[ STAY ALIVE ] Warriors Swiftpaw Animatic
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- čas přidán 15. 01. 2021
- WOHOO its done
I started working on this in somewhere in august?? there were multiple times where i just stopped working on it for like 1-2 months lol. i needed something to upload and this was almost over so i decided to finish it. you can clearly see that some frames are rushed lol i just wanted to get this finished
OK SO. about the animatic: This is basically a semi-AU where swiftpaw manages to "stay alive" a bit more and has a talk with his mentor and mother before passing away. the other events are pretty much the same, i just thought that it would be nice if swiftpaw could talk to his family one last time
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►Song: • Stay Alive (Reprise)
►Animated in: Firealpaca & Adobe Animate 2018
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I only own the art and animation.
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I think most people forget that Longtail was also Swiftpaw's half brother, they shared the same father.
woah they actually do!!!
Well, we can not forget that Patchpelt was with Robinwing, Goldenflower, and even WILLOWPELT! And he has one kit with each of them: Longtail, Graystripe and Swiftpaw.
Damn that Mentor/Apprentice relationship they had hits different now
mm if you believe retcons i think
@@tetezinhageek2163 so are Graystripe and Swiftpaw half brothers too?
YOU CAN'T BE BREAKING MY HEART LIKE THIS..
LONGTAIL AND GOLDENFLOWER NEVER GOT TO SAY GOODBYE SO THIS MAKES IT EVEN MORE SAD IF THEY DID 😭
IKR EEEEE
The idea of the whole clan having seen what was done to Swiftpaw is scary. The amount of revolt, the incredible new amount of mourning, and the hatred that would be directed to Bluestar for something she wasn't aware of but left unsupervised could have changed the narrative incredibly.
I was waiting for her to scream and I was gonna break down-
SAAAAAAAAAAME Q~Q
If she screamed it would have destroyed me
As much as people like Swiftpaw, I feel like Longtail is the under rated one here! I want a Longtail focused animatic/pmv/map. I love how he goes from Tigerclaw supporting egocentric jerk, to one of ThunderClan's most loyal and devout warriors, to one of my favorite elders.
Well you sure got one with MR FEAR ONGHFNVJDNCJDKFC
I think Goldenflower is the most underrated, seeing how she didn’t get a death, and they didn’t develop her character like longtail. Though she was the first warrior to stay a queen to help out.
Have you seen the “how to save a life” longtail pmv?
@@midnightamber0 that one is amazing!
Oh dear this is sad I cried when I saw the scene in Hamilton and I now cried watching this
**sad screaming ensues**
SAAAAAAAME
This is really sad! Poor Swiftpaw he deserved better. By the way, keep up the great work as always!
well technically no he didn't he literally chose his fate lol
@@inspectorspinda shhhhh
@@inspectorspinda *shut*
@@inspectorspinda imagine blaming someone for getting mauled by a dog
hi Emzie the Editor I’m one of your biggest fans I love your videos keep up the great work
Hey, me and my cousins just watched Hamilton last night.
Oh hi-
This is a very sad animatic for a very sad death. If this had happened, I wouldn't be surprised if Longtail and Goldenflower joined Tigerclan to go against Bluestar.
Great job!
Watch me make a book about that
@@delaineykillion7868 watch me read it If you do
Oof, only to then find out it was Tigerstar who led the dogs into Thunderclan territory! That premise just has some amazing innate drama ready for the reaping.
MY AU SENSES ARE TINGLING
Bluestar was dead by the time the Tiger/LionClan stuff happened. Cool idea still tho
MY BOYY NOOOOO MY BOYY NOOONONON O THIS IS BEAUTIFUL NOOOO IM CRYUNG WWWWWWWWWVVV
OH NOOOO POOR SWIFTY :'( you did a fantastic job with the emotion and pacing of this, honestly made me tear up a bit. and i really liked all the flashback parts, those were really well done and did a good job communicating what was going on. awesome work!!!
For some reason I got chills when the mom (i think) ran in. This was a amazing, be proud!
1:28 the pure proud motherly look here fills my heart omg, this moment is precious
Poor baby didn't deserve this..anyone who says he did are cruel, he had no idea what he was walking into to begin with, he didn't "choose" his fate he didn't even know what his fate was; it's like blaming someone for their death saying they chose it when all they did was walk to the store at 8pm which led to them getting mauled by a loose dog; have some sympathy
thanks for making me cry over the death of a fictional cat in an AU of a series i've never read, that was a weird experience
i told myself "one more video before i go to sleep" and clicked the first video that was recommended to me, and the video in context was THIS, i dont know what i expected but it was not CRYING MYSELF TO SLEEP
bruuuh why you do this...
such a great, yet heart breaking concept... and it's so simple yet impactful... imagine if they had done this in canon, if he had held out long enough to have done this... god, imagine how much more soul crushing it would've been, and IS, here...
CRIES WHYY WHYY U MONSTERRRR
Dude.... I’m actually tearing up watching this, swift paw is such an underrated character, Tysm for making this 😭😭
Alt ending: *stay alive, I command you!* “…sounds reasonable” stands up
Swift, my bby
Ow stop that hurts 😭
Thanks for messing with my heart :( this was so amazing and you're so talented
Swiftpaw: *alivent*
owwwwww my heart..
this is amazing, done very well
but my heart hurts
and so does my eyes ;-;
I thought it was stayin alive and I got really confused / exited only to see it was a Hamilton song and get a lot less confused but lot more exited
I love it when people combine my two favorite things. Warriors, and Hamilton.
Look I'm already tearing up because I can't cope, but thank fuck you didn't pick the audio with the mother's wail. That one would have been even worse
I was just about to say "I didn't ask for this oh no"
But I clicked, so honestly I did. I don't usually see things with Golden and Swift, it's really sad :(
*inhales deeply*
IS THAT A EXTREMELY UNDERRATED ARTIST I SMELL?!
Im not crying... You are-
YOU MADE ME CRY THIS HURTS SO MUCH
There is so much emotion in this animatic . . . I feel for Longtail and Goldenflower. At least they're both reunited with Swiftpaw again 😔. I can definitely see this playing out in the books! Dare I say I wish it did! Even though it didn't, the idea is amazing! And rightfully sad.
No no, I don’t want to cry right now, take this beautiful animatic back I can’t cry right now no thank you-
Didnt feel the slightest bit sad when i saw the actual musical on disney+ but now that its about swiftpaw its making me sad
OMG THIS IS SO SAD AAAAA
i can only imagine the pain longtail felt
And Brightpaw for feeling the sheer horror of what happened, and seeing swiftpaw die, and probably having survivors guilt :(
@@LinuxxLin44 yes
STOP JUST STOP!!, EVERY SINGLE SWIFT PAW MAP OR PMV I WATCH IS JUST DEPRESSING AND IT JUST BREAKS ME. 😭
Dude this is so good, I made one myself, took me months but I finally posted it, and I made it on FlipaClip, no where near as good as this, man
i was paying attention to the music cause PHILIP NOOOO
but this is so yes too
This is one HECK of a tear jerker-
I'm emotional now....
OH MY GOD THE PLOT AND EXPRESSIONS GO SO WELL WITH THE CHARACTERS AND SONG, EXCUSE ME WHILE I CRY AT THIS MASTERPIECE
Right before the counting part had me in tears.
Ima just go cry in a corner this is so sad
Well done you made me cry. Seriously though this looks amazing! You really did well at showing the emotion in longtail!
Im gonna cry please stop
IM NOT CRYING YOUR CRYING
I NEVER CRY AT THESE AND I AM CRYING THIS IS SO GOOD
this is so good.. i'm literally crying
This really made me feel sad. You did a great job with expressions!
This is so underrated 😔
That was so good! 🤯
Its so sad because swiftpaw died at such a young age, and it breaks my heart every time i watch this
This is heartbreaking. Thank you again recommendations!
STOOOOOOP THIS MADE ME CRY- PHILLIP'S DEATH WAS SO SAD IN HAMILTON, YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO US!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!
Soooooo good I have chills. Very well thought out
Let’s not forget the fact that Swiftpaws dad, patchpelt dated his own sister willowpelt 💀
My heart! So expressive!
Is this an underrated artist I see??? Amazing!
I LOVE THE ART AND ANGSTTTT
THIS IS SO GOOD CRYING
aaaaagh the *feels*
this was awesome though so good job!
*rushes to disney plus to watch hamilton cutely*
THE WAY I'M SOBHIGN RIGHT NOW I CAN'T THIS IS SO GOOD
Beautiful!
THIS LOOKS GREAT!! *CRIES*
I actually started crying! Look at me crying over cats and Hamilton audio… *counties to cry*
swiftpaw was always my favorite I was sobbing before goldenflower even came on screen
I got tingles down my spine from this, its so accurate and sad :(
this literally made me cry like ia m crying right . now
What would have happened if Swiftpaw had survived long enough to get back to camp
ugh it's not the same without that heartfelt scream. this is so powerful tho :C
This song fits so well
holy crap chills and tears
💔 beautiful
It would be so touching if in this small Au he got his warrior name as he died
Edit: kind of like Badgerfang
(I wonder what his warrior name would of been)
a lachrymatory art i love it :, )
Wow good animation!
makes me actually tear up
I haven’t even read this yet and it made me cry💔 wonderful job tho
why are my eyes sweating
Omg Nice idea
It is 1:34 AM and I am crying in bed on my brother's laptop over this fucking animatic. Why. Why have you broken my heart with this beautiful, heartbreaking animatic? Why did Erin kill Swiftpaw? And why didn't we get this scene in the books?
Amazing job, I am sobbing
IHEARD THE SONG AND IMMEDIATLY COUGHED FROM AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
this song just makes me feel man
me too omg I'm literally shaking
Dis is intense :0 poor swiftboy
I remember going to see hamilton and at the end of this piece eliza just screams. I cried.
There's trears in my eyes 😢😭😔
If I had a nickel for every warrior cats animation with Hamilton songs that feature Longtail as Hamilton, I'd have 10 cents, which isn't a lot but it's weird that it happened twice
Aaaaah I cry ! This is so sad ;;^;;
Aww...
Owww. 😭
I think this would work better with brightheart and cloudtail but it's men. Great job!!!
Not me imagining the scream at the end in my head-
Me emotionally crying over here
The my parents: what is going on up there?
As a big Hamilton fan, I have to say that this song is stay alive Reprise XD ^^"
Poor Swiftpaw!
Watching your son die costs 20.99$
Every queen in warriors ever; it’s free realestate
(Sorry if I spelt that wrong.)
I just got done crying over my dead cat and then I watch this what is wrong with me am I a masochist
it's not like I needed a heart anyway 💔😿
So sad😭😩😩😩
*SOBS*