How to Write the Character Arc

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  • čas přidán 15. 05. 2024
  • The Four Components of the Arc
    1. The Motivation: This is the character's deepest desire (commonly for: love, power, safety, belonging, etc.)
    2. The Goal: This is a tangible external objective. This is the thing the character wants, the thing their motivation drives them to strive for.
    3. The Belief: This is something the character believes about themselves, other people, or the world. This belief can be true or false, it can be positive or negative, depending on the type of arc.
    4. The Lesson: This is an alternative perspective that contradicts the belief. The character may or may not accept this lesson in the end, and the lesson may be positive or negative depending on the type of arc.
    The Four Types of Arcs
    1. The Positive Arc: In this arc type, the belief the character starts with is negative and the lesson they're presented with is positive and they accept that lesson. The character grows and becomes a better person. The ending is positive. This is by far the most common type of arc.
    2. The Negative Arc: In this arc type, the belief the character starts with is positive and the lesson they're presented with is negative and they accept that lesson. The character become a worse person. The ending is negative.
    3. The Flat Arc (light version): In this arc type, the belief the character starts with is positive, the lesson is negative, and they stick with their positive belief. The character stays a good person. The ending is positive.
    4. The Flat Arc (dark version): In this arc type, the belief the character starts with is negative, the lesson is positive, and they stick with their negative belief. The character stays a bad or flawed person. The ending is negative.
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  • @ZachScottB
    @ZachScottB Před 15 dny +4

    "The lesson will always be the opposite of the belief."
    "The belief should cause problems in the story."
    I needed these explanations.

  • @luiza9253
    @luiza9253 Před 6 měsíci +81

    I saw the notification, did a little dance and immediately started watching it ✨

    • @EllenBrock
      @EllenBrock  Před 6 měsíci +8

      I hope you find it helpful!

    • @Oli_Mili
      @Oli_Mili Před 6 měsíci +4

      same!! :)

    • @lyingcat9022
      @lyingcat9022 Před 2 měsíci

      Suck up…
      Haha jk ;)

    • @luisaah5707
      @luisaah5707 Před měsícem

      I need to do the same! I love these videos sooo much. I rewatched the writer types at least 4 times.

  • @ichbifeuertrunk
    @ichbifeuertrunk Před 6 měsíci +49

    Not only are these analysis useful, they're structured in such an elegant way that they have a beauty in themselves.

  • @estressediario8508
    @estressediario8508 Před 6 měsíci +61

    I usually dont interact much, but holy moly if your videos aren't some of the best writing advice i've ever seen (even including some big names like sanderson)

    • @EllenBrock
      @EllenBrock  Před 6 měsíci +15

      Wow, thank you! That means a lot!

  • @Ashley.Berensen
    @Ashley.Berensen Před 6 měsíci +62

    I’ve been doing a lot of writing research to help improve my story and I hear a lot of the same terms and ideas thrown around and I always THINK I understand, until I watch your videos. They always clarify the haziness and get right to the heart of things. I’m so grateful you take the time to make these videos despite not feeling well. ❤

    • @EllenBrock
      @EllenBrock  Před 6 měsíci +24

      I'm so glad these videos help! It took me a long time to understand these things. It doesn't come naturally to me, and so I've tried really hard to explain things in a way that would have made sense to me back when I was watching/reading everything and still struggling to get it.

  • @Thessalin
    @Thessalin Před 6 měsíci +20

    Us doing NaNoWriMo: Augh! Everything stinks! This is awful. Won't someone please help?!
    Ellen: I come now in your darkest hour of need!

    • @EllenBrock
      @EllenBrock  Před 6 měsíci +4

      Ha ha! NaNoWriMo is so hard. Good luck! I hope this helps, even if only a little!

  • @bangboom123
    @bangboom123 Před 5 měsíci +8

    Had to pause the video when I heard your definition for character motivation. "A feeling that the character wants to experience". It's so good!

  • @joesjoeys
    @joesjoeys Před 6 měsíci +9

    I was just thinking yesterday that I hope theres a new Ellen Brock video soon, and here we are!

  • @DefektiveEnvy
    @DefektiveEnvy Před 6 měsíci +13

    I appreciate you clarifying the difference between motivation and goal

  • @annahsearle2269
    @annahsearle2269 Před 6 měsíci +50

    I love every single one of your videos! You are so thorough and technical. It helps so much!

  • @probablynot6995
    @probablynot6995 Před 6 měsíci +16

    your explanation of the motivation is really good, clarifies it and made it click in a way other sources didnt

  • @straps-of-skin
    @straps-of-skin Před 6 měsíci +12

    This is exactly the kind of content ive been looking for. Would love a series like your plot structure series, breaking down each kind of character arc.

  • @GreyscaleGod
    @GreyscaleGod Před 3 měsíci +2

    I like the idea of the MC's initial belief (in a positive arc) being a maladaptive way of preventing the opposite of the motivation; i.e., Shrek's motivation is acceptance, so he has a maladaptive belief (it's better to be alone because people will reject you otherwise) to avoid rejection.

  • @booklanerecommendations
    @booklanerecommendations Před 6 měsíci +16

    Thank you so much! As a mostly character-driven writer, I do struggle with goals a lot and this video helped me realize I don't need a single 'main' goal since the goal can change throughout the story. And defining the goal as the way to get the core feeling the MC wants to have makes it easier for me to distinguish the goals and how they can move the story forward. I've already identified several goals in my current story and how they serve as the MC's attempts to get this feeling (in Bailey's case, love), and I'm hoping I can raise the stakes of the chapter I'm currently writing by connecting his current goal more directly to his motivation.

    • @EllenBrock
      @EllenBrock  Před 6 měsíci +1

      I'm so glad this video helped you with figuring out the goals! Good luck with your novel!

    • @booklanerecommendations
      @booklanerecommendations Před 6 měsíci

      @@EllenBrock Thank you!

  • @lexiderbidge4675
    @lexiderbidge4675 Před 6 měsíci +7

    I am so grateful for your videos! They really hadn't helped increase my skill and have encouraged me to write my books. Thank you Ellen! Thank you for providing this information for free to every inspiring author.

  • @mageprometheus
    @mageprometheus Před 6 měsíci +4

    This truly brought home the relationships between these concepts. The notes in my second brain (Obsidian) that I take from your videos are some of the best I have. 💜

  • @ZachScottB
    @ZachScottB Před 15 dny

    It took me months of google research and CZcams watching to find this information.
    Except, you present this info in such a nicely compacted, condensed way.
    My 12 pages of feral info... vs your paragraph of pure gold.
    TY ❤

  • @Al-rn5qy
    @Al-rn5qy Před 6 měsíci +8

    Great video Ellen! Character arcs were the very thing I struggle with in writing my story, so I'm so glad you addressed this topic in this way. Please keep making awesome content 👍

  • @littlemeow6729
    @littlemeow6729 Před 6 měsíci +7

    Wow! Really appreciate your explanation.. I was working on my MC to make him realistic and believable..and i was confused to find his true motivation. Thanks for great explanation 🥰💗✨

  • @Chickentopramen123
    @Chickentopramen123 Před 6 měsíci +10

    Hi Ellen! Great information as always! I really like those summaries at the end as any video can be a lot of information and I think this helps me with implementing your advice for the next time I write. Thanks again for another articulate and well laid out lesson!

    • @EllenBrock
      @EllenBrock  Před 6 měsíci

      You are so welcome! I'm glad you liked the summary at the end!

  • @mikechick651
    @mikechick651 Před 13 dny

    even as a already published author your videos help out tremendously. Keep up the good work

  • @tharding2870
    @tharding2870 Před 6 měsíci +5

    Great explanation. Thank you! (Hope you feel better soon 🙂)

  • @Lorna-JWB
    @Lorna-JWB Před 6 měsíci

    Just what I needed!

  • @intothebellyofthesnail6004
    @intothebellyofthesnail6004 Před 6 měsíci

    This is brilliant- thanks so much!

  • @PaulaScardamalia
    @PaulaScardamalia Před 6 měsíci

    Perfect timing, Ellen. Thank you for the clear distinctions and tips.

  • @anngrace5050
    @anngrace5050 Před 6 měsíci

    Thank you for this. Awesome video!

  • @griannaashwood6394
    @griannaashwood6394 Před 3 měsíci

    Great breakdown and explanation. Well done!

  • @tovesama8953
    @tovesama8953 Před 6 měsíci

    This was so, so useful. Thank you :)

  • @fossetteful
    @fossetteful Před 5 měsíci

    this is a phenomenal channel!

  • @totadol
    @totadol Před 4 měsíci

    So much gems in this video 🙏🏼

  • @KelvinCain
    @KelvinCain Před 4 měsíci

    This is Awesome!!! Thank You!!

  • @nodonn99999
    @nodonn99999 Před 6 měsíci

    Another precious gift of knowledge from Ellen. Bless you.

  • @marissaland3910
    @marissaland3910 Před měsícem

    Amazing content! Thanks!

  • @trillgutterbug9378
    @trillgutterbug9378 Před 4 měsíci

    This was incredibly helpful! Very concise, simple, and detailed.

  • @johnphares3358
    @johnphares3358 Před 2 měsíci

    Great break down on this subject. 👏

  • @sammyranyx6710
    @sammyranyx6710 Před 6 měsíci +5

    Thanks for this breakdown! Super informative as always

  • @ichbifeuertrunk
    @ichbifeuertrunk Před 6 měsíci +2

    Awesome! 👏👏👏

  • @HIMMBelljuvo
    @HIMMBelljuvo Před 3 měsíci

    This was extremely helpful. Thank you so much

  • @markt47
    @markt47 Před 2 měsíci

    This is a great video! Thank you so much!

  • @AnnCedeno
    @AnnCedeno Před 5 měsíci

    Best explanation I’ve heard so far.

  • @sonnygmony
    @sonnygmony Před 26 dny

    Great job.

  • @roberto987
    @roberto987 Před 6 měsíci

    Master is back 🤟🏼

  • @mightypensword
    @mightypensword Před 6 měsíci

    Love your videos. Thank you.

  • @hannahentz2968
    @hannahentz2968 Před měsícem

    This is the most helpful video on this topic I've seen.

  • @user-xo6iy4fr9q
    @user-xo6iy4fr9q Před 5 měsíci

    Thank you❤

  • @Buffal0K
    @Buffal0K Před 6 měsíci

    If i could like this video twice, I would! So precise, so useful

  • @diango73
    @diango73 Před 3 měsíci

    Thx for all the videos you make and made they helped me a lot! I also love your positive attitude. That sometimes helps me after a hard day at work!

  • @daddyjeans
    @daddyjeans Před 6 měsíci +1

    Your videos have been incredibly helpful in my writing journey. Thank you Ellen!

  • @scatteredperceptions890
    @scatteredperceptions890 Před 6 měsíci +1

    Thank you for your videos! You always explain things in a way that clicks for me and leaves me empowered for my own writing ❤

  • @Topcatyo.
    @Topcatyo. Před 5 měsíci

    Absolutely great video, a very solid explanation of some very important things worth considering when writing a story.

  • @sally3559
    @sally3559 Před měsícem

    I'm so glad I stumbled over your videos. They are great! Good examples and well explained❤

  • @mezlyndon662
    @mezlyndon662 Před 6 měsíci

    Such a great way to explain it, especially as to how each part ties together or counters the other parts. Really helpful way for me to think about it into the future. Thanks!

  • @brasdorgal
    @brasdorgal Před 3 měsíci

    Great video! I would love to hear more about character arc ❤

  • @hatezis
    @hatezis Před 20 dny

    great stuff, thank you

  • @HikariDorperfarms
    @HikariDorperfarms Před 5 měsíci

    It's been a very useful video. I really have learnt a lot❤

  • @anthonythorne8708
    @anthonythorne8708 Před 6 měsíci

    Well done Ellen! I'd read tons of story structure books but has always struggled to totally grasp this one. I'm just a few minutes into this video but it's already beginning to click. Good work and thank you.

  • @mel_9346
    @mel_9346 Před 5 měsíci

    Please, please, do the more character videos, I love how you explain everything.

  • @LoveSaidNo
    @LoveSaidNo Před 6 měsíci +1

    Another great video that sparked so much inspiration! You are able to phrase your explanations in a really clear way that opens my mind each time - I want to go back to my novel immediately. Your advices are always so precious. Thank you! ❤

  • @tayh.6235
    @tayh.6235 Před 6 měsíci +1

    This was brilliant! It literally helped me finish working out these elements for one of my main characters. Now I feel much more excited to write the next section of this first draft 😊

  • @rachelthompson9324
    @rachelthompson9324 Před 6 měsíci +1

    excellent presentation, thanks Ellen. You get down to the core things we all need to use in our work

  • @evanteuteberg651
    @evanteuteberg651 Před 6 měsíci

    This is really helpful, thanks! The Shrek example clarified things for me.

  • @mightandmercy
    @mightandmercy Před 6 měsíci

    Insightful video - concept well explained and actionable. thanks

  • @salamand3r__
    @salamand3r__ Před 6 měsíci

    Thank you so much for your content. The Shrek example is perfect ❤

  • @billharm6006
    @billharm6006 Před 5 měsíci

    Best advice on topic that I've run across. I don't say that casually. I've read whole books on the topic and came away with less.

  • @igamergirl14
    @igamergirl14 Před 5 měsíci

    That was very clear! As I've said many times before I feel like you are one of the few people I can listen to on writing and feel like I can more fully understand the writing process. It manages to be succinct and not feel like every other tip/guide out there. One thing that would be nice to see in the crafting video (and I know this might be too late to change with the lateness of this comment) but it would be interesting to go over several arcs from one crafted story. To me a lot of villian arcs would probably be flat, while the main protagonists often get the most extreme changes, so seeing how all of the arcs interact with one another in one story would be much more helpful than several from different stories.

  • @faithrendles2188
    @faithrendles2188 Před 6 měsíci

    This is fantastic! Sometimes so much of different language can be used to describe the writing process, it’s good to see it broken down like you do! Keep it up!!

  • @ceve
    @ceve Před 5 měsíci

    You explain things so clearly, thank you! I have three main characters who briefly share their journey and then become antagonists. I realized I could only easily assign motivation, goal, belief and lesson to one of them. I'll keep on brute forcing Y first drafts in hopes they begin to take a more recognizable form to the shape it for the second draft. At least I now know what to aim for.
    Also, the character I whose elements I could recognize has a flat arc dark version for book 1 and a positive arc for book 2 (the final one). I always thought she had a negative character arc but her belief was negative to begin with so that wasn't the case, so thanks for that as well.

  • @socman002
    @socman002 Před 5 měsíci

    This is the smartest writer, editor, assessor you will ever come across on CZcams.

  • @catsgrin618
    @catsgrin618 Před 4 měsíci

    A key insight, explained perfectly. This brings much needed focus to my storytelling. You are brilliant. Thank you!

  • @mariano7107
    @mariano7107 Před 6 měsíci +1

    Hi Ellen! Thanks so much for another excellent video. I’ve seen these concepts explained several times before, in other videos and craft books, but I think this is the first time the explanation makes so much sense to me. It’s not the first time that’s true with one of your videos! One thing I’d like to see, maybe in a follow up video, are some movie or book examples for the three less common arcs. Although I understand them conceptually, I’m having a hard time coming up with examples that illustrate them.

  • @annbe1l
    @annbe1l Před 6 měsíci +1

    I love your videos. They are straightforward, detailed, and really help me think about my stories and writing. I really needed to hear about this topic in particular. I think I finally figured out how to move into my story's climax.
    Thank you so much for this!
    As a side note: I'd love to see a video about how the character arc intersects with the darkest hour plot point.

  • @AriellaMc
    @AriellaMc Před 2 měsíci +1

    Ellen you give by far the best writing advice I've ever heard! The way you break down and explain the concepts is so simple and elegant, and actually makes me excited to write, rather than feeling overwhelmed and out of my league. Thank you thank you thank you!! Please never stop making videos

  • @jonathanisaiah_MusicN810
    @jonathanisaiah_MusicN810 Před 4 měsíci

    Hi Ellen, I discovered your videos on writing a couple days ago. I'm so glad I did! I've been doing research to improve my writing recently and I appreciate the way you explain different writing components. This video in particular continues to be a great help to me as I've referred to it for my manuscript. Thank you for these videos, I appreciate you and believe I'm becoming a stronger writer because of your willingness to share your expertise with us!

  • @godsonggm3186
    @godsonggm3186 Před 6 měsíci

    I was waiting for your new video. My writing these days has gone from bad to worse.

  • @winterrenes1249
    @winterrenes1249 Před 5 měsíci

    You are the best at explaining the ins and outs of story and character. I know I can trust your videos to be full of useful quality information. Thank you so much! I didn't even think about goal-oriented or motivation-oriented characters. It's a totally new concept to me. Wow! 😃🥰

  • @joonfanatic2140
    @joonfanatic2140 Před 6 měsíci +2

    I was just checking yesterday to see if you posted a new video and I missed the notification somehow and now there’s a new video yayyy!! ❤️

  • @livechangechallenge
    @livechangechallenge Před měsícem

    Hi Ellen, I've just found your channel and am so grateful for you! I'm embarking on writing my first novel and have been struggling to know where to start, how to plan etc. This has really helped me understand what questions I need to ask myself in order to write this story. Thank you!

  • @bharadwajdayala3439
    @bharadwajdayala3439 Před 5 měsíci

    Thanks a lot for the wonderful advice. Keep doing it.

    • @EllenBrock
      @EllenBrock  Před 3 měsíci

      Sorry I didn't see this sooner! Thank you so much for your support!

  • @Yomi-san
    @Yomi-san Před 5 měsíci +1

    Thank you, for this and all your other work here on youtube. My head is spinning with the mechanics of writing but through watching and rewatching, the pieces are slowly falling into place. After this video, I revisited my current story and created a simple arc overview which I can now write against. If my character veers off track, I simply use the overview as my guide to question which direction they would take next.

  • @Anilemable
    @Anilemable Před 6 měsíci +2

    Thank you!! That's beyond helpful! Love your videos!

  • @theboldbear1973
    @theboldbear1973 Před 5 měsíci

    Your videos have been the most helpful resource so far for me. This video addressed something which has been causing me to get stuck with my current story. I have a good idea of the plot, but nailing down the character arc needs more work. Looking forward to the video on how character arc works with plot.

  • @Oli_Mili
    @Oli_Mili Před 6 měsíci +1

    I love this! Thank you so much! It took me a while to realize what my character's goal was and this actually helped me figure it out :) and made me want to rewatch Shrek :)

  • @user-pt3bv3jl3v
    @user-pt3bv3jl3v Před 6 měsíci

    Thanks for your tips throughout the years!
    Idea I'd love to see for a next video:
    The benefits of using a typewriter compared to a computer for editing your works!

  • @IvanBraginX
    @IvanBraginX Před 6 měsíci

    Great explanation!
    I've always found motivation part easy, but struggled with making up clear external goal. After watching the video and reflecting over how the goals look like in some of my latest reads, I was able to think of a few possible goals for my current project's mc.
    Thank you!

  • @JayDay04
    @JayDay04 Před měsícem

    Thank you so much Ellen! Thanks to your video I finally nailed down the foundations of my three main characters' arcs! Now the next challenge is to make all their arcs connected somehow. I think that'd be great idea for a video, how to make the main characters' arcs relate to eachother in a story.

  • @kriistyrules
    @kriistyrules Před 6 měsíci

    Yesterday i was thinking about how no matter how much i studied creative writing, i couldn't get the character arc right, and now there's a video of my favorite writing channel about it. Thanks Ellen, you're doing an amazing job!

  • @Kikakowia
    @Kikakowia Před 6 měsíci

    Watching this for the third time in two days while I try to hammer my brain into sorting these things out for my MC. 😅

  • @vanessafowler1047
    @vanessafowler1047 Před 6 měsíci +3

    So helpful. Great video! Thank you!

  • @zapp770
    @zapp770 Před měsícem

    Great video. When I came across the belief centered model as supposed to the lie to truth model I imeadiatly new that it was better, The seperation between goal and motivation just clicked the final piece into place for me. That being said I think ill be using the term desire instead of motivation, as it is not as easy to confuse it with the goal.

  • @lorneytunes
    @lorneytunes Před 6 měsíci +1

    Sorry, guys, I'm busy today. New Ellen Brock video dropped.

  • @ella.ztr7
    @ella.ztr7 Před 6 měsíci +5

    I love your videos so much! This really helped me and cleared up some questions. However, once question I have is what do you do with major side characters (who later might become one the brim of main characters)? How detailed should their character arcs be, and how tied should they be to the plot?
    Amazing video as always Ellen!

    • @thethmooteresa
      @thethmooteresa Před 6 měsíci

      Personally I think it's whole up to u and how much of the side characters are really 'side' characters, how involved are they with the protagonist or main characters? ☆~☆
      Overall anything can work, best of luck buddy!!!

  • @r.brooks5287
    @r.brooks5287 Před 6 měsíci

    Great vid. Can you cover how much arc to put in a long, episodic, series in book one in your next vid on arcs, please. I find your attention to detail very helpful. I have a full arc for book one and an arc for the series but unsure if I have two arcs for book one as he has a positive arc and a flat arc as he fails to change enough yet in the arc for the series.

  • @libbyhyett6625
    @libbyhyett6625 Před 6 měsíci +1

    ELLEN BROCK IS BACK

  • @stefanie7607
    @stefanie7607 Před 6 měsíci

    Thank youuu

  • @vanessahutcheson9510
    @vanessahutcheson9510 Před 5 měsíci

    Luke Skywalker is a great example of the light flat arc. Luke persists in the belief that Vader has good in him even as everyone else (including Vader himself) says that Vader is too far gone. It makes things harder for Luke, but ultimately more rewarding.

  • @brys.3131
    @brys.3131 Před 5 měsíci

    Yes!!

  • @rosalindmorley
    @rosalindmorley Před 5 měsíci

    This video was already great and then you started talking about shrek….subscribed!

  • @luis-enrique-cuellar
    @luis-enrique-cuellar Před měsícem

    ¡Gracias!

    • @EllenBrock
      @EllenBrock  Před měsícem

      Thank you so much for your support!

  • @rineatorise
    @rineatorise Před 4 měsíci

    The audacity I have every time I think that I don't *really* have to watch another Ellen video, and then each time you absolutely crush that one problem i didn't even knew I had! It's always that weird feeling that creeps in the back of my head that I ignore because I don't understand how to fix it 😭 Your videos are pure gold!

  • @andrewrojas1096
    @andrewrojas1096 Před 4 měsíci

    Thanks!

    • @EllenBrock
      @EllenBrock  Před 3 měsíci

      Thank you so much for your support!