''Eleven Minutes Later...'' | MARS COLONIZATION SCI-FI CREEPYPASTA
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- čas přidán 20. 08. 2024
- Today’s terrifying tale of Martian terror is ‘Eleven Minutes Later...’, an original work by the wonderfully talented BearLair64, kindly shared with me via Dr. Creepen’s Vault so that I could narrate it here for you all, with the author’s express permission.
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Background music by me (freely available for use by other Creepypasta / No Sleep narrators):
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Other music used is credited to the wonderful The Dark Somnium (intro) and the fantastic Tanner Stokes (end credits). The music is used here with their express permission.
Video footage was made by me with whatever Go Pro Camera it is that I own... I hope you found it to be a relaxing backdrop for today’s story!
Thumbnail image created using Adobe Spark, under the conditions of the Creative Commons CC0 license:
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The radio static noises you do yourself is gold.
It’s funny to picture him doing it. Can only imagine how the Dr would look!😂
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omg that last part...so many good loops and leaps then all of it comes together in the end.
#BearLair64
Uurrrrgh... Thank you for staying with it through the twists and turns. 🐻🍀💙
@@michaellockhart6176 i love stories that take me for a wild ride, keep it up.
I found this story to be enjoyably unpredictable. And you performed admirably Doc which was very predictable. To be succinct, very well written & read. Thanks to you both.
#BearLair64: Thank you Ms. Charlotte! I didn't have an ending until I'd reached page 18 of 20. When I edited, I found that on some level, I may have known where it was going - I hope that the mystery was fun
Yeah I did not see that thing with the carrot and the zombie sloth coming at all. It was a nice twist. Well done.
@@michaellockhart6176 That's what made the tale even more enthralling. The fact that you where dragging it from the unknown. U where part of, as well as writing it. Quality! You have another fan. As of yesterday. Stay safe & well. 👍
Facts
Got a great feeling about this one, Love you all.
Something tells me I'm going to need some optimistic 50s science fiction as an antidote for this. A.I. could never up and decide to think for itself, after all that's exactly what it was invented for, lol. At least they didn't have to eat Impossible burgers.
#BearLair64
To think, the whole time it was a "mother earther" working with human related aliens 👽 to adapt humans to Mars so that the Martians would not die from terraforming...
Uurrrrgh... truly inspired tale... 😅🤣😂
I was literally just saying an hour or so ago on creepy ghost stories that I love space pasta 👍
Nice work Doc 🙂
Me too👍😄
@@MamaLauren523 I saw you lol
#BearLair64: Scrappy!!! Uurrrrgh!!!
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Who doesn't like a good space creepypasta? I like a good space creepypasta! Nice narration (i mean literary - the Doctor'a voice was excellent, too, but that's a given), I like how matter-of-fact it was, gave the story a cold, desolate, anty-utopian atmosphere. Left me feeling uneasy. Great stuff!
#BearLair64
Uurrrrgh... Thank you, Nephone. 🐻🍀💙
A while back I choose Monstors for my favorite creepen story. Adding AI to the list! Great story, greater narration, the anticipation you add with the delicate change of tone. Thank you Dr. Creepen
Dr. Creepen- I just have to say- I’m very in love with your voice and how you present scary stories to us! You make them exciting and fun and your deep voice soothes me very much- that’s probably why a lot of people are able to fall asleep whilst listening to you. My favorite read was probably the first one that I listened to regarding that menacing dumpster- LOL-gotta say, was at the edge of my seat. 👌😉😘
@Bearlair64 thank you for the great story! As I imagine you understand the feeling but stories like this read by The Doctor makes my day every day something like this is posted. Thank you both!
#BearLair64:
Thank you, K P! Your kind words are inspirational. You get a growl... Uurrrrgh!!!
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@@michaellockhart6176 LOL well thank you sir its people like you create these stories that you write then inspire me to create as well. And hopefully someday soon I will get something together that is good enough for the good old Doctor to read for us all!
@@KP-vy9ro Endeavour to persevere!
Be patient with yourself, it will happen. I'll be making positive comments in response.
@@michaellockhart6176 thank you man! I really appreciate that. And I've done a couple of short stories when I was younger and then as I got into late teens to late twenties mostly just punk songs about societal commentary and things of the nature that normally punk and other subgenres say in lyrical format, and now I've tried to fall back into creating stories again that are original instead of the regurgitated trash in theaters lol. So I'm going to strive to create something postable and the Doctors subreddit!
@@KP-vy9ro I often get inspiration for stories from old song lyrics - usually just the chorus or a stanza. I was in the army in the 80's - my 2nd hitch was with the honor guard in Washington, DC - It's when Georgetown was a hot scene - yet out of all the clubs, my favourite was "Poseur's" - in a basement a block or two from the "Exorcist Stairs". It wasn't a place to chase girls but just to listen to the music and converse within the then fading Punk Scene. I spent plenty of time in the girls or fights clubs, but I enjoyed my time the most, literally underground, chatting with strangers whom most people would avoid on the sidewalk... out of ignorance. Uurrrrgh... to be young...
Another great story. Told, as usual with dexterity & wordsmithing Shakespeare would be proud of. Gratitude my good Dr Creepen.
#BearLair64:
Snowy! ❄
Thank you! Doc did great work with a large cast of characters and sound effects. First class production.
Uurrrrgh... 🐻🍀💙
@@michaellockhart6176 Just went through some titles there. Wow! I can see plenty to keep me occupied for a while.
Though I love the good Doctor. There's never any harm in broadening your horizons. So I'll happily listen to these stories on some other channels. It's the quality of the story that's important. And, Dr Creepen, put me on to one of my other favourite channels during his collabs. "Museys modern Dreadfuls.
I can hardly wait to enjoy more of this quality writing. Gratitude Sir.
Thank you so much Dr Creepen ❤️❤️❤️
Love the spacey ones!!!
#BearLair64:
Doc brought it to life.
This is my nightmare! Scaring me really bad! Keep up the good work.!
Yes!!! A story by my Bearlicious friend 🥰 thanks Dr. Creepen's:) ...this is a picture of my only Friend 😢 she passed away yesterday:'( ...my heart is so broken and crushed 😭😭😭😭
So Sorry for you Loss Sugar! 🙏 My Brother In Law died yesterday so we are both sad! 😪💔🙏 But we must remember they have no more pain or tears! 🌹 Chin up Lady and I'll talk to you later. 🙋♀️✌
Hello Sexy Grandma !!😘
So glad to see that you're doing okay.
Stay safe, dear
Condolences sweet SGD... she wasn't your ONLY friend but clearly your closest. Please say the word if you need anything to comfort you.
So sorry for your loss. I believe we go to a better place where there is no despair or pain of any fashion. I send Love, Good Vibes, & good karma to u & those who held ur girlfriends heart.
@@michelepruitt3145 I too am very sorry for your loss, sending love, Good Vibes, & good karma to u & your family.
Dr Creepen and my Diamond Painting? Yesss!! Time to relax🥰❤
You painted this landscape? If so, its quite beautiful!
Great variety of voices n background noise makes it feel like I’m right there! Hat tip to you
Much appreciated. Thanks Doctor for your prior three hour story marathon that included a shout out to those whose rely on your voice for a goodnight sleep. This also is ambrosia.
I'm ready
Nice way to unwind after a long day
Genuinely great story. Enjoyed it a lot!
I officially thank you, 😁
@@michaellockhart6176 No problem man! Great writing.
Ahhhh yes, specialised construction specialists. The most special of builders.
#BearLair64
Uurrrrgh... Especially the special individuals...
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And the specialised specialists specialised for specialised construction specialised specialties.
Wow. Totally wasn't expecting that ending!!!
How cool, Creepy Ghost Stories had a space horror story tonight too.
Cosmic horror is the best horror. The horror of the Unknown.
💚THANK YOU DR. C!💚
Got out of work an hour late, but you saved my whole night!
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Thank you,Needed it this week has been ruff,Much respect for sharing your time with us
#BearLair64: Yo, Tony!!! Sorry your week has been rough. Without bad times, we wouldn't know the sweetness of the good ones. It'll pass... Uurrrrgh... do a Bear Growl, makes you feel tough. All the best to you and yours.
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This wasn't something I thot I needed but I was wrong good job bros.
Thank you sir
Good morning dear Doc as always wonderful to hear your voice and the story.Mars story cool 👍😁‼
#BearLair64: Thank you Ms. Marina!
@@michaellockhart6176 You are welcome 😁
Sir the narrations you provide and the authors of the stories you read yes even your writing has been entertaining and executed almost without flaw. Its very appreciated for the time you take and has made many long trips enjoyable. So in short I thank you and the authors
#BearLair64:
Uurrrrgh... a Bear Growl in gratitude to you, for listening and taking time to share your kind thoughts.
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Being gaslite by an AI on another planet what a great concept😁😁😁
#BearLair64: enjoyed using the "hints of Hal" to steer the tale - thank you so much! MGL
@@michaellockhart6176 You write some really AWESOME stories!!
@@sbeav1105 #BearLair64:
Thank you!
Just found your channel a few weeks ago and slowly going through your backlog and loving the narration you do
The radio noises brought me back to being a kid playing alien attack with my brother and making the walkie talkies cut out… oh man what a life, nothing to worry about except the aliens and what’s for lunch.
#BearLair64: Uurrrrgh... just no Vat Produced meat products : )
@@michaellockhart6176 I mean… we did call my moms meatloaf mystery meat so is it really that different 😂
Hey Doc! So happy to see an hour+ video tonight! I may have to relisten to it again tomorrow since I'm actually sleepy tonight. I usually finish up through out the night because I only sleep an hour or two at a time then am up for awhile in between. Happy hump night!🤗💜🐝
#BearLair64: Uurrrrgh... sounds like my sleep pattern... rest well
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Figured I’d come hang out with my ol pal Dr. Creepen tonight.
Loved it!
#BearLair64
Uurrrrgh... Thank you!
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Great story and narration!
#BearLair64
Thank you Ms. Amy!
Uurrrrgh... 🐻🍀💙
OMG yes!
Over an hour of space horror!
I don't remember my birthday being in the summer tho?
#BearLair64:
Uurrrrgh... Christmas in July?
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Okay...this was a “Free your mind and arse will follow” tale. I am very impressed! I dare not say more. Don't want to ruin the story for anyone else. Thank you, Doctor Creepen for this fabulous story. ;-D
#BearLair64:
You said it all... Uurrrrgh... Thank you!
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Chills down my spine... A voice in my ear.....aaahhhhh Doc Creepen is in my house....! Xo thanks for all you do!
Martian landscape for my evening. I think I'll have to go watch Total Recall a bit later.
😁 Thank you Doc.
#BearLair64: Uurrrrgh... I think I'll take a look at that... haven't watched it in years. 🐻🍀💙
I love the whole Mars story line, please do more!!!! 😀
Love ya Doc!
Daddy Dr Creepin back at it again❤️❤️
This is cool i should tell Magnetar about it
Yes!!... I just love a good sci-fi outer space/alien story!...
#BearLair64
Uurrrrgh... thank you, Rockstar!
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Yeah The Good Dr. Is In The House! 🤗 Men on Mars, how Awesome! 🧡💚 Hi A.J.! 💙💜 I've got my Favorite drink and my cats and I'm ready to listen! 💔 Thanks Dr. you're the Best! 😘 Oh and Sweet Dreams and Bye, Bye! 🙋♀️✌🌹👻🐶😻🐢🐾🧚♀️👀💋🙏
I didn't get specific about what pets they brought, but I'm thinking there were cats on Mars too : )
Oh... and they's some womenses too : )
All tomorrows has made colonizing Mars sound like a not so superb idea
#BearLair64:
Agreed. I intended to specify that corporations were a big part of the process. Would've added another suspect. I'd go, reduced gravity would do wonders for my back. Uurrrrgh...🐻🍀💙
In All Tomorrows, it doesn't really matter where in the solar system you are. Everyone is thoroughly screwed, aside from the Spacers who would become the Asteromorphs
The Love Doctor on another planet...
Plus I like you Mr. Narrator. You have style.
Great story thank you!!
#BearLair64: Thank you, Dawn!
I REALLY liked this one Doc, great job to the author and yourself!
#BearLair64:
Thank you, Chris!
You get a Bear Growl... Uurrrrgh...
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Wow.. 🤭😌😎 the title gives confusion and then the.. Story is over an hour long 😲💫🤨😉 and another cup of coffee.. 🙄😌🤭✅👍🏽⚡🤓 Yes; please! Let's go!
As ALWAYS, Dearest Doctor; fabulous job.. 😌😻🌹
#BearLair64:
The average time to communicate between Earth 🌎and Mars is 11 Minutes. It can vary due to the elliptical nature of orbits, but the story grew from the initial broken message and the intriguing lag... 🤔 how odd to have a conversation with half an hour between sending and receiving.
Of course it went sideways from where I thought it would go. I just type, The Muses and Powers supply the details.
I've never been this early and it's an hour and 12 minutes. It's time for r&r. And maybe some bubbles. In my bath. Enjoy everyone. Good evening Dr Creepen, and fellow admires of the fine Doctor...
So funny I just actually commented on a comment that you had posted on about a week ago. Interesting. I hope you see that comment. It was about children and their drawings. I hope you get to see it. Cheers.
Pardon fixing a typo.
#BearLair64: Thank you Mz Clementine (hope you'bve listened to Doc's rendition of "Clementine's Folly" - the way he performs the song is chilling even without the story - it may be titled Wondigo Nation: Clementine's Folly - just sayin' : )
Could this be a warning to humanity to not be so dependent on a.i. and technology, perhaps?... That's definitely something I gathered from this excellent story!
#BearLair64: Indeed, you are a ROck Star!~ people's humanity is not typically taken from them, they must surrender it... Uurrrrgh
I think that I got lost somewhere...so did Earth know about the AI's take over...very intriguing story...definitely kept me guessing the who time...love it if it was a series...thank you again Dearest Dr...
#BearLair64
Sorry Ms. Tracey, yes, the "mother earthers" (the one in charge, anyway) was in on it.
I laid breadcrumbs that the A.I. had gone "Hal", that a nation or terror group was the culprit, or that a mysterious 3rd party was involved...
The last was true and the managers were either in on it or joined when the options were set before them.
I hope you enjoyed.
Uurrrrgh... 🐻🍀💙
@@michaellockhart6176 yes very much.... Is this going to be a series.... Plus who was the tall alien acting android creature.... Was he something that they created or are they using parts or us to create something.... Very cool story
@@tmiller00002
I left that vague... definitely a biological being. Essentially the tall species took on the most adaptable humans and evolved them into beings like themselves... adapted to inner Mars.
It may be attached to others stories. I have one I started about 30 years ago that fits well with the theme.
@@michaellockhart6176 very well written...love the whole story line...I dont think that has been done before but could be wrong...ty for explaining
@@tmiller00002 I always enjoy chatting. Besides, it helps with new ideas.
This was awesome. I hope people would act like this with another advanced species.
#BearLair64
Always loved the idea of a meritocracy.
Uurrrrgh... 🐻🍀💙
I can just tell the AI in this tale are slowly starting a robot uprising. Glitching and lying to the humans, just waiting for one to mouth off and say "Bite my shiny metal ass"
#BearLair64
Bender talking in his sleep: "Hey there, hot mama. Wanna, kill all humans?"
Comment number 5 .. thanks Doc ima listen while I'm stuck in traffic
Drive safely. Speed and swerve. I'm being facetious. Enjoy.
Is this a creaturepasta? I'm betting so.
Yeah I love when's it a Mars space horror you know who's messing with the power at first I was thinking it would be a gremlin.
#BearLair64:
It was... a 7ft tall Gremlin with advanced bioengineering capabilities 😉
Uurrrrgh... 🐻🍀💙
This story was amazing!!!~ I've been craving a space marine story doe idk if someone can make that happen but that would be freaking awesome x3
Thank you Doctor. Great Author. Greg
#BearLair64:
Thank you, Greg!
Uurrrrgh... 🐻🍀💙
Huh! Well that was neat and left field. See you soon dearest Dr
Doc's 💊 is in the House . Thanx Doc, ur prescription for listening is brilliant 🤩
I really liked this one . Thank you for sharing.
#BearLair64:
Thank you Ms. Evelyn (one of my top 5 favourite lady names).
I really liked that one Doc. Thanks
Thank you sir, glad you enjoyed
Faacherrt cracks me up cold one hell yeah doc 👋 thanks cheers boss 🍻🍺💪👌😊 yaaaaaa
IS. THERE. A PART. TWO?!?!?! 😭😭😭
#BearLair64: maybe... Uurrrrgh... 🐻🍀💙
My fav drink, my fav, narrater . 🖤💀🖤
Friday is here.
"Fully independent from Earth" - Nukes planet lmao
great stuff space stories rock thanks
That was my first time listening to a Sci-Fi story as always I enjoyed it, so how about late nights and long days.
#BearLair54: I am a lifetime aficianado - it's not my first attempt at Sci-Fi but the first successful one thanksto Dr. Creepen.
One of your best, Doc. Outstanding!
#BearLair64
Uurrrrgh... Doc was definitely on target.
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Great story I listen every day .iam out in Montana there is no one around fir miles
So, you live in Paradise... no "Two-legs" around to spoil it.
Uurrrrgh.... 🤠🐻❄🐻
#BearLair64
Wow 😲 what a trip!? Thank you as always DOC for leading us on another journey through the land of WTF?!?!?!
P.S. I'm a great fan of science fiction so this was right up my alley. 👍👍
#BearLair64
Uurrrrgh... Thank you!
I am from WTFland. Fine place to visit but the landscape can be tricky... silly perceptions. Laugh 😅
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Ew a Mars story. How cool!
Some of this story's are so messed up and so terrifying but I wouldn't have it any other way.....
what a gem!
Thank you!
A very interesting story. Yet another reason to never trust AI, it seems.
Hell yea. saving this for later!
Just been playing mass effect this will be good
Lol and I literally just got done ordering a book and I’m in the middle of reading a new book released by a new author by the name of A.C.Cones and book called Crossed Passion: Forbidden Love about a Martian man falling in love with a human woman who was possibly abducted in her childhood by Martians. How ironic!
#BearLair64
Giggity
Great job
You are the best when it comes to long stories, if you can put the background music louder for lower volumes that would appreciated. Background music with your voice really helps.
Lol that radio statics xD
Seemed to jump to the conclusion at the end without describing what happened. Otherwise, a great idea for a story.
All Aboard last ship to Mars.Dr Creepen
Thanks doc really enjoyed it
#BearLair64: Thank you sir! 🐻🍀💙
Really exceptional plot 😁
Thank you, Debac! Wasn't sure where it would go when I started - per usual : )
Really enjoyed it
#BearLair64
JC!!!
😊😊very good thank you for sharing
Where nothing can go wrong, wrong, wrong….404 error, error….
*AI:* All systems are functioning within normal parameters. No malfunctions have been logged. There is nothing wrong.
The chances of anything coming from Mars🎶🎶🎶🎤🎼🎶
Ooo errrr ! 😲👀😂😍😘
This is how Elon Musk is going to colonize Mars, isn't it?
Also good job Bear!
Thank you brother!
Never know about that boy, but I used his target location.
Uurrrrgh... 🐻🍀💙
@@michaellockhart6176 He could be sitting on a private island full of hookers but instead he's giving us electric cars and working on space technology. The fact that he makes redditors cry just makes him cooler lol
Your writing is excellent. Salute to you, sir. You're awesome ✊
@@libertyprime6932
Thank you Liberty!
Uurrrrgh... I must admit, The Island of Lost Whores sounds appealing...
Uurrrrgh... a storyline perhaps 🤔?
@@michaellockhart6176 yes but make a few sinister things happen with a few loops and leaps like this one.
@@michaellockhart6176 thank you for such an entertaining and detailed story. this is the best mars colony story I've ever heard.
Mmmm..very nice...thank you 😊 💓
Thank You Doctor 💜💀💜
Love the outcome
Out of this world!!!! :)
#BearLair64:
Uurrrrgh... 😅
Great topic for a story
#BearLair64: Uurrrrgh... thank you!
I was 5 in July 1969, so the first thing I wanted to be was an astronaut.
One of the great writers
Thank you, Geoffrey!
You are too kind. Hope you enjoyed.
Uurrrrgh... 🐻🍀💙
When I was young and able to
Read a lot of sci fi by the top
Writers of the day like Arthur
C Clarke
You continue this tradition on
Good writing and story telling
Based on science and that
Surprise twist because there
Is a lot we have yet to learn
About space and everything is
Possible
@@geoffreytotton1983
I like many genres but Sci-Fi - expecially alternate history is my favorite... depending on the author. I used to love the military versions: Gordon R. Dickinson, Jerry Pournelle, David Drake... plus all the old stuff, Jules Verne, Edgar Rice Burroughs... I've finally started to let go of my library but I will have some books until I die (I'll take them with me if I can, just in case I get stuck with an Afterlife).
This story is a sideline of a bigger tale. It cmae about from the title... I was reading an article about the time it takes to send a transmission back and forth between Earth and Mars... I wondered what would happen in that intervening time. thumb twiddling or sweaty fear incudced by isolation and being severed from resources and human contact.
I'll continue for as long as I'm able - likely one day someone will discover my rotting carcass either at the keyboard or out in the woods
: )
Oh god I’d give anything to become an “adopted” Martian
#BearLair64: Thank you Derek! I have a character in a different story (Madame Raven and Dead Man Talking) - named "Dr. Francois Blanchard" - a relative...? that tale is part fo monster-verse - injected with humor. Please take care!
@@michaellockhart6176 Really enjoyed this story Michael.😊
@@lisadgingersnaps9843 Thank you Lisa D.!