going over beta reader feedback + starting draft 4 // writing vlog

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  • hey friends! :) in today's vlog, i go over my first round of beta reader feedback, apply it to a new outline, and finally dive into draft 4 of my WIP project soulmates!! hope you enjoy❤️
    sincerely,
    vee xo
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Komentáře • 52

  • @kylahope1840
    @kylahope1840 Před rokem +42

    Is anyone else Obsessed with Vee's background on her laptop?!

    • @sincerelyvee
      @sincerelyvee  Před rokem +6

      omg thank you!!🥰 this is the first one that i've made and i crafted it to include everything that i love so i love it so much!!

  • @bttmofthebrrlstudios
    @bttmofthebrrlstudios Před rokem +8

    Giving the new chapter room to breathe is a good idea! Not just from an on-the-page editing perspective but also to like, give your own internal perception of the book as a whole time to grow accustomed to the new segment. I know when I make a big change in a story it takes me a little time for it to become a natural part that I don't have to actively remind myself that it's there now XD An end-of-March deadline success would be awesome, but don't stress yourself too much if it ends up being more like end-of-April. It would suck to burn out!

    • @sincerelyvee
      @sincerelyvee  Před rokem +1

      exactly that!! and yes, i'm learning i have to give myself a lot more wiggle room than i think and that that's totally okay😊

  • @TheWriterlyCreations
    @TheWriterlyCreations Před rokem +8

    I’m in love with these videos way too much. Out of all the subscriptions I have on CZcams you’re my favorite out of twelve channels. I think it’s the enthusiasm I enjoy watching.

  • @eowynthornhill5131
    @eowynthornhill5131 Před rokem +13

    Right when I needed a motivation boost. You are so awesome!! Good luck with the writing this week!

    • @sincerelyvee
      @sincerelyvee  Před rokem +1

      YOU are so awesome🥺🥰 tysm and good luck to you too! :)

  • @riaiswriting
    @riaiswriting Před rokem +15

    Can’t wait for this video to come out I already know it’s gonna slay x

  • @enIinea
    @enIinea Před rokem +7

    babe i’ve been WAITING

  • @mfonniso.9775
    @mfonniso.9775 Před rokem +3

    Yayyyyyyy!! I always love it when I hear "welcome back to my channel guysss"

  • @wintertiger5763
    @wintertiger5763 Před rokem +4

    I'm waiting, super excited for this new video

  • @alisalopes3524
    @alisalopes3524 Před rokem +2

    omg congrats! i've been with you from the start

  • @jareduwu5849
    @jareduwu5849 Před rokem

    yeahhh!!! i definitely analysis books when i want to read like a writer too, it's so helpful. thanks for the video, they're always so motivating

  • @zaynabywrites
    @zaynabywrites Před rokem

    this is so exciting!! hope all goes well and that you're able to balance school and writing! 💞

  • @eid6584
    @eid6584 Před rokem +3

    Congrats on starting draft 4, the more I hear you talk about project soulmates, the more I'm excited to read it once it's published!!!
    I don't know if you've done a video on this already, but I'd love if you could talk about how you balance college and writing. I'm also a college student and struggle to fit in times to write and work on my novels during the semester so I end up pushing them to the breaks but that gives me limited time to work on them and my writing skills have slowly been becoming rusty. How do you keep a good school-writer balance?

    • @sincerelyvee
      @sincerelyvee  Před rokem +1

      aww thank you so much!!💓 i have a video coming out this week on that :)

  • @Adcali886
    @Adcali886 Před rokem +4

    How do you find beta readers?

  • @thelivichronicles
    @thelivichronicles Před rokem

    always love your videos, especially writing ones! i’m currently brainstorming for draft three of my wip to work on during aprils camp nano so this video was super inspo, thank you!!!

  • @Reading.with.milena
    @Reading.with.milena Před rokem +1

    I'm so happy because you postet this Video. I have watched your other Videos many Times, because you dont ublodet new ones. You inspire me so much to write on my Novel! Will you post in the next Time more Writing Vlogs?

  • @LinsPrints
    @LinsPrints Před rokem +1

    Wow, I am so happy for you to be working at your fourth draft 🫶 and to already have it reviewed by beta readers, go girl!
    I am just at 9300 words on my first draft of my new novel and can‘t wait to be where you are today ☺️

  • @thelightmonkey1970
    @thelightmonkey1970 Před rokem

    Winter in Canada looks tough! Keep warm, keep writing 💛

  • @mfonniso.9775
    @mfonniso.9775 Před rokem +4

    Post everyday!😂😭😭😭😭

  • @angelbeats0042
    @angelbeats0042 Před rokem

    I like how you going through this process because it helps me with the knowledge and makes me motivated to write. But someone from a Facebook writing group contact me and asking if I'm ready to be publish but I need more time 😭 I don't even know all this yet and I just finished my first book

  • @writing.reading.knitting

    Two months without writing and you still managed to go straight back at it?! Girl I could never! My writing motivation is down there, it's so low you can't even see it with a magnifying glass. 😬

  • @Princess-ih1mr
    @Princess-ih1mr Před rokem

    i love your channel !! Are you going to participate in the spring camp nanowrimo this year ?

  • @SimsOfThePast
    @SimsOfThePast Před rokem +1

    I'm thinking about writing an publishing a book, I'm looking for a good publishing company, and I was wondering who you use or who are you planning to use to publish your book. Because this is my first time writing a book and I've wanted to do it for a long time, and I just wanted to make sure that I choose the best place.

  • @jasminv8653
    @jasminv8653 Před rokem

    I really love your attitude to feedback and edits! But also at one point the subtitles said 'baby reader feedback' 😂❤

  • @perlapamela2023
    @perlapamela2023 Před rokem +1

    Hiii where can I find beta readers ?

  • @samantharose1001
    @samantharose1001 Před rokem +3

    🤩🤩🤩

    • @samantharose1001
      @samantharose1001 Před rokem

      I totally get the reading a book for enjoyment and for learning how to tell a story / how to write! I really enjoy that. I started thinking about it with tv / movies, too!

    • @sincerelyvee
      @sincerelyvee  Před rokem +1

      @@samantharose1001 i've also been doing this with tv and movies!! what better to learn from than the successful works we enjoy! :)

  • @takeru2702
    @takeru2702 Před rokem +1

    Very nice video! From japan

  • @brigetmuikila3683
    @brigetmuikila3683 Před rokem

    Good work 🥰🥰🥰

  • @caileycarrot
    @caileycarrot Před rokem

    May Ik how u get beta readers?❤

  • @josieann4390
    @josieann4390 Před rokem

    💜💜

  • @suusblokhuis5005
    @suusblokhuis5005 Před 7 měsíci

    if you make a second or third etc. draft are you supposed to rewrite the book and change the parts you need to change or do you make a copy of your first draft and edit the parts that you need to change?

    • @sincerelyvee
      @sincerelyvee  Před 7 měsíci

      you can do whatever works best for you! personally, since a first draft is such an early draft that will most likely need big picture changes (lots of scene cuts and additions) i like to do a complete rewrite from a blank page for draft 2 but i’ll have my first draft open so i can keep the parts that i want to keep (though i’ll still rewrite them to sound nicer)

    • @suusblokhuis5005
      @suusblokhuis5005 Před 6 měsíci

      thank you , i think i will indeed rewrite my first draft. i have gotten further into the story and i'm realizing my writing looks sloppy. so a rewrite id very much needed😅 @@sincerelyvee