I found you recently and I just wanna say: 10/10 work. The quality is on par with Shadowinkling and Karma imo. I have seen many creators, with those two being the pinicle of MHA text stories. Love the work and keep it up.
Honestly with telekinesis and warp gate and going ape shit the fact that he didnt instantly kill shigaraki kurogiri and the nomu kinda goes to show how little people understand of efficient ruthlessness (think john wick 1 just killing people as quickly as he can not sparing unnecessary effort) All of their heads should have been rolling on the ground or diced up Another question why wasnt he able to make portals when his sister was in danger? It's not like he needs to wave his hand (which he still had a good one) to make them Good story overall but damn the power plot holes are all over the place
he can create portals but how is he supposed to portal her directly out of the nomu’s hands, he’s completely spent. two, he had to kill the nomu he’s not fighting shigaraki close combat with kurogiri who can also use warp, i didn’t write it for the sole purpose of him being able to just shit on his enemies. i explained i wanted them killed off, im also not a pro story maker :)
@gravetaker as for the sister bit making a portal in front of shigaraki's hand. If he can make portals basically anywhere and move them, put 1 above kuroguris head, then quickly slide it down and split his neck brace that's keeping him alive, then repeat with shigaraki and the nomu but split the nomu at the brain instantly killing them. He created a black hole that did jack shit. I'm going to state again that he's lost any reason to hold back and not cause a slaughter, aka going ape shit If you're going to portray an enraged character with nothing left to lose, think like someone performing a Mortal Kombat brutality or fatality as the only action they plan on taking Recently read a story where izuku can summon shit but needs to tame it during the USJ in order to kill the nomu he summons something that I quote will "kill all three of us" before getting bodied himself and mahoraga clashes with the nomu killing then moving onto shigaraki where kurogiri immediately grabs shiggy and dips leaving raga to advance towards izuku who was prepared to die if it ment the villain would go first This is a weak izuku willing to bring something onto the field just to kill You have an OP Izuku who watched is sister die and didn't immediately pull a Sukuna
You said one character was going to die and you also said we're going to see the sister's potential during the sports festival and there is no part where we saw bakugo die
okay? i explained how bakugou died, i thoroughly explained my reasoning if you actually watched. the plan was clearly to make you see what she could do just so she could die :)
Hey man I commented about this last video, wtf… I thought you was gonna chill 😂, but naw just swiped off a character which swiped another, my guy bakugou had like one line in the whole series, rip, still like the video and work bro ❤
thanks man, and yeah! to put it short, they’re just mortals in my game of chess, i genuinely hate bakugou and i figured it’d be nice if he died getting crushed instantly by a… portal.
.... Are you sure you aren't related to gege, because my guy I feel like you will be killing a lot of characters 👀
who is gege?
@@juanborra6055 the jjk creator
MORE THIGHS LESS CRIES SUPREMACY 😂😂
Damm I literally audibly screamed no when his sister died 😭.You can’t be playing with my heart like this man 😔💔
1:25 CHILL girl... No need to flex like that even though that's a new type of flex😂
33:07 i read "2 breasts that were made to kill all might"😭😭👽
I found you recently and I just wanna say: 10/10 work. The quality is on par with Shadowinkling and Karma imo. I have seen many creators, with those two being the pinicle of MHA text stories. Love the work and keep it up.
5:01 That should be your iconic line
yo gege ima need part 4 pls and ty
soon
Bro about to be a d1 crash out
Honestly with telekinesis and warp gate and going ape shit the fact that he didnt instantly kill shigaraki kurogiri and the nomu kinda goes to show how little people understand of efficient ruthlessness (think john wick 1 just killing people as quickly as he can not sparing unnecessary effort)
All of their heads should have been rolling on the ground or diced up
Another question why wasnt he able to make portals when his sister was in danger? It's not like he needs to wave his hand (which he still had a good one) to make them
Good story overall but damn the power plot holes are all over the place
he can create portals but how is he supposed to portal her directly out of the nomu’s hands, he’s completely spent. two, he had to kill the nomu he’s not fighting shigaraki close combat with kurogiri who can also use warp, i didn’t write it for the sole purpose of him being able to just shit on his enemies. i explained i wanted them killed off, im also not a pro story maker :)
@gravetaker as for the sister bit making a portal in front of shigaraki's hand. If he can make portals basically anywhere and move them, put 1 above kuroguris head, then quickly slide it down and split his neck brace that's keeping him alive, then repeat with shigaraki and the nomu but split the nomu at the brain instantly killing them. He created a black hole that did jack shit. I'm going to state again that he's lost any reason to hold back and not cause a slaughter, aka going ape shit
If you're going to portray an enraged character with nothing left to lose, think like someone performing a Mortal Kombat brutality or fatality as the only action they plan on taking
Recently read a story where izuku can summon shit but needs to tame it during the USJ in order to kill the nomu he summons something that I quote will "kill all three of us" before getting bodied himself and mahoraga clashes with the nomu killing then moving onto shigaraki where kurogiri immediately grabs shiggy and dips leaving raga to advance towards izuku who was prepared to die if it ment the villain would go first
This is a weak izuku willing to bring something onto the field just to kill
You have an OP Izuku who watched is sister die and didn't immediately pull a Sukuna
@gravetaker it's a great story but I can't help but notice plot holes based on power
Another great Video you're on a roll grave!
Honestly Can't wait for izuku's revenge..
Next part plz and lovebthe story so far it is good i can't wait to see more of this
You said one character was going to die and you also said we're going to see the sister's potential during the sports festival and there is no part where we saw bakugo die
okay? i explained how bakugou died, i thoroughly explained my reasoning if you actually watched. the plan was clearly to make you see what she could do just so she could die :)
can we like get a part four whenever your ready grave?
just dropped a different video, i’ll be working on part four of this, so yea :)
@@gravetaker tysm
NOW THIS IS WHAT I NEED MORE TRAUMATIC SHIT
When next part of Izuku Yanagi/Experiment Izuku
bro i was just done reading part 2 💀
26:12 like a what now?👀😶💀
Plot twist: everyone lives :D (no💀)
WHERES PART 4😭😭😭😭
Hey man I commented about this last video, wtf… I thought you was gonna chill 😂, but naw just swiped off a character which swiped another, my guy bakugou had like one line in the whole series, rip, still like the video and work bro ❤
thanks man, and yeah! to put it short, they’re just mortals in my game of chess, i genuinely hate bakugou and i figured it’d be nice if he died getting crushed instantly by a… portal.
Bro not the sister man🥲
We knew it was coming 😂
@@l5uy232yep
So whos gon die next 😊 jirou??
nah all chad
@@gravetaker 😍