Humans Warned The Invasion Fleet To Leave I HFY I A Short Sci-Fi Story
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How can the Masari replicate and improve upon human tech if they have not captured any human warships? They were fleeing for their lives from the battlespace. What they have are records of maneuvers, execution of strategy/tactics, not captured physical assets.
You can still capture enemy equipment or scan it even if you are retreating from battlefield.
in well written stories the aliens or humans caught some fighters, maybe light cruiser and the like. even a missile might have ftl drive or as plasma warhead and so on that could be upsized to be used in warships maybe it's unspoken here?
@@SciFiTime How would you do that if the enemy equipment is on the side you are fleeing from? You don't come across it while retreating. It's in the other direction. Try to pick something up from the place you are running from while already running...
@@SciFiTime The story specifically stated reverse engineering of Human Tech. It never said anything about capturing that tech during the battle they were surprised and shocked by the effectiveness of human weapons. The aliens appeared to be retreating in panic and doing what they could to survive and flee. Even aliens in that state wouldn't stop, take the time to try capturing something of the enemies that is slaughtering them, before fleeing. The story doesn't even mention scanning human tech and trying to recreate it, it says reverse engineer captured tech.
Even in our human WWII against the Japanese in the Pacific our USA forces were able to dtermine knowledge of Japanese warships through observation in battle. Weaknesses in our weapons became apparent & improvements to our ships, weapons & tactics were developed. The Japanese were slow to chane & US, British & Australian forces used this gained knowledge to defeat the Japanese.
The most "chill" supreme leader of an invading force that i have ever seen given the news of defeat
If Earth had a fleet or even 1 superior ship to defeat the alien fleet, why did they wait for them to enter orbit? Any commander worth being called an officer would do whatever it takes to keep any possible enemy ship as far from orbit as possible. If you allow an enemy ship close to orbit, they could easily attack and destroy entire continents, let alone cities. This is a major threat to any world. I find it ridiculous that these stories continuously have the same storylines about things like that.
The element of surprise. Basic tactical move
@@PoppaWoodiE The story stated the fleet was approaching earth after leaving FTL. Also as soon as the alien ships revealed themselves, if they were somehow invisible to the Human defense forces, As soon as they revealed themselves and demanded the humans surrender, The defense forces would have been immediately launched to prevent attacks on population centers. The immediate response of any military commander would be to do as much as possible to reduce civilian casualties even if it meant losing half his fleet before they were able to deploy. As for an invader, you would redirect any and all your weapons to a threat rather than civilian, non-threatening cities, to reduce your fleets damage and destruction, they are a LONG way from repair facilities and reinforcements.
@jammer68 Throughout all of human warfare history it is well established that a strong defense can be the deciding factor against a stronger enemy. It's well known in military that the attacker must have a 3-5 times advantage to the number of defenders just to make an attack successful. Also, it is usually a must that the defender have to allow the attacker to get withing the defensive field-of-fire before engaging the attackers. Why fire weapons that cannot reach the attacker! With enough warning of an impending attack ambushes may be able to be set up, but alot of that depends on intelligence gathered & time between seeing the enemy & how quickly the attack begins. Then there is the ammunition problem. How much is available for immediate use, how much is being delivered & how quickly can it be replaced. This holds true for arrows, bullets, missiles, etc. Plus the commander must know how many defenders exist, whether any civilians can assist, how many defenders get injured or killed, what equipment (ex: machine guns, tanks, missile batteries, etc. gets lost in battle. A good commander balances all this.
We learned in WWI, when tanks were first introduced, that even an advanced weapon can fall victim in war. That is why those tanks were deploed in ever increasing numbers on those battlefields.
If Earth only had one or a few space-warships it would be despiration last resort to commit them to battle without first determining the enemy capabilities.
So how many storys you made and what lines would you use in that spot instead or are you just a couch critic .if dont like it state why move on not worth making an essay and they do call it fiction and fiction is what it is @guysalsburg
A minivan is not a sports car, a ship great at defense and short engagements may not be able to assault or achieve high speed
Good story great narration
Thank you
Just because you have "a new plan"... doesn't mean it's any good.
_The Alien Battle Fleet met the Humans in battle , _*_AND ALL the aliens Died_*_ ... The End_
There, I rewrote it for you without all the unecessary words
Life is not a destination.
pretty good for AI writing, much improved
Interesting
Need part II. This story is not over, right?
If i hit 15k i will write part 2 😄👍
There is no punctuation, this leads to run on sentences. To trite. Over extolling human ingenuity. Downplaying an advanced civilizations abilities. Needs a live narrator. When a live narrator adds an extra liveness to the story. It isn't just words coldly stated.
A cross between Star Blazers & MAYBE Starship Troopers sans bug aliens. Meh.
And yet another story with no ending. BAH!
woooooof
Nope!!
Commander Patak.... likely from Kalistan ??
Patak from Star Trek 😄 Klingon
@@SciFiTime HA ! I was on target.
Sounds a bit like Star Blazers / Yamato. They need a " wave - motion gun ".
The computer voices are terrible
In channel description you have explanation. why i use computer voice.
Sorry, this did not do well to my sensabilities.
Cliched and a retreading of many similar stories. Trite plot
Patahk - Klingon insult for smooth forehead.
Nope
Better editor needed. Programming better pronunciation would be helpful.
Stories are translated from Swedish ( my native), so it cant be 100% accurate
That loud booming noise in the beginning of your videos is annoying, also the audio stories with music throughout is annoying as well. The computer voice you've chosen is dis jointed. I no longer am subscribed. Bye.
Good luck and thanks 🙏
The idea for the story is good. However it's poorly written by a geek who jumps forward & back in the story to fill obvious gaps & missed information. for example: You can't say the fight on the ground was fierce until you say that soldiers descended to take the fight on the ground & why such a fight is a good idea while the one in the air's not going well. Improving tech you don't actually posses is just plain stupid. You can't expect the reader to assume the enemy captured such tech or have a traitor who gave it to them but then you have to deal with the fact that this wasn't dealt with before the battle. you also can't say we can not let them reach the surface after you already said the battle on the ground was already going. Read your material for cohesion or get a friend with common sense to check it before posting. only an idiot would say go on the attack & pursue the enemy but maintain a defensive posture. you can't have your cake & eat it too. You are either on the offensive or defensive but not both. whoever wrote this is not very bright.
Stories are trite , boring, all the same.
Poorly written by a middle school aged child.
Probably written by ai.
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