These stories are really good... but they really need to cut down on the crucibles, ozone, and burnt flesh. lol - it's really repetitive after a while. I don't know if these are all AI generated or what, but it's a little nuts. :)
I think they are. Another thing I notice is with other sci-fi CZcams stories like this one is that "Hung in The Balance" is used really often throughout the story.
Nothing is forged in a crucible. A crucible is used to melt metal. Metals are forged on an anvil, or at the forge which also includes the source used to heat metals for forging. AI authors across all the channels make this mistake.
To be fair, it's a mistake they inherited from a lot of human authors who have used a variation on the "cool sounding" saying: "Nations are forged in the crucible of war" Metaphorically it makes sense, as a nation is being torn and molten down in the 'crucible of war' it is also forged anew into something else afterward. It's an abbreviated metaphor. Otherwise it would be something like - Nations are molten down and forged anew from the crucible of war. Onward from that you're just into description rather than a metaphor which breaks the purpose of condensing an idea entirely.
OK so we were fighting aliens and then the aliens got attacked by aliens so the first aliens came to us for help and we united against the second aliens, but then we went to go get help from another set of aliens that turned out to be another bad guy And were we fighting the second aliens or the third aliens at the end of the story? You lost me at that part.
Too condensed into a too small time frame though. Like movies where characters show up in places when it's convenient without any consideration that it would take a long time of travel to do so.
This is awful. Hung in the ballance is a phrase I dread hearing over and over and over and over. I'm granting a Thumbs down for each story made untenable by it.
There seems to always be a bigger fish 😂😂
Yes, there is always a bigger fish.
We can ill afford another Klendathu
...and you are to be the new Sky Marshall?
Every single civilization in the galaxy either join the galactic coalition who joined the dark Tron
These stories are really good... but they really need to cut down on the crucibles, ozone, and burnt flesh. lol - it's really repetitive after a while. I don't know if these are all AI generated or what, but it's a little nuts. :)
I think they are. Another thing I notice is with other sci-fi CZcams stories like this one is that "Hung in The Balance" is used really often throughout the story.
And gorillas don’t forget the gorillas! I did have to smile at the automated text and the thought of a pack of Silver Backs causing havoc and mayhem.
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Amazing story line and story telling.
I'm starting to notice an underlying thread of contemporary global politics in the newer sci-fi audiobooks.
Nothing is forged in a crucible. A crucible is used to melt metal. Metals are forged on an anvil, or at the forge which also includes the source used to heat metals for forging. AI authors across all the channels make this mistake.
To be fair, it's a mistake they inherited from a lot of human authors who have used a variation on the "cool sounding" saying: "Nations are forged in the crucible of war"
Metaphorically it makes sense, as a nation is being torn and molten down in the 'crucible of war' it is also forged anew into something else afterward. It's an abbreviated metaphor. Otherwise it would be something like - Nations are molten down and forged anew from the crucible of war. Onward from that you're just into description rather than a metaphor which breaks the purpose of condensing an idea entirely.
OK so we were fighting aliens and then the aliens got attacked by aliens so the first aliens came to us for help and we united against the second aliens, but then we went to go get help from another set of aliens that turned out to be another bad guy And were we fighting the second aliens or the third aliens at the end of the story? You lost me at that part.
I hope you figure it out because the fate of galaxy hangs in the balance. 😂😂😂
If you trade out “alien” for planet, you have warhammer 40k. Because humans don’t help aliens there haha
The story jumps around too much
The pacing was too fast. Also, how many alcoves are there, it seems like a lot.
i liked this story
hung in the balance
Another great story
Too condensed into a too small time frame though. Like movies where characters show up in places when it's convenient without any consideration that it would take a long time of travel to do so.
Much better can be done with these unfinish stories
But of course alea running on earth I seen them every day 😮
88 Another fine bit of programming.
I hope that’s not the end of the story 88
I’m so lost what the heck is going on lol
You couldn’t have ended it after the battle? 88
This is awful. Hung in the ballance is a phrase I dread hearing over and over and over and over. I'm granting a Thumbs down for each story made untenable by it.
Is there any other kind of tension aside from " palpable"?
@@billdieterich Ohh the agony. Please stop 😂
Get out of your basement.
Yes sir. 🫡 Did you want to crawl out of yours? You watched this crappy story too.
Thanks for the stories. Forget the whiners, they have know talent and are jealous 😅
This story was AI generated, with human plot inputs.
Money money money
Ditto
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Stop reading AI generated stories, there’re predictable and nonsensical.