man, this songs neat. Don’t take the criticism in the comments to much to heart, i like the less defined style of your music. You did great! Also, as a guitarist i appreciate the accuracy of playing the buddy holly lick every chance you can get
you should make the notes of the bass high and loud so it will have more dramatic, joyful, funky style...i do like the song and i appreciate all the efforts hihi
@@Hayden_Walchshauser I didn't mean that in any kinda downgrading terms like that brother. I've been a guitar player for over 30 years and I also teach guitar and music theory. I'm massive Nirvana fan and I love your guys song. Great potential! We need more good start up bands with the sound and feel of the early 90s today there isn't really any out right now and I think it's time for another break through! I'd try but I'm too old now. :/ but great song.. super catchy and you can hum it ... That's how you can tell a hit.. is if it sticks with you after it's. Over and. Makes. You think about it afterwards.. and this song has that.. keep it. Up fellas. :)
Personally, I would just look up the titles of nirvana tracks and mix the words in different orders. Btw, this song is awesome! U rlly need to make a Nirvana styled album. That would be fucking incredible!
I mean it's pretty much just Anuerysm and a little bit of I Got a Girl by Tripping Daisy and of course two notes of Buddy Holly at the end lol. I'm no lawyer but I say if they can "rip off" a melody you can too
@@Hayden_Walchshauser Imagine the groove the song would have if he did the exact same thing, not even using 5ths or anything, just root jotes but by following the drums. very simple yet important. im sure yall will find a way tho, have fun
Bro was about to play the lick at the end and play it off like we wouldn’t notice
Bro thinks he’s slick
Shhh 🤫
The last thing I heard was the opening chord of this charming man by the smiths.
sounds kinda like aneurysm and lithium
Time signature is a bit fucked as yall loose tracke a bit but it sounds very good
This is amazing. Full song needed asapppp
Thanks :) maybe one day
This is killer but the drummer desperately needs a metronome and the guitarist needs to stay on the beat lol. Other than that great job.
You basically said: "Nice! you guys suck, but besides sucking, that would pass as a song" 😂
you basically said the bassist is good but you dont wanna be bullied on for saying bass is good
Dude this is incredible.
You should extend this song, and turn it into a real song.
Thanks :)
@@Hayden_Walchshausernot far off from one at all already my friend
That is an accurate tone
Thanks :)
Bro was gonna do that buddy holly riff at the end and it cut out 😂
Shhh 🤫
if Aneurysm and Lithium had a kid
as a nirvana style song its amazing
man, this songs neat. Don’t take the criticism in the comments to much to heart, i like the less defined style of your music. You did great! Also, as a guitarist i appreciate the accuracy of playing the buddy holly lick every chance you can get
@@SinningSpiderr thanks man :)
And ofc… it’s necessary 😂
@@Hayden_Walchshauser absolutely
aneurysm + lithium + about a girl + drain you + in bloom
Bro thought he was slick with the buddy holly lick smh
All jokes aside, the song sounds great!
Haha thanks :)
woah yo dude this sounds so cool bro. keep up the good work man!
@@elisrightnow thanks :)
this is rlly good!! keep it up🤍
@@itgirltala777 thanks :)
@@Hayden_Walchshauser new sub rlly nice skills :D
this is really good
this have potential 😍 sounds amazing :)
Thanks :)
Very good ngl
Thanks :)
you should make the notes of the bass high and loud so it will have more dramatic, joyful, funky style...i do like the song and i appreciate all the efforts hihi
Amazing! Earned a fan!
Thanks :)
Timing is a bit wobbly but has a lot of potential! Full song would be great.
Also don't try to hide that buddy Holly lick at the end
@@Shewjei haha thanks :)
LOVE IT
Thanks :)
Tune your guitar...makes a world of difference
Maybe one day
@@Hayden_Walchshauser I didn't mean that in any kinda downgrading terms like that brother. I've been a guitar player for over 30 years and I also teach guitar and music theory. I'm massive Nirvana fan and I love your guys song. Great potential! We need more good start up bands with the sound and feel of the early 90s today there isn't really any out right now and I think it's time for another break through! I'd try but I'm too old now. :/ but great song.. super catchy and you can hum it ... That's how you can tell a hit.. is if it sticks with you after it's. Over and. Makes. You think about it afterwards.. and this song has that.. keep it. Up fellas. :)
@@kristopherguilbault5428thanks man :)
No, it’s better this way
@@TheLuke... fr
i got a girl who lives with me… I got a girl she smells so sweetly… I got a girl she loves her dog… I got a girl I love her dog, too
Whaaaaat
@@Hayden_Walchshauser oh come on dude, you have to know what I’m talking about lol. I still like your song though, good stuff!
@@sharp5flat9 thanks :)
that's what i first heard
This sounds like lithium and heart shaped box but with the first few chords of smells like teen spirit
put a lyrics , some solo and everythings perfect 😍
Love this, I make music myself, would love to maybe add my own parts to this song lol
Good job keep it going guys
Thanks :)
the end tho 💀💀
so cool✨
Sounds dope!
Thanks :)
The intro its like nirvana's d-7 cover but fast
sure sounds like a demo recording of a nirvana song
is that a ([REDACTED]) reference??
sounds a bit like come as you are and heart shaped box combined
sounds more like lithium to me!
It’s aneurysm lol
Sounds like verse chorus verse (In his Hands)
@DoctorAlright it's almost exactly anuerysm
DUDEE this is awesome
Thanks :)
I swear the beginning was just silver bass
Trippy
Tighten it up and you’ve got something pretty there
Thanks :)
I weezed
THIS IS SICK ‼️‼️
THANKS ‼️‼️
Nirvana type beat
Perfect
if aneurysm and smells like teen spirit had a kid
YO LYRICS WOULD BE SICK!
ALSO I JUST GOT WEEZER'D
the guitar was lil out of tune but the song was actually good
Thanks :)
sounds cool just think the guitar is out of tune tho. Nice song man.
It always is lol. But thanks :)
@@Hayden_Walchshausersounds more raw when untuned
@@JuralekOFFICIALfr
lithium from wish
i'm so happy
Bro add some lyrics and make it to an official song ask if need any idea
Awesome! Good job boys!
Thanks :)
@@Hayden_WalchshauserYou’re welcome! :)
Nice.
Here's the Hook ;
🎶🎶Baby let your Feeeelings
Burn the Fiiiiiield
Oh Baby
Let your Feeeelings
Burn the field 🎶🎶
@@Clowis that’s sick
awesome
Thanks :)
SHE FUCKING HATES ME!!!!!
the intro sounds way too much like I got a girl
Aneurysm 2
sorry but I just cant, the drummer is baerly touching the drums on 0:20 xddd, sorry I just can't :DDDD
No u 😱😱😱😱
if u need vocals hmu
Have u thought of a title?
Not yet
Personally, I would just look up the titles of nirvana tracks and mix the words in different orders. Btw, this song is awesome! U rlly need to make a Nirvana styled album. That would be fucking incredible!
Can My Band Somewhat use this idea? It's Really sick and I see a song waiting to be made!
I’m his lawyer I say no 🔨
The lawyer has spoken 🤷♂️
I mean it's pretty much just Anuerysm and a little bit of I Got a Girl by Tripping Daisy and of course two notes of Buddy Holly at the end lol. I'm no lawyer but I say if they can "rip off" a melody you can too
@@Hayden_Walchshauser Damn. Please Guys its really sick, and produced in a studio (Which I Have), it'll sound fire
@@JammerAma no.
No way your bassist is the know it all kid
Great job but I noticed that one of the bass or guitars lower notes is a little off tune.. nonetheless epic song 🎉
Thanks :)
@@Hayden_Walchshauser no problem man!
very nirvana-y
Isto é música
@@silviosilva1631 thanks I think :)
@@Hayden_Walchshauser um abraço, de Portugal
A hug from merica 🦅🇺🇸
What's the tuning?
@@E3rg2314 out of tune 🤣
@@Hayden_Walchshauser next song you make, tune to
C# tuning it's magical
@@E3rg2314 yea c# is the best
sounds great ngl, is that the signature kurt cobain jaguar or nah?
Nah it’s a vintera and thanks :)
@@Hayden_Walchshauser alright cool, i’m looking into getting a jaguar… probably just the squier classic vibe 70s one with the daphne blue color
@@JCVidZ0912that’s a great guitar
@@Hayden_Walchshauser i’ve heard so!
i got the guitar lmao
tune?
Maybe one day
I think you need a tuner
you should probaly change the intro it sounds to much like heart shaped box
Sounds more like a slowed down aneurysm to me
@@RiversCuomo_Weezer yep and the way the guitars go slow and fast, the drums build up, it gives off heavy aneurysm vibes
Nahh
@@TheChasedanger the intro to me acc sounds like i got a girl by tripping daisy then it turns into a slowed down aneursym
@@epicvcc I don’t think they should change the intro because it sounds like something else. Half of all music sounds like something else.
Гитаристу энэргетики не хватает
drummer needs to learn how to wail and lead with his kicks. could have really grooved tf out of this. dont be scared to hit harder lil bro
drum
Bongos?
sounds like something from the bleach album
God is what?
Original version? czcams.com/video/eYI99xuI9CM/video.html
fire the bassist what is man doing 😀
No 😀
@@Hayden_Walchshauser obviously dont fire him, ik thats your buddy but he really needs to work on his technique. root notes aint the way
@@brashfix I mean yea but it gets the job done for some grunge 🤷♂️
@@Hayden_Walchshauser Imagine the groove the song would have if he did the exact same thing, not even using 5ths or anything, just root jotes but by following the drums. very simple yet important. im sure yall will find a way tho, have fun
@@brashfix I agree thanks for the feedback :)
buy a mic and sing ;)
Maybe one day :)
Sounds like a bad attempt at this Tripping Daisy song - czcams.com/video/eYI99xuI9CM/video.html
Thanks :)
*hatefull comment
Why I outa
This is a copy of tourettes
Not even close, buddy
@@elinkoch9252the same strumming pattern, the same chords just reversed. I know this because I made this riff
Kinda sux, practice more guys
Thanks :)
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