Atlas and the Stars - The First Episode | OFFICIAL ANIMATED SERIES

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  • čas přidán 28. 12. 2023
  • Determined to fulfill her lifelong dream of exploring the stars, Atlas sets out to steal a starship and leave her old life behind.
    Atlas and the Stars is an animated series created and animated by Miranda Toney (Mirandamations) that follows a human and an alien trying to make their way back home after mysteriously getting tossed across universes.
    EPISODE CREDITS:
    Full cast credits on IMDb - www.imdb.com/title/tt23725482/
    Created, written, and animated by Miranda Toney: / mirandamations
    Music composed by Miranda Toney: / mirandamations
    Courtney Steele as the voice of Atlas: / courtlynnsteele
    Oliver Smith as the voice of Atmosphere: / oliversmithvavo
    Delvin Green as the voice of Quasar: / delvin_vo
    Linsay Rousseau as the voice of Nebula: / linsayrousseau
    Wyatt West as the voice of Cosmo: / lucidwraithh
    Additional voices by Cougar Macdowall: / cougarmacdowal1
    KEEP UP WITH ATLAS AND THE STARS:
    Merchandise - mirandamations.com/product-ca...
    Official website - mirandamations.com/atlas-and-...
    Patreon - / mirandamations
    Twitter - / aatsseries
    Instagram - / atlasandthestars
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    Usage of my content to make fan content such as fandubs, compilations and edits are allowed as long as credit is properly given.
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  • @MetalZeat
    @MetalZeat Před 4 měsíci +1434

    Welcome to the new golden age of independent animation Studios

    • @VaryaTop17
      @VaryaTop17 Před 4 měsíci +60

      This indie animation deserves respect

    • @avivastudios2311
      @avivastudios2311 Před 4 měsíci +59

      On a mission to destroy Disney. They seriously failed us all with Wish.

    • @hannahcooper8135
      @hannahcooper8135 Před 3 měsíci

      Yeah...There are a lot more independent projects I've been seeing after Wish, even projects to REMAKE Wish. It's fun to see!@@avivastudios2311

    • @atomicreptiliascreator738
      @atomicreptiliascreator738 Před 3 měsíci +4

      @@avivastudios2311.
      Really? I’ve been waiting to watch that movie.

    • @TogetherFoRIVer
      @TogetherFoRIVer Před 3 měsíci +5

      @@atomicreptiliascreator738 To me it wasn't as bad, pretty messy at the start and just overall inconsistent. Not as "magically everything goes perfect" but a little more human-like to me. Tho I wouldn't want them to make more movies this way lol

  • @brightmoonaltimations1892
    @brightmoonaltimations1892 Před 5 měsíci +5992

    THIS IS INCREDIBLE? i cannot believe you animated the entire thing by yourself, I love seeing indie animation with true passion behind it,, deserving of SO much more attention

    • @pixeliien
      @pixeliien Před 5 měsíci +195

      not to mention the writing AND music??? like hello?!

    • @StarriEyed981
      @StarriEyed981 Před 5 měsíci +129

      This is the definition of if you want something done right you gotta do it yourself 👍

    • @mothmanthe9th601
      @mothmanthe9th601 Před 5 měsíci +39

      Wave of the future man no more buracats or policy holing us back soon we can all tell any story anyway we want

    • @sharkshakes
      @sharkshakes Před 5 měsíci +14

      believe it.

    • @itswizydog
      @itswizydog Před 5 měsíci +7

      👍 yup

  • @RyvrStyxStreams
    @RyvrStyxStreams Před 4 měsíci +2130

    I feel like not enough people are mentioning how fun it was that the alarm from when she was stealing the ship fit perfectly with the music. The overall artistry of this is absolutely incredible

    • @mysterypreson6093
      @mysterypreson6093 Před 4 měsíci +11

      Yes it was my favourite part so far

    • @sussus2376
      @sussus2376 Před 4 měsíci +16

      That alarm was making a fire beat 🔥🔥🔥

    • @amandaf4720
      @amandaf4720 Před 4 měsíci +5

      I noticed that and loved it. Definitely a nice touch!

    • @simulatorfantastic90
      @simulatorfantastic90 Před 4 měsíci +5

      That part just came up now as SOON as I saw this comment. And you were RIGHT. *THAT'S SO LIT!* 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😎

    • @deficit06
      @deficit06 Před 3 měsíci +1

      Is my favourite part as well!

  • @TheSammyGShow
    @TheSammyGShow Před 4 měsíci +1101

    The fact that not only the animation is done by one person but the beautiful score was also done by that same person is phenomenal. There needs to be more indie animation like this. I hope you go far with this concept.

    • @lowkeyabi
      @lowkeyabi Před 4 měsíci +43

      They did the score as well!? I was trying to find the music everywhere. Hopefully they release it somewhere soon

  • @fox-hen
    @fox-hen Před 5 měsíci +1976

    Making history in the indie animation industry right now. I can't believe you animated most if not all this yourself. You are a new kind of brilliance to this industry that everyone is thirsty for!

  • @sillyntwisted
    @sillyntwisted Před 5 měsíci +1806

    OMG 30 MINUTES OF ANIMATION ALL BY YOURSELF!!?!? You should be so proud of yourself for even finishing it this, not to mention how well done everything is!! I have been following you for years and I am so excited to see where this story goes!!

    • @goldtheostrich
      @goldtheostrich Před 5 měsíci +31

      WAIT 30 MINUTES-
      This would take me 20 years, its so good!

    • @theceoofsayingno7825
      @theceoofsayingno7825 Před 5 měsíci +17

      Fr, and it doesn’t even have 100k views yet. Genuinely insane, crazy underrated. (Even if it was posted 2 days ago but still)

    • @sharkshakes
      @sharkshakes Před 5 měsíci +2

      did you not watch 30 minutes why are you surprised@@goldtheostrich

    • @goldtheostrich
      @goldtheostrich Před 5 měsíci +3

      @@sharkshakes wdym?

    • @gracekim25
      @gracekim25 Před 5 měsíci +1

      Dang that’s impressive ❤

  • @hihi-kv8kv
    @hihi-kv8kv Před 4 měsíci +180

    Atlas after blaming the guy she kidnapped instead of herself:
    Anyway, so excited for whatever's next

    • @Unoriginal-Username69
      @Unoriginal-Username69 Před 4 měsíci +10

      but hey, it was an unintentional kidnapping!!

    • @user-rw4ux3hh8p
      @user-rw4ux3hh8p Před 3 měsíci

      that work in a space port

    • @JohnDanielRay1
      @JohnDanielRay1 Před 3 měsíci +1

      Is that supposed to be criticism? Because first of all she reacted in emotion you're not supposed to take it seriously, second of all she didn't kidnap him it was an accident, and third of all a giant space tear appearing out of nowhere isn't her fault at all.

    • @hihi-kv8kv
      @hihi-kv8kv Před 3 měsíci +8

      @@JohnDanielRay1 no, I’m slandering a character, jokingly (and specifically, how her initial reaction was to blame him, rather than herself, although she came around, was not related to the space tear.) Because most good characters have flaws, and it’s fun to poke fun at their flaws. I genuinely am excited for what’s next, I just found her character flaw funny.

    • @JohnDanielRay1
      @JohnDanielRay1 Před 3 měsíci

      @@hihi-kv8kv Ah ok

  • @ramendragonmaster6211
    @ramendragonmaster6211 Před 3 měsíci +78

    I love that we can tell why Atlas probably wants to leave. The way that she talks to the ship when flying it, and she hated having Atmosphere with her we can safely assume she never had many friends, and she would prefer to be alone and isolated. That is called GOOD WRITING

    • @DarthBiomech
      @DarthBiomech Před 2 měsíci +11

      The girl doesn't even know what a handshake is, there's probably more to it than just "prefer to be alone".

    • @ramendragonmaster6211
      @ramendragonmaster6211 Před 2 měsíci +7

      @@DarthBiomech yeahh I just didn’t want to make my comment too long, thx for pointing it out

    • @ashamansedai
      @ashamansedai Před 6 dny +1

      To be fair, rather than wanting to leave because she had no friends it could be that she's made no friends because she's obsessed with leaving, or purposely didn't make friends she'd have to eventually leave behind.

  • @Get_Adamed
    @Get_Adamed Před 5 měsíci +449

    First day of the job
    Hours later stuck in a nowhere planet
    -Atmosphere

  • @ev1l_cat
    @ev1l_cat Před 5 měsíci +864

    Im reading these comments and YOU ANIMATED THIS ENTIRE THING BY YOURSELF??? Dude that is INCREDIBLE 😭
    My current fav character is Atmosphere, hes such a goofy goober i wanna hug his flooooof

    • @Botregard
      @Botregard Před 5 měsíci +20

      i can tell youre cool just from this comment

    • @sharkshakes
      @sharkshakes Před 5 měsíci +4

      or if you read the description you would have read that they did it on their own sherlock

    • @butter4104
      @butter4104 Před 5 měsíci +27

      ​@@sharkshakes the question was rhetorical.

    • @Patchoulliil
      @Patchoulliil Před 5 měsíci +26

      ⁠@@sharkshakes what’s with the attitude

    • @AmberMakesArt
      @AmberMakesArt Před 5 měsíci +8

      He jus a lil determined floof and he’s so nice

  • @xXSunStrikeXx
    @xXSunStrikeXx Před 4 měsíci +70

    You animated, half an hour of indescribable artwork, ALL BY YOURSELF? The pure TALENT, MOTIVATION, and PERSISTENCE to keep going with this project is absolutely PHENOMENAL. I really do hope you are proud of yourself. Along with everyone else who worked on this. I can't even imagine how long this took.

  • @morgangalloway1807
    @morgangalloway1807 Před 3 měsíci +12

    I think everyone should understand that a 30 minute animation made by one person on a budget of nothing or close to nothing isnt going to match the polish of studio backed projects. I think you've done a very good job

    • @e1221
      @e1221 Před 26 dny +1

      It’s honestly an incredible level of polish. I tried making a short film for my thesis and prioritized quality, and as a tradeoff I straight up wasn’t able to finish the film. Granted I’m sure this person has much more experience under their belt based on what they were able to put out, but it really goes to show how much actually goes into making something like this.

  • @zalla00
    @zalla00 Před 4 měsíci +917

    after viziepop's success with helluva boss and hazbin hotel it fills me with joy to see other indie artists/animators produce their work. Keep it up! You guys are the ones who truly care about animation!

    • @XavierXienne
      @XavierXienne Před 4 měsíci +9

      yeah,right.isn't it?

    • @day1860
      @day1860 Před 4 měsíci +27

      @@bobertbwild1350That should honestly be expected, this is animated by mostly one person! Theres going to be mistakes, and errors, and maybe awkward moments. Not to mention it’s also the first episode. But that’s ok! :)

    • @bobertbwild1350
      @bobertbwild1350 Před 4 měsíci +11

      ⁠@@day1860I deleted my previous comments because I didn’t know how to put my thoughts into words or describe why I felt that way. I agree your comment is completely right, but maybe they should tweak the first episode and make some changes. Also the episode is just so boring to watch, and it takes 30 minutes to watch it all, not all of us have time on our hands like that. Also the “Awkward moments” is what makes the first episode so bad. Here are some things that they could change.
      Scene: Stealing Spaceship.
      1: She makes a the smallest noise, takes him an abnormal amount of time to say hey what was that?
      2: They walk away for like 5 seconds and she can now suddenly stomp and run her way there?
      3: The sizing of the spaceships is very weird when she enters, first they’re fun size and in the next they’re bigger than her. But as to be expected, not even that bad though.
      4: you know what is bad? They’re security measures, this is where things go horribly wrong from the scene. She goes to the spaceship and the alarm goes off because she stepped over the white box or something. There’s just no security in sight, like at all. Where did they go? I mean for a futuristic place with thousands worth of equipment there should be some security. This just removes the suspense from the scene and making it overall a really boring experience. And excuse me? Where did you learn how to fly a spaceship? Isn’t this your first time? At least say you learned from CZcams. There’s not even a lick of security when she exits, or even a security measure after the alarms go off. Like make the place go in lock down, notify the police? Something at least! It would be way better if she snuck in with guards inside the building like checking camera while she’s sneaking to steal the spaceship trying not to make noise, and then failing, them calling other guards or police to come to area. And she escapes, damaging the ship in the process because this is her first time flying and security should have security measures.
      Scene: Security Checkpoint
      1: When he blind folds the guy, at first he screams like a maniac. And then is suddenly just chill with it?
      2: when the other security people see that their friend is being kidnapped, they just stare in awkward silence until one guy comes up and is like what is happening. You signed up for the job, shouldn’t you be a trained professional? Say something! I know it doesn’t happen often but have common sense, is everyone an introvert? Only then she calls for backup.
      3: when he runs over, he just runs in silence not yelling or anything for her to stop.
      4: When she escapes the police were notified, yay! Finally they did something right! A chase scene we love to see it! Oh wait… uhm… what the fuck? Are… this is the most chill chase scene I’ve ever scene. Shouldn’t you be panicking more? And the police, and shouldn’t you be dodging or something and not be going in a straight line? But oh wait! I forgot! The police don’t have any security measures because I’m sure no one has ever done this before. So instead of shooting at them or something they decide to slowly chase behind and do absolutely nothing.

    • @bobertbwild1350
      @bobertbwild1350 Před 4 měsíci +4

      @@day1860Again, those scenes are supposed to be intense. But they’re just not, at all. Also they might be doing too much, I feel like they could’ve split the episode in two. With my changes, of course. But then again, it’s fine how it is. And it’s an okay first episode for the first time they have released an episode. I just feel like they could’ve worked on those scenes better. Also in the chase scene it doesn’t even feel like they’re going fast, they’re just chillaxing. Idek. It’s supposed to get my heart pumping, but it really just doesn’t. The scenes just aren’t as they should be.

    • @bobertbwild1350
      @bobertbwild1350 Před 4 měsíci +1

      @@day1860And the Two scenes, I think, just deserved better. Could’ve been a lot better, but it just wasn’t intense. At all. Which was sad.

  • @aiiiia9971
    @aiiiia9971 Před 4 měsíci +631

    I don't know if people realize how much actually goes into this kind of production. As if animating the characters isn't hard enough, there's the backgrounds, the pacing of the scenes, the writing itself, the sound design, the music, the voice acting, set design, prop design, character design
    Every single thing I am seeing and hearing that to be made from scratch.
    And the fact that it was not only done, but done well, is actually ridiculous. The determination of the human spirit never fails to take me by surprise
    Congratulations on this incredible accomplishment!
    Edit: I really love this villain (or I assume he is?) I feel like he was set up so well. He's sympathetic and well rounded, and also has good reasons for what he does. I can't help but find him really intriguing

    • @avivastudios2311
      @avivastudios2311 Před 4 měsíci +6

      Yeah, like every single background is just flawless. The creator has a lot of willpower.

    • @avivastudios2311
      @avivastudios2311 Před 4 měsíci +5

      I did NOT get the impression that the reptile was a villain. I think he's just a grey character.

    • @zoex100
      @zoex100 Před měsícem

      you are very well informed of audio/video - post/pre production. (institute of audio resrearch nyc) me

  • @scout4363
    @scout4363 Před 4 měsíci +212

    I can’t believe you made and COMPOSED THIS The music is amazing! Everything about this is so much cleaner than most shows with full budgets and teams. You’ve managed to put so much relevant introductions in 30 minutes without making it feel too fluffy and I was invested the entire time. The colors, effects, expressions, characters, voice acting all amazing! Even without the context of just how amazing this is as a product on CZcams

  • @higztv1166
    @higztv1166 Před měsícem +6

    That final dialogue between Atlas and Atmosphere is so weird. Atmoshpere is supposed to be this enthusiactic security officer on his first day, and the fact that he didn't even mention that Atlas is basically a criminal when he got mad doesn't make any sense! From his POV, he was just doing his job and some criminal with a stolen vehicle got him into troubles - I can't imagine how this is not an important point for him to make
    He's just standing there taking punches, when he has every right to blame her for what happened

  • @gyrrakavian
    @gyrrakavian Před 5 měsíci +71

    When the antagonist asks their loved ones why they stay silent/hide, and then pretty much answers their own question.

  • @Sundialsandsands
    @Sundialsandsands Před 5 měsíci +390

    Also at 19:25 I love the little detail where they glitch into the older art style you happened to draw them in :0

    • @owadziarz
      @owadziarz Před 5 měsíci +24

      Gravity Falls weirdness bubbles reference maybe??

    • @BillCiphersArtist
      @BillCiphersArtist Před 4 měsíci +8

      ​@@owadziarz or any other show that has done that

  • @ashleypisarts
    @ashleypisarts Před 3 měsíci +9

    I love how Atlas and Atmosphere have names and color palettes that pertain to their universe while Nebula and the villain (who reminds me of Hordak in the best possible way) have designs that reflect their own universe. I love all of these little details, and I truly hope that this show gets a crew and continues, because this has insane potential!! 💕💕

  • @peanutbutterandgravy1370
    @peanutbutterandgravy1370 Před 4 měsíci +42

    DUDE THIS IS LITERALLY SO CUTE??? ATMOSPHERE IS SO BABYGIRL??? Also I might have to make Quasar a better magical girl transformation, because while he's a liiiittle bit evil, he deserves to be a cutesy magical girl.

  • @fievsol
    @fievsol Před 5 měsíci +530

    the fact that you animated and made the music for this is absolutely incredible. as someone who’s animated a short film before huge hats off to you this is so great!!!

  • @Raylas_Voice
    @Raylas_Voice Před 5 měsíci +87

    This was so f*cking great. I like how Quasar's attitude flips constantly between evil emperor and savior. But in the end he's, both. I really love bad guys that aren't necessarily evil. Or at least not evil in the classic sense.
    I'm hoping for more of this beautiful show. It's so awesome.

    • @samsonarshaw2712
      @samsonarshaw2712 Před 4 měsíci +3

      along with that, he has reason for not wanting to relocate to the other universe.

    • @tysondennis1016
      @tysondennis1016 Před 4 měsíci +3

      He’s such a compelling antagonist. Won’t say villain just yet, he has a good motive and lost loved ones, so…

  • @V_MC
    @V_MC Před 4 měsíci +33

    Space is one of those things beyond human comprehension and that's what makes it so magical. I've always loved the idea of a massive open space filled with pure light and other elements, rather than it scaring me, i find it comforting. We as a species are still trying to explore those parts probably never seen by organic life before, we don't know if we're really alone.
    I think that's why i fall in love with outerspace sci-fi media like this, being able to literally escape to a world far different from this one or just drifting through the stars.. it's a dream i'll never reach.
    But for the time being, i'll just keep listening to glittery outerspace-y, Steven Universe-esque music, shift into those realities when subconcious and follow this absolutely *beautifully animated series.*

  • @Leonagraphy
    @Leonagraphy Před 4 měsíci +23

    This is so underrated that I can’t help but believe it will seriously blow up one day

  • @noobmasterruben5167
    @noobmasterruben5167 Před 5 měsíci +96

    The main character and background aesthetic is giving me She ra 2018 vibes

    • @Flora_11258
      @Flora_11258 Před měsícem +1

      bro and the handshake thing is giving me owl house vibes😭😭

  • @PolarSummit
    @PolarSummit Před 5 měsíci +198

    THIS IS CRAZY AMAZING??? I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED EVERY BIT OF THIS AND oh my gOSH I love the character designs SO MUCH!! And it’s so colorful and pretty and so well animated too HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE???? First episode and I’m hooked!!! I seriously can’t wait to see more of this!! AHHHH 💖💖💖

  • @lilltin
    @lilltin Před 4 měsíci +65

    I can’t tell if I like the writing or don’t like it yet. But the animation is golden and I love those voice actors you choose for your character’s. I can’t wait to see where this ends up ❤️

    • @koboldcatgirl
      @koboldcatgirl Před 4 měsíci +11

      I think the writing could be a bit more graceful in places--there are times characters Tell us stuff that would have made more sense Shown, or could have at least been exposited more subtly, and some of the events feel a little contrived/rushed through (like Atlas easily escaping the station, Tall Guy not trying harder to stop her while they flew), but a lot of those issues may actually be limitations of storyboard/animation. Some compromises have to be made when it's a one-person animator. Like, they could have animated a complicated sequence of them fighting over the controls harder before she either subdues him or the pressure of the speed forces him to strap in, but that's harder to animate! Likewise, the bit where Atlas and Tall Guy go in a circle would be better sold with a whole montage, and wouldn't require her to clarify to the audience, "Aaand we went in a circle", but that also takes way more time and animation to pull off.
      I think minor contrivances/rushjobs like that are really common in pilots, where people are still figuring out the limits of each episode, where they're still learning what they have time for and what absolutely needs to be conveyed at all costs. The writing may start to feel more deft as we get further in.

    • @lilltin
      @lilltin Před 4 měsíci +2

      @@koboldcatgirl couldn’t agree more with yea, that’s why I subscribed to keep tabs. This series has potential and I can’t wait to see it grow in all kinds of way’ for sure.

    • @JohnDanielRay1
      @JohnDanielRay1 Před 3 měsíci +3

      @@koboldcatgirl Name some examples, because I don't know what you mean when you reference subtlety. What could the tall guy have done that he didn't already do? He tried to stop the ship and he was angry about being trapped in the ship until Atlas convinced him that she'd bring him back home. Also what's your point on the circle part? Your proposal just wastes time because her reaction already made sense and it adds nothing to the narrative.

    • @e1221
      @e1221 Před 26 dny +2

      I also agree that some of the writing is a bit clumsy at times, and the dialogue especially could have left the viewer with more to infer as opposed to stating information outright, so that the subtext can do the heavy lifting when the story hits more emotional moments. But there’s an energy to this pilot that’s absolutely infectious to me - the creator’s passion for the story and its character shines through so clearly that it’s honestly inspiring. I’ve come back to rewatch this several times since it came out because it gives me hope that I could make something similar one day. The show is absolutely greater than the sum of its parts so far and I’m really excited to see where it goes

  • @user-vs4ir7xy9w
    @user-vs4ir7xy9w Před 4 měsíci +20

    Seems like a nice indie animation series definitely deserves more recognition

  • @leavemealone802
    @leavemealone802 Před 5 měsíci +387

    Everyone is saying how amazing it is you did all the animation and music by yourself. and that is not a lie! I personally LOVED the music. You should be very proud. No matter if it will go viral or not, you did something fantastic and you should hold this accomplisment with pride
    about the story, I am VERY invested to see where it will go. I think it has all the elements to be something amazing. I am chearing for your success!

    • @sharkshakes
      @sharkshakes Před 5 měsíci +2

      yeah of course its not a lie thats not a revelation.

    • @tayloradams3993
      @tayloradams3993 Před 5 měsíci +11

      honestly, the music was the best part for me! The animation and voice acting are really good, especially for a small production, but that music is so perfect. It matched every story beat and emotion perfectly!

    • @DrAngelKins
      @DrAngelKins Před 5 měsíci +3

      Yeah it's gonna go viral

  • @N3rd_love
    @N3rd_love Před 5 měsíci +695

    I really like the concepts and art style. The writing needs a bit more of the "Show, don't tell" narrative technique. Too often, the story beats were told to us instead of shown. I think some of the planets eating stuff would have been better conveyed through subtext instead of directly stating his motivation. However, a lot was crammed into this one episode. I love how the characters' personalities were shown and the voice acting is very impressive and I look forward to seeing what's next
    (Edit)
    Omg you animated this by youself, THATS AMAZING.

    • @NezumiMaus
      @NezumiMaus Před 4 měsíci +8

      no,stop just shut up
      you guys hear one writing technique and act like it's law when it's now somtimes it's good to use but other times it's not bc you need things explained to you other wise no one would fuckin understand what's going on

    • @meddler-gz1ks
      @meddler-gz1ks Před 4 měsíci +145

      @@NezumiMaus it was just some constructive criticism man, chill out

    • @allenbrown3974
      @allenbrown3974 Před 4 měsíci +6

      Stop that it's not easy to do this....his series is phenomenal very nice he should keep up the good work

    • @allenbrown3974
      @allenbrown3974 Před 4 měsíci

      Stop that it's not easy to do this....his series is phenomenal very nice he should keep up the good work

    • @allenbrown3974
      @allenbrown3974 Před 4 měsíci

      Stop that it's not easy to do this....his series is phenomenal very nice he should keep up the good work

  • @ChronologicalFern
    @ChronologicalFern Před 4 měsíci +15

    I'd like to start out by saying the animation is wonderful, and the voices are a very good fit the characters.
    However, the dialogue could use quite a lot of work, and a lot of it is unnecessary, besides being riddled with generic sentences where the dialogue could simply be removed oe expressed differently. Many of these scenes could largely benefit from the good ol' "show don't tell", and I am not one to usually believe that this is an absolute rule, just very useful in cases like this.
    The storyboarding could use some polish around dialogue as well, the deliveries are sometimes built dry because of it.
    I'd also like to say that the worldbuilding has a lot of potential, and I'd love to see it more explored!
    Either way, nice work everyone! I hope to see more!

    • @ChronologicalFern
      @ChronologicalFern Před 4 měsíci +1

      I'd like to add that the story is intriguing, and I like the way you are spinning things.

  • @mitskistears
    @mitskistears Před 3 měsíci +8

    i love atmosphere so much thank you for making him his tail wagging is so adorable such a silly humongous man

  • @karlfarrell6790
    @karlfarrell6790 Před 5 měsíci +85

    The fact this is built by one person is incredible. Perfect character interaction, story driven animation with comedy when it matters. I can’t wait to see what’s next. Subscribed.

  • @vonniemason2730
    @vonniemason2730 Před 5 měsíci +131

    I like this story so much. The characters have creative designs, the problems they run into are believable, and their personalities make sense! This story has a lot of reminiscence to She-Ra, and I can tell you likely grew up watching it. I don't know if you want criticism for things so far at all, but there definitely were some story beats that just didn't hit home for me! I already feel bad for our clear antagonist, with the "I am missing my family and planet" arc being introduced as a retribution concept so early, and especially as their countenance changes so rapidly through the story in a rather bipolar fashion from guarded and mean to vulnerable. It's only your first episode, and I think you could definitely introduce them as an outright terrible guy. The beats in some areas feel rushed, especially the "fight, timeskip, okay i guess we're working together" scene. It almost feels like it didn't need to happen- it would have left some time to extend the gag of not understanding a handshake or something. However, don't take these criticisms as a mark of failure. You've only just made your first huge public content, and these are the marks of someone learning how to structure a story. Leaning on some cliches here and there is expected and feels good to see! I loved Atlas especially for her inventive and rebellious attitude, she really reflects a lot of my own nature. I can't wait to see more about this and maybe even a little fan community form around it! Please don't ever stop doing what you love.

  • @VultureWarrior
    @VultureWarrior Před 3 měsíci +11

    This is amazing! I'm so glad that I was able find yet another underrated Sci-fi series, like Monkey Wrench, Hugo's Mind Place, and Godspeed. Also, I can't believe that this was animated by only ONE person.

  • @its.a.me.mar-mar
    @its.a.me.mar-mar Před 4 měsíci +24

    This is INCREDIBLE. I will be coming back for the next episode. This is so cool, and the animation so smooth. I love it.

  • @trueMAXIMUS
    @trueMAXIMUS Před 5 měsíci +76

    you animated this entire thing by YOURSELF?!?! you’re a madman. this is so gorgeous and awe inspiring, this is something that you can be proud of for the rest of your life. absolutely stunning work. congratulations

  • @smoreoscookie4335
    @smoreoscookie4335 Před 5 měsíci +99

    This is honestly incredible that you managed to do all of this ON YOUR OWN? THIRTY WHOLE MINUTES TOO?? Dude you’re insane and already have to say Nebula is my favourite! Really impressive animation and voice work, I hope to see you and your VAs get the appreciation and respect you all deserve! ^^
    Edit: also when the music kicked in at 3:30 that was a genuine bop

  • @akiraocto9205
    @akiraocto9205 Před měsícem +3

    these characters are SO GOOD im so excited to see them interact more!!

  • @romantheshowman5391
    @romantheshowman5391 Před 4 měsíci +21

    My crave for Space shows keeps growing by the second! This is absolutely stellar for it to be written, created, and animated by a single person! Indie animation just keeps getting more and more better with stuff like this. Keep up the good work!

  • @animeloverakabluemoonhasti8689
    @animeloverakabluemoonhasti8689 Před 5 měsíci +131

    THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL. It's giving Steven Universe aesthetic with She-ra Dynamics and Owl House Potential! You're bold and completely right in stating that THIS IS NOT A PILOT. It's a masterpiece, I'm fully hooked with the characters and oh the antagonist! Yes, we needed this. The animation in itself is expressive and stunning. The story telling is off to a great start and the moments of humanity [THAT MANY STUDIOS FORGET TO ADD] are so REAL. I'm looking forward to what comes next and you're already up there with the top animation series coming this year:Helluva Boss, Lackadaisy, Murder Drones, The Amazing Digital Circus! Keep working at it! This is phenomenal!!❤❤

  • @AdventureNoises
    @AdventureNoises Před 5 měsíci +113

    Beyond thrilled to see a project we’ve had an eye on do so awesomely and absolutely ROCK THIS MUCH! Ahhhh the designs are so fun, the story is a delight, and we can’t wait to see more!

  • @avivastudios2311
    @avivastudios2311 Před 4 měsíci +10

    How do you have this much TALENT?!!?!
    Artwork, backgrounds, music, sound effects... HOW!?!!

  • @star_ags
    @star_ags Před 4 měsíci +9

    Wait you did animation, screenwriting and music?! That's so much work, I can't even comprehend. I am so intrigued by this story, so many questions and I adore Atmosphere. Random dude that got himself that is something bigger than he could imagine is my kind of fav character. I really hope you will continue this project.

  • @swirlseypop
    @swirlseypop Před 5 měsíci +89

    I ABSOLUTELY ADORE HOW THIS TURNED OUT !!! WHAT AN INCREDIBLE FEAT!!!! so many stunning shots and KILLER music,, i enjoyed every single character, their dynamics between each other, i cannot WAIT for more‼️‼️ you should be so so proud of your efforts, this was incredible miranda!!! 💪

  • @Rayova23
    @Rayova23 Před 5 měsíci +31

    Thiry minutes of indie animation..BEST HECKING WAY TO START OFF 2024! This is really amazing with SO much potential!! i cannot wait to see how the lore and world building play out in the story!!

  • @Grassy-Fire
    @Grassy-Fire Před měsícem +2

    Bruh this deserves more views and this person needs more subs

  • @aerovaktra
    @aerovaktra Před 4 měsíci +5

    I wasn't immediately sold but I freaking love Atmosphere and all the characters (and the worldbuilding is super interesting). Count me in! Can't wait to see more of what you do with this series

  • @delphilily
    @delphilily Před 5 měsíci +77

    I can't wait to see it! It's been two years since I first started following your art & original series and it's so beautiful to see how far it has come!

  • @starrywisp
    @starrywisp Před 5 měsíci +54

    omg this is INSANE??? It’s SO GOOD?? HOW DID YOU ANIMATE THIS ALL YOURSELF?!? MASSIVE RESPECT, THIS SERIES LOOKS AMAZING AND I CAN’T WAIT TO SEE WHERE IT GOES!! This is right up my alley and every aspect is impeccable, omg.

  • @MEMERisSILLY
    @MEMERisSILLY Před měsícem +2

    this is awesome so far, can't wait for further episodes!

  • @-itzpixie_pandaartz-613
    @-itzpixie_pandaartz-613 Před 4 měsíci +10

    ✨PHENOMENAL✨ It’s been years I’ve been planning on starting a voice acted animated series animated by myself and I thought it would be impossible but take a look at this! It’s amazing! The fact that you also composed those soundtracks yourself is beyond mind blowing. Great job! Can’t wait for more!

  • @chillcoffee7600
    @chillcoffee7600 Před 5 měsíci +35

    This project deserves more attention from the indie animation fans. THIS IS AMAZING, KEEP IT UP

  • @karucovers_gt
    @karucovers_gt Před 5 měsíci +25

    This is just brutal! I feel like i'm seeing some Netflix thing! You deserve all the support dear Mir! I hope you keep receiving support! And keep working and doing what you love! I know all your works is going to be loved because you are offering the same. All my good wishes❤❤❤🎉

  • @deficit06
    @deficit06 Před 3 měsíci +4

    Ok, the whole secuence of harmonizing the song at the rythinm of the alarm at 3:28 secuence is freaking brilliant!

  • @spiderparades
    @spiderparades Před 4 měsíci +5

    aaaand im invested! im so grateful to be living in a new era of indie animation. your designs and animation style are so appealing to the eye, and the colors make such great contrast.
    i cant wait for you to have a whole team to work with and bring this story to life!

  • @noteglitch5032
    @noteglitch5032 Před 5 měsíci +24

    Atmosphere is giving me papyrus vibes in the best way possible

  • @kat_draws__
    @kat_draws__ Před 5 měsíci +42

    The wait to this was so worth it. I was so mesmerized by the smooth animation and calm aesthetic to it all. Not to mention the insane lore that’s actually easy to understand. It’s all so beautiful. I can’t wait for more! 🧡

  • @Ooglybogly
    @Ooglybogly Před 4 měsíci +6

    I have found a new hyperfixiation
    Also ATMOSPHERE MY PRECIOUS

  • @gcharb2d
    @gcharb2d Před 2 měsíci +1

    As a 2D animator myself, I humbly bow to your talent and to your dedication to this project.

  • @EmilyParagraph
    @EmilyParagraph Před 5 měsíci +17

    This just popped up in my recommended and I'm so glad it did! I love the vibes, the atmosphere, and as soon as I saw the morally dubious sad man, I was hooked. Will definitely keep up with this!

  • @maddlesz
    @maddlesz Před 5 měsíci +36

    I’m absolutely blown away, every aspect of this was so, so beautiful!!! From the animation, to the music, to the sound design, to the character interactions….like WOW!! :D this was absolutely worth the wait and I’m looking forward to more episodes in the future!!

  • @timebubble8421
    @timebubble8421 Před měsícem +1

    this was beautiful! and the fact you animated it all by yourself is extremely impressive. You should be extremely proud of yourself! And all the others who worked on it this an amazing job aswel!

  • @jerome7443
    @jerome7443 Před 4 měsíci

    the character designs are amazing! your art style is easy on the eyes and the world building is truly thought out and intricate. keep up the good work

  • @nightmare101cat
    @nightmare101cat Před 5 měsíci +16

    This show seems to have a lot of potential! :D

  • @ffoof
    @ffoof Před 4 měsíci +25

    You needed a Award for animating a whole episode of a show by yourself!!!!!!!!!!

  • @-sn4k3-94
    @-sn4k3-94 Před 4 měsíci +3

    THIS IS INCREDIBLE!! Keep it going, please, I love this universe so much already!!🔥🔥🔥

  • @CrazyCrunchie
    @CrazyCrunchie Před 4 měsíci +4

    This is breathtaking! You should be so proud of this!

  • @WingsOfSerenity
    @WingsOfSerenity Před 5 měsíci +20

    Incredible Pilot! I love the character design and the style of the animation! Hope this blows the hell up, it would be so cool to see it getting the attention it deserves!

  • @Teelia
    @Teelia Před 5 měsíci +25

    YEAAAAH YOU DID IT CONGRATS and hopefully it's the beginning of many more! You did an amazing job and I can't wait to see what's in the future for this!

  • @Insertusrname
    @Insertusrname Před 3 měsíci +1

    this is so coool man your so gigchand for writing composing teh music and animating ALL THIS by urself mad genius!!

  • @Kam_omega
    @Kam_omega Před 4 měsíci +4

    I'll just say, WHAT A MASTERPIECE BY GOD! I speak Spanish but I understand English very very well and I really don't have the words to say how much I love this pilot, if the pilot is already like this, what will the series be like? OBVIOUSLY IT WILL BE A VERY VERY INCREDIBLE AND EPIC THING IN EVERY SENSE!! The voices, the designs, the animation, backgrounds, sound effects EVERYTHING IS JUST WONDERFUL! Really, good luck with this magnificent project, I swear that when the series premieres I will see each one of the chapters, this deserves a complete fandom! I hope people discover it and like it as much as I do, good luck really, I hope it goes great for you with your project!

  • @AthenaPOfficial
    @AthenaPOfficial Před 5 měsíci +8

    OOooOoOOo!!!!!!! 🤩 Subscribed! so so excited to see more! Stellar pilot 🤌

  • @ML-dk8xl
    @ML-dk8xl Před 5 měsíci +11

    THIS IS SPECTACULAR!! It reminds me so much of the cartoons I loved as a kid, and I could totally see it having a place on a streaming network. It's an extraordinary feat for own person alone, and highly quality at that. So stoked for more in the future hopefully? Take my money!

  • @spacedtea
    @spacedtea Před 4 měsíci

    This showed up in my recommended feed and OMG I LOVE ITTTTTT!!!! It’s so underrated and doesn’t have enough views as it deserves. This is absolutely amazing, and the character design is absolutely amazing!
    Cant wait for the next episode :D

  • @moth663
    @moth663 Před 4 měsíci

    I'm blown away that this is so good and a full 30 minutes too! I've followed your story for awhile now on instagram and I'm so proud to see what you've done with your work! Major props to you and the voice actors.

  • @Insomniaaron
    @Insomniaaron Před 5 měsíci +5

    Really good first outing. A solo effort in the animation I see, which is rather remarkable. The crack in time and Atlas running from here home reminded me of Doctor Who minus the time travel, and the ship reminded me of Aphelion from Ratchet & Clank.

  • @iceykicey5048
    @iceykicey5048 Před 5 měsíci +27

    I’ve been following you since 2016 and it’s amazing to see how far you’ve come! I’m so excited to watch this :))

  • @Any-mation
    @Any-mation Před 4 měsíci

    Hey this is so incredible. Well done on following your passion, making this and sharing it!

  • @trinityriordan2943
    @trinityriordan2943 Před 4 měsíci +1

    This is amazing!!! How have I not seen this!!! You deserve a lot of praise.

  • @epichealer
    @epichealer Před 5 měsíci +13

    I need a second episode! The environments, characters, and other lore bits are all so well-put together! I genuinely think this is a wonderful animation that’s deserving of way more credit! (I think I only found this a few weeks ago so this is so neat!) ❤

  • @Enirahtak8
    @Enirahtak8 Před 5 měsíci +20

    I'm really, really hooked into this story, I particularly love Atmosphere and his character design, as well as the mystery of the 'fed planet' and Quasar's backstory and motives. I just really, *really* hope you get some help with the next episodes. While it is, of course, absolutely amazing that you animated this by yourself, I imagine it could be that much better and that much more appreciated by indie animation fans if you were able to get a team of animators together to help you work on this. I was particularly distracted by the walk cycles, they just felt really off to me. Having said that, I'm not a professional animator myself and I'm in awe of the talent that animators have, I think I've just been spoiled by the quality of indie animated shows recently. I just hope that, as this series continues, the animation quality improves, so that it can be more polished and even more excellent than it already is. Looking forward to seeing more, but please, *please* don't rush! Bye for now. :-)

  • @flunart
    @flunart Před 4 měsíci

    What an incredible first episode, you did a fantastic job both on the animation AND the score, it's surreal!

  • @xX1108Xx
    @xX1108Xx Před 4 měsíci

    This is absolutely STUNNING !! Truly underrated !! Such beautiful animation, and style. And the character designs r gorgeous too !

  • @Kittencloudy4u
    @Kittencloudy4u Před 5 měsíci +8

    YOOO THIS AMAZING WTH?? i just finished watching and i love it so far 😭 its insane to me how you did 30 minutes of pure animation all by yourself thats crazy!!! Ive been following you for what seems like forever and its so amazing to see this finally come out i cant wait to see whats in store for Atlas and atmosphere 😭💖💞✨️ and incredible work by all the voice actors as well this whole thing is just so insane and inspiring!!!

  • @jasonpeck5401
    @jasonpeck5401 Před 5 měsíci +13

    Wow. I’m very impressed.
    All the details in your animation are very breathtaking.
    The characters are really interesting and the voice actors did very great portraying them!
    Congratulations on getting this episode done. I’m hooked and can’t wait for what happens next!

  • @EllaHasNoClueWhatShesDoing
    @EllaHasNoClueWhatShesDoing Před 3 měsíci

    This is absolutely STUNNING! The character designs, the backdrops, it's all very beautiful. I am so excited!

  • @gvlbright
    @gvlbright Před 14 dny +1

    Wow...watching this was very inspirational. You've crafted a fascinating world here, I loved the character designs, the plot was full of interesting twists and turns, and I'm eager to see how it continues!

  • @SimbolosS
    @SimbolosS Před 5 měsíci +13

    I still can't believe this was animated by one person, with so much detail, You definitely deserve attention to this project!

  • @moonywolf13
    @moonywolf13 Před 5 měsíci +5

    Been following these characters for a long while. It's SO surreal to finally watch them!! I cannot fathom how much patience this took you to make, but it turned out so gorgeous!! Genuinely looks like something a whole studio would make. Absolutely blown away by your talent!!

  • @michalinaata5267
    @michalinaata5267 Před 4 měsíci +1

    it’s amazing! so wholesome 🥺💖 I absolutely love the designs of alien races like those animalistic features (tales, ears, noses etc) it seems like a well developed world! good job and I can’t wait for another episode!!!

  • @plasticyarn2747
    @plasticyarn2747 Před 4 měsíci

    Okay I’m hooked. This is amazing! The story is so intriguing and I love your style! The VA’s were spot on! Spectacular! The whole thing!!

  • @zanyreptiles
    @zanyreptiles Před 5 měsíci +6

    Insane how you animated this all on your own! I’ve been following you for many years now and it has been incredible to see how far your talents, abilities, and hard work has taken you. Amazingly done, I cannot wait to see what’s next!!

  • @E0NBREAK
    @E0NBREAK Před 5 měsíci +15

    I'm so excited to see this! It's always nice to see new animated series come out here on youtube, the clips I've seen so far are absolutely amazing and I wish you the best of luck in succeeding with the project :,D! It's really amazing to see how far this series has come!

  • @LucasPlay171
    @LucasPlay171 Před 3 měsíci +2

    350k views??? Daaam bro this deserves WAAAY more

  • @Raltziicoon
    @Raltziicoon Před 4 měsíci

    This is awesome!! The characters personalities and designs are really unique and I'm really excited to see how things pan out!!

  • @finalfroggitapproaches6418
    @finalfroggitapproaches6418 Před 5 měsíci +12

    This is brilliant! The music, the character designs, the *intrigue*.. I’m eating this up like you would not believe.
    I’m going to share this with everyone I can, because doing this as a one-person show is.. Terrifying and deserves FAR more credit than you’re getting with these views. This is stellar work and I’m absolutely ravenous for more of your work!

  • @jmekjmek
    @jmekjmek Před 5 měsíci +4

    THIS IS ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC WORK!!! You should be so proud 🖤 the animation and voice acting and the music are amazing!

  • @theboiyouddate5722
    @theboiyouddate5722 Před 3 měsíci +2

    OMFG! You did the writing, the composition, the animation, all on your own!?!?! That's insanity! It's wonderful what you've made, and props to casting, the voice actors you chose are so amazing and fit their roles so well!!! Can't wait to see more ahhhh!!!

  • @wolfandhorselover235
    @wolfandhorselover235 Před měsícem +1

    This needs more views… the animation style made me filled with stagger, I couldn’t believe that CZcams hasn’t made this pilot on the recommended page…
    This deserves more panorama of outstanding content like this.