Queer. (Slam Poem.)
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- čas přidán 28. 08. 2024
- This is how I came out to my school. It is not my best work. It is raw, angry, and partially censored for the sake of my school. (It still caused a pretty big controversy, which pleased me quite a bit.)
I'd just like to say that if I could rewrite this poem, it would not be an angry one. It would be about love, and how it's our strongest weapon against the ignorant and hateful. I've learned. But at the time, this was exactly what I needed. I had just come to terms with my sexuality, and this meant coming to terms with all the hate I received (and would receive in the future) because of who I loved. It was a twisted concept, and I was hurt, angry, and confused, and this poem is a reflection of that.
If you're LGBT, or just an individual struggling with hatred of any kind, don't hate back. Don't do what I did and spread more hate. Spread love.
“Is it recording?”
“Yeah shut up.”
Dead.
I want to freaking meet this girl and then tell her she's my hero!
Meara McCrory right! she made me cry. everything she said was true
Meara McCrory samee
Meara McCrory SAMEEEE
To the girl who wrote this, sweetie youre doing great keep it up
"I've had to suffer for my love"
That hits way to close to home.
she reminds me of one of my friends. very good slam poem :) ( i am too gay but i am trans FtM)
I'm also trans ftm but straight
Beautiful
Måx Råe omg is this actually max omg youre amazing
You really misunderstood God jesus and what the bible stands for. God doesn't hate who he purposefully created. He loves us all equally. You really misunderstood but then again he still loves you unconditionally..
You say he loves all of us equally but why do so many Christians tells us we'll burn in hell and that god won't love a sinner like you?
@@pupisuci Because they're skimming through the pages, They're changing it for what they want it to be.
@@pupisuci I'm sorry that this happens to you. These people are a splinter group of Christians- Jesus taught us to love and respect everyone, and he wants everyone to be happy and be with people they love. Please don't hold the actions of the ignorant against an entire religion ❤
That made me cry. It was so really, raw and true
I mean Jesus didn't say anything about queers, but this was amazing and I loved it wowowoowow
yes, he did.
Samson Ray “man shall not lay with another man” or whatever fucking shit it is
@@ashlynnnfairchild3355 man shall not lay with boy like he lays with woman. It's saying pedophilia isnt okay nothing about gay people. Learn to read.
Å n x i ë t y ' s _ H ø s t Im pretty sure that’s a common misconception cause its been translated incorrectly
this was amazing, you're fierce.
this is soooo beautiful
before watching it I saw the description and damn I would be too scared to come out in front of so many people in a poem.
could you Please reply to this with the words to this in a *MIDDLE SCHOOL APPROPRIATE way because I wanna read this to come out at my 8th grade poetry slam next year.
*Meaning: No Swear words, vulgar words, etc.*
How about you take out the swear words yourself and censor it yourself, it's not her job to just let someone else attempt to read her poem. Make your own
This makes me want to be your best fucking friend
Woah 😍
"oh is it recording?"
"yeah. shut up"
"Mr.? said oh shit no"
omg you’re literally amazing I want to hug this girl
Excuse me for a moment but, SHE'S SO FREAKING CUTE
OMFG!!! THIS WAS PURE GOLD
Oof that Asian girl at 2:25 looks a bit too homophobic for me 😂
Brook Hult
Yeah, I see it. Just another homophobe needing to be educated.
I’m not easily offended but she just blamed all Christians for what happened to her previously. I’m part of the lgbtq+ community and I am a Christian. She also talked about equality and accepting everyone when she doesn’t accept all religions. Other than that I loved it.
She’s beautiful. Oh my goodness.
0:57 IM DYING 😂👏
I wish I could write like dat
YASSSSSSSS HONEY
Your so pretty :D
Keep fighting the good fight!
- Love, a warrior from the rc at CSU.
I hate talented people. It just makes me so disappointed in myself
"Is it recording?"
"Yeah. Shut up."
I think you were mis information ms.Shana , God doesn’t hate you and Jesus isn’t a hypocrite. They people tell you that are the hypocrites. They don’t follow how God wants us to treat others. Also, I’m happy your here, I’m pansexual and I’m Christian. I don’t think your going to hell for being gay.
Miss*
She is such an inspiration
Yea that line about Jesus, I totally understand if you said that in anger. I get it.
but please, lets get rid of this misconception that Jesus hates lgbtq+. Its just not true.
We know it's not true, we're just sick of so many ppl saying it
She’s adorable! And that poem was fucking amazing!
This is amazing
I should right a coming out poem and reads it too my school... My Catholic school... Lololol
No where in the Bible does it say being gay is wrong.
Hannah Green I know, God loves everyone no matter if their gay, straight, trans he loves everybody
That was a beautiful poem and god doesn’t hate I ik how u feel just be your self
Believe what you believe and don't Chang that thank you
I loved this :) Very well said!
I want this girl to go to my school and be my best friend!
What's you full name? I was hoping to use your piece and present it? I need your first and last name? Please and THANKYOU!!
I don’t think it was necessary to offend Christianity by saying stuff about Jesus especially when she obviously doesn’t know anything about Him considering the fact that He was a savior who loves every human being on Earth including her no matter what. I’m just saying you can’t offend people’s religion like that. If someone has told her the things she said then they are wrong too and should pick up a Bible and read about how God loves everyone because no matter what you would like to believe, it’s the honest truth and it’s not fair to just assume something about a religion or group of people without knowing anything about it. You can offend me all you want and you can call me ugly or an outcast I’ve heard it plenty of times. You can do that because I’m strong enough to get through it. I know I’m not perfect and I will never be, but don’t offend my religion or my savior. No matter what you want to believe, Jesus loves you and the “Christians” that tell you otherwise are wrong. He’s not a hypocrite. You only want to think that to give yourself a reason to be mad. Next time, just don’t call Jesus out. Call out whoever told you He didn’t love you, because they are the people that are wrong. He may not agree with you especially if your criticizing Him, but Jesus will always love you. Stop feeling bad for yourself and read a Bible. I was never truly happy until I found Him. I’m not trying to tell you how to live your life or that you have to be a Christian. I’m simply saying it’s worth a shot.
Merritt Peavler you can’t say fact if it isn’t a proven thing and you also can’t say it if you’re going to follow the word with an opinion
my thoughts exactly.
aw ish that’s good. wow. that was really really good
That is so brave! I would never in a million years have the guts to do that...
She came out to her entire school using this poem, bashing homophobia in the process. Truly amazing.
I LOVE HER
Wooo! You go girl!
Dude I love this
Oh my God I saw this poem and immediately sent it to my girlfriend
this is kickass?? #goals
YESSSSSS I WANT TO MEET HER
I loved this
this is fucking amazing
Great Poem.! LESBIANS FOREVER.!!!!
this is so rad!!
I need to preform this at my school. I’m queer and have been beaten down for it everyday
Im sorry did jesus actually say any thing about homosexuality dont hate my savior
Yes yes he did
leviticus 20:13
I'm sorry but the bible said nothing sooooooo....
Did he ever say anything??? Not being rude or anything but is he/she/it even real?? I have heared no proof of his existences other than this book called The Bible. But honestly who knows if any of that is true, I mean it is book. It could be rewriten many different times to be very different from were it stands now. Looking at it as if you don't have a religion makes it very interesting. Yes? (Sorry to be off topic)
Chase McCoy ‘he’ did
I fucken love this
Wow this was in Utah
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Good job
Dang she obviously hasn't talked to many strong Christians
Exactly!
I want to hug you guys, the LGBTQ+ community, but I can only do it through the pages I write about the characters in my books and the plotlines. That’s my hug to you. It’ll be on WattPad, trust me.
bruh.
love love love the beginning XDD
Omg I love her!!!
Bashing God was not needed. God loves everyone equally, Jesus was not a hypocrite and you really need to re-educate yourself on the Bible cause what you said was really unaccurate. God accepts and loves everyone for who are. He loves me, you, everyone. God is real.
Believe what you want, sweetie. Some people don't believe in God, some do. It's just their opinion, and you don't need to hate her for it. Thank you for your opinion, though. Those 5+ people agree.
Brianna.Lilid Hunty, I'm aware not everyone believes in God,I wasn't telling her to believe in God, just what she was saying about him wasn't true. I wasn't hating on her, I glad she's able to express her self. I was just telling her there was no need to bash christians. Thx for your opinion too, I just wanted to say what I was feeling, not trying to hurt/offend anyone.
To be honest, I do agree with you in a way after reading our conversation. Sometimes I go off at the mouth and see the negative parts about it. I apologize.
Brianna.Lilid It's fine.
Then why doesn't he fix all of the crap that's happening right now?
YES
Can you post the script? there are some parts I missed and it was amazing. Thanks!
that asian chick over there is giving you the GLARE. holy shit! see what i just did? i'm the poet of the century, cuz i just made a poem unintentionally.
Period sis
👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻🏳️🌈🏳️🌈🏳️🌈🏳️🌈🏳️🌈👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Yaaas I love thisssss
Good job Shauna
I LOVE THIS SO MUCHHH
I want to be her friend
I’m not queer or anything but DAMN. 😱😱
she even said if you get offended, you get offended way to easily. but what she said about god only loving white rich people, i have to admit, that was rude.
truth
this is fuckin amazing
Loud loud loud
You rock
where was this at? I live in utah i saw the utes flag
Honey that was I can’t describe it it’s was Phenomenal
Sorry if my using honey is offensive and or triggering
Loooooooove it 😘
Idc wtf the poem is about, but... Holy fuck that poem rhymed and shined!
I would love to do your poem in my collage class if you would let me ?
:/ she should've memorized it.
It prob was a last minute thing and she's just a kid chill out
Holy shit COOL
YES BITCH GET IT I LOVE THISJXKXKCK
So good, but before bring jesus into this stuff, read his story and educate yourself-being gay was not a sin and jesus helped the people who were shunned. It's a massive misconception that many "Christians" also make. You are talented though, just wanted to bring more awareness to this issue
Can I meet her!?
This is amazing 😂
Well done! :)
Awesome job :)
I'm sorry but, your camera angle is a sin. This is great tbh
1:22 Hey i'm Caucasian, rich, and strait but i dont have a problem with gays but now i got a problem with you
Why?
Can I ask what queer means I know he lgbt and support it but I don’t know what queer means
This is really good. But the Jesus part was too far. I still love it
Me and my friend are dating and we are both girls
Ayyy nice! Good for you! ❤
Omg beaut.
Am going to be true am bisexual and I don't care that I get hate
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