7 Powerful Ways To Write Better Sales Copy

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  • čas přidán 7. 09. 2024

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  • @johnemoavwodua552
    @johnemoavwodua552 Před 4 lety +153

    1⃣Use numbers
    2⃣Prove your point
    3⃣Use (gather) result-driven testimonials
    4⃣Use emotion evoking pictures
    5⃣Credentialize yourself/ toot that horn (remember this from FU money)
    6⃣Include a list of your famous clients
    7⃣Risk reversal (reduce the risk on your prospects)

  • @seneramadushi301
    @seneramadushi301 Před 4 lety +29

    Great .I'm phd student in USA but I don't believe that what I learn from university is enough to reach the goal I want.That's where Dan Lok's videos come handy.🙂

    • @tongchhengpa3581
      @tongchhengpa3581 Před 4 lety +2

      Madushi Wimalarathne great thinking . I’m a Medical Student also but now I’m be an Esthetician in Cambodia 🇰🇭 , but my goal is money in the end to make me Like Dan .

  • @michelebordone6834
    @michelebordone6834 Před 4 lety +28

    For me videos about copywriting are the most useful! Thank you Dan, I can’t wait for another speech about this topic!😃

  • @hightimest3571
    @hightimest3571 Před 4 lety +1

    I'm 17 and started watching your videos today. I have now found a interest in copywriting/copywriter. I appreciate all your knowledge and I hope I can end up as successful at you one day.

  • @1delsol
    @1delsol Před 4 lety +15

    This video is extremely useful to any business owner trying to sell a product/service. Thank you for the tips Dan 👍

  • @Je.rone_
    @Je.rone_ Před 4 lety +17

    *These are good sales tips in general!* 💪

  • @John_Conner222
    @John_Conner222 Před 4 lety +2

    love this stuff Dan. Not too many people talking about it without putting most of it behind a paywall. I understand your goal is to get me in the door and get some teaching revenue but if I can't get my concerns addressed then I am not going to bother. You are right about being gun shy when it comes to buying things. Everyone knows now more than ever that companies are finding more and more ways to try and trick you out of your money, the sneaky upsale.
    One of the most recent bad apples I have experienced are buying a car. I went to buy a car a few years ago. I had just gone back to college and had just graduated. I got a certificate that you could redeem to get a substantial amount of money (like 3 or 4k) to put onto a car to help with getting a job and relocation. Because I had heard so many horror stories about car salesman I went online and looked for the car I wanted. I wanted something basic, cheap, but not too cheap until I got a job within my field. I found the car, looked at the manufacturers website to find inventory. Found the car and grabbed the lot#. I called the dealership and sure enough IMMEDIATELY they are trying to push me onto an expensive, fully loaded SUV. I'm like look man I just told you I JUST graduated and I have a job but not a high paying job. I can't afford a fully loaded SUV. I want this car with this lot# and nothing else. Ill make you a deal. Ill get a much better job and then come back and buy a much better vehicle as I really don't want a tiny, cheap car (I'm 6'4").
    The dealership that had the car was over an hour away so I asked if he could hold the car while I drive up there. I have some cash for down payment, my car for trade in and voucher from my school for graduating. I told him its ok if you can't hold it but I don't want to drive up there and it be sold and have to turn around as I am not buying anything else. He said no problem and I drove up there. I pull in and the first thing he does is get my car and sends it off for appraisal. We keep talking and he tries to up-sale me again. I'm like I DON'T have the funds man. I literally do not. I'm your worst customer I am very sorry you are not going to make much money off of me. Come to find out the car I wanted WAS sold while I was driving up there. I was annoyed as that is why I called and verified before driving an hour and a half. I told him to give me my car back and I will continue to look for another one like the one I wanted. He said that he couldn't and that the deal was already made and that my car was THEIRS! I had no choice but to buy another one. I was furious and got loud and told him to give me my car back and he apologized again and said he couldn't that the car was gone. I said ok i'm going to call the police now. I walked outside and dialed 911. I was explaining them the situation and that I needed an officer to help me as my car was being stolen. At this point the manager comes out and is very concerned and asks me what is going on.
    I tell him the situation and that the police are on the phone. He tells me and the police that he is sorry and that he will get me my car back. I finally get talking with the manager and explain the whole situation. They eventually get another salesman to help me and they find a nicer car and give it to me at the price of the one that I came for. Then the other salesman comes over and not 10 feet in front of me, begin arguing over commission. I'm absolutely fuming at this point and ready to bodyslam him. It was a 12k car, how much commission could there be? I really didn't want the car but my car was not doing so well, was old, and falling apart. I thought I had a job across the country and so I stayed and finally got the car. I've never in my life purchased something I resented so much. It should have been a happy occasion but I made to contact the better business bureau and I called the police back on a regular line and explained what happened in further detail in case they needed to be investigated for doing this to other people. No more new cars for me. I don't care how much it costs I will get a dealer license and go to the dealer auction to get my cars from now on.

  • @dheenadev4970
    @dheenadev4970 Před 4 lety +10

    For any business questions I have in mind, I come straight to your channel knowing that I will find my answer.
    Very useful video.

  • @zukahasarrived
    @zukahasarrived Před 4 lety +1

    Dan you are BRILLIANT AND THE REAL DEAL not just in sales but in common sense and being an authentic business professional!

  • @mansoorrajput1365
    @mansoorrajput1365 Před 21 dnem

    Dear Dan, the secret of your success apart from hard work is your greatness. I believe nothing sells with meaness.

  • @shirakumi5113
    @shirakumi5113 Před 4 lety +14

    Hey Dan I want you to share us your copies you have written before when you were a full time copywriter that will be dope

  • @Leggett1994
    @Leggett1994 Před 4 lety +4

    Mr. Dan. Thank you. I trust Brandon Carters training regiment and products because I personally got results from following his protocol. The only reason I don’t buy from the guy is a lack of funds or my business is already offering the service. Thank you again!

  • @zarajaved3648
    @zarajaved3648 Před 4 lety +4

    Love your videos , Mr DanLok you are an inspiration & your teachings are phenomenal , I intend to be successful and happy

  • @RichardDavisHackingLife
    @RichardDavisHackingLife Před 4 lety +4

    If it’s something that I think will bring me value, I have the extra funds and I have a way to verify the source than I’ll do my own research on the spot and if verified I’ll buy. But I guess I didn’t become that way until I worked in a door-to-door sales job for awhile and saw this direct toward me. Love the video Dan!

  • @seyibale
    @seyibale Před 4 lety +6

    Thanks Dan Lok for all you do to enlarge people's capacity

  • @NicoMoreno
    @NicoMoreno Před 4 lety +7

    Thanks so much for the awesome video Dan 🔥 This will definitely help me Grow my Business and Become Wealthy!! Keep it up! 💯💯🙌

  • @MukeshThakur-dw5en
    @MukeshThakur-dw5en Před 2 lety

    Dan , I am IT Professional with 10 years of experience. Month ago I was started following and I am very excited to Learn the Copy Writing skill. Your videos on Copy Writing is really ming blowing.....👍

  • @infinity2355
    @infinity2355 Před 4 lety +4

    Respect from India✌🏽
    After watching your videos I got the motivation to start my own youtube channel. Thank You very much😀😀

    • @moderndayempire1627
      @moderndayempire1627 Před 4 lety +2

      i appreate your point as it contains reallity and i am an youtuber too

  • @maxshayani9166
    @maxshayani9166 Před 4 lety +2

    Well done Dan there´s a lot to learn in copywriting and your points are right on the Target please don´t stop!

  • @Remington-wl7jp
    @Remington-wl7jp Před 4 lety +4

    All these copywriting videos are incredibly helpful. Thank you, Dan.

  • @CrispMokisti
    @CrispMokisti Před 4 lety

    Okay so im 14years old and Dan has inspired me so much. I have been workin on copywrighting and im ready to do anything to make my dreams come throught. I know its going to be hard but there will be no giving up.

  • @samuelmoore1392
    @samuelmoore1392 Před 4 lety +2

    Great tips especially the last to give an overabundance of value that the person is so happy that they bought what you’re offering

  • @mengekyosyaringanKamui
    @mengekyosyaringanKamui Před 4 lety +3

    Thank You Sifu for this video 💪🏽✨, really help me to do better COPYWRITING SALES

  • @TassieHub
    @TassieHub Před 4 lety +3

    Thanks Dan! very helpful. been watching for a 1yr now

  • @supermarco3
    @supermarco3 Před 4 lety +1

    Hi Dan, great video and even better outfit! The person who picked it must have great taste. I was hoping that you could share with us on the brand and the name of your coat! Just couldn't stop admiring it throughout the video. Thank you!

  • @jannalynpizarro8215
    @jannalynpizarro8215 Před 4 lety +2

    Thanks Dan! This is one my favorite video of yours! Great help! Good job!

  • @EdwardCarreno
    @EdwardCarreno Před 4 lety +4

    Love all of your videos dam you tell us some insane knowledge can't wait to be where your cant in life keep it up

  • @LyricsLord24
    @LyricsLord24 Před 4 lety +1

    Dan Lok BEST CZcamsR !!

  • @YouAndImpact
    @YouAndImpact Před 4 lety +2

    Amazing video on Copy Writing. Among all this tips I feel the Reverse risk and video testimonials are very important that can influence prospects in a better way.

  • @Keren-Naor
    @Keren-Naor Před 4 lety +3

    Great content, Dan.
    Please make more videos on Copywriting. Thanks !

  • @crystalwilson3777
    @crystalwilson3777 Před 3 lety

    That experience has happened to me MANY times! As a CREATIVE, single mom in 2020...not wanting to go back 'out' in the workforce....having a minimal (if any) budget....and RECOGNIZING the 'game' early on.....it was frustrating because on one hand i YEARNED to become successful online, who to walk out on faith behind??!? I connect with your videos comfortably.

  • @faysabry1497
    @faysabry1497 Před 4 lety +2

    Great video! Thanks! And more copy videos Dan! Really trying to master copywriting.

    • @jz4585
      @jz4585 Před 4 lety

      Hey Fay, Dan Lok has a training teaching you how you can master copywriting, do you need the link?

    • @faysabry1497
      @faysabry1497 Před 4 lety

      Jordy Castillo - High-Ticket Closer yes please

  • @kamaushamayah2474
    @kamaushamayah2474 Před 4 lety +3

    Love your videos Dan!! Definitely want more on copywriting. Your advice has been phenomenal! Can't wait to learn more!!

  • @Angels_8811
    @Angels_8811 Před 3 lety

    Your English, Very clear. Always watching. Dan Lok Thanks for sharing all your positive thoughts.

  • @JesusMetal
    @JesusMetal Před 4 lety +1

    Pure gold Mr. Dan Thanks...

  • @owoyokunemmanuel7300
    @owoyokunemmanuel7300 Před 9 měsíci

    A big thanks to you Dan for this impactful video.
    Just recently, I wanted to buy a course from a vendor but then his lack of consistency, as regards advertising the course, turned me off. I ended up buying from a vendor who has a record of consistent advertising.

  • @yardmasterswealtheducation8424

    I have finished Chapter 1 of the business card I am writing! Yes, that was your idea! And, yes, you can have a signed copy when it's finished!

    • @moderndayempire1627
      @moderndayempire1627 Před 4 lety +1

      i am intrested

    • @yardmasterswealtheducation8424
      @yardmasterswealtheducation8424 Před 4 lety

      @@moderndayempire1627 I'm glad to hear that! In the Discussion tab on my Channel I have posted Chapter 1 for anyone to read and comment on. I would love to hear your thoughts/questions.

  • @SumitSharma-cg7pt
    @SumitSharma-cg7pt Před 4 lety +2

    Dan we need more of this...🙏👍

  • @liveshorts949
    @liveshorts949 Před rokem

    Dan Lok wants you to succeed so much, he literally sells you your success.

  • @AdilParray
    @AdilParray Před 4 lety +2

    Wow! Great Tips Dan!
    Really, Thank you very much. These would be helpful in my budding Content Writing career.

  • @mikerendon7309
    @mikerendon7309 Před 4 lety +1

    It’s amazing that you are sharing with us all this copywriting skills! Thanks Dan, you are the man!

  • @outsid33
    @outsid33 Před 4 lety +1

    Keep putting copywriting videos out consistently !! My favorite subject you cover. Thanks 📝🔐

  • @amellili1768
    @amellili1768 Před 4 lety

    You don't look shy!you seem calm,and missing something,or deeply sad
    But,i can see also,that you are courageous, and can resist.
    I can see that also,in the photo with your dad,he is proud of you.

  • @stanleymwanza2355
    @stanleymwanza2355 Před rokem

    I love everything I have learned and what am still learning from your thanks for every drop from your mouth God double everything you have in bondance

  • @arbinmaharjan8379
    @arbinmaharjan8379 Před 4 lety +1

    Thank you soo much sir, I wish I had found you earlier however your lessons to us are very awesome and very honestly you share with us

  • @editha1355
    @editha1355 Před 4 lety

    I forgot what the product was, but I know I was sold from the advertisement. I went to the website immediately, card in hand, ready to buy it. But the website was sooooo sketchy. It had this little “spin wheel” thing that popped up that you HAD to spin. To which it would then land on a “discount 25% code” every time. It had the timer that said the product would no longer be on sale after a certain amount of time. Creating a sense of urgency. But there were two things that made me decide I no longer trusted the website.
    1. The fact that I HAD to spin the pop up. I couldn’t exit out of it, or click away. While I realized it was a nice little gimmick to give you a discount code in a fun way, the fact that I had absolutely no choice in partaking in the pop up gimmick immediately drained my trust in the website and created a slight sense of fear in a brand that was already unknown to me.
    2. I’ve seen this exact same website layout and spin wheel gimmick on a few other websites I deemed sketchy as well. Seeing the repetitive layout bothered me and I decided the product was no longer worth it.
    I went back to the advertisement and saw a bunch of people commenting that they felt the same way about the website, it all felt sketchy and scary lol. Only validating my belief it was a scammy product lol

  • @tiamaria3123
    @tiamaria3123 Před 2 lety

    Thanks Dan.... you have gone above on this one ... like Always your videos are eye opening... I actually didn't even know & do all of this.... thanks again Sir

  • @PatrickCogen
    @PatrickCogen Před 4 lety +1

    That's true. If they don't know you they don't trust you and therefore they won't buy from you. Great video as usual Dan! Love from a small youtuber :)

    • @diamonds5855
      @diamonds5855 Před 4 lety

      I`m pretty sure that is the case with my books

  • @axellindroos
    @axellindroos Před 4 lety +2

    I think you do the best yt vids.

  • @Prettykitchen1M
    @Prettykitchen1M Před 2 lety

    Just great.... Each vdo is very powerful.

  • @vlc3347
    @vlc3347 Před 3 lety +1

    Always delivering value
    Thanks so much

  • @MichaelKendallMrMk619
    @MichaelKendallMrMk619 Před 2 měsíci

    I love watching interesting tutorials like this one

  • @Mohamed-pu7so
    @Mohamed-pu7so Před 2 lety

    I love you Dan.
    Thank you for your awesome videos about copywriting

  • @fawadhussain502
    @fawadhussain502 Před rokem

    First time seeing your content and really impressed and motivated. Loved your content 😊

  • @DestinDreamer
    @DestinDreamer Před 4 lety +1

    I always enjoy watching ur video .I have a playlist of your vid.

  • @hamzabaig8856
    @hamzabaig8856 Před 3 lety +1

    I enjoy your copywriting videos a lot, thank you.

  • @randomamvvideos6996
    @randomamvvideos6996 Před 4 lety +1

    Thanks for sharing your video its verry helpful help eac others😉

  • @kevinlouwers4754
    @kevinlouwers4754 Před 3 lety

    Love the example of the Event Dan. Dans the Man!

  • @Teresa_Coker
    @Teresa_Coker Před rokem

    I’ve experienced rejection from some companies who say they will get back to me about writing an ad but they didn’t 😢and I’m guessing it’s people who don’t want to lose money or anything else. Human nature for sure.

  • @pyschologygeek
    @pyschologygeek Před 4 lety +1

    Thanks alot for your helpful vids

  • @ibrahimjab
    @ibrahimjab Před 4 lety

    Thank you so much for the awesome video Dan. Keep it up! 💪

  • @natureslife7740
    @natureslife7740 Před 4 lety +1

    Thank for sharing Dan

  • @vikasrai5978
    @vikasrai5978 Před 4 lety +2

    Yeah, I get it sir

  • @emmanuelwashaya3388
    @emmanuelwashaya3388 Před rokem

    THANK YOU DAN LOCK BUT I NEED TO KNOW HOW TO START MY OWN COPYRIGHT YOU HAVE CHANGED MY LIFE💯🙏🙏

  • @afrahali1ali149
    @afrahali1ali149 Před 4 lety +1

    Really sir you are true that videos which a specific in number s they a ATTRACTIVE u can say let me listen because it well specified but thanks alot 🤝 🤝

  • @Speaktruth0
    @Speaktruth0 Před 4 lety

    A video must needed on how to sale my copywriting skill to the market place, to what type of copy I should promote to promote my Copywriting skill talent to attract customer in local market - Offline and online format and words with example and testimonial - Subhojit India

  • @abdullahnaveed4834
    @abdullahnaveed4834 Před 3 lety

    the last part about RISK REVERSAL is awesome

  • @lioreliav8423
    @lioreliav8423 Před 4 lety +2

    Amazing free damn good value
    amazing as always!
    Thank you-Dan.

  • @sciencestuff4832
    @sciencestuff4832 Před 3 lety

    hi sir dan. i like your videos about copywriting. i would like to learn more and start writing a very catchy content for other businesses.

  • @spaspecialists540
    @spaspecialists540 Před 4 lety +2

    One has to produce something of real value to make this work.

  • @GonzoKemp
    @GonzoKemp Před 2 lety

    Thanks Dan!
    They are very useful and direct tips.
    By following your free advice it is easily possible to get clients and then be able to pay for your training. Thank you!!

  • @FromThemFarms
    @FromThemFarms Před 4 lety +1

    I love more copy writing

  • @moderndayempire1627
    @moderndayempire1627 Před 4 lety +1

    this video is really helpfull and it contains my couple of real experiences like shopping online and by not seeing the options like COD then it basically turns my mood off and that's why i don't buy that product, well if we get to today's topic so i am one of the intrested person in the topic copywritting. the tips you suggested are also nice specially the tip of using some survey results and scientific work for showing your surety is bold message

  • @portiabongimthembu8283

    Just love you from... best guy ever. You help masses with your videos. Me from SOUTH AFRICA 🇿🇦

  • @FreddeJong
    @FreddeJong Před 4 lety +1

    Very powerful information!

  • @louielouie9502
    @louielouie9502 Před 3 lety

    It's awesome to know how well seasoned business owners should use resources they may already have at their disposal. How do beginners write effective sales copy? Brag about their successful associates? I want an entire formula, leave tips for your waiter Brah.

  • @Chulai8384
    @Chulai8384 Před 4 lety

    Great Job Dan! Definitely want more of these! Thanks for the value ⭐️

  • @MuhammadAnwar-pv3zz
    @MuhammadAnwar-pv3zz Před 4 lety

    Respected mr.Dan Lok the way you teaching....amazing

  • @brightuchendu7858
    @brightuchendu7858 Před 2 lety

    Wow...this ideas are extremely pretty cool. I want to become your student, learn from your ideas and gain strategic skills for writing pretty interesting contents for organizations.

  • @ghitmanbooker4807
    @ghitmanbooker4807 Před 3 lety

    More topics on Copywriting Dan! Thank you.

  • @shunammiteekhator2187
    @shunammiteekhator2187 Před 2 lety

    Thank you Dan Lok. Your teachings are inspiring.

  • @suhaibelhuseyni7754
    @suhaibelhuseyni7754 Před 4 lety

    Thank you LOK for this video and the valueable informations that you shared

  • @MadlyNathan
    @MadlyNathan Před 4 lety

    Great tip, Dan. Writing and having that as a skill to convert sales is so essential

  • @saulfalcone4817
    @saulfalcone4817 Před 3 lety

    yes please keep up the videos on Copy writing

  • @lawalmarkolamilekan6502

    Thank you alot sir...
    Your videos is helping me a lot

  • @verticalmomentumresiliencypod

    Truly loving this.

  • @miimcollection
    @miimcollection Před 2 lety

    These tips are so unique and helpful. Thanks for sharing 💎

  • @samypbifunding9713
    @samypbifunding9713 Před 4 lety

    Very powerful. Please continue.

  • @eisendecastro
    @eisendecastro Před 4 lety

    One more time...
    Thank you Dan for sharing this amazing content with us!

  • @KevinJPineau
    @KevinJPineau Před 4 lety +2

    COPYWRITING! THE MOST IMPORTANT HIGH INCOME SKILL!!! Thank you Dan. I love the exercises. I’ve definitely got to the point of purchase and then found one or two lines that just turned me off.

  • @user-ew2vc5yp2l
    @user-ew2vc5yp2l Před 6 měsíci

    Your videos are greatly impactful
    👍👍👍👍👍👍

  • @suji8329
    @suji8329 Před 4 lety +4

    Hey Dan, is there still time for the job application?

    • @BrasseurDana
      @BrasseurDana Před 4 lety +1

      Hi Su, Definitely! Here's the link to the YT video, so you have all the information to send your video!
      czcams.com/video/7sRJyhuRMys/video.html

    • @suji8329
      @suji8329 Před 4 lety

      @@BrasseurDana Thank you so much, It took me a lot of time and still I couldn't make the perfect video

    • @BrasseurDana
      @BrasseurDana Před 4 lety +1

      Su Ji - You’ve got this! When i try to make a video it takes me some time as well but at some point we just have to go for it and stop criticizing ourselfs, that’s the perfectionist inside of us & that’s certainly not a bad characteristic to have! :)

    • @suji8329
      @suji8329 Před 4 lety

      @@BrasseurDana Absolutely, Thank you so much for your beautiful and motivating comment

  • @graceahaiwe
    @graceahaiwe Před 2 lety

    Dan, you are s great teacher.

  • @johelectrix7927
    @johelectrix7927 Před 4 lety +1

    Nice one I need those Dan!!!

  • @3idiotsmedia713
    @3idiotsmedia713 Před 4 lety

    You're just too real. Please make more videos on this High Income Skill.

  • @davidmacgown321
    @davidmacgown321 Před 7 měsíci

    Dan do you have a video on creating trust quickly?

  • @AlexZubarevAlexZ
    @AlexZubarevAlexZ Před 4 lety

    Great tips Dan!

  • @antton8575
    @antton8575 Před 4 lety +1

    Do more of these!! Great value ❤️❤️❤️

  • @venkatachellaraochellumkur7078

    Excellent knowledge to grasp and own👍👍

  • @kanazohodabalotokiyou4085

    Waouh it is very nice this video because it help us to improve ourselves. 👍