Better Days - Complete Warriors MAP
Vložit
- čas přidán 26. 03. 2017
- Whenever one of these MAPs get finished I feel so proud, and now that it’s one of my own MAPs? Oh my god I can’t describe how happy I am right now!
Thank you SO MUCH to everyone who was involved in the making of this MAP, everyone who supported the project, made fanart, left lovely comments on the parts made by the animators, and a big thank you to people who just now found the MAP and are watching it for the first time now! Be sure to go and subscribe to every one of these insanely talented people! This project could have never gotten done without them!
I hope you enjoyed and I hope you’re all having a wonderful day!
Parts:
I'm Water, Ya Dummy! / @thenameiswater2921
Blixemi / blixemi
Finchwing / finchwing
Tsuki NF / nekomatafujoshi
Crashydelflou / @crashydelflou7479
TangleClaw / tangleclaw
TheDogzLife / thedogzlife
AulrenArts / @renastraea3980
xJaystarzx / xjaystarzx
MapleSpyder / mclarenf1lm22
HulluMel and XJaystarzx / hullumel and / xjaystarzx
Tea Ivy / @mikahnical
Nightfeather / @nightfeather
MtfoxX3 / @mtfoxx3
Chikki Noodles / pixelchikki
TennelleFlowers
XxLunaWarriorxX / xxlunawarriorxx
TennelleFlowers
D3LT4R1-2 / @bloocat20
Illbringyoudown / illbringyoudown
Tusofsky / theunknownsoul
Sagutoyas / sagutoyas
WolFirry / @firriapril
Thumbnail art by renflights: / @singedsilver943
Songs from Bensound.com
Programs used to edit this MAP: Premiere, After Effects, Illustrator
Characters, story, and Dialogue all belong to Erin Hunter
Dangerous Path, pg 168 - Zábava
INCOHERENT SHRIEKING
You know I forgot how HGNNGNGNF this scene was like no kidding The OG Warriors was HARDCORE
MmmMmmm there's something so SATISFYING ABOUT LIPSYNCING and tHOSE EXPRESSIONS YAAASSS why is everyone so talented I'm at a loss for words
This was such an original and creative idea. Do more. More scenes. More talking cats.
Talking caaaaaaats :D
Yeah! Sooner or later the MAPs are why we don't need to read the books anymore!
butterflyidentity
*YEESSSSSSSSS*
-pokes face-
butterflyidentity I've seeen you in a different channel I think
Megan :3 she is a CZcamser
WHEN WILL YOU LEARN, WHEN WILL YOU LEARN, *THAT YOUR ACTIONS HAVE CONSEQUENCES*
Northflower OwO *incoherent screeching*
What are you doing here :DDD
Never.
*unholy screeching*
YOU FRICKIN FRICKS!1!1!1!
"Tennelleflowers Yells At Her Husband For 5 Minutes" the MAP
That's what the title should have been!
Wolfin Silver
The truth. XD
LOL
That us not her husband
Mariah Langdoc Yes it is, tenneell’s husband plays fireheart
Tennelle: Dramatic reading and multi-animator projects of emotional scenes in the books
Moonkitti: These are ridiculous cat books but they are my ridiculous cat books.
Omg yes
Katie Tang ok boomer
Katie Tang why exactly did we need to hear your rude opinion? Frick off.
@Katie Tang Uhm... I may not be a Moonkitti fan either but I don't say rude things for no reason and act like a toddler! Keep your opinion to yourself. Moonkitti has done nothing wrong. It's a different thing if you hate someone who has a history of being racist, transphobic, homophobic or similiarly, for example, but Moonkitti is literally just someone with an opinion you can respectfully agree or disagree with. Learn some manners before commenting again, would you?
@Katie Tang yes, because the Warriors books are so MASTERFULLY written!
/sarcasm
"I'll let you be deputy still and become leader after me."
Fireheart looks so nervous.
@Isabella Lin Actually he didn't even want to be deputy. However he did his job really well.
Bluestar: I want to be the best leader I can for my clan
Also Bluestar: why should I care if the whole of ThunderClan had been slaughtered
I mean, these were two different times when she was going through two different emotions. Everyone at one point in their life says something then says something that contradicts it. Its just how it works
...... wUt
Blue star really is an emotional mess
No that's normal bluestar and the second one is betrayed and depressed bluestar.
Cripleing depresion
I could actually hear the pain in Bluestar's voice when she said "Stay. Where. You. ARE."
So did I...
SAMEEEEEEEE
Blue star:get out of my sight!!!!
Fireheart: *innocent eyes*
The eyes so *CUTE* !!!!!!
Gray Sky IKR
UwU
Fr
Omg yaaaasssss
3:35
*Pinestar watches over them.* “What is up with my clan?”
*Snowfur walks up.* “Why do you think I ran in front of a car?”
LMAO
Mosskit: I DIED FOR MY MOTHER TO BE LIKE THIS? WHAT THE FUCK MOM
Moonflower: do you know why I died of protecting the nursery because of you and snowfur!,and you treat the clan as trash!
@@abigailw7146 NOT THE SWEARING 😭
@@Ylva-Moonlight Moonflower didn't die protecting the nursery, she died on the Windclan raid.
Bluestar: Ooh that should please Starclan..
Starclan: *Middle finger*
Natsuki LMAOO
Alezoon XD ikr btw its middle claw
Alezoon OMG XD
Alezoon, I LOVE WHAT U WROTE!!!!!!
Lol
Bluestar lost...
1:Her mom
2: Her dad didn't give a shit
3: Her sister
4: Her mate
5: Her kits
6: Her deputy/ friend
7: Then she basically became cooko for cocoa puffs
Natalie Litkenhous
And even though she had all that depression in her life, and still managed to stay strong for a bit, before she snapped, she is met with hate for her flaws, whereas cats like Scourge got beat up this one time, and teased by siblings, then he became a murderer, yet is met with love, and called “misunderstood..”.
Bluestar is my favourite character. She risked everything to prevent thistleclaw from being leader. She already had lost her sister when her sister started dating thistleclaw. The thunderpath death was just to make it official. You know all the painfull deaths she's been trough, right? Yet she only snapped years after her kit's death. When tigerclaw betrayed her. And she had collected herself in the end. Saving thunderclan one last time. If bluestar got resurrected as a kittypet *she will be mine*
*and I'll treat her like a godess, cause that's what she deserves.*
@dinthe elbers
*no she'll be mine and i'll treat her better than a goddess. i'll fight you for her*
@@anavalladares1 you're on
@@Stick_and_stone Bluestar is a hypocrite and a fool. You know how she claimed that White-Eye wasn't a pleasant name for a Warrior? She went the fuck ahead and named Brightpaw LOSTFACE. What kind of sane 'leader' would do that? She also treated Oakheart like shit in StarClan when all he wants to do is make her happy. Fireheart even warned Bluestar about Tigeratar and you think she'd be a little considerate right? Wrong. She told Fireheart off and claimed her deputy would never betray her. Look where that got her now! I honestly dont give a shit what she when through or what she's done for ThunderClan, her actions will *NEVER* be justified.
She sacrifice soo much, yet, felt empty inside.
Tigerclaw's betrayal was the last thing that ended up breaking her... =:(
Y'know, Bluestar could have struck a real nerve if she said a KITTYPET leading a clan, and yet she never did. She never once challenged his living in the way the others did. She came to her senses in the end, but I think she never fully lost them.
I'm only just noticing that! She usually judges cats by their actions, not where they come from.
And if someone says that she did say something about someone's background, notice that I said, "Usually."
T I G E R S T A R would say this, NOT BLUESTAR.
"They get back and TennelleFlowers yells at her husband" -Moonkitti
AHHHH MOONKITTEH
XD I love your profile pic
Average Idiot YES BEAUTIFUL MOONKITTI
OMG THATS WHAT THAT JOKE WAS IN REFERENCE TO!?! THIS VIDEO AAAHHH
it’s so much funnier now
Yeah what video Is this from?
This makes me want to cry. It's obvious Bluestar is suffering and shes slowly losing her mind :'(
She's dead now....so is Firestar
Mitsu Chan I think we all know that
B K, yes same here
"Stay...… where...… you...….. are...….." Go get Cinderpelt she's mad.
*STAY. WHERE. YOU. ARE.*
@@starcycle4308 I need to punish you Fireheart tell me a good punishment for a traitor.
@@ifloridawarriorcatfan9918 *quiet sigh* ...I don't know, Bluestar.
@@abbyporter1509 But I do I know the best punishment of all I’ll do nothing
@@abbyporter1509 I’ll let you be deputy still and leader after me oh that should please Starclan a traitor leading a clan of traitors.
So, like, I actually started panicking when I read this scene and got overwhelmed and cried a small bit? It was fun
I got sad and disappointed for some reason
I love drama like this- so I was sort of happy lol
I’m odd
What even happened? I’ve read rising storm I just can’t match this up to any part in the book edit: never mind I just finished reading a dangerous path and I found this bit and now I get it Fireheart told Tallstar about Bluestars attack.
I still think Tennelle is the perfect voice for Bluestar. Anyone agree??
i do
Me
definitely!
YeEt
Same
honestly seeing bluestar break down was the saddest thing to read when I was 11. I cried when I saw this noble leader reduced into a shadow of her former self. I will never forgive tigerstar for what he did to bluebay
Aw--wait, Bluebay...?
Bluebæ
Guys, if you could NOT call me "Bluebay," Oakheart and my family are getting confused, whilst Oakheart is kinda mad....
Her anger is so understandable and god I love her and I feel so sorry for her!! Bluestar’s prophecy made me cry so many times.
Amelia dockerty
Uhm, I think you meant Bluebæ?
I love the fact Bluestar wanna be talking about not breaking the warrior code but she known for breaking the code
Ooh, I smell a hypocrite...
She wasn't exactly mentally stable here.
Yeah she’s a traitor for having kits with Oakheart
I felt so sad at 2:19 Fireheart looks so hurt and Bluestar doesn't even care, He knows he did something wrong but he always saw Bluestar as a mother figure, and her talking about her kits and basically how she would rather have them than the clan (Including Fireheart ;-;) probably made him feel so sad and disappointed in himself. That's how I always imagined this scene, you all did AMAZING on the expressions and voices and all of it. Love you guys!!
2:21 it looks like simba talking its such good animating
gachabooty Ah that’s what I just commented!
I thought that too!
They may have used a Simba animation as a reference :) never know
Conspiracy theory: the original Clans territory was where Pride Rock was and Simba passed his genetics down xd
0:35 But Bluestar, Tigerclaw, And Yellowfang All Broke The Warrior Code. HMMMMM
Same
Kaley Rosenquist woah woah woah you wanted tiger claw to kill bluestar!?!?
RedCommieUnicorn Vlogs hmm maybe
RedCommieUnicorn Vlogs I thought the same thing
RedCommieUnicorn Vlogs I
Why did I almost cry??
Did anyone else almost CRY? I don't even know why!
I'll tell you why. Because she's losing her mind!
peach art because it hurts to see it play out again
I was hungry, that might've triggered something.
I DID cry, Idk why but it was so much more emotional when you can hear the voices when they speak instead of just reading it
This is such a memorable time for me, I will never forget it.
2:20 that was so good. The ear movement is so believable
Ik the art style is good but like, why does it look like Disney Animation-
The stle is so pretty aswell
No one's gonna talk about 1:38?
Cuz It's gorgeous
Adilene ikr!
Yeah the lighting and mouth movements are great!
Ikr it was such a good animation it reminded me of lion king
The subtitles say Klan's lol
Yes. Finchwing is awesome
“I’ll fetch cinderpelt....”
“NO YOU STAY WHERE YU ARE”
Me:”Get cinderpelt she’s crazy”
I WAS 400 *Me: I feel proud*
Bluestar: **raging while rolling around on the ground in front of Fireheart**
😂
I got a cat litter ad before this
Wheeze
lol
GUYs put 2:36 on 0.5x speed
Thank me later
@@Peaceofmind771 CATS BETRAY ME
Gg
GOSHH IT'S FINISHED THAT WAS STUNNING HFHF
ikr all the scenes were amazing and fitted together perfectly, like a puzzle!!!
a agree :00
I really liked the prologue to it, it added a nice touch to it ^_^
Finchwing oml yes this, by far is one of the best maps I've seen, and I LOVED your part!
Finchwing IT A MURACLE HRHRHRHRH
ME TOO
*STAY. WHERE. YOU. ARE.*
"STAY WHERE YOU ARE"
"GET OUT OF MY SIGHT"
Fireheart: So, which is it?
@@shanabrown3760 oop
MAKE UP YOUR MIND BLUESTAR
2:21 that is literally the face Simba made in the lion king! Ahh, I knew I recognised it.
Lol I did the same thing
2:49 when I try to leave dinner before I've been excused
rose.bramblex happens to me too 😑
rose.bramblex It’s so true though
i dont have to be excused
same
Lol. (IN REAL MY PARENTS LET ME JUST GO BECAUSE I'M THE SKINNIEST THING IN THE FRIKIN WORLD)
Bluestar: "STAY. WHERE. YOU. ARE!"
Me: 3:35
TheBourneFreedom same
This is how I laugh because of you: HUWA HUWA HUWA HUWA HA HUWA HUWA HUWA HA HUWA HUWA HUWA HA
I'm really glad I made you laugh! XD
TheBourneFreedom
That's me when bluestar goes
"Tell me fire heart... Tell me a good punishment for a *Traitor*
I think I would do the same! XD
This is by far the best Warriors MAP that I have seen!
Ash Tube have you seen cinderheart and holly leaf amv it is awesome!
Domino the Ball python I have a whole playlist of amazing warriors Videos.
Same
2:49 When your Mom knows you did something and you know your screwed up
And then U will get that whooping
STAY.WHERE.YOU.ARE
Put it at 0.5
It's sounds like eyore
Firestar (heart) is pretty much her son too.
"Tell me a good punishment for a traitor"
*Money.*
You know, it's actually really sad. Bluestar was "destined to suffer," as Sunstar told her. Losing Moonflower, then Snowfur, right in front of her. Thistleclaw made it nearly impossible to spend time with Whitestorm. Then she loses Mosskit on that cold, snowy night, and is forced to bury her where she'll never be seen. only to take her remaining kits to Riverclan. forced to keep up with the lie that they were taken by a fox.
But it doesn't stop there.
She loses her mate, her lover. Oakheart.
Spottedleaf, Yellowfang...too many cats to name here. At this point, she is losing her mind. Her death grip on her sanity is loosening and she's barely hanging by one claw. She's tired, and she feels as if she is in the center of a riot--waiting to be pounced on by all of Starclan. And for that, I truly pitied her.
I thought she said that they were taken by a badger...
But agreed.
Red Cr0w I do agree she lost everything
Admittedly I pitied her too until she called Brightheart "Lostface"...
Don't get wrong me wrong, I still do, she had a LOT of suffering that not many other cats have had. But Brightheart didn't deserve that, and it made me pity Bluestar less.
"oh that should please STARCLAN" you can just hear the knife sound effect in her words
Ironically she hated star clan before it was cool
@@starvoltnexus3139 and somehow made it to starclan still LOL major trolling from starclan
2:47 when you catch your sibling stealing you money from your pocket.
Lmao 😂 😂 😂
2:21 is absolutely stunning ,the emotion in his eyes dang!
M Joy TRUEE
Level: Disney
Ya the animation and drawing is amazing
Damn, it's look like Disney animations!!
It’s like a Disney animation!
The editing and prologue is really well done, it helps the viewer emerse themselves and get an understanding of the scene properly before the "actual MAP" is running.
And aaa everyone did so well, it's so great to see it put together, I'm so happy to have gotten the chance to participate in this!
It’s been years since ive read the books. I forgot how many times the writing was so good it made me feel the way the characters did
2:49-300 when your parents yell at u for talking back
This turned out absolutely beautiful! Huge props to everyone who was involved! And a huge congrats to you, Tennelle, for putting this outstanding map all together! It was incredible to be able to be a part of this project!
Now, time to watch this again and again!!~
Blixemi ikr
Blixemi I love your warrior rap battles...
ikr
Blixemi thanks for all of your warrior rap battles and original songs they are beautiful
LZRD WZRD hates u...
2:36 XD I’m so looooong!
XD
SAUSAGE STAARRRR
XD
wheezes
I spat out my oxygen
Bluestar:
I know the best punishment...
Ill let you be leader!
I mean yeah
Look where that went.
What?
*dies like at the end of the book*
Fireheart: Should I be happy or concerned
"A traitor leading a clan of traitors"
Man that phrase
That got me deep inside
One of my favorite scenes from one of my favorite books has come to life! And it looks fantastic! Thank you Tennelle and all who helped you for making this happen!
Bluestar lost it. She went crazy about having a war with wind clan. But you can't blame her. She lost her mom, sister, kits, husband and many other cats in thunder clan cats. But in turn she save her kits and the clans from following the orders of Thistleclaw and became a wise leader of thunder clan with the help of Starclan, Fireheart and many other good cats in forest.(Thunder clan could have end up just like Shadowclan if Bluestar didn't give up her kits.)
King Namor 777
Not really... Sunstar said he wouldnt have chosen Thistleclaw anyway. Also, ShadowClan is NOT bad. Why do people think every cat there is evil? (Clearly nobody has read Tigerclaw's Fury.)
Mablestory I never said Shadow clan was evil. But cats who train under dark forest or work for the dark forest cats will bring a unspeakable evil to all clans including star clan. When I said Thunder clan could have end up as shadow clan. Was just trying to say that having a ambition leader will cause unneeded battles and wars between other clans.(don't hate me I am warrior cat fan who loves all Wind,Shadow,Thunder and River clans. But sometimes you need say no to cats who only want power over everything.)
Mablestory I only got to chapter 10 of Tigerstar fury. But I do understand that shadow clan is not complete evil. Just bad thing happen to make the shadow clan cats think that they are better than any clan. Which goes same for Thunder clan because their ancestors. Were hero's to all the 4 clans.
LZRD WZRD you're so awesome! i love your work!
This gave me so many memories of when I first read the books! Everyone involved did an incredible good!
Hey Simmlet!
CatIover hello ;3
Simmlet simmlet!!!
Husky Sama Hello XD
2:36
In between frames!
Oooh yes
bluestar here: my kits are noble cats
stonefur later: fight! you call yourself a leader?!?
anyways great vid! love it!
I CAME AS SOON AS I HEARD
Rainbow Sparkles same i woke up and found this on my phone
tiny bagels ARE YOU ASSUMING MY GENDER?????? lol I'm just joking XD
Angelica, all the way from London, damn
me toooooo!
Angelica, thank god someone who understands what I'm here to do.
I forgot about this moment but I remember when bluestar was being ganged up on by stonefur and mistyfoot but fireheart stopped them. Bluestar was so heartbroken that she told fireheart that she would have rather have been finished off by her kits since they where noble warriors. Anyone else remember that part?
3:35 OMG HOW CUTTEEEEEE JUST SO CUTEE
IKR, to me it’s the best part! :3
It’s not even that cute I don’t get why everyone keeps saying that it is
I love this video :)
pinkbunnygirl43 I didn't expect to find you here, love your vids! :D
hiiiiiiiiiii. I am always late in Maps xD
*waves*
pinkbunnygirl43 Me too!
Love your channel pinkie!!!!!!!!!
The Erins better see this o m l
*I’ll do nothing*
*but... BlueStar..*
*NOTHING*
"Tennelle Flowers yells at her husband"
The only thing that bothered me was the constant flipping between laying down and sitting. But you could say it adds to random metal state of bluestar.
Brooklyn Mcpherson, yep, trur
Yes! I think it really shows her restlessness, and her fickle state of mind.
This is what maps are going to look like when humanity runs out of songs...
Cinder Starr's we already have
Cinder Starr's And when we put them all together in a decade we'll have the whole series
Cinder Starr's So...they're going to look and sound fantastic?
(+Stegakittysaurus)
Yeah, that's the point. I mean, I'm not saying maps with songs aren't amazing, but I personally think the ones without the cringy pop music are better.
*EDIT:* I meant to say aren't. Probably caused some misunderstanding. Frick.
Aura Rosalyn Exactly! Voice acting or music doesn't matter to me, as long as the animation is if decent quality
For those who forgot to add bluestars strech on her back..
*Read Bluestar's prophecy*
I have the softest heart for Bluestar. I don’t know why, I just love her. 😭😭😭❤️❤️
My most favorite parts were, 0:00 , 0:01 , 0:02 , 0:03 , 0:04 , 0:05 , 0:06 , 0:07 , 0:08 , 0:09 , 0:10 , 0:11 , 0:12 , 0:13 , 0:14 , 0:15 , 0:16 , 0:17 , 0:18 , 0:19 , 0:20 , 0:21 , 0:22 , 0:23 , 0:24 , 0:25 , 0:26 , 0:27 , 0:28 , 0:29 , 0:30 , 0:31 , 0:32 , 0:33 , 0:34 , 0:35 , 0:36 , 0:37 , 0:38 , 0:39 , 0:40 , 0:41 , 0:42 , 0:43 , 0:44 , 0:45 , 0:46 , 0:47 , 0:48 , 0:49 , 0:50 , 0:51 , 0:52 , 0:53 , 0:54 0:55 , 0:56 , 0:57 , 0:58 , 0:59 , 1:00 okay okay im done but hopefully you get the point, im just really lazy ;)
i
Uhh ok 🙄
When did I say that? I told you that I am lazy, I liked all of it, just didn't want to type all 4:02 parts xD
The whole point of the comment was I liked all of it xD
Ecks dee
Wow. This MAP is truly interesting. I loved the idea of having experienced animators deal with a non-song type of MAP featuring one of the more popular scenes of Warriors. Especially since a lot of the MAP community can relate to Warriors since it was, for a lot of us, the first step into learning how to draw / animate our favorite cats on screen.
Thank you all so much for producing this MAP. Every one of the animators in this took their parts so well, and it turned out absolutely amazing. Its also so nice to see such a creative MAP owner who actually puts their own creative touch on the project, and even takes their fair share of parts, too.
Well done to everyone, this MAP is truly beautiful, and it shows just how talented you all are.
Okay but I feel so bad for bluestar, she has been through alot of shit and chaos. She was still shocked when she found out tigerclaw tried to kill her, she thought starclan betrayed her and wanted to let her own clan die.
I'd just like to say Sagutoyas's part captured how Bluestar was going insane so well.
1:26 it's Sandstorm right?
Might be
Or it could be Fireheart before entering the den and his colors being slightly off
Yes
Yeah, I think so, cuz she walked up to him when he walked out of the cave in the book.
Angela Jonas No it’s sandstorm I checked the books
Wow.... I drew Bluestar earlier today and it really brings back the memories... the memories of the time before *Firestar*.
This actually brought tears to my eyes a bit... the expressions and the voices (nice work Tenelle on her voice btw) were on point and filled with emotion... you could practically *hear* the tension.... amazing job, everyone who worked on this. I can't believe that I haven't seen this before now, it's exemplary.
Crazy Emerald Creeper
I'm reading the book right now
Tenelle’s voice acting was sooo on point for this tho,, like seriously? You can hear the dismay, pain, anger and sadness all in her voice, it’s really amazing to hear.
I remember this scene it hurt me so bad it felt so real.... I remember in the first book and how she was and I always thought to myself I wanna be a good leader like Bluestar! But I can never be as good as her....
Some of the hate I see for Bluestar makes me wonder what do you people want?
People claim cats like Firestar are "perfect".
But then you give them flaws.
Bluestar shows her flaws and they are met with hatred for the character. What do you people want?
Flaws or perfection?
Gardner Gardner I know! Bluestar doesn’t deserve any of the hate she gets....
Good writing? I’ve seen characters with flaws, characters being jerks, but that can still be loved through the right amount of exposition.
We hate her for her actions, such as naming poor Brightheart "lostface". She's written very well, but she's just irredeemable actions wise.
Aqua Drops I love firestar and bluestar, every cat makes mistakes.
I actually never liked Bluestar nor Firestar
3:35 omg 😲 its so cute wolfirry is so talented
Correction: This is from the fifth book. I'll read the parts that this map takes place in.
*He came to stand in front of Bluestar and dipped his head.* "I thought it was the right thing to do," *he meowed quietly.* "Neither of the Clans needed to fight this battle." "I trusted you, Fireheart," *Bluestar rasped* "You, out of all my warriors."
*Fireheart forced himself to meet her flinty gaze.* "I did it for the good of the Clan, Bluestar. And I didn't tell him about the attack. I only asked him to try making peace. I thought-"
"Silence!" *Bluestar hissed, lashing her tail.* "That is no excuse. And why should I care if the whole Clan had been slaughtered? Why should I care what happens to traitors?" *A wild light was growing in her eyes again, and Fireheart realized that the moment's clarity had gone.* "If only I'd kept my kits!" *she whispered.* "Mistyfoot and Stonefur are noble cats. Far nobler than any of this ragtag bunch in ThunderClan. My children would never have betrayed me."
"Bluestar . . ." *Fireheart tried to interrupt, but she ignored him.*
"I gave them up to become deputy, and now StarClan are punishing me! Oh, StarClan are clever, Fireheart! They knew the cruelest way to break me. They made me leader and then let my cats betray me! What is it worth, now, to be leader of ThunderClan? Nothing! It's all empty, all . . . " *Her paws were glazed, staring at nothing, and her mouth gapped in a soundless wail. Fireheart shuddered in dismay.* "I'll fetch Cinderpelt," *he meowed.*
"Stay . . . where . . . you . . . are." *Each word was rasped out seprately.* "I need to punish you, Fireheart. Tell me a good punishment for a traitor."
*Nearly sick with fear and shock, Fireheart forced himself to reply.* "I don't know, Bluestar."
"But I do." *Her voice was a low purr, with a strange note of amusement in it. Her gaze looked with Fireheart's.* "I know the best punishment of all. I'll do nothing. I'll let you be deputy still, and leader after me. Oh, that should please StarClan-a traitor leading a Clan of traitors! May they give you joy of it, Fireheart. Now get out of my sight!" *The last words were spat out. Fireheart backed away into the clearing.*
Pages: 167, 168, and 169
This took forever :)
IT MUST HAVE!!!
TYSM FOR WRITING THAT!! i dont have a dangerous path anymore, now that im on Darkest Night, but this brought back memories from when bluestar was still leader (great starclan in brambleclaw rlly leader?), and now that she changed so much in starclan, i feel something that i cant describe. reading that just made me happy, even if it rlly is a harsh scene.
thx again :3
hah, thanks
np
im just on the second book, second series
- ~ -
1:30 start, for anyone who's as weird as me and wanted to watch on repeat
Thank you very helpful I’m also watching it on repeat
That's not weird. It's too good to be watched once.
Them: how many times have you watch this?
Me: Yes😊
2:20 Am I the only one who gets reminded of Lion King when I see this part?
*Nostalgia Intensifies*
Mustachez AJ Nope
Mustachez AJ nope
Mustachez AJ Omg Simba? SIMBA YOUR BURNING!!!
Mustachez AJ I do
Nope :3 me 2!
aaaaa it's done! This was such a cool idea for a MAP and it turned out just as cool :D I'm SO GLAD IT GOT FINISHED EVERYONE DID SO GOOD!!! ;; Thanks so much for letting me be a part of this Tennelle!
Tusofsky That would be awesome if there were more animated scenes like this one!! A suggestion would be right before LionClan and BloodClan go into battle.
*Stay. Where. You. Are.*
Me: -freezes fur on end- Yes ma’am!! 0-0
You can see the pain in Firestar's eyes. She practically raised him after he left his kittypet life.
This turned out so good, i'm blown over by how it was put together and executed. Not only was the voice acting great, but the animation was on par with the facial expressions/movements and lip-syncing. It would be awesome if there where more map's like this in the future, featuring iconic scenes from the warriors franchise!
2:19 this reminds me of The Prince of Egypt and Lion King mixed together into this 😁
See, I dunno if its so much as those two movies particularly, but it's definitely reminiscent of say, a Disney movie. Between those old-style sketchy lines and his facial features, it's definitely like an old animated movie..
I love both those movies and I see what you mean!
Sameeee
Ok but like the part where she says “I’ll do nothing” is sooooo perfect especially since it was animated by IllBringYouDown, which is exactly what Bluestar plans to do
When Bluestar said " i wish i keeped my kits...." i got an ad aboit child support 🤣😂
Oof. 😆
There are no mid rolls. You can’t have gotten an ad in the middle.
3:33 When someone ate your food
Om yas
That is so me when my brother takes my spaghetti
Scott Doucet yeah, I'm like STAY. WHERE. YOU. ARE. SO I CAN BEAT YO ASS.
Scott Doucet my sides
Scott Doucet Y👏E👏S
It’s so sad this is the point of the book where bluestar is loosing it. I felt so bad for her poor bluestar she died with honor
This is a pretty good look at insanity
Okay! For anyone wondering this takes place in A Dangerous Path. Congrats Brackenfur for using the name of the book in the book! (I think it was him) anywho. Bluestar is mad at FireHeart because he went to talk to Tallstar about Bluestar wanting to attack WindClan. Then Bluestar becomes my least favorite character. I didn’t like her much before this but. She just lost all hope in everyone. At least GrayStripe got to come back. When she died I was like “oh no... but also like, FINALLY!”
3:36 OMG THAT IS THE MOST ADORABLEST FACE IVE EVER SEEN FROM FIREHEART!!!! I JUST LOVE THE WAY THE ANIMATOR MADE IT ❤️❤️❤️😱😱😱😍😍😍😘😘😘😘🐈
3:33 I never seen Bluestar so angry!
The voice acting is incredible. Absolutely incredible. You got the characters spot on and I could hear the pain in Bluestar's voice and the innocence and feeling of disappointment, sadness and being scared in Fireheart's and how these emotions slowly build up through the conversation it was just amazing
Bluestar : “I dont Trust Fire heart, he A traitor”
Also bluestar : “He’s My son.”
Ey, everyone did amazyng it was worth the wait! It looks awesome, also i see why it got uploaded so late after all the parts, the intro is amazing and i see a lot of time has been put into it.
All the parts are amazing and they made this scene be even greater than in the books.
I love it !
RagTag BUNCH OF THUNDERCLAN!
I love this! Your voice fit Bluestar so well and it was just amazing!
You are so talented and you are my inspiration my art idol :)
RAGTAG BUNCH OF *tHuNdEr ClAn*
ARGHHH THE RAAAAAAAAAGE
ngl reading dawn of the clans and the prophecies begin was some of the best years of my life
This is amazing and also I'm crying. I was so desperately sad reading this scene, I think because I feel it on a personal level. When your inner demons black out the sky and you think everyone's against you, and you don't let anyone in, even those who love you. Excellently made and a beautiful tribute to this painful time in the series.
I liked the last look of fire heart! It’s sooo cute!!! *fan girls*
Frosted Coffee 2:21 was cute too
They should invite Tennelleflowers to help with the movie.
Honeystream Pancake , watch her video on why we shouldnt make a warriors video. She's right!
3:35 alien hamster.
Minnie Foxes I get it!!! :3 I saw blixemis vid
You say you're fine but you're not fine you're not fine you'll never be fine
I honestly hated when blue star got sick. I always looked up to her and loves her so much. She’s one of my favourite cats. And seeing her slowly going insane was really hard to read :/