It's Alright || Complete Warriors Horror AU MAP
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- [TW! BLOOD, GORE, GUTS, SCREAMING, PHYSIOLOGICAL HORROR, FLASHING LIGHTS, ETC!]
What if the three’s powers weren’t powers, but curses?
This AU belongs to @Razmerry, and the song is ”It’s Alright” by Jack Stauber.
EDIT: I MISSED THAT CINDRR COLLABED WITH Juweli :3 PLEASE GIVE THEM SOME LOVE I’M STUPID SORRY,, I ALSO ACCIDENTALLY CREDITED Interstellaria AS SSOUTH SORRY AAAAAAA
It’s finally done. Thank you all so, so much for your patience and enthusiasm! It’s meant a lot to me. I hope my editing together of it all was satisfactory. I’m super proud of this, but that’s just because everyone who joined did such a good job! I couldn’t have been happier with all of your guys’ parts. Thank you so much, from the bottom of my heart.
For all participants: I’m sorry the art of your characters ended up looking a bit weird. I had a very specific thing in mind with their poses, but, as you can see, it ended up looking a bit, uh… weird. It’s free art, though, I guess? ^^” I’m also very sorry if I mis-credited any of you!
For all thumbnail contest participants: There were over 100 of you, and I’m honestly so shocked?? Like, thank you??? What??? It was such an honour!! I know I missed some of you, and some of you didn’t make it into the credits because your formatting was wrong (or, if you didn’t join the discord, you didn’t provide a link for me to download it from), and I definitely messed up with names. I’m sorry about that, but I did my absolute best and that’s all anyone can ask. Thank every single one of you, it was so amazing seeing all of your submissions and I’m so happy you liked this MAP enough to want to draw for it!
Original MAP Call: • [*COMPLETE*!] it's alr...
Thumbnail artist: @HarvestBrook
PARTICIPANTS:
INTRO 1: Llamalovers123
INTRO 2: Interstellaria
INTRO 3: Lonely Animations
PART 1: Applefern
PART 2: BonBon Puffy
PART 3: Inkasaur
PART 4: Razmerry
PART 5: Wingedcumulus
PART 6: sweetfrost
PART 7: Cindrr + Fluffy-Paws
PART 8: InterstellarKip
PART 9: Pearl Walker
PART 10: ollieisaghost
PART 11: AlphaAreus + sweetfrost
PART 12: SavvySketches
PART 13: Juweli :3 + Cindrr
PART 14: SammiSafetypin
PART 15: laurierrose
PART 16: Razmerry
PART 17: Dying Embers
PART 18: sawble
PART 19: Nightfall
PART 20: Captaincinno
PART 21: CatArt
PART 22: Nightfall, hoywu, b1rd0, Rosia, ColorfulGhostWolf & lakeheart
PART 23: Call Me Robin Art
PART 24: orkestrell - Krátké a kreslené filmy
Lionblaze: *accidentally hurts a cat*
Jayfeather: SCREAM
Dovewing: *LOUDER SCREAM*
I SHOULDNT BE LAUGHING BUT I AM
My sister: *should we step in?*
Me: *no, let them finish their scream contest*
@@sagemoonstone9645 HAHAHAHHA SAMEEEEEEEE
You did it, you broke the au down to its bare essentials!
OMG YES 😂
So their curses are:
Lionblaze: He's too strong to the point just touching a cat leaves them broken somehow and since he can't have any physical contact and everyone in camp avoids him he goes on a killing spree.
Jayfeather: He can feel other's pain and feelings to an extreme level. Because of this, he can't tell the difference between his thoughts and feelings and his clanmates' and goes insane. Since he and Longtail couldn't hunt, they both starved to death.
Dovewing: She's very sensitive to sound that anyone who speaks to her causes her pain which in turn makes her despise them. She helps Lionblaze in killing others probably so there wouldn't be cats that make noise and would leave her alone and in the end rips off her ears to get rid of the pain.
Thanks! I couldn't really tell what Jayfeather's curse was 😅
This really helped me I couldn't understand what was happening but this made me understand it so thank you
I sorta think that Jayfeathers curse is that he feels whatever his clanmates are feeling (pain, anger, sadness, etc) which is why he got all upset at like 1:25 even though nobody was physically injured. It does closely connect with feeling all of their pain too, and I like how you explained it all.
I’m confused of why longtail died
@@eggswords7102 OmG yeah!
Honestly, i feel like Jayfeather's fate is the most horrifying. He has to suffer though a slow and painful death of starvation because he can feel others pain at a max level. And the fact that lionblaze and dovewing are going on a killing spree makes his pain worse. This map is so well done. Probably one of the only horror au's that made me feel genuinely uneasy
yup.
Lionblaze: touches a cat
the cat’s life: understandable have a great day
Bye have a great time!
I shouldn’t have laughed as hard as I did-
That really made me w h e e z e
The clan: **avoids Lionblaze**
His morals: understandable, have a great day
Insanity: *B o n j o u r*
Leafpool: makes an oopsie
Starclan: *end of the world, I guess*
XD
I love the shot of StarClan at the outro with the cat like *"LOOK AT WHAT YOU DID"*
3:54 YOU *IDIOT*
Logic 👌
So Starclan, has some of the wisest cats in the series. Could they have thought of a reasonable punishment? Nah... let’s just “punish Leafpool” and have a lot of innocent cats who had faith in us die brutal deaths. Jayfeather? Oh let’s make him suffer for no reason at all too. (I may be wrong but this is my view on it so far) ya dun fucked up starclan
Jesus.. all of their fates are terrifying but Lionblaze's is the most sickening in my eyes. He can't stop killing everyone, no matter how hard he tries to help. Everyone he touches becomes mangled; lifeless. The animations really help illustrate that.
yeah.. i mean jayfeather is also pretty bad, he feels everything anyone else feels so he would be feeling what lionblaze feels. jayfeather is just normal while he feels like a murderer, a loyal warrior, a forbidden lover, all these things at once since he would be feeling everything anyone else feels. like, jayfeather is just going insane from not knowing who he is and probably the guilt that everyone else carries from themself, is dumped onto him as well. and he's also blind, imagine not knowing what somethings look like yet at the same time you do, he probably doesnt really know what these mangled dead cats look like but because of all his clanmates he sorta does know. idk i find jayfeather's more terrifying if you really think about it, lionblaze's is just more terrifying visually.
@@saltypie751 I could never imagine the torment Jayfeather goes through in this AU.
@Lettmejustsleep Not to mention he probably couldn't sleep well-
Lionblaze out here preforming Mortal Kombat fatalities on everyone
All of them are just tragic and sad.
Also known as the "Holly misses one hell of a bullet." Map.
Razmerry's New Normal AMV: Allow me to introduce myself,
This makes me think that there must be an au that that hollyleafs is the only cat that ends up getting screwed over by powers or something else and and litterly everyone else dodges one hell of a bullet.
Hollyleaf missed a fucking nuke with this man
I like to think of it as "hollyleaf gets hit by a bullet but misses a *nuke*" because she still had to see her brothers go through all this and watch all her clanmates die
I think she is lucky to not be involved with the curse thing here. (And in canon the 3 is lucky not to have brambleclaw as their father.)
i feel like Jayfeather got the worst of it. You could argue that Dovewing got it worse because of how much pain she was in, but because of Jayfeather’s curse, he experienced that pain, too. He also experienced the pain his clanmates got when Lionblaze killed them. Not only that, he experienced their emotions and could hear their thoughts. Overall, he seemed to have it worse :(
Yeah
Hm... I'm not the only one who recognized this... Nice. #SAVEJAY
@@kittycatcube YES SAVEJAY
Jay feather could also not hunt so he starved to death and with that curse I def think he suffered the most
Jayfeather probably also got everything dovewing got as well since she was in his range.
StarClan: we must teach Leafpool a lesson for breaking the code.
StarClan, now overcrowded thanks to their curse: we’ve made a terrible mistake...
Big big oopie
Dark Forest: And they say we're the bad guys.
@@mediatorraptor3349
The dark forest are even laughing or staring at the terror of the curse of three
Curse be like: uno reverse card
Moral of the story: don’t punish Leafpool
OH YEAHHHHHHH LET’S GOOOOOOO
WE DID IT BOYS
WE NEED TO HEAR MORE ABOUT THIS AU BC HOLY SHIT I LOVE IT
RAZMERRY TYSM FOR MAKING THIS AU, EVEN IF YOU DIDNT TYSM FOR LIKE MAKING THIS HAPPEN SUEHFJJSHDFJSBD
ITS THE ONE AND ONLY!
*AYEEEEE*
lionblaze: do you ever want to talk about your emotions dovewing
dovewing: no
jayfeather: i do
lionblaze: i know jayfeather
jayfeather: i feel everything
lionblaze: i know jayfeather
WHY MUST I LAUGH
Lmao
Lol
LMAO
Now we gotta make a vine compilation with this au.
Reading all these AU comments kind of gave me one too, here goes:
Maybe once Firestar realises the three are cursed, he might take it upon himself to stop them from destroying the clans, especially Lionblaze. This might be because they're kin, and he heard about the prophecy before they were born (if I remember right?), AND he also has the most lives to spare out of any cat in the clan. I would LOVE the idea of him losing almost all his lives in this one
Since he's very compassionate, he might start with getting Jayfeather out and away from the clan, along with one or two other cats to hunt for him. This is so that he stops feeling all the emotions and pain of the other cats. Firestar might also deal w/ Jayfeather first, so that when he gets into a fight with Lionblaze, Jayfeather does not have to feel the pain of his leader dying and losing multiple lives? (maybe the feeling of a leader losing a life would be way more hurtful?)
Once Jayfeather is safe, I think he would want to deal with Lionblaze asap so that he doesn't go off killing the rest of the clan. The fight would end with him winning, but losing most of his lives in the fight. Maybe Lionblaze's body would go through a more intense kind of burial ritual, as the cats' may fear that his curse will continue into Starclan? Once they're done with that and Lionblaze is buried, he finally deals with Dovewing. He might do the same and get her away from the noise of the clan, to be with Jayfeather and the 2 other cats.
ORRRRRRR, before Firestar has a chance to help Dovewing, she rips her own ears off, causing massive infection and deafness, but she is able to get help from Leafpool. Maybe Dovewing can become the medicine cat apprentice in this AU, since Jayfeather is out and his sensitivity to the pain of others would be too much to bear
Also, maybe Firestar can retire or be very weakened by that fight? he could come out with a LOT of scars, maybe a limp, ears missing or something like that? since Lionblaze is able to literally punch through Ivypool's chest like that lmao
Cool idea
Well, according to the books, if a cat has a very VERY severe injury that is deadly, then they would loose all of their lives. Perhaps he could escape from lion then trick lion into falling off a cliff, or perhaps something large to fall on him? Just a suggestion.
What about sneaking deathberries into his food instead?
@@brehdude drowning is an option
That makes me feel better :)
starclan cats: two shots.
of vodka.
(PRoceeds to pour entire bottle)
Lol
**Falls off trailer**
love that the comment on the map call extended to this video im fucking cackling
I saw it....EVERYWHERE.
@@SorryinAdvanceSia Hiiii :D
"I fear no one"
"but that thing " *Looks at the three*
"It scares me"
Aa yes thats what longtail would say
They're the Cursed Three in this au
Imagine The Dark Forest Shows Up To Fight An Lionblaze Is Just Standing There With all their bodies just like:
*bonjour*
IGHKBJFABHKDHBASA I’M CRYING
*ello*
I'm cackling lmfao
LMAO HDIJGJDGYA
Even the dark forest would be scared at that point. Like Tigerstar, Mapleshade, Snowtuft, and literally everyone would look like *POMERANIANS* against this guy.
They’d say
*adios*
So in the end Squirrelflight, Leafpool, and Hollyleaf are still hiding in the tunnels as the only survivors, Jayfeather dies of starvation since he can’t hunt for his own food and neither Dovewing nor Lionblaze can hunt for him, Dovewing dies of blood loss or infection from ripping off her own ears with no medicine cat to treat her wounds, and Lionblaze exists as the only living cat in the clans territory hunting down anything and everything he hears or sees? I think that’s what the ending implies? Either way, this is amazing
I think it might be because the creator like your comment lol
In the au, holly leaf died xd
@@The_Whale13 in the original creators version of this AU, Hollyleaf died, in this AU map, Hollyleaf is still shown to be alive under the tunnels.
I can’t tell if Longtail is alive or not, he’s just vibin in the background of Jayfeather’s scene
@@rainebasil5812 btw, sweetfrost didnt create this au, they just hosted this map. razmerry made the au
Jesus this AU is so sad, all their fates are so awful, everyone did so good though! The map looks amazing!
Dovewings really hurt though, I highkey have dovewing as a comfort character because I have sencory isssues with audio, so her being overwhelmed by sound is kind a comfort thing. But seeing how bad it gets for her to the point she rips her own ears off just due to pain is so horrific
I feel for you. I have extremely sensitive hearing to the point where a slightly raised voice hurts my ears.
I will go into what my mom calls a shutdown mode, where I curl into a ball, cover my ears and face, and just shut the world out until the noise and stress is over.
Oh god why’d you make me realize that she ripped her ears off-
I feel you. I’m autistic and have sensory sensitivities as a result. Certain sounds, textures, etc. overwhelm me. I’ve always head-cannoned Dovewing as autistic as a result. 😭
I’ve got ADHD and really loud places overwhelm me, especially crowds because when too many people are talking at once I can’t focus. I often feel like I can hear all the tiny little things going on around me and honestly? there are lots of moments where /I/ wish I could rip off my ears because of it 😂 but yeah it is horrific, but it’s a really cool connection!!!!!
Same here, Misophonia specifically. Gosh, Dovewing's parts hurt me.
The fact that the music is calming makes it 1000 times more disturbing to be honest, I love this
@@geobershad5375 chill no need to scream xD
I agree.
It’s odd because it doesn’t sound calming to me
Honestly this map makes me think this headcanon, this did happen, and lionblaze never moved on, he cought himself into a fantasy where they were all blessed, in reality they weren't, starclan blessed hollyleaf and ivypool too late to stop them and lion blaze ended up killing everyone, so he imagined everyone were still alive, by this point he'd killed every cat at the lake, every cat from there was his imagination, a perfect world for him to live in, in series 7 is his realization of what he did causing his world to go dark and cold, in short, lionblaze couldn't and wouldn't move on from the mass genocide he caused
"Do you feel like a hero yet, Lionblaze?"
"Your eyes are opening for the first time. It hurts, doesn't it?"
"I- I never meant to hurt anybody."
"No one ever does, Lionblaze."
@@evanhunt1863 Did not expect a spec ops the line reference here
I dunno why, but I like to think that Lionblaze's powers don't quite work on Twolegs, so after he massacred half the clans he gets taken in by a random Twoleg who names him something like Mr. Stuffy
I hope they don't have any other pets
M-Mr Stuffy,,, weeps
And they lived happily ever after
Lion blaze to cat: death
Lion blaze to dog: multiple scratches on the torso
Lion blaze to twoleg: *OH LOOK AT YOU,YES YOU!!*
That's another headcanon for one of the Cursed Three being adopted by twolegs. Mine is for Dovewing, running away from all the noise and being found by a twoleg child/teen.
I find the end credits kind of funny, because everyone looks like they've lost their minds or are about to, and not to mention the Starclan cat pointing at all of these bloody, mangled warriors that had just joined Starclan.
I think that's blue star and yellow fang
NOOO THERE WAS A KIT
@@Jaded123x Yea, I only see like 3 surviving cats, I don't think he spared them. :(
Nisa5552 They probably are living in the caves now to hide from Lionblaze. Idk that's my assumption based off of their surroundings.
@@Cinnaschticks yeah I’m pretty sure it was hollyleaf, Squirrelflight and Leafpool hiding in the tunnels from lionblaze. They can’t stay there forever tho or he will come lookin is what’s creepy tho. Run gals 😭😭
Y’know... normally I don’t like the whole violent mass murder/evil aus, but this one was very well done!
It was a nice touch that you showed that Starclan saw what was to come at the beginning, yet they sent down the stars anyway (typical Starclan am I right?). An au that the Three’s powers are cursed rather than a blessing was a good idea.
I feel bad for Jayfeather in particular- he basically had Yellowfang’s empathy power from her super edition, but ramped up to like 400%. He had to feel everyone’s suffering when Dovewing and Lionblaze killed basically everyone.
Also pleased to see an au where Leafpool and Squirrelflight don’t die horribly and brutally.
Plot twist: he’s reincarnated Yellowfang
@Sara Love Compliance in murder is still compliance in murder, and is still a crime.
Yea i dont usually like dark aus, but hun let me tell you-
@Sara Love duuuuuude chiiiillll
I have a small little add on to this;
Someone should make a scene following all of the three’s deaths in Starclan.
When Lionblaze dies, he enters Starclan and many of the cats stare him down. He ended almost all of their bloodlines, he killed them all. He would probably separate himself from everyone else because he thinks he might kill them. When he inevitably finds out that he isn’t as strong here, he would probably become very physically affectionate. The other cats would eventually figure out/be told that he was too strong for his own good and forgive him.
Jayfeather would enter Starclan and finally be able to see. The thoughts and feelings of everyone but him wouldn’t be clouding his thoughts for once. He would be calm, but also be traumatized. He felt the feeling of death at least 20+ times since the age of apprentice-hood. The other cats would probably have to ease him into feelings normal again. He would finally be able to explore his own feelings.
Dovewing would most definitely freak out at the sight of all the cats in front of her immediately after death. It would be so much noise! But after a few seconds she would realize that... they’re not hurting her? They sound normal. She would probably ask all of her old friends to talk to her so that she could finally hear their real voices.
You have no idea how much I needed happy wholesome things right now
That's pretty nice, seeing how when everything went insane, once they died they were happy again
Wholesome ending to a horribly unwholesome story :)
Lionblaze would probably end up in the Dark Forest and maybe Dovewing as well if they deemed her as a murderer as well for her role in the death of all those cats
@@HER_Only_sIN Tbf though, Starclan is the one who inflicted this pain onto them. They were the ones who cursed them, so not giving them a chance at being *normal* would make Starclan pretty much evil imo
AU Dovewing would hate this song.
Your not wrong
Um...... Cuz of the noise? Point made
@@netherbrine8004 the screeching
It’s all right... EEEEEEEEEEEE-
Dovewing: there go my ears I guess
She would hate any song that made a single noise
Leafpool: :has kits with Crowfeather:
Starclan: so you have chosen death
Lmao
What about dovewing?
@@FluttercordFOREVER
Wdym?
@@FluttercordFOREVER if you mean why did dove wing have powers is because the dumb starclan cat missed a star when sending it so it landed somewhere else whitewing steps on the left over star by mistake and curses her child
@@FluttercordFOREVER 1:44 you can see white wing stepping on the star here if you look closley!
Since there is a trend of endings of the AU in these comments, I'd like to add mine as well.
Since Lionblaze killed nearly everyone in ThunderClan, it's not hard to assume he killed every other clan as well.
Leaf, Squirrel, and Holly eventually escape, waiting until Lionblaze isn't near any entrance of the tunnels. Those three try their best to convince whatever survivors to leave with them. Some join them (I'd like to assume Ashheart, Rowanclaw, and Reedwhisker along with maybe one or two more joining them), but others think they are cowardly not fighting like warriors not realizing Lionblaze is unkillable.
Whoever stayed died from Lionblaze or managed to escape, secretly hiding their scent from him.
Squirrel and the rest of them manages to find Midnight the badger and tell her the situation. Midnight, being a spirit or whatever can magically protect them. Midnight also drops the name of SkyClan.
The cats find SkyClan and lives the rest of their days with them, telling them about clan life and teaching the newly formed clan the techniques of each clan so the clans live on through SkyClan.
Lionblaze never find those stragglers of the clans and dies from devine intervention and Midnight. However, Darktail meets him at some point. Darktail tries to fight Lionblaze and dies.
Thanks for coming to my TedTalk
What about Jayfeather?
MIdnights not magical, shes just a sentient badger. shes no different from the medicine cats
@@kingvictor325 It's just a theory. I never said she would succeed in killing Lionblaze
@TranquilTorbie they all die eventually I know that. Ffs
@@elizabethh.9556 I didn’t say you were?
To me, lionblazes power is most disturbing.The way he just tries to help but ends up killing everyone, and in the process leads Jayfeather to death
Alright, I’ve kept you all in “suspense" for long enough so you could guess what the ending was. I left it kind of open to interpretation on purpose, as I *love* to see all your theories, but I’ll finally say the “canon” ending of my version of this AU! (Remember, Razmerry was the original creator! The first comic is here; instagram.com/p/B_7u6CxpaC5/? )
(Also, this ending isn’t the real ending. The real ending is all up to Razmerry to decide, as I’ve just made my own version of her AU.)
Lionblaze, being fed up watching his brother suffer from all these thoughts and feelings, wants to help him. That’s why he goes on the murder spree - after all, wouldn’t it be better for Jayfeather to suffer a “little extra” for a short while instead of dragging it out for moons upon moons? (Keep in mind: the cats around him were always afraid of him, and he’d already been starting to grow bitter because nobody would ever want to be around him. The only cat who didn’t avoid him was Jayfeather.) He tells Dovewing (because she’s cursed too, he can tell - he feels a lot of sympathy for her), who is 100% onboard as she wants to be rid of everyone. Lionblaze ends up killing every living being he comes across, somehow not ever meeting any twoleg, and gets so caught up in it that he forgets about taking care of Jayfeather. He doesn’t come back to the elder’s den, ever. Mousefur was the only one who could hunt out of the elders, so she left to do so. Lionblaze found her, though, and she was killed.
And so, Longtail and Jayfeather both starved to death.
Dovewing, who just couldn’t *sleep* anymore, ripped her own ears out in an attempt to just make it all quiet. However, the combination of sleep-deprivation, stress and bloodloss really didn’t go well together, and she died.
Lionblaze never realised either of them were gone, forever hunting any living being he could find and killing them. How he ultimately dies is up to you.
On a happier note;
Jayfeather, Lionblaze and Dovewing do go to Starclan. Jayfeather never did anything wrong, and Dovewing didn’t really kill anyone herself. She’d been driven to encourage Lionblaze’s murder spree, yes, but that was to silence the sounds which Starclan themselves were responsible for in the first place. Not to mention… they can’t go anywhere else. All cats go to Starclan, good or bad. After all, which good cats would set such a cruel punishment in place for the children of those who committed the sin?
(And also, since a lot of people have been asking: no Lionblaze isn’t eating Jayfeather in the last shot that’s just a random cat lmao)
So was everyone killed in the clans? Or was there at least 21-44 cats surviving Beastblaze?
Edit: also, whos that cat Lionblaze is sitting beside in the end scene?
I wonder if Holly, Squirrel, and Leaf have cautiously left the tunnels to warn the other clans and take in anyone who is left alive when Lionblaze starts killing the other clans. Maybe they call themselves TunnelClan and live there for now on and hunt both in the tunnels and outside the tunnels that lead to territory far away from the clans??
Who knows, maybe they will find their own way to connect to StartClan in the tunnels. My made up one would be called the MoonCavern, cause there would be a hole in the cave and when light shines in it it's all sparkly and twinkly like stars. Any med or new leader goes in there and falls asleep in there to connect to StarClan.
But hey that's just a theory, A WARRIORS THEORY-
@@candlestixsmixedwithtrixs HAHAHA, I T S A W A R R I O R S T H E O R Y .
P.S. NGL, I just like the idea of Hollyleaf going on the surface to possibly confront Lionblaze and maybe get through that clouded mind of his?? Idk he didn't look like he would kill Hollyleaf in this MAP but that's just my imagination-
@@candlestixsmixedwithtrixs possibly. But hey, thats just a theory.
I’m so glad this map is done! As a big fan of horror I’m so so happy!
Horror is best genre don’t @ me!
@@princessnubbins7608 | yea!
HORROR WARRIOR CATS SOUND SO GOOD
We are all different types
Lionblaze: Kills someone
Jayfeather: P A I N
JHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
*P A N I K*
That's why he's not capable to kill anyone 'cause then he'll feel the same
@@Ebonyfire I thought it was cause he's blind
@@MentalMetalNyan, oh well, it's too...
Me before this MAP: why doesn’t Hollyleaf have a power?
Me after this MAP: thank god Hollyleaf didn’t have a power
You mean star clan because this is warriors cats
Hollyleaf does have a power actually, remember how she spoke with Fallen Leaves when she was awake?
She can talk to and see dead people.
@@alyssagross5360 good point
I hope there’s a another Amv of this one day, maybe with the other cats with powers for example:
Yellowfang, instead of just feeling pain everyone’s wounds, sickness, etc. gets afflicted on her physically, she goes mad with pain and kills a cat which ends up killing herself.
Goosefeather, because of how much he knows about the future he tries to stop it by hurting, killing, others to disrupt the future but instead it keeps happening.
Leafpool and Squirrelflight share a hive mind with each other and don’t know what their feeling, maybe out of spite they hurt themselves to make the other feel pain.
Firestar, firestar doesn’t exactly have a power but he’s in the F O U R so here’s what I got. He’s “gifted” with being close to Starclan, maybe he knows too much or gets bombarded with dreams so often he doesn’t sleep. And goes mad having hallucinations.
Also with Cinderheart and her being a reincarnation and stuff. Maybe it's like full on possession and she has a severe identity crisis from learning she has part of a dead cat inside her
@@avacadotoast5571 perhaps Cinderpelt is vengeful of Leafpool while in cinderheart’s body,
@@jstratto18 Perhaps
Sweetfrost (HOPEFULLY 🤞🏻):
*We will be watching your career with great interest*
@@jstratto18 I wonder what the new prophecy will be like with squirrelflight and leafpool having a legit hive mind with each other
Wait but did Jayfeather died of stress and hunger?Dovewing cut her ears and lionblaze almost killed all thunderclan?
Yes and also probably the whole clan to
I though that jayfeather died of starvation because lionblaze killed all of thunderclan
Well longtail is next to him, wait is longtail dead or..
@@depressedthoughts I thought Jay died as a combination of malnutrition and the overwhelming pain Dovewing felt when she ripped off her ears
@@yanicircuitburst6733 I thought he died by screaming his vocal cords to the max
I know this sounds weird, but I would love to have another map of this au or one similar to it! I don't see very many horror maps in the warriors community and this was just so unique it's addicting!
Your Heart’s A Mess would be an excellent song in my opinion
Ikr!
I would love to join one of these! (You can reply if you have an open one)
It was scary :( but yes I want more
Agreed!
Unlike a lot of horror aus, this one actually made me uneasy w h a t
tbh the scariest part here was dying ember, their part had very shaky outlines, really bringing out how this is a horror map. the expressions on dovewings face are really matching with the theme and positions as well, the grins on lionblaze and dovewing's face are legit amazing. her eyes as well, they look messed up (in a good way!) and the fact they added eye-bags is actually cool
Ey yo when?
At 2:28
This map is so horribly good and it raises so many questions about what would other powers be like if they went wrong
Would squirrelflight and leafpool have a hive mind
Would yellowfang be in constant pain
And firestar is one of the 4 so who knows what could've happened to him
Well we didn't ever find out Firestar's power.
Now that I think about it he could just burst out into flames
Even though it is never said for Firestar, its probably his ability to unite people together and/or he has a connection to Star Clan despite not being a medicine cat. Something like that.
FinnyThePorg, Yellowfangs power is already kinda nightmare fuel without bending it, it helps her as a med cat sure but she originally wanted to be a warrior and had to quit dues to the fact she couldn’t fight without putting herself in pain
Ooo that's really interesting
Leafpool: is praganté
Starclan: hmmm, let's possess them and see if they turn out okay
moons later
starclan: uuuuuuuuuh........
Pergenant
P R A G A N T É
Pergent
Starclan clearly sees there suffering: Nothing
Later on starclan: I see the problem now
I love the small detail at the end of the two Starclan cats in the background with one angerly showing the other the results if what they've done to the forest
And then Lionblaze being the cat Slenderman. We need a whole map on that by itself!
like
"boi, look what u do"
"TF??"
The screaming just makes it 10x more unsettling
Also can we talk about the part where Jayfeather’s soul is looking at his body.. it’s really soft and nearly made me cry
Here's a thought/AU
As kits Dove and ivy were close, what if Dove told Ivy about hearing/noises hurting her and she would stay silent unless she needs to speak. Ivy would stay by Dove side, silent, making sure not to step on branches or leaves. She would live, not a happy life, but one with her sister.
Also I remember some saying snow kit should live and be doves friend so yeah in that AU to
@@frostfrogs I agree with ivy telling the others to shut it. But I don't think ripping her ears off would work, won't cats still hear with the ears ripped off?
@@beanboxd5526 Yep. The hearing is a lot worse though for cats without there ears so it might help. Though the truth is having her ears ripped off would leave her much more susceptible to ear infections which can be life threating to cats.
Maybe more gruesome but more effective solutions:
1. Screaming as loud as possible into her ears would probably cause the eardrums to burst. Could cause death from shock however.
2.If a medicine cat burst her eardrums with a stick it would deafen her. Though this could also lead to complications, again possible infections though less so then ripping her ears off.
@@Parasolhyena so there is no solution without a chance of death. Got it
@@beanboxd5526 Glue her ears shut with Honey/MouseBile mixture
*_BOOM_*
@@TheZincMaster-on1fy 20/10 idea
Lionblaze: oh hello- * accidentally touches*
Literally anyone: *OUCH WHY*
hello sleepe! didn't expect to see you here!
Jayfeather: ah shit. Here we go again
Dovewing: WHY YOU SCREAMING?!?!
@@markv6724
Me :You why are you screaming?
LeafPool: *Screws up*
StarClan: So you have chosen... death
Starclan a few moons later when their are too many cats:I think we have messed up.
@@ivycrosswarriors3901 other starclan cat: nah you did mess up :D
Star clan is Shit
I know this map is dark and scary
But the little *boop* Brightheart give Jaypaw/feather
I live for it.
Watching the parts for this map gave me nightmares and vivid hallucinations
*waits for full map*
Same tho
i like to imagine they all still go to starclan when they died since everything that happened was starclans fault. like seein dead dove n jay hurt but imagine them waking up in starclan finally free from their curses..
For Dove and Jay, I can see them going to StarClan. In the dying's eyes, they're aren't really in the wrong. Dove goes insane because everything's too loud, and Jay to all them seemed to be born out of it at the first place.
Lion, on the other hand, I don't think he would. I see them thinking that all he did, he purposefully did. That they would think that he went insane on his own accord, especially with how brutal the deaths are.
Nah, starclan will send anyone to darkforest. They don't care.
Lionblaze roams the decimated forest that was once Thundercats territory, soon he becomes a legend, killing anything that goes beyond the borders. What stops him from leaving? No one knows, but judt in case, every half moon live prey is set free into his forest to keep him pacified.
Never go into the Lions den.
Starclan definitely wouldn’t let them in-they intentionally caused this to happen, so clearly they aren’t and about it. They saw it coming and did it anyway; for whatever reason, they wanted this.
I think they’d send him to dark forest because the one reason Starclan sends anyone to dark forest
“He killed innocent cats”
I feel the most intense sense of dread and sorrow from how jayfeather lives his life here. It's seemingly constant pain and agony up until he curses starclan the final time. Lionblaze will not stop killing. His pain is endless. Starved and alone with a dead longtail. There is no help for him. It almost makes me forget that his actual "curse" was his blindness.
You know what I find odd? In the very end, where lionblaze is approaching the camera. He doesn't look angry or aggressive, there's no visible blood, he's not even baring his teeth or claws. This isn't him about to go in for another kill. It looks more like he's curious, either about the camera or whoever's behind it. I wonder what he sees there
That's...actually pretty eerie, when you think about it.
Maybe it's Holly leaf also I looked closer and it looks like he's tinted permanently with blood.
Also, I think that Lionblaze is grieving for Jayfeather, because the ears and general body shape do look similar.
With his bite strength, everything Lionblaze eats must turn into soUp
oof
YUm
Hey it’s my favorite CZcamsr uwu
@@raventail21 you flatter me~
@@LmaoMeowz good
3:52
During this part when it shows the cats in Starclan there's who I'm guessing Bluestar and Yellowfang. If I'm correct Yellowfang seems infuriated pointing at all the dead cats who are filing into Starclan. I believe Bluestar was the one who gave out the curse, having a look of guilt as Yellowfang points to the recently killed cats.
So I'm seeing a lot of people coming up with their own endings or versions for this AU, and I have my own.
Leaf, Holly and Squirrel escape to the moon pool, or moon stone, perhaps with the help of Rock or Midnight, and visit Star Clan. They tear them to shreds (Figuratively) furious that Starclan would basically destroy the clans just because Leafpool broke an already unfair rule, that other cats before her have broken. Many other cats would be mad at what Starclan did, mostly all the cats who died and some others, I imagined Goosefeather would be outraged at this, and most likely Dove and Jay when they die. This would basically cause infighting, and the cats apposing Starclan would abandon them to the threat of the Dark Forest, while also trying to help Lionblaze, either by guiding him to finish the prophecy to get rid of his power, or just kill him to end his suffering. Even if he killed a LOT of cats, I don't think he deserves to go to the Dark Forest.
That's kinda all I got at the moment, but y'all can play with the idea if you like it. ^^
I think that’s a pretty logical aftermath of the whole thing. The clans forgave Starclan for a lot of things but this *has* to be the last straw.
warriors Fandom back then: "Firestar doesn't like waffles :("
Warriors Fandom now:
the MAP turned out great tho and I like the concept. gave me some chills :3
Maybe it's because the fandom grew up?
if only we knew
Staaaaaahhhhhp!
I’m surrounded by idiots!
@@SharkyPopTart FIRE STAR DOESNT LIKE COOKIES
@@kitsuneWC I found a carrot!
Lionblaze is like "I'm sorry it's time to say goodbye to your organs"
"Your free trial of being alive has ended."
“You have lost existence privileges”
"sorry chief, you've lost your Cornea privilege"
"Hippty hoppty your throat is now my property"
These replies are perfect XD
Me: I'm a brave boy
* sees Lionblaze perk up at the end and turns around to look at me *
Me: *NOT BRAVE ENOUGH BOY FOR THIS-*
HONESTLY MY REACTION DSKJFSKJDF
AS SOON AS I SAW LIONBLAZE IN THE END CLIP I IMMEDIATELY CLICKED AWAY
welp, time to drown in cartoon shows for a while :)
Methia Canvas I was waiting for a jump scare to happen, and when I saw Lionblaze at the end I immediately started turning my volume down and pushed my phone away a bit.
@@candlestixsmixedwithtrixs I did something similar because I thought it was a jump scare too lol
@@candlestixsmixedwithtrixs oh my god tbh I feel bad for you :’)
I was fortunate to be on PC but watching this MAP ALONE in the living room where the PC is made me turn my back to see if anything was there.
A lot of times I normally get a sensed feeling if something is watching me. Things like this are normal for kids and minors but get this-
*im a young a d u l t wheeze*
"I'm not afraid anymore! You hear me? I'm not afraid anymore!"
*Twists head around to look at*
"*...AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA*"
Lionblaze, who was actually meant to SAVE the clans, goes to live on the borders of Starclan and Dark Forest. Because of this, he 'lives' in anger for many, many years as the few living cats left told stories of him to their kits, and those kits told the stories to their kits and so on. Jayfeather and Dovewing both fade away in peace after many quiet moons. Dovewing was reincarnated into a rogue kit who was deaf. (im proud of my theory lmao)
Plot twist: DoveWing, now simply reincarnated as a kit named FeatherWing, singlehandedly restores the clans BY A THREAD and accidentally becomes the new FireStar. She even has kittens with someone named HollowDream (one of which just so HAPPENS to be the reincarnation of JayFeather). Aaaand yeah happy ending.
The fact the colors become duller as the map progresses makes it even creepier.
That ending scared the crap out of me I can’t I’m terrible with horror
If it makes you uncomfortable, then don’t make yourself watch it please! Mental health is much more important, okay?
@@RAWBIN no it’s okay it didn’t make me too uncomfortable, I was being a bit overdramatic plus it was like pretty late when I watched this 😂 but thank you for being nice and promoting the importance of mental health! 💛
dude i didnt even watch it- i saw lion turn around and i immediatly ripped my headphones out and closed my eyes-
@@theremycrocks6861 I made the *happy* mistake of watching this at midnight. I am now too scared to come out from under my blanket. help.
When I saw lion come up to me I’m just like: *bonjour you little b-*
A+ for a map that actually makes me feel uncomfortable with everything! This was such a disturbing map and I absolutely love it! The credits bit was one of my favorites, seeing the results of everything was so great!
I like to think that Fallen Leaves, after realizing everyone but Squirrel, Leaf, and Holly are dead realizes that the three living cats are starting to starve so he leaves and appears before Lionblaze on top of some thin ice. Lionblaze in his frenzy goes to kill him but the ice breaks and he drowns. The three living cats then go to either SkyClan or the tribe and live there.
I just noticed at 1:37,when Lionblaze squishes the pray,the blood that splatter on Hollyleaf's chest makes an crooked shaped star. That was genius
I have my own idea of what happens after this MAP. So here it goes:
Firestar is forced to kill all of the three, and has to kill Lionblaze twice. The reason being that even their spirits are not given peace away from their powers. After he kills Dovewing, Jayfeather, and Lionblaze, he himself goes insane (he can't mentally take having to kill his own kin to the point of them disappearing). Anyone who is in the Dark Forest, trainee or otherwise is killed. He has a crazed belief he is helping, and may even kill a Star Clan cat that may have ended up in there by accident. Eventually Star Clan is forced to as a group overpower him and kill him all the times necessary.
Meanwhile, Squirrelflight, Leafpool, and Hollyleaf repair the shattered pieces of the clans. They all become one clan, and reject the help of Star Clan, seeing them as nothing but a curse. As Star Clan becomes a thing of the past due to these events, Firestar is the last one to have the connection that is alive until Star Clan kills him all those times he has to be. Squirrelflight becomes Squirrelstar, and a new era of Star Clan being turned back on begins.
If this idea is ever used please credit me as Gryffbirb, thanks.
I’m counting this as cannon, since I adore a horror story with a happy ending. Also, this makes squirrelstar cannon
@@virginasol3031 Yeah, its rather bittersweet in my opinion, sure there is peace again, but the cost was horrible.
I made an in theory MAP that is a sloppy but basic run down of how it would go down. If you want to see it go here: docs.google.com/document/d/19yxBRGl5UXEbplWT9maexuZRpbL9sJZqCR6RtVkyrkM/edit?usp=sharing
I will of course only truly do this with the blessings of Razz and sweetfrost.
If StarClan is gonna have to kill Firestar that much, Spottedleaf is going to *DIE*
Can we just
Stop the cycle of death?
Not even the worst of Shakespearian tragedies had this much death and bloody insanity in it.
Doesn't anyone else think that it's a bit weird that no one ever considers an option where an inherently good character wouldn't really go on a killing spree after killing someone they loved out of necessity ' because madness'.
They'd more likely kill themselves straight away or turn incredibly depressed and isolated, punishing themselves for what they've done.
Yet I haven't seen people using that trope in
Well
Ever.
They just all go 'insane' in a way that can't be diagnosed psychologically and turn into mass murderers
I think a morally tormented character rather than an edgy murderer would be a much deeper and enjoyable character to read about, relate to and understand.
The flashes of how they all ended up during the credits literally gave me chills this has to be one of may fav maps! Good job everyone
Jayfeather- *screams while dying*
Longtail- I pretend to not hear that
I’m pretty sure Longtail is d e a d FJEJDHDH
How Doves’ death plays out in my mind:
Dovewing sat in the corner of camp with her head down. She wanted it to stop. More than anything. It was all she heard, she could hardly hear her own thoughts over the drowning noises of every cat she was around. Their wails and cries, their laughs and giggles. She covered her paws with her ears and felt her claws sink into her own flesh. She strained and pulled downwards, tugging and tugging until there was a silent *rippp. All she could hear was blood gushing from the wounds, but the noises wouldn’t stop. She was exhausted, she was in pain. For something that wasn’t her fault, she was suffering. She wanted it to stop... to stop to stop to stop to stop tO STOP TO STOP TO STOP TO STOP TO STOP TO STOP TO STOP TO STOP TO STOP TO* it stopped. There was silence... at last. Dovewing thought “Yes... *YES!* At long, long last... it’s over! I can- I can sleep at night again, I can-“ she paused when she looked down. She was standing in her own bloody carcass, other cats gathering around her body, sheer looks of horror in their eyes. Blood still gushed from where her ears were, or had been. Dovewing was shocked, but relieved. After all these moons she was... finally... *at peace.*
Good, but does this happen before Lionblaze murdered everyone? If not, then who's left to gather around the body? Or, are the watchers spirit cats?
That is because the ears are connected to the brain.
The characters 'powers' (curses)
Lionblaze: hurts everyone he touches
Dovewing: Has sensitive hearing, and rips her ears off from pain
Jayfeather: Feels everyone's pain
The one I would relate to is Jayfeather, except I wouldn't feel *everyone's* pain. I usually see someone get hurt, and I feel it.
Dovewing doesn't only have "sensitive" hearing in this AU, she can literally hear someone's heart pumping from a decent amount of distance away from them. It's verY BADDD
Thank you
Jayfeather feels everything. He feels another cat's emotion, he hears the other's thoughts. He went insane because he doesn't know what thoughts are his.
Lionblaze is on steroids
Holy-
Girl you have something called mirror knee syndrome if you actually, PSYHICALLY feel their pain.
@@katboy3420 not only could he hear their thoughts, he could feel their pain - physical and emotional, so he felt everything from when the two went on a killing spree
I created an au for this au because i felt bad
Dovewing eventually went deaf and is still useful around the clan, helping out
Lionblaze left Thunderclan to live as a loner and died, and he is now happy in starclan
Jayfeather is being helped by medicine cats and is slowly learning to control his feelings and emotions
Im sorry i had to ;-;
it’s what they deserve ;w; we can dream...
It’s okay :)
now THAT'S my kinda stuff. sad and angsty and violent but damn if I don't love a happy ending
Wait why would lionblaze go to Starclan-
@@saltedegg5207 probably felt guilty for once
I honestly think that lionblaze’s curse was the worst. I mean, hurting everyone you touch? My god that would be insane. I think the scene with him breaking heatherpaw’s neck was the most disturbing, and the part where he squashes the mouse as well. Not to mention how creepy he looks with the shadowed head and white dots for eyes, the designs were so well thought out!!
3:52
“CHOWDER, LOOK WHAT YOU’VE DONE! NOW THE ANIMATORS HAVE TO DRAW ALL THESE DEAD CATS!”
(Ik it’s fire but just go with it)
*It’s alright* everyone..
*it will let us in soon enough*
HIYA WIFY ??
@@lemonmoth. XD
@@lemonmoth. Same tbh i always yell HI at them or something
Ah yes
JayCry, LionStrike and DoveHoot be busting into the Notifs
I call this version of Jayfeather, Mockingjay, Lionblaze is Beastblaze LMAO, and Dovewing I never really had a name for but I call her Tell-Tale-Dove
@@kaileyallen7563 ooo interesting
Nice! I head cannon it's JayScream, LionRoar and DoveCry, cause they are all like in the same theme. I love everyone's they are so cool!
I've changed DoveHoot to DoveSilence for anyone who's gonna be coming later
@@channelmoved6918 oh i like those!
Twoleg just looks outside to see Lionblaze
“MA THERES A FUCKING WEIRD CAT OUTSIDE”
I DONT WANT IT STARTN A FIGHT WITH LUCY
Okay, i wanna say that this is the creepiest and the cruellest warriors map that i've ever seen...this... is...frighteningly AWESOME
Ivypool in the books : My life is hard I never get attention!
Dovewing in this Au : Hold my beer and my disembodied ears.
YES!!!
But Lionblaze killed her so she wouldnt be able to hold dovewings beer and disembodied ears lol
@@AlfalfaSoulTied you gotta point
@@AlfalfaSoulTied I said Ivypool like in the books not in the Au in the Au Lionblaze killed Ivypool in the books he Didn't
I feel like Ivypool would've suffered more than in the canon story here,, having her sister ignore her and snap at her everytime she even tries to talk to her,, seems pretty sad to me U_U ( nothing compared to dovewing's pain in this au though )
edit: then the fact she died without having a happy ending to that,,,,
Nobody:
Lionblaze at the end: *snarl*
me: bless you
LionBlaze: thank you |)
Dove: *Covers ears* STOP SNEEZING
Lmao
You guys' conversation makes me think of that spiderman pointing at spiderman meme, but instead they're all pointing at each other telling them to stop putting eachother in pain.
this is the scariest map i’ve ever watched in my entire life. the horror aspect was pulled off perfectly and i got CHILLS when i watched this for the first time. great job to all the animators in this incredible map !!
POV:
You walk through the forest and see a Lionblaze.
Next thing you know you're somewhere else.
Y ou realize your ghost leg is broken. Thank goodness that seems to be the worst of it. But why can't you see out of your right eye???
Me after spotting Lionblaze and blinking, finding myself among other mangled cats in a bright area, before realising my tail is missing, my front leg is broken almost complete off and my head is in an odd position: *Uh..... Da FAQ is wrong with you lot? Walk in the woods and I look away for a second, what happened?*
ah, my neck is missing, good thing my head can magically float
*appears in the backrooms missing a limb and half my face*
“Ah sh-t, here we go agian”
As a cat?
the end gave me chills, but the thing that did it most was how skinny jayfeather looked, otherwise this is just in time for spooktober
everyone did great
edit: so i watched til the end of the video instead of the map and now im scared yay
I love the concept of their powers being curses and driving them to insanity. I absolutely love it all. Currently drawing jayfeather nearing his death of starvation
This has to be one of the most creative Warriors MAPS ever made. As a massive horror fan, I enjoyed every second of it. We need more Warriors horror themed projects in the future. Great job to all the participants in this MAP!
Starclan: We didn’t mean for those three to suffer this much!!
Me: *inhales* GOOSEFEATHER.
Starclan: Oh, but still-
Me: And Yellowfang after having kits.
Starclan: ...your point?
Me: *points to the op three, then at brokenstar in the dark forest*
Starclan: Oh!
Starclan: OH.
Mistystar will die before StarClan will realize their mistakes
Oh StarClan, so wise and yet so stupid
I still don't get it.
@@oliviab.9194 me neither lol
@@LmaoMeowz so yellow fang loved ragged but 2 of 3 kits died, third becomes brokenstar, yellow fang had to kill him in the end.
goose feather saw every prophecy and things that would happen in the future, which is why he slowly went insane.
idk who op trio is, but i think it could be either the po3 beans or like- blue star and her 2 surviving kits ( ik storm is dead but still), or some other 3, maybe it would be grey silver and storm/feather/millie? idk, but they must’ve went through something bad via starclan to get that way.
edit is me fixin spelling
Even the final fates of the three are messed up: Jay starves, Dove claws her own ears off, and Lion is presumably the only one left in thunderclan- JESUS AAAAJSVEHJSVSBSS
Well Squilf, Leafpool, and Hollyleaf are shown alive.
Leafpool: *sins*
Starclan: *curses her kits and dovekit*
The cursed three: *literally bring the apocalypse*
Cats: *show up in starclan with horrific injuries*
Starclan:ah shit-
I could write an entire essay about how much I love this even though it terrifies me. The less experienced animators/artists honestly really shine in this because of how horror works. Things that move in unnatural ways is a very common way to show off horror. I come back to this even though it’s probably one of the scariest things I’ve seen in years.
Moral of the story: hollyleaf was the luckiest sibling
Which is saying something
Edit: don't wanna be one of those ppl, but holy fuck didn't expect this many likes
yes
Yup
Still pretty horrifying to see your brothers becoming either a barbaric, merciless killer or entirely lost in the minds of others.
WHEEZE-
Yes 100%
Is....is Lionblaze eating Jayfeather at the end
Nah, I think he's mourning him. Even though they are cursed, they are brothers.
KJNJBKAFJKBF NO-
it’s just a random cat
(I’m cackling now tho because for some reason I find this comment hilarious i-)
@@RAWBIN puts me up with a theory
if it’s a random cat that means it might not have been from Lionblaze’s clan
since Starclan originally got angry because Leafpool liked a cat from a different clan which caused a lot of mess, the cat could have been a cat from a different clan because Lionblaze was fed up with the fact that so much was caused by a clan crossover
brain 100
@@RAWBIN I thought he was eating another cat
*Cannibalism*
me: **reads this comment**
Also me: *BISH DISGUSTING*
edit: i hope to god not
In my opinion, the Three's endings/deaths are all n' all very tragic, but especially if you take these facts into account;
Dovewing really wanted to help Lionblaze murder every cat in the Clan Territories, but I bet she didn't take into account that the final screams and just cats fighting are VERY loud sounds! If you think about it, the excruciating sounds of everyone dying in one hit and stuff is most likely what would've driven to ripping her own ears off!
Jayfeather spent his WHOLE LIFE never being able to separate and tell the difference between his own thoughts/feelings and everyone else's. But when you stop and think about it, after Mousefur died and him and Longtail starved to death, when Longtail died, and Jayfeather was basically waiting for death, that would be the one moment in basically his ENTIRE life that he'd be able to have his own thoughts... I'm sure they were not pleasant...
And Lionblaze, who's murdered every cat in the area, most likely ended up starving to death on account of not really being able to hunt. But after there was no other thing to kill, I'm sure he would've been able to calm down in his ending days. I'm sure he would've regretted everything. And probably damn Starclan for giving him that curse in the first place.
I kind of like to imagine the very end scene being through the POV of Hollyleaf, who has snuck out of the tunnels to hunt for her, Squirrel, and Leaf. She goes to check out the Thunderclan camp, out of like, a morbid curiosity. And she sees in the middle of camp; Lionblaze crouched over a dead Jayfeather, most likely mourning his brother, and, as stated above, is probably calmed down.
Holly would probably gasp, most likely thinking that Lion had killed him outright. Lionblaze hears her and turns around. And, well... one could only wonder whether or not that urge to murder surged back up or not...
That sounds really cool. I do wonder what would happen is Hollyleaf ran into a calmed down Beastblaze. Would he maybe blame her for running away instead of preventing her brother's death? Or maybe he would completely break down upon seeing her.
I believe Lionblaze eventually went on a genocide all over the world. He maybe killed Midnight and took her powers
@@lumeanoastra1252 Breaking News: Super cat causes mass extinction by itself. Scientists baffled.
1:38 Just realized the star shaped blood splatter on Hollyleaf’s chest, I luv it
I noticed it too, it's damn deep.
Ok im going to guess from what I'm seeing here
Liomblaze: instead of having the ability to never get hurt in a fight he instead hurts every cat he touches meaning he most likely can't touch ANY cat so it drives him insane and he turns into a mass murder from the insanity
Jayfeather: instead of being able to walk in others dreams and read peoples mind he I cursed with intense amount of stress as he's just constantly stress and it drives him crazy and at the end he dies from it as his stress probably made him enable to eat or all of thunderclan died and he can't hunt so he just starved to death
Dovewing:She still has her ordinary powers but instead of it helping all the clans it overwhelms her too much and she couldn't handle it so at the end she tears her ears off
Honestly that's just what I think idk
They all have their ordinary powers, just to the extreme. Jayfeather has always been able to feel other's emotions, not just read minds. Now, he is so overwhelmed by those emotions he can't even tell whether what he's feeling is HIM or someone else, and it drives him to insanity. Lionblaze's inability to get hurt and extreme strength are also dialed up to the max. He can't live a normal life and accidentally kills and hurts others at first, but loses his mind and goes on a rampage.
Maybe instead of JayFeather being able to walk in other dreams he walks in the deepest of nightmares and it all makes him hallucinate and he goes insane and at the end dies of starvation because he won’t eat.
?Bunny DrawZ¿ He constantly feels the emotions and thoughts of everyone around him and is unsure whether or not what he feels and thinks is him or others. This eventually drives him insane because he is comstantly flying from angry to joyful to upset.
@@fabplays6559 ohhhh
and i think Jayfeather can feel others pain like when that kit broke his paw Jaykit or paw idk could feel it aswell
this is. absolutely bloody terrifying. like, i LOVE horror and i feel physically sick. i almost had to stop watching, it was that deeply horrifying and unsettling. it’s incredible. every single person did such a good job - each part brings a new type of horror, and to see these characters we love be so utterly ruined genuinely rattled me, like i still feel nauseous and so... just, upset. the whole atmosphere, the gore, the expressions - i need to lie down. this is gonna stick with me for a long time and i need to watch some happy things to cleanse myself LMAO. but all of this is meant as the absolute biggest compliment, it’s AMAZING 💛💛💛
I’m glad you liked it, but please don’t make yourself watch anything if it makes you feel bad! Your mental health is just *so* much more important, love :(
Why did I read this in a British accent
I just thought of something. Does Dovewing help Lionblaze because he proposes killing everyone who's made a sound, OR maybe she agrees to help because he is quiet. I can only imagine when Lionblaze presents this idea, he's talking so quietly that only Dovewing can hear him, and he's practically lipsyncing while breathing :')
Just something I thought of :3
Leafpool: *gives birth*
Star clan: "How delightful."😈
2:33 I have a theory for this one! So you know how DoveWing really doesn’t have anymore friends cause she’s constantly angry about how “loud” their being? I think LionBlaze made a deal with her that he would kill the clan so she didn’t have to deal with the pain of their loud voices if she helped him.
Actually another thing! A few seconds after this scene you see DoveWing smiling under the moon and then LionBlaze killing IvyPool, maybe DoveWing agreed with LionBlaze to kill IvyPool cause she was always too loud!
"It's alright"
This MAP: no❤
It is in fact not alright
So what I take away from this (absolutely gorgeous) MAP is that...
Each other the three were given their powers yet it became a curse to them
Lionblaze was unable to control his strength nor his primal killing instinct. He was unable to die from other things and therefore went to the Dark Forest where he still was unable to control himself, leaving him in eternal insanity. To me, his 'death' after everyone else died was the worst. Imagine being stuck in insanity, unable to stop yourself from murdering others, despite your best efforts not to.
Hollyleaf was not affected by the powers because she was not part of the main three however seeing her siblings go through this was super hard on her. She died from entering the caves, ultimately killing herself
Dovewing had become overthrown by her hearing and could hear everything, shattering her eardrums but yet not causing her deafness. What happened to her was either, Lionblaze killed her, or she tore her own ears off, completely insane from the over rush of hearing all she did. Edit: I just rewatched this and realized, she did team up with Lionblaze after being so sick of all the noise
Jayfeather is kind of like Yellowfang, in which he can feel all the pain of those around him, physical and emotional, and therefore changes accordingly. He died from basically an overdosage of other cats' deaths. To me, his life up until he died was the worst. Feeling all other cats' pains, internal and external, had to be rough. The pain of birth, broken bones, relationships ruined, had to have been awful. And what did not help was Lionblaze. Him killing and injuring many had made Jayfeather feel death at least 50 times before finally perishing.
That was just my take without reading the actual AU, i will be sure to do that to see if I am correct!
Wait.. so to find out what hurts more; child birth or getting repeatedly punched in the ‘area’, we just have to ask Jayfeather!
Jay just had to be the most pain tolerant man on the planet to not die sooner 😭
2:11 is probably the part I like the most, other then the "Lionblaze switching" part, as they're both very well done, as they set in the scene!
Though I will say, I do love the great combination of Murder scenes towards the end, all of them did very well :>
And that outro is just ✋😔👌
Omfg Jay feather felt all the pain from literally everyone he felt himself die over and over and over. The first pain was when lionblaze broke the kits paw 0:53
He probably even felt the death of the prey. It wasn't just the emotions.
*DA M N*
HE FELT DOVEWINGS EARS, aND EVERYONE LIONBLAZE BRUTALLY MURDERED oH nO
@@cucumberhoney6243 Y E P
**demonic screeching**
and the first time lionblaze hurt someone was when he was a kit and touched hollyleaf!
0:48 hollyleaf cried when he touched her
@@geobershad5375 I know. I know that already but I don't wanna edit my comment a second time. Mistakes are made lol
At the end with yellowfang whit bluestar like:
Look what we did! >:(
*LOOK AT IT*
YOU’RE NOT LOOKING HARD ENOUGH!!!
DO YOU SEE THIS MESS?!
Tbh I assume eventually, Lionblaze would starve to death. Especially if his strength built to the point prey would turn to mush beneath his paws.
StarClan would definitely have to own up to their mistakes and let him in too, and I just imagine the Dark Forest is either having a field day with this or is absolutely horrified.
the dark forest one both their having a field day but absolutely horrified and for starclan they better accept him to starclan because he didn't wish to be born like this and neither did the other two
I'm split 50/50 on whether they'd be horrified or amused. Tigerstar would love to see the clans die horribly, but at the same time, he's denied his revenge by *Starclan* of all groups.
EDIT: There's also, you know, the fact that there's a monster that tore through the clans like a chainsaw on the loose, one that they can't beat conventionally if they come face to face and he decides to fight them.
"My only wish is that Goosefeather had stood up and been like, 'Now you know. Now you know what it's like to live in my brain'."
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Ah yes watching this map that legitimately spooks me at 11:30, what a great idea
Edit: it was a horrible idea
well hello northflower!