When Your Half Brother Kicked You out of the house While Snowing Heavily

Sdílet
Vložit

Komentáře • 142

  • @nynyrackzz2407
    @nynyrackzz2407 Před rokem +26

    it’s giving part two because that’s a lot to take in as a four year old child I want to see her reaction to them as a teenager

  • @LoveStance
    @LoveStance Před rokem +37

    Two things to our wonderful author here....
    1st. I'm so glad I made sure I had no distractions while I watched this through. You write well all the time, but the subtle darkness that progressed throughout this piece was exemplary.
    2nd. I'm very glad you gave no hint about the background of the families, making all the readers take a big....Oh....Ahhh...when her parentage was revealed.
    While this is fiction, this is a reminder of how children's perceptions can be easily led astray and how cruel they can be when angered, jealous, or just 'cuz'.
    I was REAL happy that Yn didn't die outside, as that would have been sadly tragic, and her step-siblings might have felt bad for leaving her outside, but they'd have not understood the full impact of their actions if they'd not seen how terrorized she'd become of them.
    Part of me would like a bonus to explore how their lives unfolded over the years, but another part likes exactly where you left things.
    You've done an exceptional job with this.
    - St@nce

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před rokem +5

      Why am I smiling so big while reading your comment? 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

    • @LoveStance
      @LoveStance Před rokem +1

      @@missrandom5430 Because you know you made a FINE piece of work, and you were gifted with some personal validation for all the toil and...turmoils you experienced putting your world into print for us to enjoy with you!! :)
      xoxoxox
      - St@nce

  • @nohway07
    @nohway07 Před 10 měsíci +7

    I'm crying rn! This is such a good story! I felt like i was actually reading a book.

  • @army_girl_ot71313
    @army_girl_ot71313 Před rokem +8

    Your every story have always made me cry no matter what.................
    I just loved the way you put sooo much details in your every story and how you just make up the actual scene.......................
    Mind-blowing ✨
    Well, I actually fell more emotional then any other person because I am also a story writer just the thing is I haven't made any story on internet, I have them in a book but absolutely the stories are also deep meaning one, so I really like your stories a lot

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před rokem

      Awww. Thank You so much for appreciating the way ai write. It really makes me happy 💜💜💜

  • @ishratjahanjui4109
    @ishratjahanjui4109 Před 8 měsíci +4

    Author really can make me cry . I did cry I'm not lying

  • @radhagupta9162
    @radhagupta9162 Před rokem +8

    You never fails to make me cry 😭

  • @cookiebts7743
    @cookiebts7743 Před rokem +3

    Author nim!!! Y do u always make me cry??!!! 😫😫💜✨

  • @melodyshortcuts4225
    @melodyshortcuts4225 Před rokem +2

    I never felt so happy to cry 😭 love u author

  • @Myriamele
    @Myriamele Před rokem +16

    Absolutely perfect, as always. My emotions took a rollercoaster ride, I am glad to see how it ended. 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @Saanvigattani
    @Saanvigattani Před 5 měsíci +2

    Now this is what a masterpiece called! 😭 you will become a great Author one day😭❤❤

  • @Justtt_jiwoo
    @Justtt_jiwoo Před rokem +1

    Anytime you realese anything unnie, it's a masterpiece
    i love ur work so much unnie

  • @namjooniee7
    @namjooniee7 Před rokem

    This FF was masterpiece...💜

  • @le-anne4309
    @le-anne4309 Před 10 měsíci +2

    This is a beautiful story ! A masterpiece !!!!! A fairy tale .I suggest you make an animated movie or a picture book of it. The story is too beautiful to let it be just a story !🥰💞

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před 10 měsíci +1

      I agree. I'm actually talking to some of my friends who knows how to animate or to make it like a manhua but unfortunately we all have hectic schedules. But who knows. Maybe someday

  • @jVt1306..
    @jVt1306.. Před 9 měsíci

    I was literally crying 😭 hard entire the video....... . I am not lying, seriously ..... It just touched my deep inside heart ...

  • @bagntanplaylistsforyou
    @bagntanplaylistsforyou Před rokem +11

    ok how about you tell me all the things you are good at including writing absolute masterpieces and making me cry, like author nim don't you know how big of a trouble i would be in if my mom walked in on me crying while staring at my screen. Also author nim, what did poor y/n did to you, you're always giving her trauma and ptsd and anxiety, like what did she ever do to you. this was amazing, keep writing author nim, ill be here to read your stories.

  • @XG71
    @XG71 Před rokem +20

    I Know It's Gonna Be Masterpiece

  • @bdarmy_ro1588
    @bdarmy_ro1588 Před rokem

    Ur ffs are so underated

  • @yeonapark
    @yeonapark Před rokem +1

    Can't wait for an amazing story again!! 💜💜💜

  • @user-mx5zn9yi8z
    @user-mx5zn9yi8z Před rokem +3

    so, im a new subscriber and your never fail to make something soo incredible and good... i knew it was going to be good just seeing the thumbnail.... Keep making these amajin stories.. i will always root for you.. borahee💜💜

  • @zenia2310
    @zenia2310 Před rokem

    It was truly a masterpiece..like this time yn didn't became an assassin(which i think feels unrealistic) i enjoyed alot . Keep making this kind of masterpiece author 👍

  • @fehmidashaikh8120
    @fehmidashaikh8120 Před rokem

    I was crying 😭 my mom started to get tention 😂

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před rokem

      HAHAHAHA why watch sad ff, sweetie hile you're Mom is around? I can't with yoy HAHAHAHA

  • @DeepakRout-lo3hc
    @DeepakRout-lo3hc Před rokem +1

    Its so good unnie 💜💜💜💜

  • @purpleaftons8438
    @purpleaftons8438 Před rokem +1

    Your the best unnie sometimes I wonder I do u think of these ideas
    May I ask how old are u?if it's fine😅

  • @dianalechuga5523
    @dianalechuga5523 Před rokem +1

    Wow! This one had my heart ache for her. She is so little, and they had no understanding in them. I hope school is going well. Please take care of yourself❤💜❤💜❤💜

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před rokem +1

      I'm already in a vication, sweetiee. So no worries. And thank Youu. I hope you're doing good at school aswell 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

    • @dianalechuga5523
      @dianalechuga5523 Před rokem +1

      @Miss Random thank you, but I have already graduated with my masters degree, so I remember a lot of the pressure to finish work.

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před rokem +1

      Ohh. I guess you're ahead and older than me. Well then. I wish you all the best

  • @user-rw1yu9pc5h
    @user-rw1yu9pc5h Před 11 měsíci +1

    You're an exceptionally good author but your music choice is also top notch!

  • @tvishaagarwal3018
    @tvishaagarwal3018 Před rokem +2

    UNNIE! HOW CAN YOU DO THIS!
    how can you write soo amazing stories, as always, it was a masterpiece. Can't wait for the upcoming awesome stories. Borahae unnie 💜💜💜💜💜💜

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před rokem +1

      Thank You, sweetieee💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

    • @tvishaagarwal3018
      @tvishaagarwal3018 Před rokem

      @@missrandom5430 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @maitrisharma1851
    @maitrisharma1851 Před rokem +4

    I never comment on ffs usually but I badly want a ff of middle child problems can you please make a ff on that topic and that too of jin or any hyung line member please 🙃🙇

  • @zenia2310
    @zenia2310 Před rokem +1

    Curiously waiting for the next masterpiece

  • @rimilulaji4909
    @rimilulaji4909 Před rokem

    This was a sad story 😢 but l love it 💜. Unnieee you are the best. Can't wait for the next story.

  • @Coffeekindagal
    @Coffeekindagal Před 11 měsíci

    I love you soooo much youre the best ff writer ever

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před 11 měsíci

      thank you so much and I love you moree💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @cloudyXeuphoric
    @cloudyXeuphoric Před rokem +1

    This is what I mean to say, when I talk about a perfect fanfiction

  • @ShaSha-256
    @ShaSha-256 Před rokem +1

    Stop it’s illegal to write this awesome 😭😅😅 !!!!!!

  • @taekook6115
    @taekook6115 Před 11 měsíci

    Another beautiful story

  • @LOVELYKPOP286
    @LOVELYKPOP286 Před 11 měsíci +1

    All i can say us wow i have no other words to describe this it so sad but happy at the same time i loved it 😊 ❤

  • @Sarah-Zhao
    @Sarah-Zhao Před rokem +2

    I am getting confused here, I need a family tree please to get this on my mind! 😅
    Ok I get now... 😊
    But seriously my heart is so emotional 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
    Once again, I am not disappointed and falling in love with the author's magical stories ❤

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před rokem +1

      Thank You, sweetieee💜💜💜💜

    • @Sarah-Zhao
      @Sarah-Zhao Před rokem

      @@missrandom5430 No, thank you for making me live the beautiful magical fantasy 😘😍☺😍😘😘😳❤❣️💝💕

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před rokem +1

      Thank You for supporting me doing one of what I love to do💜💜💜

  • @milicavelisavljevic4582
    @milicavelisavljevic4582 Před rokem +1

    I love your masterpiece's so muc unnie😊💜

  • @swatisharma-es9fk
    @swatisharma-es9fk Před rokem +1

    I can't wait for the next masterpiece 💜💜 Sarangheyo unnie💜💜

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před rokem +1

      Thank Youuu and Nado Nomu Nomuu Saranghaee💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @pastikaluci4814
    @pastikaluci4814 Před rokem

    i lobeeee it unnie

  • @ritulal8071
    @ritulal8071 Před rokem +1

    This is my new obsession

  • @jinspinkslipper8133
    @jinspinkslipper8133 Před 9 měsíci

    I swear i never really cry reading a book or ff hell i don't even cry watching a very sad movie but this shit i felt like i was really the one suffering and i freaking cried like a baby in this onee ....author u r so good at it like woowwww😮😮

  • @ellise2601
    @ellise2601 Před rokem +1

    YESS UR BACKK

  • @Lovelybeds3109
    @Lovelybeds3109 Před rokem

    This is so good keep up the good work 🎉

  • @ibagaad2157
    @ibagaad2157 Před rokem

    I loved it bestie good to see u again 😊😊

  • @ashmikashiv4415
    @ashmikashiv4415 Před rokem +1

    Masterpiece ✨✨✨ , love it

  • @revathirevathi5281
    @revathirevathi5281 Před rokem +3

    Always your ff make my tears burst out 😢😢but so good sissy 💜💜

  • @sakshikataria4479
    @sakshikataria4479 Před rokem +2

    Can you make next part or a bonus please 💗💗💗it's me infront of my father. It's like so traumatic. I really like it . I want to see them 4 to be happy with eachother. Also the girl lj have to apologise to her . Please can you 🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌼🌼🌼🌼

  • @RohitVerma-ut9cy
    @RohitVerma-ut9cy Před 11 měsíci

    It's a masterpiece l was literally crying 😭 while reading this

  • @AgnivaModak
    @AgnivaModak Před rokem

    Cant wait for your next masterpiece author

  • @ustadsahab618
    @ustadsahab618 Před rokem +2

    As always, I cried😢 but its so beautiful like it's real....
    I followed your insta gram too😉

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před rokem +1

      Thank you, sweetieee💜💜💜

    • @ustadsahab618
      @ustadsahab618 Před rokem

      @@missrandom5430 but you don't seem that much active on Instagram 🤔😞

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před rokem +1

      Yes, sweetieee. Unfortunately I forgot the password so I wasn't able to open it again😂

  • @Hadiya0110
    @Hadiya0110 Před rokem +2

    Damn, I won't be able to watch this masterpiece cause I won't be home at 7:00 pm❤😢

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před rokem +1

      Wherever you're going. Wish you'll have a safetrip💜

    • @Hadiya0110
      @Hadiya0110 Před rokem

      @@missrandom5430 I watched it, it's so good❤️ I was just going to a wedding that day, thank you❤️

  • @facrojigawas1597
    @facrojigawas1597 Před 11 měsíci

    UNNIE !!! You made me cry si bad 🤧😭☹🥺😣
    Overall I loved it v. V.v.v. much❤

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před 11 měsíci

      Thank You, sweetieee and peaceee💜💜💜

  • @Yoentan_lover15
    @Yoentan_lover15 Před rokem

    Unnie I love your work but please try to upload fast I mean don't pressure urself but please try to upload more videos fastly🙂love you work ❤❤
    Your lovely subscriber/Fan❤❤❤

  • @purpleday7792
    @purpleday7792 Před 11 měsíci

    FRom stating to last I was feeling heavy heart and pain like I want to cry my voice cracked and don't know how and when I started crying and about the writter like how u know the real cousions sisters pain and somehow it's real to life like mine nd my cousion till the mid of story but I haven't seen the end but I guess I can happy ending till I graduate I font to be here

  • @neetigarg1032
    @neetigarg1032 Před rokem

    *Unnie aap ki writing itni achchi hai ki aapko jail ho jaani chahiye...* ❤❤💞💞
    Translation( if you don't know Hindi) - Unnie your writing is so good that should be sued for that...❤❤💞💞
    Like how can someone write this good??! Had me in tears, honestly✨✨
    You know I'm also thinking about writing ffs on Wattpad but I don't have courage...🌹
    But no matter what, your long duration ffs are so good like they always make me switch on my AC at 16 degrees so that my tears dry up faster hehe😅🤧

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před rokem +1

      Awww. Thank You, sweetieee 💜💜💜 I wish you goodluck with your writing 💜💜💜

  • @Dhinchakpoojaop
    @Dhinchakpoojaop Před rokem +2

    You know what?? I won't even say anything about it. You already know what I am gonna say right??*takes in a lonnnngggg breath and..* ...I LOVE YOU AUTHOR!!!!!!!! KEEP WRITING AND TAKE CARE😚🤧🤧🤧 💜💜💜💜💙💙💙💙💖💖💖💖it is still lacking the hearts I wanna give to you. Yk?

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před rokem +1

      Thank you, sweetieee and I LOVE YOU MOREEEEEE💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

    • @Dhinchakpoojaop
      @Dhinchakpoojaop Před rokem

      Do you remember? The use of the account@the nature 5207.haha. Tbh my gf would accuse me of cheating as I never said I love you as many times I said to you to her. But still I can't resist saying it. You're the best ❤️

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před rokem +1

      I can't with you HAHAHAHA. Keep showing your girl how much love her

    • @Dhinchakpoojaop
      @Dhinchakpoojaop Před rokem

      Sure..👌👌I will even make her read this and your ffs so that she can also say the same.👍👍👌

  • @fehmidashaikh8120
    @fehmidashaikh8120 Před rokem

    Can't wait to see 😻

  • @littlelifetime8095
    @littlelifetime8095 Před rokem

    Hope we have a part 2 plssssss....🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

  • @laylamoriom9881
    @laylamoriom9881 Před rokem

    It's so good 🥺🥺

  • @wlyisqkr
    @wlyisqkr Před rokem

    You're things are so inspiring! It's such a masterpiece! I actually have a request for an ff if you can do it....
    I was thinking if you could do an ff of Jimin: about how you're idol brother starts hating you because you're more popular, so you eventually get deep depression and commit su!c!de?

  • @purpleday7792
    @purpleday7792 Před 11 měsíci

    M re reading it greatt😫😫

  • @tejasriamruta3524
    @tejasriamruta3524 Před 9 měsíci

    waiiit im a princess ????

  • @satishgoyal9281
    @satishgoyal9281 Před rokem

    Please make second part

  • @keerthanajayachandran6496
    @keerthanajayachandran6496 Před 11 měsíci

    Next part please

  • @Malohalim17
    @Malohalim17 Před 11 měsíci

    What happened to vmin at the end

  • @sharika._.
    @sharika._. Před 11 měsíci

    How can you sleep with so much talent?

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před 11 měsíci

      Oh My HAHAHA Thank Youuu💜💜💜

    • @sharika._.
      @sharika._. Před 11 měsíci

      @@missrandom5430 Wellcomeee💜💜💜

  • @Musicallife_ML
    @Musicallife_ML Před rokem

    Finally

  • @itzsalexzs
    @itzsalexzs Před rokem

    I MISS YOUUUUUUUUUUU😢

  • @whosdeetya
    @whosdeetya Před rokem +1

    no offense, but don't you think facing all this at the age of 4 is too traumatic for a kid? if it was a teenager it would've been better, I guess. No person with a sane mind would do this to a 4y/o lol

  • @vante.07
    @vante.07 Před rokem

    I'm heree

  • @lovelymahi7080
    @lovelymahi7080 Před rokem

    Hi

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Před rokem +1

      Hello💜💜💜

    • @lovelymahi7080
      @lovelymahi7080 Před rokem

      @@missrandom5430 how are you dear ❤

    • @lovelymahi7080
      @lovelymahi7080 Před 11 měsíci

      @@missrandom5430 Hi how are you now I hope you are very nice I want to be friend with you please give me your contact number?

  • @forampatel6879
    @forampatel6879 Před 2 měsíci

    You are so good in writing...omo.. 🤍