This resounds with me. Leave the rest to imagination; what is the world without mystery and enigmatic vistas of the mind? Knowing is good however, it affords us the luxury of dreaming about the uknowable.
@@SonnyGTA A liberated Haiku is permitted variant forms. Sometimes 4 0r 6 is required to complete the thought or scene intended. People forget there are other rules in Haiku such as kigo which are considered more important than 5 7 5. Thank you for pointing out my error.
Enjoyed your analysis of this classic haiku poem. Heres is my haiku tribute to Bashō,s frog with commentary by the late Jane Reichold who also considered my poem among her top 10 haiku of all time. I was humbled and honored. Bashō,s frog four hundred years of ripples “At first the idea of picking only 10 of my favorite haiku seemed a rather daunting task. How could I review all the haiku I have read in my life and decide that there were only 10 that were outstanding? Then realized I was already getting a steady stream of excellent haiku day by day through the AHA forum. The puns and write-offs based on Basho's most famous haiku are so numerous I would have said that nothing new could be said with this method, but here Al Fogel proved me wrong. Perhaps part of my delight in this haiku lies in the fact that I agree with him. Here he is saying one thing about realism-ripples are on a pond after a frog jumps in, but because it refers back to Basho and his famous haiku, he is also saying something about the haiku and authors who have followed him. We, and our work, are just ripples while Basho holds the honor of inventing the idea of "the sound of a frog leaping is the sound of water". As haiku spreads around the world, making ripples in more and larger ponds, its ripples are wider-including us all. But his last word reminds us all that we are only ripples and our lives are that ephemeral. It will be the frogs that will remain”. - -Jane Reichhold All love in isolation from Miami Beach, Florida -Al
I like how the guest speaker said people around the world are writing "short poems they call haiku." I agree with his statement for about 90% of English-language haiku online.
I am watching this because of the anime Cider no You ni Kotoba ga Wakiagaru not because I have to study it, but because I am actually interested in learning more about it.
Now this is content I truly appreciate! After learning more about Haiku* and listening to "Silver" written by a British Author sounded Great! Regarding rhyming ... It was said it's easy on the ear and used in songs, this is the style I've used but there is MORE in this world! {SMILE} 💚*🙏🏼
In fact you don't count syllables at all. That's the problem, what you are counting in Japanese are "on" or translated: "mora", not syllables. And even if one would count mora it wouldn't make any sense at all. But in Japanese you do count "on".
Is my understanding correct thast Haiku was derived from an ancient poetic form called Renga? If so, then Renga is composed of multiple "Haikus?" Renga sounds like an interesting format. It seems to stay true to the minimalist format.
+-CFW. Magic- Thanks for the reply. Is there a limit on the amount of syllables allowed for those two lines? I'm interested in minimalist poetry that incorporates nature in it's themes to explore the human condition. Any advice or ideas? Thanks again.
I received an A for my Haiku back in college and laughed cause I didn't even know I was a poet. That was the only elective course I took in poetry. Not only in Japanese culture do they think beauty lies in the things left unsaid. Most Asian countries are like that, except for that is reason why there are so many misunderstandings and delusional lies to yourself. Perhaps with the Asians if things left unsaid, the intuition intelligence develops higher IQ, but that is based on your intelligent IQ intuition in the first place, and you could be delusional in your mind thinking one way when things are left unsaid. So as a Westener, I have both understanding IQ in things left unsaid(read between the lines), but summarizes that it is a bunch of garbage that there's beauty lies in things left unsaid cause it must be spoken outloud to be meaningful.
I have a difficult time accepting the translation... "Old pond!" Why would he declare it? The particle "Ya" can also be translated as "and" or "such things". Wouldn't it make more sense for the translation to be: Old pond and a diving frog- water's sound.
6:00 "In Japanese rhymes are used in idioms, proverbs, slogans and" - I think he meant "catch-phrases" He didn't mention songs, so is it common for Japanese music to not ryhme?
I had high hopes at the beginning of the video. I thought it would describe haiku accurately. Then, it describes the American bastardization of haiku as 5-7-5 syllables. FAIL! It's true that's what us Americans are exposed to in our schools under the name of "haiku," but 17 syllables is way too long to be considered a true haiku in the spirit of Japanese haiku. In English, haiku should be 12 syllables or less.
In Japanese culture, beauty lies in things left unsaid... That's so true.
Now this opens a whole new perspective on romantce in anime.
>go to haiku competition
>submit blank paper
>win
Like "Daga otoko da" segment in Steins Gate anime.😂
This resounds with me. Leave the rest to imagination; what is the world without mystery and enigmatic vistas of the mind? Knowing is good however, it affords us the luxury of dreaming about the uknowable.
@@backrooms3907 I agree, it's the words one never gets a chance to utter, that leave the deepest emotional scars
Sitting under a tree
Summer breeze -------
Calm and tranquility.
I appreciate
your words written in haiku
love the calmness too
That was 6-3-6
A Samurai tale
Fear me not little rabbit
Lets share this quiet spring
Quaint
Fail. 5, 7, 5. Yours was 5, 7, 6
@@SonnyGTA A liberated Haiku is permitted variant forms. Sometimes 4 0r 6 is required to complete the thought or scene intended. People forget there are other rules in Haiku such as kigo which are considered more important than 5 7 5. Thank you for pointing out my error.
Enjoyed your analysis of this classic haiku poem.
Heres is my haiku tribute to Bashō,s frog with commentary by the late Jane Reichold who also considered my poem among her top 10 haiku of all time. I was humbled and honored.
Bashō,s frog
four hundred years
of ripples
“At first the idea of picking only 10 of my favorite haiku seemed a rather daunting task. How could I review all the haiku I have read in my life and decide that there were only 10 that were outstanding? Then realized I was already getting a steady stream of excellent haiku day by day through the AHA
forum.
The puns and write-offs based on Basho's most famous haiku are so
numerous I would have said that nothing new could be said with this
method, but here Al Fogel proved me wrong. Perhaps part of my delight in this haiku lies in the fact that I agree with him. Here he is saying one thing
about realism-ripples are on a pond after a frog jumps in, but because it refers back to Basho and his famous haiku, he is also saying something about the haiku and authors who have followed him. We, and our work, are just ripples while Basho holds the honor of inventing the idea of "the
sound of a frog leaping is the sound of water".
As haiku spreads around the world, making ripples in more and larger ponds, its ripples are wider-including us all. But his last word reminds us all that we are only ripples and our lives are that ephemeral. It will be the frogs that will remain”.
- -Jane Reichhold
All love in isolation from Miami Beach, Florida
-Al
I like how the guest speaker said people around the world are writing "short poems they call haiku." I agree with his statement for about 90% of English-language haiku online.
Two plus two is four
Minus one is
Three quick math
Skiri papappapap
👍😝
This is the best CZcams comment of all times 😭😭😭🙏🏾
2+2=10 if 1=2.5
Deep in her burrow
Rabbit sleeps she dreams of spring
and tasty flowers
Hearing this two guys talking is the most satisfying thing ever.
I loved that. So nice. Life is sorta ugly nowadays so it's nice to have a moment.
this was so wonderful to listen
I agree. I was saddened when it came to an abrupt end.
his forge has grown cold
his hammers his tongs in their place
the cherry trees call
What a great video about Haiku!!!
I like to listen it time after time! :) and again!
she is beautiful
this whisperer to magpies
she wore blue today
These Men of culture
So full of knowledge, insight
Indeed, full of wind
Magnificent.
Finally someone
Figured out how to write these
With the correct count
Quiet prayers sent there
Snows of the high Himalaya
shelter ancient gods
I love the narrator at the first part ^-^
Lonesome coyote
In his den safe from the storm.
Mother come home soon
I am watching this because of the anime Cider no You ni Kotoba ga Wakiagaru not because I have to study it, but because I am actually interested in learning more about it.
So desu ne.
That man brought me here
He hosted a show called YIAY
He has 3 dogs too
What show is this? I can watch these guys talk for a long time.
ありがとうございます。
Ghost of Tsushima brought me here :D
Same lol
Me too bro
Lo Mongols cometh forth
Summer breeze gently beckons
Scarlet rain smears us both
@@Ravenaxis thats amazing man
@@christianmcbrearty Thanks! :3
Hanami in spring
Reminds me of her
Cloudy evening of April fools
All the birds of Eden
Being left unnamed, desolate
Mourn Adam, sing no more
Superb. The stars are bright,
They carry the dreams of children,
Dreams shine the night.
I'm from Romania. Beautiful Haiku you wrote. Have a nice day.
FAIL. Haikus are 5,7,5. Yours was 6, 8, 6.
I know haiku from jacksfilms
evita dwipayana OMG me too, i immediately search it after wathcing jacksfilm 😂
me too
the one with guy who made the kermit singing songs about... umm stuff
When the first fire burned-----
A flame in our hearts awoke
Now an inferno
Ended here, how
Know I don't
yet glad am I
because I did
Now this is content I truly appreciate! After learning more about Haiku* and listening to "Silver" written by a British Author sounded Great! Regarding rhyming ...
It was said it's easy on the ear and used in songs, this is the style I've used but there is MORE in this world!
{SMILE} 💚*🙏🏼
The most famous frog in history, millions of people have told about her.
A beautiful game
A samurai tale
Brought us here
In fact you don't count syllables at all. That's the problem, what you are counting in Japanese are "on" or translated: "mora", not syllables. And even if one would count mora it wouldn't make any sense at all.
But in Japanese you do count "on".
Is my understanding correct thast Haiku was derived from an ancient poetic form called Renga? If so, then Renga is composed of multiple "Haikus?" Renga sounds like an interesting format. It seems to stay true to the minimalist format.
+Otsu's Pyre Nope. Haiku is just the first stanza. The rest are two lines each.
+-CFW. Magic- Thanks for the reply. Is there a limit on the amount of syllables allowed for those two lines? I'm interested in minimalist poetry that incorporates nature in it's themes to explore the human condition. Any advice or ideas? Thanks again.
The "hokku" is the first part of a renga. This part later became its own form through poets Basho and ultimately Shiki.
it's snowing on mount fuji
he sounds like jeremy clarkson
Sleeping wealth
In the unloved child's heart
Remains hidden
Good one my friend, profound, of a grim reality, but a hope remains.
@@apemant Weak Flesh
Fights the Eternal Struggle
With Fragile Hope.
FAIL.
Yours was 3, 7, 4. Fail.
@@EBNall FAIL. yours was 3, 7 4.
Egg egg egg egg egg
Egg egg egg egg egg egg egg
Egg egg egg egg chair
you broke the egg on the chair...no birds will come from the broken egg and they will not nest in the tree cut down to make the chair
I've got tears in my eyes. How can such beauty be spoken?
I received an A for my Haiku back in college and laughed cause I didn't even know I was a poet. That was the only elective course I took in poetry. Not only in Japanese culture do they think beauty lies in the things left unsaid. Most Asian countries are like that, except for that is reason why there are so many misunderstandings and delusional lies to yourself. Perhaps with the Asians if things left unsaid, the intuition intelligence develops higher IQ, but that is based on your intelligent IQ intuition in the first place, and you could be delusional in your mind thinking one way when things are left unsaid. So as a Westener, I have both understanding IQ in things left unsaid(read between the lines), but summarizes that it is a bunch of garbage that there's beauty lies in things left unsaid cause it must be spoken outloud to be meaningful.
Very intresting i am haiku field resercher in pakistan i recently compltete my m.phil in pashto haiku
I need this white-haired sir to make videos of him reading poetry
Zer0's (from Borderlands) quotes brought me here
"Miniature literature" I'll use this.
the flowers tell the bear
take my forgiveness and go
hunger is not sin
The wind blows on Mighty
I hear the sea roars on shore
Nature is fascinating
you got the syllables wrong but A for effort
F. 5, 7, 5. Yours was 6, 7, 7
I have a difficult time accepting the translation... "Old pond!" Why would he declare it? The particle "Ya" can also be translated as "and" or "such things". Wouldn't it make more sense for the translation to be:
Old pond and
a diving frog-
water's sound.
Is that the guy who announces Japanology on NHK!? that has to be him! That’s the voice!
俳句に便利です
Haiku de MA.
Nieve dormida
despierta el deshielo
gota a gota.
I have to write a haiku of my own for a class assignment :) I love learning about Buddhism
these ancient spirits
haunt the high plains the grasslands
they cry for horses
along the post road
pistol in hand dark eyes bright
the highwayman waits
april fullers eyes
mike welch juniors coopers pies
ians rain drops cries
小学生の頃俳句で賞取ったことあるw
there is a heaven
horses fallen in war
remember only love
Very familiar to us.
very informative and short, I like it
I've written over 3000 Haikus
Perfect.
*sweet* yay i live haiku
cat on a red leash
a swallow scolds very loudly
blue door ends the scene
Jacksfilms song is my favourite haiku
A LOT of you here don’t know how to count syllables.
Midnight toads sit still
Waiting for the right moment
To belt out nice tunes.
I got to understand a lit bit more
yellow crane tower
sorcerer and his dragons
then came there a hero
A haiku poem
Is Five, seven and then five
Syllables that is
What's this show?
Flight of dragonflies
Is most pleasing to the eye.
Sun on azure wing.
6:00
"In Japanese rhymes are used in idioms, proverbs, slogans and" - I think he meant "catch-phrases"
He didn't mention songs, so is it common for Japanese music to not ryhme?
you have to basically be japanese to really understand it. Truth is even among the Kanji they use.
Or, you know, you have to know kanji and be able to appreciate poetry.
Nice.
Cyberpunk 2077 set me here. Had no idea what haiku was. Lol
Ghost of Tsushima brought me here ❤🙏
Pigghia u suli / abbruciti i manu / cauru cori.
My Haiku into Sicilian Dialect (Catch the sun / burn your hands / worm heart)
this video is made 22 days after I was born
Sharp eyes meet
Tension too high
Sowrd nip sheath ------------
What program is this?
日本人だけど切れ字とか聞いたことなかったし切れ痔かと思った
Rivers
Clouds
And
Trees
Guided
By
The
Breeze
Falling
Autumn
Leaves
YOGA
Not days, follow breath
To prolong presence on earth
Make life floral wreath.
To aqui tentando entender Apolo
have you ever tried和歌わか？
very great and interesting video.
however it feels like its being had by two npc's
there are kittens here
sleeping soundly in their beds
spice names everyone
Frunzele cântă
Vântul ce le mișcă lin.
Ochii mei zâmbesc.
De Eduard Mânecuță.
Acesta nu e un haiku, din câte am înțeles eu.
I love this
1:50
the background music and sound effects are annoying.
6:13.. Lol when he starts rapping all of a sudden.
kristens six roses
dr yanceys wife poses
spring street proposes
I caught a jumping frog
washed it in the ancient pond
to roast it for dinner
that's one too many syllables there bub
LIGHT/Quazijo Hirulislam
Though corpse is unknown
Flashing dark night for others
That was his cell phone.
haos words misconstrued
kristen prunier saint jude
springtime jodys mood
2020?
Haiku nice formet
A Haiku must make sense. Is it Haiku for one poem and Haiku(s) for two or mare
I learned earlier on this date that Haiku is referred as both singular and plural.
No "s" is required for quantity.
💚*🙏🏼
说可以告诉我我看了些啥子？
Five syllables here
Seven more here
Five more here -Happy now?
ren-chan haiku
I had high hopes at the beginning of the video. I thought it would describe haiku accurately. Then, it describes the American bastardization of haiku as 5-7-5 syllables. FAIL! It's true that's what us Americans are exposed to in our schools under the name of "haiku," but 17 syllables is way too long to be considered a true haiku in the spirit of Japanese haiku. In English, haiku should be 12 syllables or less.
Japanese man asking questions to an American man about one of japanese's culture..... Lmao