reading my college essays (ucla, berk, cmu, usc)
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- čas přidán 24. 07. 2024
- hi peeps back again with more college content! here are some of the essays I wrote that got me into college (common app personal statement + 3 supps). was kind of afraid to post this but hopefully some of you find this useful! (yes I know I wrote abt music twice but don't worry, they were two completely different supplements for two completely different schools).
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TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 intro
1:20 personal statement
6:56 usc supplement
8:53 cmu supplement
12:20 ucla & berk
15:25 bloopies + addressing my voice lol
16:48 closing advice
WE LOVE YOU GUYS AND THANK YOU ALWAYS FOR YOUR SUPPORT
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I’ve watched so many vids of people reading their essays and yours are literally the best i’ve ever heard. Hope to see you at UCLA this fall!
omg thank you so much!! hope I see u too!!!
Thank you for posting these videos!
ofc!
you totally inspired me to write better essays! I'm applying in around 6 months from now :P
hey good luck!!
All your essays are amazing! Thank you for sharing.
idk if you’re going to become a full time college youtuber but if not pls drop a skincare + makeup routine YOURE GLOWING; loved your essays, esp the one fr cmu
AJSJAKDA UR TOO SWEET
haha just realized u went to whs, currently a sophomore there but ur vids really inspire me on how hard u worked, trying my best but i just dont have such good work ethics, everyone there is so committed so gotta get my act together!
GOOD LUCK OMG whs is honestly very toxic academically so pls don’t feel the pressure to compare urself to everyone else! work hard for u and u only!!
thank you so much this is so helpful ❤
GREAT WRITER!!!!
I was so lucky to have the opportunity to see Jake Shimabukuro live a couple of years ago, and he played Bohemian Rhapsody. By the way thanks for making this video. I’m still a couple years away from the college app process, but I want to hear what others’ experiences are like. 😊
omg seeing him live would be a dreammm!! hahahaha good luck when the time comes!
Class of 2022 here. I'm a bit late but your ucla & berk essay was really good. Just reading the first sentence hooked me in. I also did debate but did not write about it since most events were canceled. Now I'm waiting for decisions 😬wish me luck!
GOOD LUCK YOURE GONNA DO GREAT OMG
Bruh her voice tho... she could be on a cartoon
Hi so I am turning 13 this year and I live in singapore studying abroad is my dream but I don't know what steps to take after secondary school I know I have to be smart but I am not but I will try my best tho. Also I know this will sound weird but I would like to be your friend
bestie you're so incredibly smart and yes, try your best!! but don't feel the need to compare yourself to other ppl because you're amazing just as you are :)
what university did you decide on?
ucla :)
@@sophielaura2145 OMG YAYY congrats and i hope you have an amazing time there 😁😁
thank u so much!!
hag vibes