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【DSE Writing】簡單英文一樣可以高分，必學DSE Writing拓展思維 | HKDSE 7科5** + IELTS 9分 | Melody Tam
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- čas přidán 26. 12. 2020
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- HKDSE 7科5**狀元，包括中英文科均4卷5**，選修科 (Biology, Chemistry, Economics) 分數大幅度拋離5**的最低要求
- 17歲時第一次應考雅思 (IELTS) 便取得滿分9分成績
- 一級榮譽畢業於香港中文大學修讀環球商業學 (Global Business)，總GPA達3.9/4.0，曾獲得多個獎學金及入選院長嘉許名單
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我d作文仲寫到成個小學雞咁 請問我有咩方法去提升我嘅英文水平啊？🙈
作文嗰陣卡住左吾知點繼續寫長d，多謝你嘅分享，我終於可以寫多d字啦🥰
👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
身為一個中三，我發現我英文議論文係比較弱，成日都唔知可以寫咩，睇完個片先知原來有咁多嘢可以寫 O_o
好開心幫到你！有好方法 + 多練習一定會有進步的，加油～
有點長同噚氣呢…grammar可能係冇錯，但係咪真係好既英文呢？唔係話爆字唔得，但可以更簡潔又中point更好🙈
其實咁樣係咪可以當通識咁樣推論😯
例如：問題成因，持分者特徵，影響⋯之類
無問題架～其實讀書最好就係各科之間可以融會貫通，好似駁論技巧其實學左個思維就應用到中英作文都可以。Elaboration重點在於邏輯唔好出現斷層，即係唔好令考官有個感覺係“點解無啦啦會得出呢個結論”。如果通識科的思維模式可以幫你思考得全面Ｄ，當然可以用～
@@MelodyTam 無錯！融會貫通好重要！此段片很有用，可以教到學生有整條邏輯鏈，對語文科和通識科都有益！
聆綜都好有用😆
I’m only in primary school but I already watch your videos to get prepared, great help, thanks! :)
No need to get prepared so early
@@kelvinlam616 sooner is better than late
You should've started in kindergarten, good luck.
Very good contents but not suitable for most of the students as they are not capable of writing such complex structure. Try to fit some of the contents to be the simple and plain structure or design 5 main mid-level sentences which are suitable for many topics so as to help them remember and be solid with bases. Otherwise, they will be feeling empty or aiming at high but falling hardly. Under the circumstance that the wider groups of clients to be the low to middle levels instead of those aiming at grade 5 or above, adjusting your focus may boost up your rewards. Good luck and keep on doing your brilliant works. You have improved much and be very outstanding in comparison with most of your peer group.
作文思維是教緊你做人思維🤣🤣🤣🤣
Melody 你好， 我想問下思維的訓練日常可以睇啲咩？
想問下 一句可以簡潔寫出黎既句子 應唔應該加啲字落去 會唔會令成件事扣分
例如A university degree is a essential in the mordern workplace.
應唔應加啲字變成 Nowadays, A university degree is a essential certificate in the modern workplace.
上字幕可以用arctime
謝謝建議！
咁啱聽完妳既直播XD
學到野~~~
好開心幫到你！
@@MelodyTam 除咗幫到之外，我都係入嚟睇靚女😝
Thank you so much in teaching me this. Could you also teach us how to deal with partA writing, including the requirements, suggested words for students aim at different levels? I will be truly thankful about it.
Thanks for your support! I've previously made a video regarding Part A writing and you may have a look: czcams.com/video/n0EK5UWQITg/video.html
@@MelodyTam thx so much
我想問如果個老師話我個底差，咁即係邊方面差？&如何Improve
hmm...呢樣野可能要問返老師先清楚D，因爲始終唔瞭解同學的情況，但一般老師話底差都係指grammar多錯處／詞匯量不足等等
講得真係好好好好好好好好好好好🙏
想問下你平日多數邊本英文字典呢？
多謝你！好正🥰
都多謝你支持呢～～～
好容易就爆字
但係我冇手速寫唔到太多
thanks a lot!
好彩有睇啫
thx for your teaching
More than welcome!
好勁呀
多謝，過獎了～
我比miss 話report 唔夠formal
thx,support!
Thanks and you're more than welcome!
是不是打了一個嗝XD
點解我自己都唔覺xD
so qq
Thanks!