Reviewing your cinematography

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  • čas přidán 2. 06. 2024
  • The AOD sale ends today at midnight! Last chance to get our early bird pricing until Aug 2024 theartofdocumentary.com
    Graded with my Cinema Pro Luts: bit.ly/2UUKAjC
    CHAPTERS:
    0:00 - Intro
    0:47 - Footage review: Creating pockets of shadows
    3:06 - Don’t be afraid to push your blacks for contrast
    5:55 - Make a good shot selection
    7:14 - How to be a better cinematographer & filmmaker
    9:49 - Using color contrast
    11:56 - Be careful with your storytelling
    13:35 - Get all the coverage you need to tell the story
    15:48 - Final thoughts
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Komentáře • 126

  • @BryceDocherty
    @BryceDocherty Před 24 dny +20

    I think it's fine to talk about AOD cause its excellent. Best filmmaking community I've ever been a part of. Ill be excited to update my reel at the end of the year to have way more diversity than I do now.

  • @TomVetterl
    @TomVetterl Před 24 dny +33

    Oof, almost got a heart attack when I saw the beginning of this video, with @markbone shouting "what are you doing!!!" over my film :D
    Glad you liked most of the shots, the one said shot is already removed :D Thx for the feedback!

    • @markbone
      @markbone  Před 23 dny +16

      your footage is stunning, it’s why I went after you hard, you’re a pro I knew someone like yourself would want to hear/ could stomach some blunt feedback

    • @TomVetterl
      @TomVetterl Před 14 dny +2

      In case yours interested, this is the trailer for the film, we’re releasing the film next week. :)
      czcams.com/video/bin45_lGbO4/video.htmlsi=KQ50o1k34o5eTnoW

  • @BeingWillAllen
    @BeingWillAllen Před 24 dny +22

    Mark! Thanks so much for the kind words on Zach and I’s work! That is a great critique on the flatness, it’s a mistake I will be trying to avoid making again and one we were trying to be conscious of for so much of the shoot, but it slipped away lol! love the content and all the great bits of advice from you and the inspiration from everyone here!

  • @jamesmccullough1162
    @jamesmccullough1162 Před 24 dny +13

    First of all, Akira. Great movie, great shirt. Second, I love that you don’t hold back your criticism in these videos. That, more than anything, is what has helped my work grow. When I was working directly with a mentor whose opinion I valued, and who respected me enough to be honest and say where my skills were falling short - that made me learn more than any technical tutorial/class could’ve ever taught me. Great stuff as always, Mark.

  • @monellifilms
    @monellifilms Před 24 dny +37

    Oh shit you reviewed my ROAR football doc footage as well! Thank you, Mark! I’d shoot your next sports doc for sure

    • @thyerriwolf
      @thyerriwolf Před 24 dny +2

      where can I whatch pal? looks amazing

    • @monellifilms
      @monellifilms Před 24 dny +2

      @@thyerriwolf thanks! I think my last response was deleted for some reason. It’s called ROAR: The Story of the Southern Columbia Football Tigers. It’s on prime under pbs documentaries

    • @thyerriwolf
      @thyerriwolf Před 24 dny

      @@monellifilms thanks man, I'll check it out

    • @Akirasenjuuu
      @Akirasenjuuu Před 20 dny

      @@monellifilms It was insane bro well done

  • @regularguyrevolution9455
    @regularguyrevolution9455 Před 24 dny +7

    This was a fabulous help! I did not submit footage here but I definitely took notes regarding all of your suggestions! Thanks so much for all you do! Cheers to you and the team! 👍

  • @flochfitness
    @flochfitness Před 24 dny +5

    Awesome stuff!!!! My two cents:
    2:40 the first two shots are "flat" compared to next two shots which have much more light to dark and draws the eye into the important parts without having to "work" for it. If this is an intense trailer, match the intensity of the contrast in shots
    5:30 sometimes, we get caught in what we know and we want to let the viewer know that. And sometimes we just want to look at how cool something is...
    7:00 you're work will 10x if you had a warm body with you to hold up a neg.
    11:07 you front lit this shot. creating, less contrast. Crab left three feet and that shot is MUCH more interesting
    12:50 less is more. It's hard to tell from being too close to your piece if shots belong or not. Show it to someone who has NO IDEA about the project (but knows about filmmaking) and ask, "does this feel cohesive?" then consider cutting that stuff that doesn't fit. Additionally, this will help your next project as you will be shooting for the edit, as you seem limited by your creation by the available shots
    14:40 that's HUGE mark. Love that idea. Now that is shooting for the edit!

  • @VishalDey
    @VishalDey Před 24 dny +2

    Need more of these!!! I learn from these reviews more than anything else. Thanks for the great content Mark! ❤

  • @zacharias21
    @zacharias21 Před 24 dny +4

    Lets gooo ! Thanks for reviewing our short film skyhook loved the critiques!

  • @ThomasFransson
    @ThomasFransson Před 24 dny +4

    We all make mistakes and have things we should be improving on or just be reminded of. These videos are super good for all those things.

  • @vektor8
    @vektor8 Před 24 dny +5

    the cinematography black lol, I almost died hahahaha. Love your humour! These reviewing vids are awesome

  • @markbone
    @markbone  Před 24 dny +20

    i'll do more of these review videos again if you guys let me know in the comments. I can do them long form also if you'd like? I recognize i talk a lot about AOD in this one, BUT our huge sale ends tonight and someone out there needed to know that! Doors close in just a few days theartofdocumentary.com/

    • @Premier-Media-Group
      @Premier-Media-Group Před 24 dny +1

      longer please...

    • @jarrodbarker
      @jarrodbarker Před 24 dny +1

      For the football shot, you don't need to adjust luminance to add contrast to your shot. If the film maker wanted a faded, "print black" look, you easily could have added some saturation depth to increase contrast as well. Don't be afraid of lifted blacks, Mark, you need to be aware of the many ways to increase contrast in a shot without adjusting luminance, which will protect your shadows. It will make you a better colorist over time.

    • @WanderlustVP
      @WanderlustVP Před 24 dny +1

      How to we submit?

    • @Videofilealways
      @Videofilealways Před 24 dny

      please do more - always learn from these kind of videos

    • @blakefilmco
      @blakefilmco Před 24 dny

      Please do more videos like this! I would love for you to rip my videos apart! 😂

  • @mrscampbell16
    @mrscampbell16 Před 24 dny +3

    Watching these are so helpful! More please!

  • @artroomx
    @artroomx Před 17 dny +2

    Love this video bro! I'll make sure I stay tuned for part two and submit my clips haha

  • @AesirViking
    @AesirViking Před 24 dny +2

    I enrolled in the course the moment the door opened and I can assure everyone undecided - it's totally worth it!

  • @LiteShaper1
    @LiteShaper1 Před 21 dnem +1

    Excellent, excellent analysis here. So valuable to have an objective, informed and insightful perspective on one’s work.

  • @abdellahcodes
    @abdellahcodes Před 22 dny +1

    That listen and nod is a genius idea!

  • @drmatthewhorkey
    @drmatthewhorkey Před 24 dny +3

    These videos are SOOO useful! I have to get better with learning how to use s-curves

  • @BlakeDavis42
    @BlakeDavis42 Před 5 dny

    The counter shots tip at the end was so practical and helpful. An easy solution to a problem I've ran into many times.

  • @SumonBose
    @SumonBose Před 24 dny +3

    Man this is awesome! i have learned so much already

  • @mukisaelijah12
    @mukisaelijah12 Před 24 dny +4

    Great video.. loved the breakdowns thanks for sharing Mark 🌆👊

  • @MarkIdiomas
    @MarkIdiomas Před 17 dny +1

    I enjoy these videos. Thank you for sharing. More videos like these, please!

  • @jabarih_1
    @jabarih_1 Před 22 dny +1

    Dang coach thanks this was great advice for sure!

  • @Nidakhan.mbilal
    @Nidakhan.mbilal Před 24 dny +5

    love videos like this!

  • @phantomcorps3373
    @phantomcorps3373 Před 24 dny +2

    Good notes on the clips. Cheers.🌄

  • @HeathClark
    @HeathClark Před 24 dny +6

    Just joined AOD, Super pumped for the One Day Doc and growing my business! Thanks Mark!

    • @markbone
      @markbone  Před 24 dny +2

      Heck yeah! See you on the inside!

  • @HarrisonBender
    @HarrisonBender Před 24 dny +2

    🌄 gang. Keep these critiques coming. So good! Would love to see more content of you showing what you'd change in regards to colouring (like you did in the football submission) 🔥

    • @markbone
      @markbone  Před 24 dny

      Yeah it’s fun colour correcting on the fly

  • @PhillGraaf
    @PhillGraaf Před 24 dny +1

    This is SO valuable... man.
    So where do I see the call to action for these? This was just one for a 60 Sec clip of one of your projects? I'm in the community, but I did not hear about this.

    • @markbone
      @markbone  Před 24 dny

      I post them on my CZcams community tab and on my instagram. So follow me on insta and make sure to have CZcams notifications on

  • @Stevebuk123
    @Stevebuk123 Před 23 dny

    As someone who’s mostly self-taught (through CZcams), I’ve always been taught that ‘crushing the blacks’ was a bad thing so it’s nice to see someone encouraging it and showing the great effect it can have on footage.

    • @markbone
      @markbone  Před 23 dny +1

      I dunno why people are so scared, also as you can see from the footage I’m not even reaching 0 half the time

    • @eliaciamei8892
      @eliaciamei8892 Před 7 dny

      @@markbone Bro u can see literally all the noise u created crushing the blacks, this is crazy incorrect advice

  • @AllenRReid
    @AllenRReid Před 24 dny

    I understand bringing down the black levels, but shouldn't overall exposures still be near 100%? Can you explain the balance between the two?

  • @MosaicArtizt
    @MosaicArtizt Před 24 dny +1

    I love Akira!!!

  • @SamWelker
    @SamWelker Před 24 dny +2

    🌄🌅 Thank you Mark

  • @tonyvargas18
    @tonyvargas18 Před 24 dny +1

    Hi Mark, would you recommend your AOD course if I just want to learn how to film commercials or Product videos and not really documentaries?

    • @markbone
      @markbone  Před 24 dny

      Yes. We speak about this lots in create & earn and cinematic eye.

    • @markbone
      @markbone  Před 24 dny +1

      Although I would say getting a good grip on storytelling will benefit any commercial filmmaker

  • @BATTLEHAWKMEDIA
    @BATTLEHAWKMEDIA Před 24 dny +2

    Where did you get that Akira shirt mark!!?

  • @CodyMadewell
    @CodyMadewell Před 24 dny +2

    let me color for some of y"all 😂 great video

  • @eleventhvision
    @eleventhvision Před 24 dny +1

    Loved it all except for the end , Parking tickets!!! Classic Canadian battles.

  • @saad-ul4mr
    @saad-ul4mr Před 24 dny

    mark how much do u charge per doc/movie and based on what ? what about length of the movie of the duration of directing etc..

    • @markbone
      @markbone  Před 24 dny

      There is no formula for that, there is many more factors than just video length

  • @bo_r_eal1974
    @bo_r_eal1974 Před 23 dny

    Anyone knows the font used at 6;29? It's awesome!!

  • @retroelectrical
    @retroelectrical Před 21 dnem

    would be cool in the future if the shorts/videos were linked with credits.

  • @soshaibu
    @soshaibu Před 12 dny

    This is really gooood.
    Please how can I get my work reviewed?

  • @merccciii
    @merccciii Před 19 dny +1

    Hope one day I can produce something worthwhile enough to participate in this :)

  • @belikdaria
    @belikdaria Před 18 dny

    Hi Mark, I have some problem with the website, when I clean Enroll now button it’s just get stuck, I have tried several times, doesn’t work

  • @jaysslows
    @jaysslows Před 24 dny +3

    Awesome content

  • @Taps2faced
    @Taps2faced Před 24 dny +1

    Love from South Africa, what application do u use to edit on ur laptop?

    • @markbone
      @markbone  Před 24 dny +1

      Adobe Premiere

    • @Taps2faced
      @Taps2faced Před 24 dny

      @@markboneoh thanks what about da Vinci ?

  • @a1001_
    @a1001_ Před 23 dny +2

    everybody has at least heard of Akiry by now

    • @markbone
      @markbone  Před 23 dny +2

      Not the young folks

    • @TJUC123
      @TJUC123 Před 11 dny

      I was so confused on what you were talking about until I realize you meant Akira. I thought you were talking about a software. 😂

  • @noahjstein
    @noahjstein Před 23 dny +1

    U rock mark

  • @johanwagner_sweden
    @johanwagner_sweden Před 24 dny +2

    Master Mark

  • @user-ef9cl3bd4y
    @user-ef9cl3bd4y Před 16 dny

    MARK GET SOME REST!!!!YOU LOOK EXHAUSTED FRIEND! we appreciate you and need you in good health!

    • @markbone
      @markbone  Před 16 dny

      I took an extra nap this morning before reading this fyi

  • @LikeButtahApparel
    @LikeButtahApparel Před 12 dny

    The Akira film was made from like the middle of the manga, so very random lol

  • @WhySteve
    @WhySteve Před 20 dny +1

    🌇close enough

  • @gabrielsauceda_
    @gabrielsauceda_ Před 24 dny +2

    🌄

  • @clumsystudios69
    @clumsystudios69 Před 22 dny

    🌅

  • @Squatrecords
    @Squatrecords Před 23 dny +1

    Video about music and audio please ! 🙏🏼

  • @DanPand
    @DanPand Před 10 dny

    whats ur mic and please make a video how to edit your voices!

  • @iWicky
    @iWicky Před 24 dny

    Won't be able to join AOD this time but I'll be joining in August!

    • @markbone
      @markbone  Před 24 dny +1

      See you then!!

    • @iWicky
      @iWicky Před 24 dny

      @@markbone actually was at the zoom call and working with Kim now to join next week!

  • @karolmcgonigle1689
    @karolmcgonigle1689 Před 14 dny +3

    The advice regarding the blacks was very helpful - it made a huge difference to that person's footage.

  • @riffbaama
    @riffbaama Před 17 dny

    German man advising to crush your blacks 😂😂😂

  • @broskies2598
    @broskies2598 Před 8 dny

    Go watch any classic movie nice and bright 🌞 little rascals, sandlot, rookie of the year, mighty ducks, ninja 3 dom, back to the future all bright fk that dark contrast shit

  • @JosephFutsum
    @JosephFutsum Před 14 dny

    any chance I can get your AOD stickers :)

  • @seanmcnamara4030
    @seanmcnamara4030 Před 23 dny

    "And crush your blacks...The cinematography blacks..." hahahaha

  • @knio1
    @knio1 Před 23 dny +22

    Come on... Everything is about AOD now... It`s get tired to see you talk about in every video

    • @markbone
      @markbone  Před 23 dny +27

      I’ll never stop talking about. We have seen insane change in so many filmmakers careers, films and business. It’s also either I mention AOD or do an ad-read for a product you likely do want to buy. I created a product I truly believe in so I don’t have to push other things that I don’t. :) It’s also launch season so I talk about it heaps

    • @pedromarquez114
      @pedromarquez114 Před 15 dny +6

      Welcome to CZcams man, stop crying

  • @broskies2598
    @broskies2598 Před 8 dny

    Sick of everything being dark. Watch movies at home and like I'm yelling why the f is it so dark what's going on damn wtf every movie is so dark....leave it bright

  • @aaronhider7666
    @aaronhider7666 Před 24 dny

    Can I intern for you?

    • @bbqking3908
      @bbqking3908 Před 13 dny

      Respectfully why would he consider you to intern for him? You haven't said anything about yourself or your experience to suggest why you would be qualified or deserving to have an intern postion. You don't even have a portfolio on your channel to show any work.

    • @aaronhider7666
      @aaronhider7666 Před 13 dny

      @@bbqking3908 Respectfully, I wasn’t talking to you.

    • @bbqking3908
      @bbqking3908 Před 13 dny

      @@aaronhider7666 believe it or not, when you post on a public forum, it doesn't matter who you think you're talking to. You're talking to everyone.

  • @x1928
    @x1928 Před 24 dny

    You're wrong, and here's why, chicken nuggets.

  • @zanderwilll
    @zanderwilll Před 24 dny +2

    idk if I would take advice from a guy that can't pronounce fresnel

  • @Premier-Media-Group
    @Premier-Media-Group Před 24 dny +1

    "The cinematography blacks..." lmao😂

  • @bentomlin
    @bentomlin Před 20 dny

    Sorry Mark, I know you want to make money from your course but how many times are you going to interrupt the promise of your video (reviewing people's videos) with your own ads... As a viewer I lose trust that I'm going to get to see what you say I'm going to see. Frustrating

    • @markbone
      @markbone  Před 20 dny +1

      Commercial breaks are never fun, but help me understand the difference of talking about my own product vs another paid sponsorship? I make these videos for free of course that I make on CZcams, so it’s necessary to pay for them somehow :) thanks for the feedback

    • @bentomlin
      @bentomlin Před 19 dny

      ​@@markbone The difference is the frequency and duration. I spend a lot of time on CZcams (especially on long commutes) and watch many many videos with sponsor slots, and have never felt compelled to mention it before now. These somehow feel quite disruptive and persistent. With just shy of 300k subs, CZcams is presumably also paying you money for your videos. Love your content, but something to work on perhaps

  • @omg9261
    @omg9261 Před 24 dny

    4:30 "Much more stronger"
    Jesus, I'm not even a native speaker and I was watching the video on 1.5 speed, but I couldn't help noticing.
    I'm appaled by people who don't even know their own language. Did you manage to make it through high school or you dropped out to pursue your "dream" of being some illitirate youtube blogger?

    • @Videofilealways
      @Videofilealways Před 24 dny +3

      from someone who spelled appalled and illiterate wrong ! 🤭

    • @markbone
      @markbone  Před 24 dny +2

      😂 lolz sry 4 ma grammerrrr

    • @dumblicker7024
      @dumblicker7024 Před 24 dny

      Why bro hatin on some random thing

  • @JoshWilliams-mf9fc
    @JoshWilliams-mf9fc Před 9 dny

    I find it hilarious that this guy thinks he is some expert

    • @Videofilealways
      @Videofilealways Před 5 dny

      I'm one of a few thousand AOD members who have benefitted from his expertise

  • @matt.gillispie
    @matt.gillispie Před 24 dny +2

    🌄

  • @seanmacdougallsm
    @seanmacdougallsm Před 24 dny +2

    🌄

  • @RUBENDELGADODRONES
    @RUBENDELGADODRONES Před 24 dny +1

    🌄