Second Year Nursing Student UK: Assignment Writing | How to Improve Your Grade

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  • čas přidán 5. 09. 2024

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  • @katielouise6828
    @katielouise6828 Před 2 měsíci +1

    Thank you! just changed all of my ands to linking words and its much better! youre amazing ❤

  • @tashax8841
    @tashax8841 Před 6 lety +11

    Great advice 😊 When I did my degree I liked to do lots of research on the topic the essay would be on and pull out pieces I thought would be good for references then once I had enough (we were always told 10% for references, so one for every 100 words) I would number them in a logical order to use and it helped me so much to structure my essays and to get over writers block! Obviously not going to work for everyone but thought it may help someone. 😊

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 6 lety

      Natasha Hewlett That’s good advice Natasha!!! Thank you! ☺️ x

  • @talesofastudentnurse4801
    @talesofastudentnurse4801 Před 2 lety +3

    I used this video to prompt my writing when I was writing my RPL to get a place on a postgraduate Nursing course, here I am a year later watching again to prepare to write my first assignment for the course. If this isn't proof that you guys should follow Claire's tips I don't know what is! thank you Claire! :) x

  • @ellie-maesmith7628
    @ellie-maesmith7628 Před 3 lety +2

    I am a first year childrens nurse and this advice has helped me so much thank you so much for making this!!!

    • @toneyomondi7444
      @toneyomondi7444 Před 3 lety

      Hello I can help you with your nursing assignments contact me

  • @Blueseacupvessel
    @Blueseacupvessel Před 2 lety +1

    You are so kind to share these tips with us. It shows you have great empathy for others and I bet you are such a caring nurse. This video helped me a lot....Thanks!👍🤗💞

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 2 lety

      Aw thank you so much 🥺❤️ hope you have a wonderful day xx

  • @angelnisha2586
    @angelnisha2586 Před 5 lety +6

    Thank you for your tips and advice.. Im actually at the end of my second year studying mental health nursing and still struggling with assignments. Will use your tips and advice 😊😊
    P.s you explain things so clearly

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 5 lety

      Mubarikun Nisha Peerally Thank you so much! :) it’s always hard to write them I know! I find once I get going I can’t stop haha. X

  • @TheVikbal
    @TheVikbal Před 2 lety

    I love that this was so clear. I am a nurse of 15 years and doing my PGEC, my head was spinning from the complexity I have put on things. Thank you 🙏

  • @karinvertue103
    @karinvertue103 Před 2 lety +2

    This is excellent thank you.

  • @filmonsereke6671
    @filmonsereke6671 Před 2 lety +1

    always helpful Claire, motivated by your video (you can do it) to start Nursing and am in second year now

  • @Miss_Princewill
    @Miss_Princewill Před 3 lety +3

    Thank you for making this video. I’m going to apply all these tips hopefully they help me in my next essay. ❤️

  • @SezFrancis1
    @SezFrancis1 Před 6 lety +3

    Claire, these are brilliant tips; I think these can be good for other Uni/College courses too (plus writing novels ✍️). You definitely are so clever. 🙂🦋✨

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 6 lety

      Sez Francis Thank you so much Sez! :-) I’m really not clever haha. It’s just little things that I was told or I had from feedback that might help others ☺️ passing it forward haha. 🌻✨ xox

  • @YardyBritishfamily
    @YardyBritishfamily Před 11 měsíci

    I have one coming up tomorrow 🙏🏽

  • @ashasyam6019
    @ashasyam6019 Před rokem

    Hi watching your videos , joined a new university student apprehensive about assignment

  • @NurseCorinne
    @NurseCorinne Před 6 lety +2

    Brilliant advice on writing! I'm gonna be using a few of these tips for my next assignment haha!

  • @emmemm1187
    @emmemm1187 Před 4 lety +2

    This is soo helpful! Im a bcu adult nursing student 🙋🏻‍♀️ (1st year) Your videos are so helpful and uplifting. Thank you!

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 4 lety

      Jade Kingston yay!! Amazing! I hope you’re doing ok with everything going on at the minute xx

    • @kellysue2480
      @kellysue2480 Před 4 lety

      Hi, if you need further help I can always help you

  • @audreyhepburn1977
    @audreyhepburn1977 Před 6 lety +1

    Ths is great informaton and I will saving this video to watch again when I start first year Nursing in March next year!

  • @alphasvlog2066
    @alphasvlog2066 Před rokem

    Thank you Claire, I am in first year Nursing at BCU and I haven’t yet passed any assignment. I hope this will help me

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před rokem

      Aw I hope this helps! It should help with your first assignment hopefully 🤞🏻🥰
      I hope you’re getting on ok x

  • @AMEE330
    @AMEE330 Před 5 lety +1

    thank you for sharing this blog! I am studying access course and starting my first assignment. and your tips are very helpful

    • @josephmusumbu8310
      @josephmusumbu8310 Před 4 lety

      You may experience difficulties in handling your Nursing, Business and Maths assignments please check on me for help. musumbujoseph@yahoo.com
      Thank you.

  • @jackiendoro8196
    @jackiendoro8196 Před 4 lety +1

    Great advice you saved my life

    • @josephmusumbu8310
      @josephmusumbu8310 Před 4 lety

      You may experience difficulties in handling your Nursing, Business and Maths assignments please check on me for help. musumbujoseph@yahoo.com
      Thank you.

  • @OrlandoChin
    @OrlandoChin Před 5 lety +1

    Dear Claire Amazing blog about critical writing. I am second year student nursing and also english is my second language. I am on middle of my essays and is not easy.

    • @josephmusumbu8310
      @josephmusumbu8310 Před 4 lety

      You may experience difficulties in handling your Nursing, Business and Maths assignments please check on me for help. musumbujoseph@yahoo.com
      Thank you.

  • @bernhardzabel159
    @bernhardzabel159 Před 3 lety +1

    Really helpful, thanks Claire!

  • @battyxyz
    @battyxyz Před 4 lety +1

    Thank you so much, this is so helpful.

  • @emmadunstan7389
    @emmadunstan7389 Před 5 lety +1

    amazing advice THANKYOU!!

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 5 lety

      Emma Dunstan Thank you! I hope you’re having a good weekend :)

  • @dariusmarin4372
    @dariusmarin4372 Před 2 lety

    That was really helpful , such a cute voice too.

  • @majestyrichness7685
    @majestyrichness7685 Před 2 lety

    Fab vid🔥🔥🤣🤣nice tips...👍🏽👍🏽

  • @anthoniaotaniyenarigbe797

    Thank u just what I needed 👌🏾

  • @pavitrabal3556
    @pavitrabal3556 Před 4 lety +1

    Thank you !!!

  • @khadijahabdelillah9006
    @khadijahabdelillah9006 Před 6 lety +1

    thank you so much you have explained everything brilliantly lol

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 6 lety

      khadijah abdelillah Thank you! I hope so 🙈 anything that will help everyone :-)

  • @sonatashinome4672
    @sonatashinome4672 Před 5 lety +2

    884th Subscriber here!
    I was getting 40/50s I managed to to get 60/70 but I’m pretty inconsistent.
    I’m happy I’ve got some literature to improve and videos to like this go break it down a notch.
    Sometimes examples and clarity from a fellow student is simpler than advise from a professional, well you know as long as the student is well-informed 😂😂

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 5 lety

      Sonata Shinome Thank you :)
      That’s great you’ve gone to 60/70!! Well done you 🙌🏻🎉🎉 that’s amazing. 70% is classed as a first ❤️ x

  • @renbaia
    @renbaia Před 4 lety +1

    I failed my first two exams because my writing wasn’t really clear my choice of words were poor as well as english bot being my first language and i don’t really have anyone to proof read my work so i always just went with my gut and what i thought was good . Im scared to fail my first year but this motivated me a lot so when i get my grade again after i re submit i will upadate this! and i hope i do pass this time. thank youuu

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 4 lety

      giggles aw sorry to hear that! Fingers crossed for you! :) go to your personal development department if you have one? They can check things over for you too xx

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      @machukaizoh8905 Před 4 lety

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    • @Miss_Princewill
      @Miss_Princewill Před 3 lety +1

      @@machukaizoh8905 hi, can you also proofread my work🥺🙏🏾 I need to get my writing to a level 5 and I’m really struggling.

    • @machukaizoh8905
      @machukaizoh8905 Před 3 lety

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  • @juliemagambo6472
    @juliemagambo6472 Před rokem +1

    Hi Claire, I have just watched your CZcams video on second year nursing student UK:assignments writing| how to improve your grade and I want to know how would I layout the pro’s and cons for example of an infected wound dressing what type of wound dressing to use would I exactly write a pro of gauze/cloth dressing would be it’s cheap whereas a con would be it can act as a source of infection if not changed regularly or how would I write it to include the pro’s and con’s words please? and how do I search for journals, evidence based practice and research papers? and can I use google websites for the pro’s and con’s for example of different types of wound dressing or is it better not to use google websites and use books, journals, evidence based practice and research papers?

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před rokem +1

      You will learn how to write assignments and search when you start university. Don’t worry too much about this!
      It depends on what your assignment brief tells you to do and how to write it to how you will physically write it.
      For this example I used with wound care dressings, it was a written assignment. So the layout was an assignment. There was nothing else added to that.
      You have to go and find the most up to date research on what wound dressing works best for what type of wound and write about it. My assignment was years ago and will be out of date now. So you’re better looking yourself to find this :) but only if you ever have an assignment on it. There’s no point looking now if you don’t have the assignment for it yet. It will be pointless :(
      There’s a number of different search engines you can use for research that your university will advise also.
      • Cochrane
      •CINAHL
      • Your uni library itself
      For example. But also journals. There will be journals for most things! There is the wound journal you can get info from. You just have to research yourself when the time is right :) don’t stress right now about this 💜 x

    • @juliemagambo6472
      @juliemagambo6472 Před rokem

      @@ClaireCarmichael Thank you for your response Claire and you did not answer one of my questions because I asked how would I word the pro’s and con’s would I exactly put the pro is or the con is for critical analysis?

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před rokem

      @@juliemagambo6472 I did answer. Please read again 🥰 thank you

  • @marlenajasiniecka1093
    @marlenajasiniecka1093 Před 3 lety +3

    Hi, can you please advise what websites, journal, other sources of evidence you used mostly to find appropriate research for assignments? Thank you :)

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 3 lety

      A mix: CINAHL, Cochrane library, uni library, google scholar, journals like: BMJ, Sage, Elsevier. Just look everywhere! Haha x

    • @marlenajasiniecka1093
      @marlenajasiniecka1093 Před 3 lety

      @@ClaireCarmichael Thanks a lot, great job in here :):)

  • @hui-lingchen3676
    @hui-lingchen3676 Před 4 lety +1

    How to write an educational article in nursing?

  • @khateraahmadi9835
    @khateraahmadi9835 Před 2 lety

    Critiquly writing my biggest concern 😟

  • @magnificentbalochistan5762

    Great😍

  • @Jenny-jones24
    @Jenny-jones24 Před 2 lety

    Can you help me how can I get information about the models snd theory regarding smoking in public health

  • @OrlandoChin
    @OrlandoChin Před 5 lety +1

    Claire
    some of the links does not work, such as the Harvard Referencing, the facebook page.

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 5 lety

      Hi Orlando, thanks for letting me know, sorry about that! I have just changed the link, see if that one works? :)

  • @nounanouna1291
    @nounanouna1291 Před 4 lety +1

    Hi .i am from algeria so please again use simple words for i understand it .

    • @joannap2784
      @joannap2784 Před 4 lety +1

      Nouna Nouna She could not have put it in more plain words.

    • @josephmusumbu8310
      @josephmusumbu8310 Před 4 lety

      You may experience difficulties in handling your Nursing, Business and Maths assignments please check on me for help. musumbujoseph@yahoo.com
      Thank you.

  • @charlenebennett8953
    @charlenebennett8953 Před 4 lety +1

    Claire, do you think it matters what edition book you buy? For example, a 12th edition A&P book instead of the current 13th edition? The 12th was published 2014 so it is 6 years old. Any advice would be great x

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 4 lety +1

      Charlene Bennett No it doesn’t matter at all :) anatomy and physiology will be the same :) they might just add extra bits or images to newer additions. But it will still teach you what you need either way 🥰 xx

  • @nounanouna1291
    @nounanouna1291 Před 4 lety +1

    Anyone explain for me what mean assignment please ! 😢😢

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 4 lety +1

      Nouna Nouna assignment is written work you do at university. They will give you a topic to discuss and write about :) that’s an assignment.

  • @josiahamabogha6939
    @josiahamabogha6939 Před 2 lety

    Any advice on using case studies to write an essay

  • @Pearl-de2li
    @Pearl-de2li Před 5 lety +1

    Hello, do you do tutoring for nursing students ?
    Thanks

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 5 lety

      Pearl 0901 Hey! I don’t 🙈 sorry! X

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      @josephmusumbu8310 Před 4 lety

      You may experience difficulties in handling your Nursing, Business and Maths assignments please check on me for help. musumbujoseph@yahoo.com
      Thank you.

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      @machukaizoh8905 Před 4 lety

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  • @aleenaashraf6539
    @aleenaashraf6539 Před 3 lety +1

    I am just thinking about how to be critical in my assignment.
    My essay is to do a critical discussion of the aeitiology and management of long-term conditions from a biopsycosocial prespective.
    I have chosen obesity and we must use the biopsycosocial model to critically discuss the evidence associated with the development and management of obeisty. My essay is 2000 words long. Please let me know of some of your ideas of where can I write pros and cons and create a conclusion. Would it be written somewhere at the end? Thanks

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 3 lety

      If you have a look around you’ll find LOADS of research on obesity. It’s one of the leading conditions right now ☺️
      Throughout your whole essay you should be writing pros and cons and then the conclusion at the end yes :) look into everything: social factors, food factors, mental health , motivation, exercise, self esteem, the fact they are higher risk of other conditions now too etc there’s loads you can look at for this. ☺️

    • @aleenaashraf6539
      @aleenaashraf6539 Před 3 lety

      @@ClaireCarmichael thank you very much.

  • @Theresajaneappiah
    @Theresajaneappiah Před 2 lety

    Second year and I only finding this here. Thank you for this but does every journal article be RCT research?
    2. Does it have to only be in the uk?

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 2 lety

      No they don’t :) that can just be articles as well to support what you’re saying. Our uni preferred UK. But it’s ok to use other countries as well if it relevant here in uk too. X

  • @oluolu1980
    @oluolu1980 Před 2 lety

    Hello please where can I get Journal or Articles for nursing Assignment

    • @ClaireCarmichael
      @ClaireCarmichael  Před 2 lety

      They are online, your university should explain this :)
      There’s different websites you use to find them: CINAHL, Cochrane, etc x