We Were Sent to Find an Ancient Weapon Called Human ( Part 1 to 11) | HFY | A Short Sci-Fi Story

Sdílet
Vložit
  • čas přidán 29. 08. 2024
  • ➛ This story was granted permission to narrate and add to CZcams by the Author u/CnRhin
    / cnrhin
    -`ღ´-Next Story : • If Only We Had Known |...
    `ღ´ Ship Repair Facility : • Ship Repair Facility |...
    Story Link : / we_were_sent_to_find_a...
    `ღ´ If you like this version Subscribe Today and Turn Notifications for more stories:
    / @icefiction404
    #scifi #hfystories #hfy
    ----------
    ---------------------------
    -------------

Komentáře • 95

  • @RobNobelo
    @RobNobelo Před 7 dny +4

    Apple banana orange... lol
    This is now my safe phrase.

  • @lunarwrase
    @lunarwrase Před měsícem +11

    Did human just become James Earle Jones?

  • @imperatorja
    @imperatorja Před 18 dny +8

    Any resemblance to Master Chiff and Cortona is not intentional

  • @goodcitizen64
    @goodcitizen64 Před měsícem +54

    Great series but the AI has some issues that could be easily corrected with a human actually proof reading the stories before releasing!

    • @avanap8096
      @avanap8096 Před měsícem +3

      Seriously? I've blocked all others while not great. Not bad!

    • @Scot_WestTexas
      @Scot_WestTexas Před měsícem +1

      Yup. I’m outta here

    • @nightwind6515
      @nightwind6515 Před měsícem +5

      I think this quite bad actually. Why not just use human narrator which is leaps and bounds better? A rhetorical question...

    • @avanap8096
      @avanap8096 Před měsícem +1

      @@nightwind6515 statement!

    • @kimwilliams722
      @kimwilliams722 Před měsícem

      What is the matter with you people do you think that everybody is so sadly ingrained in perverse behavior that we enjoy such ignorant rotten profanity it's stupid and seriously annoying please stop it

  • @leralu198525
    @leralu198525 Před 3 dny

    "I remain here because I choose to, You remain alive because i choose, am I understood?" pure effing fire line

  • @josephgauthier7797
    @josephgauthier7797 Před měsícem +24

    great series. really went all out with the multiple characters
    awsome job even if the AI had issues still awsome series well done thank you👏🤙

  • @davio8605
    @davio8605 Před měsícem +7

    at last a story where the humans aren,t the greatest, most moral species in existance.... thankyou my friend

    • @XpaceTrue
      @XpaceTrue Před měsícem +3

      There's nothing wrong with stories like that. It's all good. Variety makes life more interesting and everyone is entitled to their own tastes. But... this does *not* match with the definition of the HFY (Humans, Fuok Yeah!) genre. And that makes the title of this video pure clickbait. As long as video creators get away with using click-baity titles without complaint or consequence, the more often it happens... and the more *frustrating* it becomes for *everyone* to find the type of content viewers want.

    • @armadillotoe
      @armadillotoe Před 15 dny

      I would like a story in which humans are the best and worst. Reality is too complicated it seems.
      I would also enjoy a story with an average human, not a genetically enhanced, ex-supersoldier

  • @michaelturner3922
    @michaelturner3922 Před měsícem +11

    The only thing about ALL of these stories is NOBODY proof listens or edits just completely reliant on the AI to do all the work maybe lack of motivation beyond pumping out more "content" I mean the simplist thing or really the most obvious upgrade to put "you" above the rest would be proof read/listen and a simple edit.

    • @TheDingo80
      @TheDingo80 Před měsícem +4

      Thank you! Glad someone else had the same observation I did.

    • @XpaceTrue
      @XpaceTrue Před měsícem +2

      I agree. Channels like this automate or at least streamline their creation process so it happens quickly, cheaply and with little effort. It's all about the algorithm, views and ad revenue. At least this channels gives credit and links the story. Many channels don't even bother doing that much. Some creators even release content on multiple accounts in case they get too many strikes or otherwise shut down.

  • @maryy1370
    @maryy1370 Před měsícem +16

    The basic logic of Zate is incredibly faulty. I'm only at 1:10:00 and - even with real world bias - I can think of a completely different scenario.
    Zate says that "humans" originate from the same system, despite that seeming impossible?
    Scenario: Elyrians created the humans as weapons of war and treated them as complete fodder. Eventually, humans escaped their control and struck back (Skynet style). The Elyrians couldn't win against them and decided to flee the system to try to escape.
    No one likes admitting that they did abominable things, so the elyrians themselves deleted the information on humans, maybe to make themselves look innocent in the event. Afterall, most people are more sympathetic to refugees rather than war criminals.
    Later, *some* elyrians - knowingly or unknowingly - either gave the Core information on humans or maybe the Core found mentions of them in data files the elyrians had missed destroying? Maybe they were able to find some humans that had been left in cold storage and the Core used them sparingly as a covert ops team - but didn't know how to make more. That would explain why the Core, despite apparently having had *some* Humans to do missions, are not using them NOW even with there being a succession and cold war.
    That would explain why the Core wants so much resources and what their goal is: they're trying to recreate humans. The captain even SAID that the Core was trying to find a way to create an easy source of soldiers/war fodder.
    The elyrians could have done as much as they could to hide their actions and have deliberately made sure that no new generations knew about their species crimes. And after the Core found out about Humans, I can see them doing their best to destroy all other data about them in order to monopolize the knowledge and try to recreate them in secret. This also explains why some elyrians are recruited to the Inner Ring. Who else would you get to work on recreating humans other than the ones who had originally made them?
    This makes a heck of a lot more sense than thinking that Humans (a people created to be little more than living weapons and who have no distinct society or independence) somehow - what, destroyed the elysians, then got ahead of them and became the Core and established a whole hidden civilization BEFORE the elyrians got there?
    If humans had any kind of willing presence in the Core, there would be more of them. If there were more of them, then this Outer Frontier could never have broken off.
    Zate is an idiot. So much for them being smart or logical.
    Yes, that's not how the story goes (since I've now gotten further), but it's a good possible scenario.

    • @ronniebentley5847
      @ronniebentley5847 Před měsícem +1

      Damn you not have a real life?

    • @maryy1370
      @maryy1370 Před měsícem +5

      @@ronniebentley5847 I weep at the state of school systems that have turned people off of comprehensive thinking.

    • @lordomacron3719
      @lordomacron3719 Před 14 dny

      That’s the danger of pure logic. Faulty premises lead to false conclusions.

  • @ricosuave4465
    @ricosuave4465 Před měsícem +21

    I love that Tic-Tac is voiced by the voice of Ben Shapiro! LOL

  • @kelvunmedina90
    @kelvunmedina90 Před měsícem +3

    Im just glad that this series is still alive and kicking. Had to Reddit just to make sure

  • @Agg1E91
    @Agg1E91 Před 13 dny +1

    "inWEgo crew!" That is certainly one way to pronounce it.

  • @WinterWeaver
    @WinterWeaver Před 22 dny +3

    "Apple a Banana Orange"

  • @TimothyLipinski
    @TimothyLipinski Před měsícem +3

    Great Video ! The "Humans" do not need an earth style planet to open a solar system ! What is needed is an Ort Cloud for water (H2O) and an asteroid belt for metals and other material ! The materials will be used to build Space Colonies ! Small bicycle wheel Colonies a mile in diameter with an inner tube that is four hundred feet in diameter will support a population of ten thousand "humans" ! Then larger colonies can be built of pairs of tin cans that are four miles in diameter and twenty miles long with three panels of glass alternating with three panels of land area ! The large Colonies will hold a population of millions of "Humans" ! tjl

  • @scinanisern9845
    @scinanisern9845 Před 23 dny +3

    Apple a banana orange???

  • @SeducingJackel
    @SeducingJackel Před měsícem +2

    I enjoyed this one, very good, would have been more immersive if it wasn't for the characters voices changing multiple times, a little continuity would go along way. I have more questions.. is there, will there be more?
    Thanks for the story!

  • @adarkwind4712
    @adarkwind4712 Před 21 hodinou

    "He'll come willingly"
    . . . . Yeah . . . . . F*** that.

  • @davidturner4824
    @davidturner4824 Před 10 dny +1

    Great story, very interesting. Wonder what happened to Humans like us and our civilization?

  • @atlasjunky7677
    @atlasjunky7677 Před 8 dny

    Lol the beginning where he sort of just punches it and they act like it was a planned thing not a impulse thing lol

  • @ventusvero4484
    @ventusvero4484 Před měsícem +1

    The valley girl voice kills me 2:30, she sounds so annoyed.

  • @jorgebarrientos7726
    @jorgebarrientos7726 Před měsícem +1

    Its weird hearing teryl rothery as an AIs voice

  • @brandonheckman6004
    @brandonheckman6004 Před 24 dny

    This was awesome I really hope you continue it with a like whatever the next part would start at 12:00 and up

  • @armadillotoe
    @armadillotoe Před 16 dny

    I think it is a shame that soon AI will make intellectual study, imagination, and the self-discipline to learn obsolete.

  • @halo12390
    @halo12390 Před měsícem +2

    Them aliens sound sus

  • @tamatirogerson6421
    @tamatirogerson6421 Před 20 dny

    Brilliant 😸👌 thank u so much 😸 more of this story plzzzzz!! 1 in 10 hfy stories are awesome, the rest are lazily written plotless crap

  • @01100101011100100111
    @01100101011100100111 Před měsícem +2

    "A Short Sci-Fi Story"
    two hours and forty minutes long
    How long would a Medium Sci-Fi Story be, then?

    • @adamschaefer881
      @adamschaefer881 Před měsícem +1

      Hundred or less hours. Some of the stuff r/HFY runs to hundreds of pages of 40,000 word long chapters.

  • @keithfr1
    @keithfr1 Před měsícem +3

    Did they steal gould,from stargate

  • @scinanisern9845
    @scinanisern9845 Před 23 dny

    So then, the only thing accomplished by going to that world was getting threatened, tracked, hacked and ripped apart to escape it? Complete waste of time. They send out all kinds of search teams to find human and then it turns out they know where lots of humans are and when this one arrives they harass him tag him and send him on his way??? Jeez.
    In the beginning... the end.

  • @cephalonrevan2546
    @cephalonrevan2546 Před 27 dny +1

    Apple a banana orange!

  • @genergoebel
    @genergoebel Před 29 dny +1

    Will there be more?

  • @Kong840
    @Kong840 Před 15 dny +2

    God that A.I. is awful. Seemed interesting but couldn’t get past the sound. Just pay the couple hundred bucks to have someone read it.

  • @blakekratzer413
    @blakekratzer413 Před 2 dny

    The audio sounds like it was mixed by Tommy Wiseau

  • @robertmccracken6930
    @robertmccracken6930 Před měsícem +1

    In what universe does an ensign out rank a Captain? Lost me right there not going any further. That ruined the whole thing

  • @whitehazegruntz250
    @whitehazegruntz250 Před měsícem +1

    21:20 they where not also unknowingly ejected sense the other set knowingly was. How u worded it means both sides didnt know and thats your slip up . As a viewer its my job to correct u sense u can get paid from adds u should be corrected

  • @bigtingz8440
    @bigtingz8440 Před dnem

    Where can I find the rest of the story ?

  • @user-zy9vm4tc6m
    @user-zy9vm4tc6m Před měsícem +1

  • @AliceGutierrez-x4u
    @AliceGutierrez-x4u Před 8 dny +1

    Taylor Kevin Lewis Cynthia Lopez Anthony

  • @JesseBurtone
    @JesseBurtone Před 8 hodinami +1

    Hernandez Jose Lewis Shirley Robinson Linda

  • @DuyKhanh-rt4gn
    @DuyKhanh-rt4gn Před měsícem +1

    hay wa

  • @VictoriaCruz-f7r
    @VictoriaCruz-f7r Před dnem

    Lee Lisa Jones Cynthia Taylor Scott

  • @dutchboy9273
    @dutchboy9273 Před měsícem +5

    😢. Lousy AI ruined the story

  • @lhvikingp2436
    @lhvikingp2436 Před měsícem

    Part 12??

  • @XnndjehdhkNxndjhds
    @XnndjehdhkNxndjhds Před 9 dny

    Gonzalez Carol Clark Elizabeth Clark Michael

  • @SvhwCsnsj
    @SvhwCsnsj Před 8 dny

    Brown Gary White Christopher Gonzalez Jennifer

  • @NaimSonkan
    @NaimSonkan Před 8 dny

    Davis Daniel Hernandez Daniel Martin Jessica

  • @BloomerPandora
    @BloomerPandora Před dnem

    Johnson Lisa Garcia Angela Jones Donald

  • @DarrellHolmes-q3u
    @DarrellHolmes-q3u Před 9 dny

    Davis Lisa Rodriguez Cynthia Clark Carol

  • @dragonshoarddesign3094

    Some of the a I voices you used were gsome of them are very robotic and don't know how to read

  • @HubbardKirk
    @HubbardKirk Před 4 dny

    Martinez Barbara Davis Barbara Davis Carol

  • @MichelleJones-z7b
    @MichelleJones-z7b Před 10 dny

    Anderson Shirley Robinson Melissa Harris Betty

  • @AnthonyCole-j7q
    @AnthonyCole-j7q Před 11 dny

    Wilson Charles Martinez Carol Anderson Carol

  • @Orbitaakter
    @Orbitaakter Před 9 dny

    Hall Kimberly Jones Nancy Hernandez Sandra

  • @richardlindley2821
    @richardlindley2821 Před 6 dny

    Story good. The flip flop of different voices playing the same character is horrible, absolutely ruined it.

    • @richardlindley2821
      @richardlindley2821 Před 6 dny

      Also voices completely not matching a character too, ruined it. But still, good story.

  • @HoanNguyen-uc9zk
    @HoanNguyen-uc9zk Před měsícem +1

    OK . Thanks

  • @archivis
    @archivis Před měsícem

    O(

  • @JacksonBandons-b5l
    @JacksonBandons-b5l Před 11 dny

    Martinez John Perez Matthew White Karen

  • @sproket168
    @sproket168 Před 10 dny

    Shit

  • @TrueRandomization
    @TrueRandomization Před měsícem

    Are these AI generated

    • @kingmasterlord
      @kingmasterlord Před 21 dnem

      yes

    • @aronlinde1723
      @aronlinde1723 Před 4 dny

      Stories can vary. The AI stories are rambling messes. This one had a human involved. The reading is an AI, not voice actors.

  • @charleslamontagne983
    @charleslamontagne983 Před 28 dny

    This story is pathetic

  • @williamderro9600
    @williamderro9600 Před měsícem

    Voice actors are terrible

  • @matcongaidaijimmy8517
    @matcongaidaijimmy8517 Před měsícem

    Good story. Thank you for upload full story