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  • čas přidán 15. 09. 2022
  • In this video, Meski gives six tips to people who want to improve their essay writing. She has reviewed some students' essays and found these common mistakes people make when writing their essays. These tips will help you improve your common app or college essays. If you have further questions, you can always comment. You can also comment on video ideas you want us to make related to scholarships. We will be more than happy to help. Watch the video till the end as it contains essential information.
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Komentáře • 74

  • @rewinaaddis1982
    @rewinaaddis1982 Před rokem +11

    We really appreciate your effort to help us!! You are very positive person. Stay active thank you very much!!!

  • @abeselomtube2091
    @abeselomtube2091 Před rokem +1

    Thanks for information 🙏🙏

  • @getubulo9527
    @getubulo9527 Před rokem +1

    Thx sister I would like to add more thoughts about essay writing

  • @abdisadesalegn8367
    @abdisadesalegn8367 Před rokem +1

    Thank you very much

  • @ameytesfaye4200
    @ameytesfaye4200 Před měsícem

    Thank you its is good lesson

  • @grarqwm1300
    @grarqwm1300 Před 9 měsíci

    Thanks for your advice &providing information....
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  • @yoseph501
    @yoseph501 Před rokem +2

    በጣም እናመሰናለን ብዙ ነገር እያስተማርሸን ነው. I love your lovely approch

  • @user-oj6zb4rx4o
    @user-oj6zb4rx4o Před 8 měsíci

    You are very good teacher.

  • @hewanbefirdu21
    @hewanbefirdu21 Před rokem +4

    Ya, prepare a video about the essay structure please

  • @ruthaddisu1971
    @ruthaddisu1971 Před rokem +1

    an also I wanted to ask what are the extra Culicular activities u mentioned on your application..I need some advice on that please

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    @fetiabdurahman540 Před rokem +2

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    @yohanneskebede9727 Před rokem +1

    betam arif new pls detail video siriln

  • @giftigifti9112
    @giftigifti9112 Před 10 měsíci

    pls could you do more vedios on essay writing specially on the structure

  • @libertak1813
    @libertak1813 Před rokem +3

    I always learn new things when I watch your videos. Thank you very much.

    • @SEMKITUBE
      @SEMKITUBE  Před rokem

      Thank you for your kind comment ☺️❤️

  • @Aggaaroo
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    It is fine

  • @YonasHabtamu-oq3bs
    @YonasHabtamu-oq3bs Před 6 měsíci

    part two about essay writing pls

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    @bachagergisodemie Před rokem

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    @user-ec7ic5oe6s Před 5 měsíci

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    @cheramelakkebede9308 Před rokem

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  • @tewabechgediyon5086
    @tewabechgediyon5086 Před rokem

    Selam I'm waiting entrance examination and I want to get scholarship in USA while what can I do

  • @lidu1507
    @lidu1507 Před rokem +2

    Enfelgalen siriln please

  • @firdosshemsu7807
    @firdosshemsu7807 Před rokem +1

    I need someone to correct my essays and please correct my essays or find someone to correct me, I am sure you will respond.

  • @ethiofilm3603
    @ethiofilm3603 Před rokem +1

    ❤️

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    @demekechtaggesse75 Před rokem

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  • @gedivlogs2690
    @gedivlogs2690 Před rokem +1

    Hi Meski I wanna to request about the transcription case all of my grade is good but the last year class result is bad cuz I was injured 2or 3 subjects is under 70 what shall I do in these is year i am grade 12 student . Please answer my question

    • @SEMKITUBE
      @SEMKITUBE  Před rokem +1

      Some schools check just a few subjects. For example, my school required above 90 for math, physics, and one more additional subject (any subject). That is because it is an engineering school. It depends on the school and what you want to learn.

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    @hikma9991 Před rokem

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    • @SEMKITUBE
      @SEMKITUBE  Před rokem +1

      There are many people asking me to edit their essays but I am super busy with my senior year work. I will try to release more helpful things or find another way where I can help larger group of people. I will update here if I get time to go through some individual essays.

  • @ruthaddisu1971
    @ruthaddisu1971 Před rokem

    hey there, my question is.. do I really need to take IB or AP classes to have a shot for full scholarship? or is my 3.7 gpa enough?

    • @SEMKITUBE
      @SEMKITUBE  Před rokem

      Try with what you already have.

  • @psychobunny2710
    @psychobunny2710 Před rokem

    Pls help me with my essay…

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  • @aynalemshewa
    @aynalemshewa Před 6 měsíci

    Please help me my sister i want to apply for master class for engineering .please reply as soon as you can.

  • @eyerusalemsolomon4569
    @eyerusalemsolomon4569 Před rokem +1

    I want to practice essay and I want to know if my essay is correct or not so I want someone to help me and I know you are busy so can you recommended me some website that can help me? I like your programs

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    • @SEMKITUBE
      @SEMKITUBE  Před rokem

      Translation sometimes might not be accurate. It might not transfer the message you want since the translator can't understand the context. I suggest you try to write it in English.

  • @samuelmengistu5161
    @samuelmengistu5161 Před rokem +6

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      @lealembirhanu5367 Před rokem

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    • @SEMKITUBE
      @SEMKITUBE  Před rokem +2

      Hello Samuel, if you are starting 11th grade, I believe you should start preparing for international exams and take one. I have made several videos regarding the overall steps and the process I went through. I will attach the links below, check them out.
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      There are more videos in this channel which will help you and answer your questions. Do let me know if something is unclear, or you need additional information regarding a specific topic.

    • @aboukitube6941
      @aboukitube6941 Před rokem

      ​@@SEMKITUBE
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  • @dinkisamerga1810
    @dinkisamerga1810 Před rokem

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  • @theodd1soout
    @theodd1soout Před rokem

    Please be more passionate about ur vids to attract more viewers i may not be a CZcamsr but from what i know if u want to succed in CZcams

    • @SEMKITUBE
      @SEMKITUBE  Před rokem

      What exactly do you want to say? You if can explain what it means to be more passionate I would be happy to listen and improve :)

  • @feleqesina
    @feleqesina Před 2 měsíci

    Correct your closing it is not good as a teacher

  • @fevenzeray8264
    @fevenzeray8264 Před rokem

    Please I want your help for some question u have how can I contact you please

  • @alazaraddis7237
    @alazaraddis7237 Před rokem

    Am I too late to start college application I graduated in 2014e.c

    • @SEMKITUBE
      @SEMKITUBE  Před rokem +1

      Nope you can still start now. It's not too late

    • @alazaraddis7237
      @alazaraddis7237 Před rokem

      @@SEMKITUBE
      Thank you for atlist giving me a piece of hope

  • @usingyoutube440
    @usingyoutube440 Před rokem

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  • @fevenzeray8264
    @fevenzeray8264 Před rokem

    I am just doing with my app and I want your help in some forms to edit ...how can I contact you on email or telegram

    • @SEMKITUBE
      @SEMKITUBE  Před rokem

      Hello, I am super busy with my senior year work right now so I can't go through peoples forms and essays individually but if you have a specific question please do comment and I will gladly answer.

  • @lealembirhanu5367
    @lealembirhanu5367 Před rokem +1

    Pls bizu seriln sle essay tips

  • @user-ec7ic5oe6s
    @user-ec7ic5oe6s Před 5 měsíci

    Translater betekem chiger alew? Maletm keteta keza copy paste baderg yitawekal?