Btw sadly i'm not going to release this level for NCS Contest, i'll do it as another level from mine, ran out of ideas, motivation and i'm kinda really lazy to keep going with it, sorry if you somehow were expecting this to be released soon, i'll delay it and it might have a better result ^^
Hey! Almost every part is kinda subject to changes and it might look unpolished, i'm still trying to base what i'm doing on suggestions so any opinion would be appreciated! ;)
1:25 la parte es demasiado clara para la parte de la canción y la ambientación que diste anteriormente. tal vez algo más oscuro que haga parecer que es una noche quedaría mejor, aunque no podría estar completamente seguro ( ≧Д≦) pd: gatoo 😸
Bro this is discouraging, the song really resonated with me, it’s so soulful and fantastic, one of the best and saddest songs I’ve ever heard and you perfectly conveyed its atmosphere, very cool. I have a suggestion to add fog. I can't wait to play it😮
the wave part in the drop around 1:32 might have slightly better sync with a double/triple/spam click on the high note due to the way the kick drum cuts it almost into two notes. It would match the glitch on the same musical part in the next segment (the last cube)
You cooked. My only concerns are: In the beginning cube the background feels a bit empty, the black cloud looking objects could stand out more. I found the swing part a bit empty ngl, its not bad but there could be more things to fill up the empty space. 0:50, 1:04 and 1:24 feel kinda unclimactic. The song is at its peak moments, and the level is kinda just there. It feels static compared to how intense the song gets. Take ELEVATOR by YPofficial and more (you should check that out). The pulses and effects fit exactly with the intensity of the song (even though it is a bit much tbh). Those were my opinions. Regardless though, its an amazing level and I would genuinly love seeing this in the NCS Gauntlet. Good stuff! God loves you
Also dont take my opinion as a true fact, because when it comes to deco im kind a bit of a perfectionist tbh But still, hope I helped! GL with this banger level! And, as always, God loves you
This looks incredible! Watch the difficulty in some parts, it does look a bit unbalanced, especially the spammy sections compared to most other parts. However, this is from a showcase viewer pov and not a playtester pov, so take this comment with a grain of salt. Keep up the good work!
this looks soo good! I really hope you can be a winner. beautiful level and amazing gameplay. you have alot of potential as a creator :) i say this with full support of your level :)
Bro, definitivamente creo que este nivel estará en el Gauntlet, tiene muchos detalles que ya no se por donde empezar, y yo creo que pega muy bien con esa song, Buena Suerte decorando el nivel bro, suerte cuando hagan las elecciones de los niveles también, buena suerte con el nivel 😃☝️
I really like this level. It has a lot of interesting parts. The part at 0:51 is especially good. My only upgrade is that the walls don't are a bit static . If they had more detail and moved up and down, the level would be even better.
Visivle on 1:06 could be better like use custom font or the placement or the color? Idk, just let yourself cooking xd. This is actually really good i will wait you to complete this level!!
maybe instead of the ncs thing in the bg it could be a moon, and the ncs thing that says INVISIBLE in the part after, that could be a sun, just a suggestion, idk
There are a lot of indicators, that lowers the quality of the level sometimes. The gameplay feels a little bit unbalanced, like 3 stars in a part and suddenly 9 stars to easy demon. Although, the design, decoration and transitions specially, are all sick. Good luck dude
todo esta increible, lo unico que podria decir es que si le pudieras agregar un ldm por que honestamente los efectos de shaders de la camara me van re trabados a mi xD. solo una recomendacion de ahi en fuera esta 10/10
The second part looks more clean! Great work crystie. As of for the last cube part, I think the gp needs a bit more play testing, but I already know you've just made the part so no complains at all😅 But bro, why didn't you add anything to the beginning? It still looks emptier than the rest of the level. Again, please don't take my word on anything here I literally can't build a layout properly
@@aardvarkwith5As nah trust me, it's extremely easy when you play the level, tho i need to buff this as i want it to be an easy demon, i don't think u even need practice to beat this xD
Ok I feel like I should quit the game bc I've been trying to make something like this for a while and this is better than what I could do so... great level good job, I should just stop trying to create I guess :(
Do not think like that, we all are trying our best! Trust me when i say, we are cooked, i'm completely cooked too, i'm still doing this kinda for fun and i hope it has a great result 😩
Nah i won't even try to make own fonts, these are really hard to optimize and it doesn't affects visually at all, and i won't ofc search for copyable custom fonts on gd as these are unoptimized asf xD but i still want to see what can i do with some texts like the "OHH" one in the predrop, it kinda looks weird.
Ngl i don't know what to do in that part, i might not change it as i have no ideas, i think it won't fit with any other font but i don't want to remove it, i want to keep lyrics in ;w;
Btw sadly i'm not going to release this level for NCS Contest, i'll do it as another level from mine, ran out of ideas, motivation and i'm kinda really lazy to keep going with it, sorry if you somehow were expecting this to be released soon, i'll delay it and it might have a better result ^^
I feel you still cant wait to see this level as a whole
cat jumpscare (this is sick)
Hey! Almost every part is kinda subject to changes and it might look unpolished, i'm still trying to base what i'm doing on suggestions so any opinion would be appreciated! ;)
0:51 could use some highlights in the blocks and maybe some different textures other wise the level looks great
@@lucas66 you mean in the borders right? Also i wanted to animate them xD
1:26 maybe add some more details, it looks a little empty but amazing work👍
actually nvm, 1:26 just needs more effects. It doesn't look as active and fast pace as the song seems to be.
@@D4rkOG rn it has more live, i even reduced the brightness and been working on some animations, i still need to animate structures tho
That transition at the end is INCREDIBLE🔥🔥
Jajajaja el gato
this level is beautiful. Hope you win!
1:01 transición good 👌
1:36
This one *might be my favorite upcoming level 😊 love it so much
I wish you goodluck
1:25 la parte es demasiado clara para la parte de la canción y la ambientación que diste anteriormente. tal vez algo más oscuro que haga parecer que es una noche quedaría mejor, aunque no podría estar completamente seguro ( ≧Д≦)
pd: gatoo 😸
Entonce le baho el vrillo?? OWoo
@@Crystie06 siiiiiiiiiiiiiiii (;ŏ﹏ŏ)
@@nyauwuoniichan okei y le pongo estreyitas ziii
@@Crystie06chiiiii y tal vez reflejos que estén por encima del jugador para dar mas ambiente (/^-^)/
Bro this is discouraging, the song really resonated with me, it’s so soulful and fantastic, one of the best and saddest songs I’ve ever heard and you perfectly conveyed its atmosphere, very cool.
I have a suggestion to add fog.
I can't wait to play it😮
Discouraging?
Está chulísimo, has mejorado un montón
0:51 en esta parte yo haria un cartel custom en lugar de usar ese de madera.
El resto está muy bien
Ba, veo como hago uwu
16Lord :0
This is AMAZING!, the level improved a lot on it's quality from the 1st preview to now. Keep it up :)
O wow is incredible, my vote
the wave part in the drop around 1:32 might have slightly better sync with a double/triple/spam click on the high note due to the way the kick drum cuts it almost into two notes. It would match the glitch on the same musical part in the next segment (the last cube)
hi guys welcome to my tutorial
THIS SHOULD GET LEGENDARY LIKE BRO THE TRANSITION 🔥🔥🔥 (the swirl)
Very Clean and Nice to me! I hope you win. Goodluck
This looks insane so far! 🔥🔥🔥
THIS IS AMAZING! Good luck for the contest ^^
I'm really looking forward to this level. It is so crazy 😮
SO PRETTY :0
Not as much as u!!!!!@!@!@!!
You cooked. My only concerns are: In the beginning cube the background feels a bit empty, the black cloud looking objects could stand out more.
I found the swing part a bit empty ngl, its not bad but there could be more things to fill up the empty space.
0:50, 1:04 and 1:24 feel kinda unclimactic. The song is at its peak moments, and the level is kinda just there. It feels static compared to how intense the song gets. Take ELEVATOR by YPofficial and more (you should check that out). The pulses and effects fit exactly with the intensity of the song (even though it is a bit much tbh).
Those were my opinions. Regardless though, its an amazing level and I would genuinly love seeing this in the NCS Gauntlet. Good stuff!
God loves you
Also dont take my opinion as a true fact, because when it comes to deco im kind a bit of a perfectionist tbh
But still, hope I helped! GL with this banger level!
And, as always, God loves you
@@caiobrplays nah it is too static at the 2nd drop u're right
This looks incredible! Watch the difficulty in some parts, it does look a bit unbalanced, especially the spammy sections compared to most other parts. However, this is from a showcase viewer pov and not a playtester pov, so take this comment with a grain of salt. Keep up the good work!
This is so cool!! :D
GATO FELI
THAT WAVE PART IS SO AMAZING OMG. STRAIGHT OUT OF WHITE SPACE🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
(at one minute)
this looks soo good! I really hope you can be a winner. beautiful level and amazing gameplay. you have alot of potential as a creator :) i say this with full support of your level :)
This should definitely win, good luck!
Nivel de fuego 🔥
Me sorprende lo mucho que mejoraste con los años, se ve genial. Espero verlo pronto en los gauntlets
Absolutely amazing!
Se ve increíble ♥️
Banger ❤🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Looking cool 👀👀
Looks incredible
Definitely your best, I love it
Everything in this level is so cool!
ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT
this is so incredibly cool
This Is So Cool I Love It❤
Bro, definitivamente creo que este nivel estará en el Gauntlet, tiene muchos detalles que ya no se por donde empezar, y yo creo que pega muy bien con esa song, Buena Suerte decorando el nivel bro, suerte cuando hagan las elecciones de los niveles también, buena suerte con el nivel 😃☝️
Si o si ya ganaste un premio amigo, esta increíble el nivel ❤❤❤
Such a crazy level! +1 sub❤
Really want to see this in the gauntlet👍
Looks really good so far! The sync at 0:36 is kinda weird tho
I thought it was a Minecraft song for a minute there 😂
NOW THIS IS FUKCING EPIC
O_O
DIOS MIO ESTA EPICO ✨
nostalgia for 2016 ...
cada vez está más goddd, siga asi mana!!
Soy fan user
cat jumpscare = quality level, subbed.
This is hella good wtf.
Increíble, sumamente increible...
For the visible words, make them have a "degeneration" effect where they crumble
Bonito mana!
1:37 that's look either like a sign of wealth and luck, or a swastika
It's a damn spiral!!!
@@Crystie06 oh..
banger!!!!!
This is def getting in the gauntlet
Ta weño 🐓👏
really good entry! if it doesn't make it into the gauntlet, it'll at least get rated.
Edit: I just saw my notifications go from 0 to 2 instantly xd
I really like this level. It has a lot of interesting parts. The part at 0:51 is especially good. My only upgrade is that the walls don't are a bit static . If they had more detail and moved up and down, the level would be even better.
Btw removed them, i might not use things like that cuz these look weird, i kept the sign tho
joder esto esta realmente epico
Ta godd 🦆🤙
Visivle on 1:06 could be better like use custom font or the placement or the color? Idk, just let yourself cooking xd. This is actually really good i will wait you to complete this level!!
🔥
Underrated
I really love the sync in this lvl. The transitions are also gas. Demon rating maybe?
maybe instead of the ncs thing in the bg it could be a moon, and the ncs thing that says INVISIBLE in the part after, that could be a sun, just a suggestion, idk
Damn that’s my new fav level but it’s not uploaded and not full… BUT STILL IT GOES DAMN HARD A I LOVE IT
THIS IS AMAZING❤❤❤
Lmao video spawned with your comment were waiting this smh? 😭
by the the way that spiral transition is the most satisfying thing i have ever seen in gd
When i saw this i get subscribed to you
Naguara que transición la del final xdd
What if every1 votes for 1 person 😂
There are a lot of indicators, that lowers the quality of the level sometimes. The gameplay feels a little bit unbalanced, like 3 stars in a part and suddenly 9 stars to easy demon. Although, the design, decoration and transitions specially, are all sick. Good luck dude
cool
I thought that's epic🎉🎉
Que god alv usando mis iconos xd
todo esta increible, lo unico que podria decir es que si le pudieras agregar un ldm por que honestamente los efectos de shaders de la camara me van re trabados a mi xD. solo una recomendacion de ahi en fuera esta 10/10
El ldm ya existe y quita muchísimos objetos, como 3D innecesario y los mismos shaders. ;D
Maybe for first half the game block design should need some work,as it’s quite plain. Other than that, you are going to win if not top 5 :D
very good level🤑🤑
Looks pretty visible to me
Thats gooood, but pls delete those boarders from the first ship of the drop
The second part looks more clean! Great work crystie.
As of for the last cube part, I think the gp needs a bit more play testing, but I already know you've just made the part so no complains at all😅
But bro, why didn't you add anything to the beginning?
It still looks emptier than the rest of the level.
Again, please don't take my word on anything here I literally can't build a layout properly
I'll add some animations later, i honestly think beggining is ok as it is, it just needs more live
@@Crystie06 ok sounds nice
The gameplay is great but the deco isn't enough to get an epic rate. The deco is great though! Nice work!
I think you could maybe make the first few parts a bit more readable, apart from that, I think this is going great!
Readable in which way, i don't get it pwp
@@Crystie06 as in gameplay wise, everything was a bit dark so it was hard to see what had a hitbox and what didn't
@@aardvarkwith5As nah trust me, it's extremely easy when you play the level, tho i need to buff this as i want it to be an easy demon, i don't think u even need practice to beat this xD
@@Crystie06 Ok, just wanted to make sure this is the best it can be. I really like how it's turning out!
1:05 woow
it will be rated easy demon soon
😺
Its pretty visible ngl
Some parts feel kind of "empty" and Not detailed enough and the lighting toward the end seems weird. But great level
perdon por crear en el mismo editor
This is art (Cat Jumpscare)
Ok I feel like I should quit the game bc I've been trying to make something like this for a while and this is better than what I could do so... great level good job, I should just stop trying to create I guess :(
Do not think like that, we all are trying our best! Trust me when i say, we are cooked, i'm completely cooked too, i'm still doing this kinda for fun and i hope it has a great result 😩
This is far from good at least for this preview, really hope this deserves a place in this contest
cuando empezo la cancion pense que sonaria la de Duelo Maeatro XD
just add more details and you'l be good for the block design!
Awesome level, but made your custom font :3
Nah i won't even try to make own fonts, these are really hard to optimize and it doesn't affects visually at all, and i won't ofc search for copyable custom fonts on gd as these are unoptimized asf xD but i still want to see what can i do with some texts like the "OHH" one in the predrop, it kinda looks weird.
@@Crystie06 ok, that's true, I only wanted to help you. Your made awesome level :3
The "visible" Text in eye part is somewhat strange imo
Ngl i don't know what to do in that part, i might not change it as i have no ideas, i think it won't fit with any other font but i don't want to remove it, i want to keep lyrics in ;w;
if the level is called invisible...
then why can i see it?