How To Write A Poem That Rhymes-Tutorial
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- čas přidán 15. 03. 2018
- In this video, I tel you how to write a poem that rhymes. It is actually really easy to write a rhyming poem, and I show you my method for finding rhyming words in a matter of seconds. Once you have figured out your rhyming words, it is simply a matter of writing some contextual sentences that make sense and tell a short story!
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Her smile was like grace
Though it cannot be replaced.
Her laughter so loud
It echoed through the crowd.
Her perfume scent so sweet
Without it I feel incomplete.
Her presence was warm
Now gone, we’re left to mourn.
It was a Friday
She sat on her driveway.
Tears ran down her cheeks
writing a letter, she let her heart speak.
feeling all alone
She felt her world was a cyclone.
A beautiful soul
her heart with a hole.
She hid her depression
with no expression.
She hid her sadness
from all this madness.
She was hurting
Convinced she was a burden.
soon things got bad
her heart was sad.
Wrote this about one of my close friends who has passed on.
Forever 18💜
16.05.19🕊️
@@llanesjoshua1961 wt
@@llanesjoshua1961 LOL
@@llanesjoshua1961 LMAO
@@llanesjoshua1961 BRO💀💀
@@llanesjoshua1961 lmao
First, this man helped me pass my drivers test. Now, he's helping me write my first poem.
It actually rhymes 😁
@@wareeq how?
lol
Did you guys read my poems that I sent to the New Yorker?
This guy taught Eminem how to rap!
Fr lol 😂
Ha ha ha
Bro you clapping
That's a joke right..?
Lol 😂😂😂
If I see anyone
Write roses are red
Then soon they'll realize
How they end up dead.
If I see anyone
Write violets are blue
Then the same fate
Goes for them, too
😂😂😂💙
Did u just......
😂
LMAO nice one 😂😂 😂😂 😂
That's great-
roud
Thank you for making it easy
My first poem
School is being hectic
Study is being a burden
Neither so fantastic
Nor so fun
Nobody listens here
First bench, sunlight in the corner
You will find me there
Getting a bit warmer
Children spoke louder
As I sank into my thoughts
The class got crowded
And I quietly sang the notes
Exams are here
Every loud is quiet
I don't fear
Cause I got it all right
But maths is there
To blur my sight.
Staying up all 𝑛𝑖𝑔ℎ𝑡, am I doing this 𝑟𝑖𝑔ℎ𝑡? Math is ℎ𝑎𝑡𝑑, and with all my 𝑟𝑒𝑔𝑎𝑟𝑑, school is like an expired torture 𝑐𝑎𝑟𝑑.
Well there goes another 𝑏𝑜𝑚𝑏𝑎𝑟𝑑 of work, work so much work, MAN I JUST WANNA GO BERSERK!
Don’t teacher have this lovely 𝑝𝑒𝑟𝑘, where they scream and yell and act like a 𝑗𝑒𝑟𝑘, and expect us to laugh and smirk when something funny goes on? I mean man cmon!
(I tried, I bet this was soooooo trashy and I tried rhyming with the last couple of words you used haha lol)
@@ejjikowaksmccall4305 Nice one bro relatable
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I'll quickly copy this shet
Galing niyo namn po
I have many thoughts in my head
And none of them are said
I’m afraid of what you’ll think
When you learn I’m on the brink
I try to voice my fear
But you turn a deaf ear
You don’t know how I feel
What I show you isn’t real
You never see the signs
And you think that I am fine
Because I’ve never said
All the thoughts inside my head
This was beautiful i hope your OK
@@myeshiabennett6733 thank you and I’m trying to be
That is so good :0
Broo this hit home for sure
@@cabroncarlitos7806 I’m sorry that you relate to this
This poem makes no sense,
My name is not dave
Im hungry,
Microwave
why are people still replying to this this is like one year old lol
2 years old now
😂💯👏
😂😂😂
nice
If you have sense you make
LOL NICE
You helped me laugh
You dried my tears
Because Of You
I have no fears
Oh what joy it is
To have a mentor like you
For giving me strength
The way you do
You're the light when there's no sun
You're the rainbow after the rain is done
You're the moon that glows so bright
Guess I need you in my life to be alright
For my Sir😍
Wow😮
I think this person copied q.p
@@user-zj6wl3ud8u Whats that O.O
Omg u make it very clear
Yna WatchesCZcams like QwQ or qwp but just crying
I'd rather write a poem,
Then those mathematic words,
Whats their need in my life,
Roots and surds,
I write and write,
The day eventually ends,
My poetry is not slick,
Not the type world could bend,
Now this is where,
I'll end.
Thank you for reading,
My dear friend.
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I have a gun
Get in the van
@Laziest Bean that's right nice and slow now, dont try anything funny
Roses are red
Your dad is a DJ
All you had to do
Was follow the damn train CJ
Roses are red
My name is dan
I have a gun
Get in the van
@@itsboiling8259 nice
Roses are violet are blue i have a deadly bone give me your soul!
I sit in my room
I can hear the car outside go vroom
But that didn’t bother me
Because I had nothing left inside of me
I look at the ceiling
But I couldn’t get a sense of feeling
I knew I was very desperate
But my feelings couldn’t exit
I wish everyone thing could be okay
But everyone was just grey
And yet I still sit in my room alone
Looking on my phone
And yet I still wait
Waiting to see thing I wish I didn’t know
Cause that’s the cruel reality, that waits for me until tomorrow
But for everyone’s reading this
I bless you with one wish
Your beautiful and don’t let anyone tell you different
Because you are magnificent
very nice
Nice poem
Woah😍👌🏻
👏
Omg I love this
"*IMAGINATION*"
Writing on a piece of paper
Ill do my homework later
Im still procrastinating
All the words im creating
In my mknd, in my soul
Trying to find a goal
In a world where imagination's the limit
All my ideas in it
Not very good, not very well
U-oh thats the bell
Things were supposedly getting tense
Everything suddenly makes no sense
Tryjng to rhyme
But dont have the time
This is actually me right now, I have a H.W to write a poem about feeling without revealing what the feeling is and this is the first time for me to try writing a poem plus English is not my first language🙄💔
This made me chuckle
This can actually be a very good song if it had beats to it, just really reminds me of Tyler the creator
Did you guys read my poems that I sent to the New Yorker?
I thought I listened to The Chainsmokers new song oops wrong page
The sun.
She’s as bright as the morning skies
She’s always immensely happy
But she’s not like that deep inside.
She’s a ray of light, shining others with happiness as she skips through the halls
You’d never be able to tell what went on behind the walls.
The sun.
Always so caring
So fragile, yet so bearing.
I wished I was like her.
We all did.
But after all, we were just kids.
The sun.
She was so happy, yet she broke.
Her voice trembled as she spoke.
Her father was abhorrent, her mother was gone.
But who was there for her all along?
The sun.
She listened to everyone, but did anyone return the favour?
No. Nobody went out of their way to save her.
The sun shines so bright, but soon enough, it all ends.
She was so strong, she held on for so long.
Not long after, we all stood in-front of her casket.
We all had questions, but no one dared to ask it.
Suddenly, everyone’s sorry and trying to make amends.
“Oh I’m so sorry, she was such a sweet girl”
No, you were never one of her friends.
The sun.
So bright, yet so vulnerable.
She went through things, so insufferable.
The sun.
You don’t recognize it.
Until it all ends.
Did you guys read my poems that I sent to the New Yorker?
I saw a fawn
In my lawn
Runnin' around
Squealing aloud
I took my phone
Taking a picture
I got a text and said "wut the hell teacher?"
*lmaooo wheeze wtfff*
Great advice btw ^^
🤮
;-;
kr4
Do you have any good poems or lyrics you would like to have made into a song?,,
@@mynation123 no say but thank you for asking :)) have a nice day
When the night is dark,
And the dogs go 'bark',
When the clouds are black,
And the ducks go 'quack',
When the sky is blue,
And the cows go 'moo',
Think of lovely Queenie:
She'll be thinking of you.
Love it man❣️
Love it
Give me atitle
I like your rhyming peom
1:41 you thought wrong
Lol
you thought wrong
Yeah I thought he’s going to put ‘a fool’ but alright
This is my poem:I went to the airport check in
My passport fell in the bin
I went back to my car
I ran out of gas so I didn’t get far
I was going to call my friend
I saw a guy getting mugged and nobody bothered to defend
I acted quick so he didn’t break his bone
He thanked me and gave me a ride home
The end(like if you liked the poem)
Wow
2:52 he be beatboxing
thanks man, really helped a lot
I thought u were gonna say; and thought that I was cool I had my sunglasses on and I was whistling a song
Whose phone is that? I think I know.
Its owner is quite happy though.
Full of joy like a vivid rainbow,
I watch him laugh. I cry hello.
He gives his phone a shake,
And laughs until her belly aches.
The only other sound's the break,
Of distant waves and birds awake.
The phone is small, Grey and deep,
But he has promises to keep,
After cake and lots of sleep.
Sweet dreams come to him cheap.
He rises from his gentle bed,
With thoughts of kittens in his head,
He eats his jam with lots of bread.
Ready for the day ahead.
King Al who’s phone is it tho
copied by "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening"
wow...so you really searched up "poem generator?" ive done that too, nice try
Nice
Who's woods are that I think I knew ....
your poem is awsome! i like it ! keep it up!
I'm watching this video,
so that my homework could be done,
but my internet is so slow,
I can have 10 grandson....
😂😂😂😂😂
Do you have any good poems or you would like to have made into a song?
@BLUE & RED & PURPLE idk if I have other good poems,
It would be fun if my poem turns to a song,
At this point I'm just rhyming like a dead possum,
Not much meaning really, cuz I'm a ding dong
Also I have graduated from highschool yeeee, no more homework now
"The Rock"
As i cry on your shoulder,
you became boulder.
As i hugged you tighter,
your smile got wider.
You didn't know what to do,
so you just went blue.
You didn't know what to expect,
so you just got wrecked.
pls tell me if there's any mistake in my poem.
How is he blue
@@danielpradhan3735 cuz he didnt know what to do
It does not make sense
@@danielpradhan3735 sorry im not rlly hood makinh poems i just tried it
Gud
I dont think its what it looks like, has a meaning behind it, maybe hes so experienced he assumed that most viewers would be able to see through the obvious
bruh why did i read ur comment like a poem💀
Thanx bro I just needed this for rapping thanx a million again
Thank You Brah, Your Amazing 🖤
be your self and it will be effective
this would help you be creative
you are something special
like someone that deservers a medal
dont try to be someone your not
because you already mean a lot
be confident with yourself
like santas elf
Yo can I use this for my work? So it’s not plagiarism 😂
@@prajyotp7991 sure this was 2 yrs ago so yeah jsut give me credit
Very helpful! !!! Thank you very much and you are the best
ys
Thankyou so much for helping
Me no study
Me no care
Me gonna marry a millionaire
If he die me no cry
Me gonna marry another guy
I took a race
I ran out of energy
I felt my heart was gonna blast
but atleast I'm not last
we still cool
but I felt like a car that ran out of fuel
*but I felt like a car that ran out of gas
You did the opposite of what this video thought you
ROBUX
GOKU
Eclipse
Light seeps and temperature deeps
Tight lips and sweaty palm grips
Warmth slips from this rare eclipse
Moon shades and light is deprived
Black abyss smother the skies
Lingering darkness comes alive
In the void of darkest dyes
Those uncertain breif goodbyes
Make us unsure if sunrise
Will ever again meet out eyes
Nice! is this your own work? :)
It was very very helpful thanks
This really helps me thank you
When i was 7 years old
My friend bought my bike and it was sold
I went to our house
And was crying day and night
I saw a moving star
I was full of fright
I asked my mom
But she said it was just a light
On another day
I said to my mom i couldn't stay
I came to my friends house
And saw a mouse
I was very afraid
I saw my bike that was paid
I cried and ran away
The day was past
And i came back home
I looked outside and saw the star again
And it looked really really wrong
And i asked to myself
Why is this comment really really long😂😂
Oh noooo soooo longg any way am trying to rhymmeeeee
This guy makes it seem so easy God I wish I have watched this video earlier he's amazing like really you don't have to make it complicated it's literally that easy you have no idea how I was so hard on myself because I couldn't make a rhythm I didn't know that there was a much easier way thank you so much man appreciate a lot
we were on the same boat
Did you guys read my poems that I sent to the New Yorker?
yes l did very interesting@@kishascape
This is a great poem brother👊
Thank you for this video, I hope I will see it for aeons, as time goes on and on, this poem will be something of its own, maybe some day it will be something to hold high, until then I will keep on with my tie.
He said it didn't have to rhyme as long as it goes with the shit he's saying..
When i was in my early teens i fancied a girl in my class. I didn't have the courage to ask her out and for a year i just didn't do anything about it. A year later i finally decided that i wanted to write her a poem instead of asking her out because i thought she would appreciate the effort. I wrote the poem and i started out with "roses are red, violets are blue". I had no idea what i was doing back then and after i finished the poem (can't remember it word for word) i gave it to her friend and her friend gave it to her.
Turns out she already had a boyfriend by that point and i had wasted time for nothing. It's probably the most embarrassing point of my life so far and I've learned a lot in life since then.
Never wait like i did. Just go for it.
Story from the heart.. Do you have any good poems or lyrics you would like to have made into a song?
very very good please like thank you
omg its a very good help thanks
Memories
As I fall on the bed of flowers
I remember times when I was on a tower.
My feet was close to the edges at night
Clutching a necklace, clutching it tight.
My wrist sightly has a little blood
My hair is messed up unlike anyone.
I looked up only to see
A colorful sky, blue, white and green.
I remember the times when I cried
My mom was in a hospital by my side.
I remember the times I smiled
Watching the sun as it sets down.
I remember the pain that stayed with me
My grandfather’s death, the lingering tears.
I remember the empathy in my heart
My friend’s are depressed, while some are not.
I suddenly snap back to reality
Dreams and nightmares all filled me.
There’s only one person right here with me,
As the night sky came here I see.
-Lilac • ゆり
It's supercalafragalisticexpialodocious
@WAbong Temjen No, it's *Supercalifragilisticaxpialidocious.*
You said _"supercalafragalisticexpialodocious"_
@Wabong Temjen *a*
Woww
"A Walk To Remember"
I went for a walk in december
to the post office with a letter.
To send to my friend name Jonez
to remind her that she's not alone.
One my way back home
it was windy and blowing snow
i even saw two wolves.
but the wind reminded of this one quote.
That quote goes a little something like this,
Love is like the wind.
You can't see it
But you can feel it,
I have to admit,
it was one of the best walks ever,
it sure as hell is,
A Walk To Remember.
Thanks for the tutorial
Wow this is so helpful simple but very helpful😢
That helps me a lot on my homework
You said you’d come back
Wrote letters to me
once said
“Wait for me til dawn comes”
“I’ll be there, before earth warms up”
I waited-
And waited ‘til-
Now, shadows of I-see
And No shadows of
Thee
Poem-
I wish you are,
At very ends-
rhymes.
Your thought is Good, Thank you I will try on my Poetry
Thanks for helping me out
Thank you. And how do you do it to make sure you have the same amount of syllabels in the poem and that there is rhytm. I do the same for the rhymes but don't know how to keep my sentences equal so that there would be rhytm.
roses are red
violets are blue
karen took the kids
oh nu
Got at the right time... Thanks a lot
Thank you so much you really helped me
Ok to all of those that say it doesn’t make sense, you’re right! But he’s just saying that as an EXAMPLE! This is not a serious poem!
your not a serious person
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@@jamiegardea3795 you to :I
Let me think of a short poem that comes to mind
Don't talk bad about it please be kind
The next sentence does't have to rhyme so that's a relief
It was nice while it lasted and like I said this poem would be brief
goof
I'm failing to the ground
I cant think
I couldn't move a part of a body.
I was thinking of giving up.
I Can't give up so easily.
I raise my body to the sky.
Continuing to my journey in life
and avoiding depression from the mind.
is this ok?
Mumble rappers inspired by your video
GUYS BE NICE I LOVE HIS POEM!! Keep up the great work on those poems
I’ve been with you at the start
--And everytime I loved you with all my heart
--You are the world to me
And you’re smile is all I see
You’ve helped me in tough times
And I hope you can live for a lifetime
I know you’re sick
but Your strong as a hard brick
You make me happy everytime you smile
And not just because I’m your child
--One Smile is the world to me
from the heart.. Do you have any good poems or lyrics you would like to have made into a song?
Wow Can i use this?
😘
Thankyou so much, this one save me 😭❤️
Yo what the fuck you wrote exactly what I was thinking, that actually threw me off guard
Roses are red violet are blue I came for the thumbnail and so do u ; )
Did*
I tried my best...
I went for a drive in my car
i didn’t get very far
i saw this utterly beautiful lake
so i decided to take a brake
i sat down near a tree
thinking that i’d be free,
from all the thoughts
that gave the faults.
The sound of the breeze
And the falling leaves
This beautiful nature, that i couldn’t get enough of
These alluring flowers
i could just sit there for hours
But bitterly i had to leave
this admirable scene
Fantastic
Thx for this vid cause if I didn't watch this I would not done my homework
this helped me a lot
This poem is the worst
After seeing my ears got burst
👏👏👏
👌
But i think instead of ears u could have typed eyes
Or
instead of seeing u could have typed hearing
Nice grammer
Sam Persia
***the war of the worlds***
This is the war of the worlds
The Gods, Titans and the Lords
sharpest weapons are the words
they cut deeper than the swords
Potent poisons made of lies
makes illusions come to eyes
specially designed for these fights
within the hour the living dies
Armors are just for teasing
rewards earned by treason
fire in the hearts are freezing
welcome to the survival season
blood bolts and crossbows
hits the target and blows
red sea covers all the roads
the shops, the walls and the ports
the bombs made by the cheaters
designed by night creatures
with a range of thousand meters
and its only owned by leaders
a beat with the weirdest rhythm
with notes that can’t possibly fit in
a myth foretold and was written
to keep the deadly legend hidden
the history’s elite legions
against the army of demons
that are chasing your freedom
to expand their f*cking kingdom
lost in the land with no guide
Fire and Dust kills the sight
sneaking through the night
from far saw a dying light
I saw a woman wearing rags
cursing the gods for the facts
I got closer from the back
a branch under my feet cracks
I looked away for two secs (seconds)
she hit my chest with her axe
I beg do not end my life
I’m just looking for my wife
I’ve no intention to fight
shouldn’t be black or white
she came a bit closer
I stabbed her with the knife
in the darkness of the night
fire gave us little light
it wasn’t very bright
but it brought a bit sight
finally I found whom I sought
somewhere that I never thought
our lifetime was running out
we kissed goodbye and we died
copy write Sam Persia
I tried mine best.
Either Sunshine is bright,
Or darkness is in night,
I don't know what's going in my life.
A life with no choices,
A painter with no brushes,
A flower with no essence,
That's how I feel my existence.
Everyday I see there face,
They make fun of me like crass,
It looks like being morass,
And I feel harasss.
On being bullied I feel that I 'm in hell,
Being locked in a small cell,
Just living in that dwell,
And my soul is just yell.
I felt my heart was gonna blast,
Mine problems are gonna Vast,
But I still tried to cool,
And I feel like a car that ran out of fuel.
I 'll never be the best,
Wake up to get dressed,
And forever to be stressed.
Akshit
@@sashi1788 I will give it a try
@@sashi1788 copying!lol..lmao
@@sabotage_yourheart ur so good at this...I luvd this one
I dig
You dig
We dig
its not meaningful
but its deep
😂
Lol
Thx buddy it helped me doing my assingment
Roses are red
That part is true
Violets are purple
Not freakin blue
BLINKKKK
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Make an original comment
Or I will slap you
holy shit calm down that was a year ago when i was a popular comment try hard
I wish i had a Doraemon
My Maths problems he would solve
I could spend my holidays with no worries at all
Be it Hindi , English ,Science , Georaphy , History or Maths
Doraemon would write all my notes in his invisible coat
I would steal his gadget pocket and make a powerful rocket
Through which I'd reach the moon without studying the whole afternoon
Oh ! What would happen of me
I'll be lazy by doing this stupidity
No Doraemon , no magic
Will get success
Only hard work leads to
True accomplishment .
😋
👍👍👍👍
It's very easy to understand by this method ❤❤
That was amazing
I’m writing all these poems
They don’t know em
My rhymes are wild
Just like the types of sauce
My favourite type is mild
Thank you for the Advice
My activity.
My Life in Pandemic
The pandemic made my life turn Like the jacket that i always worn
It changed the world over time
And so did this life of mine
It made me mature and take responsibility
Of the action i take with my ability
It enhanced my mindset and my maturity
To replace my old and my navity
It made me see the world as a bigger place
But ill adjust new found knowlege to my pace
During google class it always makes me nappy
but i always listen for in the end it will make life happy.
Did you guys read my poems that I sent to the New Yorker?
Thanks
Thank you for advice
Roses are red
Violets are red
Everything is red
The red has dominated the world
I thought fuel is pronounced as few-well.
bruh funny
R/boneappletea
i needed yo write rhyming like that for my project
😂😂😆😆
That helps me on my homework
You and I we're made of glass
We we're never meant to last
Next line:
At the beach we play and be cool,
I got out from my house looking at the sea,
Go on the car no more fuel,
I was so mad I wanted to go REEE.
Today I learn how to write a poem
I felt it is very or some
Thank you for teaching
I will be marching
One poem a day
Let me to say
This Structure Helps Alot
This is so helpful
I got to know you,
and I told you countless, detailed stories
Like a shattered sanatorium,
I’m emptily waiting for you
Even as I curse you like that and know it will bring sadness,
I wish you’ll come searching for me and tell me with a kind voice
that I did the right thing and ask how I have been
It’s gloomy and lonely
It seems like you’ll still hold on to me
but last night and even this very moment
it seems like I’m the only one who can’t rest
I hang myself like that and even as I know I’ll die,
you didn’t throw me away, did you?
In a kind voice, you tell me you like me and say let’s live happily
As you’re about to cry, you tell me “I’m sorry, I can’t see you,”
but with those words, now you can see me so I should embrace you,
but why is it that I just take out sharp scissors instead?
Now you cover my eyes
You’re so placid,
but when you break down,
how am I to resent you?
Even now, we're connected
You're not to blame, you know
Now it’s too late to say you don’t need any of that
Take a look at my wrists,
already stained scarlet
From what detail was I unable to endure being within you?
Even until this very instant,
you murmur, “You’re the only one for me.”
You would call out my name with a smile
Goodbye to all that, everything
You said we were only a momentary romance
@@edcir5672 No, sorry
Nice
helped me heaps thx
Does this method still work for Earth 20.22??
I have a poem too,
I ate breakfast
I went to school
Me and my friends thought we were cool
And it was lunch i had a bunch
When the bell rang i went home
I had a ring tone from my phone
Then i had fun but what about you at school
Was it cool??
Ashley Zamanta ummmm..... i think so..😕😱 this is my wiredest peom well..
I want a cat
But not it was fat
So i went to the mall
And i went for a call
Then i buy a cat
And she's not fat
Did you love it?? ☺☺
Capitalize I omg
Caloline Linda No..This is more weird
Be more cleared
crowd will cheered
bird will eared
i appeared
let me disappeared
(if we don't count the past tense, that seems rhyme, just ignore ed)
Ashley zamanta cooooool poem thats 😎 😎 😎 😎 😎 😎 😎 😎
Stop being toxic but right capitalize
Simply Excellent ! You taught me how to write a poem in one day ! Thank you so much 😊
yeah same
uh this doesnt actually rhyme maybe watch the video again. Thanks!
Did you guys read my poems that I sent to the New Yorker?
Thank you! ❤️❤️
Very helpful thanks.
This is where I cranck out my diaries
This is where I keep down all my memories
This is where my brain feels muscly
There are no rivals
I m chilling down my spines
My ghosts skulking everywhere
So they will banish them everywhere
Like this is the symmetry of cemetry
Gruesome ? Oh I feel delightful
This is where I vomit rhymes ,
This is where I m all the time
Convicted of commiting a crime
Yes ! That bloke murders words
Like I bake lamb
And sear my fork in and stab
May you accept my appologies ?
Because this is called a rehab
This is where my pink organ
Meets up with heart
Brain is not anymore orphan
Some magic spread on me
So to feel smart
And wig out my soul
To squirrel in inspiration
Creating motivation
Like energy
To lighten dedication
Therefore to blacken my depression
Which is Apathy
Or maybe I should be clear
It is just lethargy
This poem makes a lot of sense I liked it thanks sir
Tks I really helped
in the beginning u sounded like kermit for a sec🤣