I really like this version, nearly clashing with my likeness of Juno's version... yet is that fair? Juno's version leans more into his “In-character”/ “canon” version, making it still feel familiar, yet sad. Yours leans more into a “depressive” version of Luigi, which I feel fits more, since Mario was his spark, his fuel to fight. And without him, he WILL die where he stands, he vows to be with him; even if it costs his life. It's unfamiliar, and very depressive Luigi has given up everything. In conclusion: Juno's version leans more towards light-hearted and canon characteristics, while yours leans towards the humanistic version, how a real person who is attached would react when they lose them. Is it fair to compare? No. you both lean into different perspective's of the same coin. So they both shine in their own way. I STILL LOVE THIS‼‼‼
Oh, this is incredible, and in 24 hours no less! You even added a chorus into it, which is very original since not many other lyricists implemented one!
![[SFM] Rivals Madness](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/UVjf07uB354/mqdefault.jpg)
![[SFM] Rivals Madness](/img/tr.png)
Bro really got angry when he sang fast and i felt like a ghost singing with him
I really like this version, nearly clashing with my likeness of Juno's version... yet is that fair?
Juno's version leans more into his “In-character”/ “canon” version, making it still feel familiar, yet sad.
Yours leans more into a “depressive” version of Luigi, which I feel fits more, since Mario was his spark, his fuel to fight. And without him, he WILL die where he stands, he vows to be with him; even if it costs his life. It's unfamiliar, and very depressive Luigi has given up everything.
In conclusion: Juno's version leans more towards light-hearted and canon characteristics, while yours leans towards the humanistic version, how a real person who is attached would react when they lose them.
Is it fair to compare? No. you both lean into different perspective's of the same coin. So they both shine in their own way.
I STILL LOVE THIS‼‼‼
love these comments, thanks m8
Oh, this is incredible, and in 24 hours no less! You even added a chorus into it, which is very original since not many other lyricists implemented one!
Actually it was created in 16 hours, and believe it or not, only 5 were spent working on it!!
Why it take me 2 month to found this masterpiece?!
BRUV-
THIS IS A BANGER, THIS IS GOING IN THE BANGERS PLAYLIST! ✨🔥
I adore the chorus, it really fits what we see of the ghosts in LM and ahhh !!
I like the key change here, makes it more emotional
Everything Luigi does to try to be with him Is in vain because Mario’s not dead he’s just trapped, so Luigi can never see him again
For being done in five hours, this was incredible! Good job!
This is definitely one of the best fnf with lyrics I've heard. This or Junos cover could definitely be the official lyrics, I give this a 10/10
For 16 hours this goes so hard
PEAK! Better than a lot of my writing
that's a lie and you know it.
@@KennyTheLyr1c1st How dare'st thee claim me to be a liar?! Grrrr
@@HellIsForeverWithInfinite Wow. (grabs anti medieval cannon) Nah, imma do this.
Good
Def one of my favourite Alone covers yet! The team that worked on this cooked hard!
This banger? In less than 24 HOURS? This is better than most lyricists could work on for over a week! 👍👍👍
ty!!
thar whistle my god thats amazing
Sorry i miss the premiere but still great job for making this
This was so peak, holy shit
YES SIRRR WE DID IT
I guess all reason is in that portrait.
Yes
Yes
Ethereal.
is Kenny back? 🔥🔥
YESSIR
Hi kenny
hiyaa
I like it but erm there’s sum flaws
The synth v kinda sounds out of tune
Some of the lyrics could be fixed but not so bad for 24 hour vid
8.7
better than you could do 😭
nah nah im jking
@@KennyTheLyr1c1st facts tho lmao 😭😭
I think u should tune the synth v to make it sound better just a suggestion,,,
@@BlurSMTH SynthV doesn't need tuning, it's already on tune.
Holy sigma?…