This was an amazing story line and I think it was very well made, though maybe a backstory for why they did this. (This is not hate, I loved it) but some of the character reactions were not in character. But like this was amazing! Keep up the great work super star ❤
WTH was that cause Donnie and Raphael were so out of pocket BUT ALSO why did Ralph not get punished too CAUSE HONESTLY I FEEL LIKE HE WAS DOING MOST OF THE PUNCHES😨
While I have to agree with everyone else that this was a well written story I also think the plot was not well conceived. Sure siblings fight all the time and I could easily see an innocent scaring prank gone horribly wrong such as accidentally causing a heart attack or something a bit less extreme but this is much. This is literally them torturing him which they have no reason to do. Only an abusive family would do something this sick and twisted to their own family.
HEY! THIS IS MY STORY AND YOU DONT GET TO JUDGE IT OK! EVERYBODY HAS THEIR OWN OPTIONS BUT YOU CANT TALK ABOUT MY STORY LIKE THIS OK! 😡😒👿👎 I never use this emoji but YOU DESERVE IT 🖕
@@leonardoanddantdmloverlead1718wow, you sound like you're seriously too young to be on CZcams. First of all, this person is right. Beating up your siblings isn't a fucking prank. This is literal abuse, and this kind of shit shouldn't be normalized or made into a trend. It's messed up and my heart goes out for all people in real life who have endured abuse in all of its forms, whether it comes from parents, friends, lovers, or in this case, siblings. Abuse is abuse, and nothing will change that. And second, your response to the criticism was seriously so immature it hurt to read. This person was simply trying to tell you that abuse shouldn't be normalized, and you treated it like they just called you the most insulting thing known to man. Look, I get it if you're a kid, and media unfortunately romanticizes abuse and toxicity. I'm a kid too, being in my mid-teens, and being exposed to media from youth I used to think this kind of stuff was normal when I was a tween. But the reality is that this stuff isn't okay. This stuff is abuse. This stuff is what gets kids taken away from their families for their own safety. It is a very sensitive topic for a lot of people, and posting stuff like this could even trigger a panic attack in someone who might have been abused, especially since there aren't any trigger warnings. Dislike me, bitch at me, hate me if you want. I'm not trying to be a condescending asshole here, and I'm sorry if that's how I'm coming off. All I'm trying to say is that abuse in any form isn't okay and it isn't something to normalize.
Yeah, I didn't even finish it, and I could see this within the first three minutes, if they added some sort of reason to the actions of Raph and Donnie, then it might be more enjoyable and less, for lack of a better word, violently uncomfortable
Why does leo have favoritism he shouldn't have like he forgives raph just like that and he still forgives donnie but he has to do stuff to make up for it?? Like Raph did the most damage Donnie just did like 2 punches and raph broke is back and everything. Again this is not hate I love the the story but this doesn't seem like the characters and yea you get it.
Wtf this story makes no sense but the story is good (not that raph is beating up Leo) wait how does splinter rush Leo to the hospital if their family is secret?
Bro broke leos back and was like "okay", but then saw two black eyes and was like 😨😨😨
Danm you spoiled me
u are so right my friend
This is very emotional, I love it keep up the good work 👌👍
This was an amazing story line and I think it was very well made, though maybe a backstory for why they did this. (This is not hate, I loved it) but some of the character reactions were not in character. But like this was amazing! Keep up the great work super star ❤
The part where you started typing for Donnie and start to put *Sneaks into leo's room* then changed your mind half way and put *Working in my lab* XD
Why did i tear up a little when he called out for splinter and called him dad or daddy
POV Raphael: Leo im Sorry!…. Leo’s mind: BRO YOU BROKE MY BACK-
WTH was that cause Donnie and Raphael were so out of pocket BUT ALSO why did Ralph not get punished too CAUSE HONESTLY I FEEL LIKE HE WAS DOING MOST OF THE PUNCHES😨
FR HE WAS AND LEO SAID NAH U DONT GET ANY PUNISHMENT.
Naw jit just broke their brothers back-
wait they are mutants and how did the doctor didn't get scared??😮😮
That's my question too
Mutant hospital
Why did they even do that to Leo?
O-oh uhm…oh my 😅😅😅
Love it 🥰
what did poor Leo do to deserve a broken back, two black eyes, coughing up blood, and the worse one ............. trauma
I was NoT expecting that lol😂
Mikey: I'm now up lat- oh hell naw imma go back to sleep goodnight
While I have to agree with everyone else that this was a well written story I also think the plot was not well conceived. Sure siblings fight all the time and I could easily see an innocent scaring prank gone horribly wrong such as accidentally causing a heart attack or something a bit less extreme but this is much. This is literally them torturing him which they have no reason to do. Only an abusive family would do something this sick and twisted to their own family.
HEY! THIS IS MY STORY AND YOU DONT GET TO JUDGE IT OK! EVERYBODY HAS THEIR OWN OPTIONS BUT YOU CANT TALK ABOUT MY STORY LIKE THIS OK! 😡😒👿👎 I never use this emoji but YOU DESERVE IT 🖕
@@leonardoanddantdmloverlead1718 chill they only gave a tip if ur gonna act like this when someone gives a tip im not subscribing
@@leonardoanddantdmloverlead1718 really dude chill out it's just a tip for fuck sakes
@@leonardoanddantdmloverlead1718wow, you sound like you're seriously too young to be on CZcams. First of all, this person is right. Beating up your siblings isn't a fucking prank. This is literal abuse, and this kind of shit shouldn't be normalized or made into a trend. It's messed up and my heart goes out for all people in real life who have endured abuse in all of its forms, whether it comes from parents, friends, lovers, or in this case, siblings. Abuse is abuse, and nothing will change that.
And second, your response to the criticism was seriously so immature it hurt to read. This person was simply trying to tell you that abuse shouldn't be normalized, and you treated it like they just called you the most insulting thing known to man. Look, I get it if you're a kid, and media unfortunately romanticizes abuse and toxicity. I'm a kid too, being in my mid-teens, and being exposed to media from youth I used to think this kind of stuff was normal when I was a tween.
But the reality is that this stuff isn't okay. This stuff is abuse. This stuff is what gets kids taken away from their families for their own safety. It is a very sensitive topic for a lot of people, and posting stuff like this could even trigger a panic attack in someone who might have been abused, especially since there aren't any trigger warnings.
Dislike me, bitch at me, hate me if you want. I'm not trying to be a condescending asshole here, and I'm sorry if that's how I'm coming off. All I'm trying to say is that abuse in any form isn't okay and it isn't something to normalize.
Yeah, I didn't even finish it, and I could see this within the first three minutes, if they added some sort of reason to the actions of Raph and Donnie, then it might be more enjoyable and less, for lack of a better word, violently uncomfortable
At least Mikey isn’t beating up Leo
Awesome story, nice!!
👁👄👁 That suspicious, that’s weird
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Why does leo have favoritism he shouldn't have like he forgives raph just like that and he still forgives donnie but he has to do stuff to make up for it?? Like Raph did the most damage Donnie just did like 2 punches and raph broke is back and everything. Again this is not hate I love the the story but this doesn't seem like the characters and yea you get it.
Emotional damage…..
They r able to go to the hospital as mutants?
It’s a mutant hospital
This is Leo abuse 😢🐢🔵💀
#STOPLEOABUSE
NO ABUSING LEO ON MY WATCH😡
#STOPLEOABUSE
#STOPLEOABUSE
@@Kato_ishere YEAH!
What happens to the love stories of raph and leo? Guess leo broke up with raph and raph was mad
Poor leo ..
I'm just waiting for the CRINGE frikkin ship holy cow I'm crying 3:49
I'll give it a chance I'm seeing the other commente 😊
Can you do it an animation
Hold up how does Leo have a black eye from Donnie when donnie punched him in the chest this doesn't make sense at all 🤔
Maybe he hit his head too
I thought they couldn’t go out side cuz they are mutants?
Like It
Wtf this story makes no sense but the story is good (not that raph is beating up Leo) wait how does splinter rush Leo to the hospital if their family is secret?
Why is leo blamming him self?! And raph hit leo the most Donnie like hit leo 3 times and leos made but when raph hits leo 1000000 times his not mad
How do you get the different colors?
😨im so confused but more than that just😨😨
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What do you mean "accident" they tried to fucking kill him I mean what did he do to you guy????