recording and just remember to breathe. Sounds silly but it gets easier the more you do it. Can’t wait to see where this channel goes 🙂 subbed 👍
Do you have a discord? I think there is a real demand for more what if scenarios and think tanking them through one place with would be awesome for the channel's growth!
Great fan fiction, would've been enzt level if dooku were truly pulling the strings all along and used anakin to rid the galaxy of Palpatine only so he could take his place as a sith lord
Part 2 of 3 needed for this story to become complete. But there's so much more opportunity for exploration. With the jedi destroyed, the Republic and the separatists weakened it's possible for storylines involving the chis ascendency, the grysk and the ssi ruu as well as the yuuzhan vong. In fact episodes 1 thru 3 are the set up with episodes 4 thru 8 you could add the ssi ruu, grysk and yuuzhan vong. This series has potential to be epic. Please use your talents to make it so. Kind regards from Daniel Harman.
I'm only half way through and my concern revolves around Sidious not knowing about Anakin, that was the biggest thing and why Maul was sent to Naboo, as his goal was to have Maul kill Qui Gon and Obi Wan, retrieve Anakin, and make him his apprentice. Idk, just threw me off in story, but it's still good nonetheless.
Qui Gon always followed the will of the Force. The Force deemed the Jedi to be corrupt due to them following politicians. Qui Gon will follow the Will of the Force even if it means making hard decisions.
Honestly, not a huge fan of this one. It’s not bad, but I don’t feel a good connection to it either. Even though I understand the exchange of quiet gone for Obi-Wan, and all that. I’m more of a fan of when people like use more obscure stuff for hidden Jedi areas instead of always using either Achto Lothal or Tython. Also, I feel like the clone wars was kind of just glossed over because can you imagine the civilian death toll that actually occurs I would’ve preferred if they created like a third faction or even just had a conversation on the sadness that would be the casualties. Also, the last little bit made it seem like they were planning to kill off the Jedi if they won the war. So yeah I’m not a huge fan of this Dooku, Qui-Gon and Anakin. Don’t get me wrong I do believe they could be become strong enough to take on CDS, as in balance themselves in the force, but the idea of the Jedai, I believe that’s how it’s spelled, is also a failed system. Honestly, I’d love to see a story done. Where may be a survivor of the purge decided to not create a new order, but would just establish a line of succession train a Padawan, when that padawans a knight set them loose on the galaxy to find their own Padawan. Having them act like vigilantes, sort of like the bat family instead of an established position with the republic. Anyway, as long as you’re having fun making these videos, that’s all that matters so have a great day.
I can see your point. Anakin may have reached his full potential thanks to Qui Gon and Dooku but for his first real battle to be Palpatine and his army? Anakin should have had some actual challenges to test his character and abilities. I am pretty sure both Qui Gon and Count Dooku especially did everything in their power to train Anakin.
Dooku: Kill him Anakin, kill him now!
Sidious: HEY THAT’S MY LINE!?!?!?
Dooku: Not in this timeline, DEW IT!!!😂😂😂
You have 65 likes.
Execute Order 65. Dew it!
@@pieceofschmidtgamer let's keep it that way
😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Palpatine: Ironic
If these 3 spent 10 years plus training together, they'd be able to destroy the whole Jedi order themselves while discussing plans to destroy the sith and preparing lunch for a post order 66 plan B party
I need a comic of this now !!!
This what if is one of my favorites. It’s an alternate storyline that makes a whole lot of sense. I could see Yoda arriving at Ahch-To thinking that he would still be grandmaster only for the three to tell him that that is no longer a possibility since under his leadership, the Jedi became complacent, arrogant, and ended up becoming puppets of the senate, leading to their near extinction. They would show him scores of evidence over the last few decades where their reluctance to trust in the will of the force cost them thousands of Jedi. In his wisdom, Yoda would reluctantly step aside as he would realize that they were right. I would love for Disney to do Star Wars what if? Episodes. They would be way better than the Marvel ones.
A Star Wars WHAT IF show on Disney+ would be amazing!!! And than your for listening!
@@thestarwarsgalaxy Disney wouldn't do it. Dave Filoni on the other hand...
Here's the name i would suggest: "Star wars: A World Between Worlds" a look into a different world, from a certain point of view. It would be told from either the Force Priestess or Qui-Gon Jinn. It would be a way to look at non-cannon stories like "What If?" and Legends material. The show's only source of cannon would be that the future is always in motion and that while theses stories are not what happened in this universe, but could have happened, from a _Certain point of view._
yessssssssss @@zfilms4858
Definitely need a part 2 about anakin and padme....not enough content on their relationship
Agreed, didn’t know how to integrate her once Anakin was taken away
@@thestarwarsgalaxy geanosis
@@thestarwarsgalaxyPls do a part 2!
I agree
17:43 Even if you're Palpatine you DO NOT enter a hallway with a Skywalker.
Hahaha
True
Must do a part two! I love Qui-Gon lives AUs. Kinda sad Obi is gone. I love where Qui- Gon survives and becomes a father figure to Anakin
They need to make a Star Wars “What If” series. It would be epic.
Disney wouldn't do it. Dave Filoni on the other hand...
Here's the name i would suggest: "Star wars: A World Between Worlds" a look into a different world, from a certain point of view. It would be told from either the Force Priestess or Qui-Gon Jinn. It would be a way to look at non-cannon stories like "What If?" and Legengs material. The show's only souce of cannon would be that the future is always in motion and that while these's stories are not what happened in this universe, but could have happened, _from a Certain point of view._
I've been saying that since marvel what if got announced a star wars version would be amazing
As always, I hope you enjoy! I’m still working on my craft with these, but I certainly enjoy them. Please consider leaving a like and subscribing, as it really helps this daily Star Wars community grow!
Love your premises. Don't know if you do prereads/read from script or not, but they help getting the right cadence. Like you've got pauses in the oddest spaces, and heavy intake breaths. Not being mean, just maybe no one's brought it up.
Yeah for sure, getting the voice down for the full 20 minutes is tough but definitely working on it!
Force choke is a dark side specific ability (hence why cannon Anakin could do so even before completely falling). The light and dark are different from the balance where the dark is inherently imbalance and the light allied but not the balance. To understand what the balance is, you have to throw off the western idea if what light and dark good and evil is because the force is based on Taoism which is all about internal balance. If you can understand this point it will make your stories far more interesting and less one dimensional.
Oh the last few bits. You misunderstand, that the Will of the Force does not in any way, involve or approve of the Dark Side, and balance is not literal 50/50 good evil. When there are only force users who listen to the will of the Force, it is like a calm pool, but when a darksider vies for power, the Dark Side turns the balance in the Force into a stormy sea ~ for example; During the Vlone Wars, there was never so much death and violence, and thus the Dark Side was never stronger, and thus the Force was out of balance.
I like the fresh takes in these fan fics. It feels more open and less, "It must follow these points". Keep going.
That’s great to hear! I will definitely keep going
@@thestarwarsgalaxy Keep going I like your fan-fics more than Star Wars Theory
I think when Qui dont die and he had train Anakin. Anakin would never become evil. Qui Gon could fill the father role papls and use to trick anakin.
With Qui Gon, Obi Wan and Anakin the Sith had it also harder...
Also a Anakin trained by Qui Gon would be a beast...
One of my favourite “what if’s” by far, hands down absolutely beautiful masterpiece.
That’s amazing to hear, truly. Thank you
I like Dooku and Qui-Gon rising Anakin and balancing the force.
Love Dooku as a character, always happy to put him in these
Why? Nothing would change. Palpatine would still find him and lore him with the possibility of control over mortality. Everything about the clone wars and Anakin played right into his hand. Plus, Qui Gon admitted in the Phantom Menace that Obi Wan (a padawan) is wiser than he, meaning he knows he's reckless. This revisionist, ego stroking, clone wars fan fiction stuff wouldn't change anything.
@@ThreadBareHope1234 oh my god bro please go outside why are you yelling lmfao
jedi sending obi wan alone
hey everyone its me the jedi council and welcome to jackass, today we are going to send obi wan alone to fight against someone a ex member labeled as a sith lord
I do wonder what if anakin was a politician of tatoonie and the jedi found him to have the same medicorian count as in cannon.
Why are these stories always killing me! 😭
this is best star wars fan story i ever heard this chanel deserves more subscribers👍👍👍👍
If Qui-gon killed Maul he would never leave Shmi as a slave.
The ending gave me a chuckle, but overall good fanfic!
Hahaha good to hear
This all reminds me of that massive 3 part rewrite of the prequals from years ago. It was something that stuck with me to this day. I love the whole concept of these smaller and more focused ideas though. Keep up the good work I'm here for the long haul. Would love a part 2!
where is that?
I really enjoy your style of "What If" Star Wars. So many people would opt out to follow the same story beats and patterns as the films, but you've been really turning that on its head
These stories are awesome, I listne to them like audio books 🔥
Okay this was very good we definitely need to do a part 2 I would like it should be a little bit longer but it was very good I did enjoy the story keep up the good work and May the force be with you
I absolutely despise how Disney made Achtoo the site of the first jedi temple , the first jedi temple was on Tython !!!!!
I seriously wish that Disney would stop F'ing with the story that we all love .
Even without a part 2 on this if there was one to exist the balance is most certainly the way to go. This by far is one of my favorite of your stories. Thank you for all your hard work
Amazing video!! Your channel is definitely underrated
Thank you!!!!
Qui- on kicks ass!😃🤗😋
Dooku did the roll reversal on Palpatine here in this fan fiction #Dew_IT👏🔥
20:04 Very cathartic. xD
I’m still surprised to not have seen a video on Obi-wan training Asoka if Qui-Gon lived. I honestly think Asoka would’ve become evil or maybe the same because Qui-Gon still would’ve been there to guide Obi-wan in his training of Asoka.
what
This one was really good, and very original. I've just come up with another story idea. What if Vader found out about Leia shortly after she was born, took her from the Organas and raised her as his Sith apprentice, while not finding out about Luke until around the time he found out about him in canon? When Obi-wan found out that Vader had found Leia, would he stay in hiding on Tatooine and leave Luke with Owen and Beru, or would he take Luke with him to Dagobah to raise him as a Jedi with Yoda's help?
Very Impressive what if story! This or anything else would've been better than how it all turned out in canon for Qui-Gon and Anakin.
The old Jedi order really was flawed and Palpatine was sorta using that to his advantage to manipulate Anakin easily little by little during the clone war HE set up himself.
Why? Nothing would change. Palpatine would still find him and lore him with the possibility of control over mortality. Everything about the clone wars and Anakin played right into his hand. Plus, Qui Gon admitted in the Phantom Menace that Obi Wan (a padawan) is wiser than he, meaning he knows he's reckless. This revisionist, ego stroking, clone wars fan fiction stuff wouldn't change anything.
@@ThreadBareHope1234 Some things WOULD have changed! Qui-Gon would've taught Anakin way better than Obi-Wan did cause in canon he developed more of a father & son bonding towards Anakin when they were on Tatooine but Obi-Wan was just way too strict on him about the damn rules of the council which were very wrong and they were too corrupted by the politics of the senate. Qui-Gon would've took Anakin away from all that and taught and raised him very well and he never would've let Palpatine manipulate him towards the dark side so easily as he did in canon.
Correct me if I miss understood the movies but the issue with sidious is that it's actually what he want to be killed in the movies, and the only reason for this that I understood, since he's litterally always asking to the Jedi to kill him, is that he would pocess the spirit of the one that kill him...
I do believe this does need a part two
Cool story I'm very much looking forward to seeing your next part of this video series. Kind regards from Daniel Harman.
Don’t forget my what of recommendation, mr galaxy.
Pls cause I really want to see it.
Rigjt you’ve already forgotten about it and disregarded it haven’t you, mr galaxy.
Please complete this series. Kind regards from Daniel Harman.
Excellent video.
As a fellow voice actor, a piece of advice I would say would be just to take your time when recording and just remember to breathe. Sounds silly but it gets easier the more you do it.
Can’t wait to see where this channel goes 🙂 subbed 👍
Do you have a discord? I think there is a real demand for more what if scenarios and think tanking them through one place with would be awesome for the channel's growth!
I’ll look into creating one tonight!
I also found out if qui gon Jin killed darth maul order 66 would have happened sooner
Great fan fiction, would've been enzt level if dooku were truly pulling the strings all along and used anakin to rid the galaxy of Palpatine only so he could take his place as a sith lord
Please do a part 2 to this
Nice fan fic, keep it up
Very interesting story.
Ah so Gray Jedi. They created a Gray Jedi order.
That, or Je’Dii from legends
Holy shit I need to see this as a movie....
Great job!
Thanks!!!!!
this is amazing !
Thank you!!!
Very nice video , greetings from Germany , of course i give sub and a like, keep up the good work 😀
Happy to hear it! Greetings
DO IT! Part 2 please
Part 2 of 3 needed for this story to become complete. But there's so much more opportunity for exploration. With the jedi destroyed, the Republic and the separatists weakened it's possible for storylines involving the chis ascendency, the grysk and the ssi ruu as well as the yuuzhan vong. In fact episodes 1 thru 3 are the set up with episodes 4 thru 8 you could add the ssi ruu, grysk and yuuzhan vong. This series has potential to be epic. Please use your talents to make it so. Kind regards from Daniel Harman.
I know you didn’t just tie the frikin sequels into this 😭💀
Very well done thank you
Thank you too!
And yes part 2 please
Wasn't the first Jedi Temple on Tython, not Ach-to?
New canon has it as Ach-To
But wouldn’t that mean dooku’s saber would be white bc he’s balanced, it’d probably stay blue if anything
I love this theory
My theory on the Temple on Achtu is that it was created by the force not the Jedi because there homeworld is Tython.
Yes, go get em!😄🤗
Love this it awesome
Thank you!!!
I don’t know if anyone could’ve hidden Anakin.
What if Anikin took Padme and went into hiding after finding out Palpatine was Sidious.
Good video
Glad you enjoyed!
What if anakin didn't take a seat?
Search up “fantasy folklore” on CZcams. Excellent channel who just made a great video on that exact topic!
Please make part 2
Loved it
I loved this
Great to hear thank you!
Loved it, please do a Jedi and Sith Leia
Yeah have Sith Leia fall in love with a Jedi!😁☺
Part 2 please
What if Grievous had a ysalamiri tank built into him?
Oooh I might make a whole video on ysalamari and include something like this
Tank droid!😄🤗
Do a part 2
That’s great
Can you please create a part two
Do part 2
I keep having to change volume in my video queue, each channel has completely different volume levels. Your mouth is like 1mm from the mic lol.
9:46 why would dooku have a red saber if he hadn’t turn to the dark side .
Part 2
Pt 2
Why don't your what ifs ever use the abandoned Jedi Training Temple on Dantooine?
An why would they send a padawan obi to Naboo by himself
Why not do a video of what would happen if the Jedi council found out about Anakin killing the Tusken Raiders for killing his mother?
Dooku training on Ach-to with Qui-gon and Anakin for years? He should be able to defeat Sidious, he is a great duelist no?
I'm only half way through and my concern revolves around Sidious not knowing about Anakin, that was the biggest thing and why Maul was sent to Naboo, as his goal was to have Maul kill Qui Gon and Obi Wan, retrieve Anakin, and make him his apprentice.
Idk, just threw me off in story, but it's still good nonetheless.
But without obiwan the Jedi would not have found out about kamino
And without Dooku, Kamino would still be in the archive
@@JTruong3rd his version is so inconsistent
he shoud have gone to ddoku at the beginning it self grey jedi hmmmmm
This is unrealistic the trio would not want the Jedi to die and be glad . They would have defended the Jedi , they would be Jedis not in the middle
Qui Gon always followed the will of the Force. The Force deemed the Jedi to be corrupt due to them following politicians. Qui Gon will follow the Will of the Force even if it means making hard decisions.
Honestly, not a huge fan of this one. It’s not bad, but I don’t feel a good connection to it either. Even though I understand the exchange of quiet gone for Obi-Wan, and all that. I’m more of a fan of when people like use more obscure stuff for hidden Jedi areas instead of always using either Achto Lothal or Tython. Also, I feel like the clone wars was kind of just glossed over because can you imagine the civilian death toll that actually occurs I would’ve preferred if they created like a third faction or even just had a conversation on the sadness that would be the casualties. Also, the last little bit made it seem like they were planning to kill off the Jedi if they won the war. So yeah I’m not a huge fan of this Dooku, Qui-Gon and Anakin.
Don’t get me wrong I do believe they could be become strong enough to take on CDS, as in balance themselves in the force, but the idea of the Jedai, I believe that’s how it’s spelled, is also a failed system. Honestly, I’d love to see a story done. Where may be a survivor of the purge decided to not create a new order, but would just establish a line of succession train a Padawan, when that padawans a knight set them loose on the galaxy to find their own Padawan. Having them act like vigilantes, sort of like the bat family instead of an established position with the republic. Anyway, as long as you’re having fun making these videos, that’s all that matters so have a great day.
I can see your point. Anakin may have reached his full potential thanks to Qui Gon and Dooku but for his first real battle to be Palpatine and his army? Anakin should have had some actual challenges to test his character and abilities. I am pretty sure both Qui Gon and Count Dooku especially did everything in their power to train Anakin.
The Dooku downplaying here is crazy. If Dooku got stronger then he'd beat palps he already is a better duelist than him.
EDITING. Do it.
Chill
What if rey was a skywalker
This would also Require that Qui gon survives his duel with Maul on Naboo
So we not gonna talk about how I heard this guys voice stop at times, and even heard him gulp down his salvia? Very unprofessional.
“Very unprofessional” I’m making Star Wars videos in my room and recorded on my phone during this. It was as unprofessional as it gets lmfao