The 4 WORST Kinds of College Essays
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- čas přidán 24. 07. 2024
- Here are the 4 WORST kinds of college essays... and how to fix them!
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Hi! We're Kevin and Jeffrey, two Yalies who want to help you get into your dream school!
About Kevin Zhen: Exeter '16, Yale '20 (East Asian Studies)
Since 2016, Kevin has personally helped more than 50+ students gain acceptances into every Ivy League University, as well as top tech schools such as Stanford and Georgia Tech. He also loves teaching creative nonfiction, flash fiction and poetry. In total, his students have won more than 120+ Scholastic Writing awards.
About Jeffrey Yu: Yale '23 (Computer Science and East Asian Studies)
Jeff is a senior at Yale double majoring in Computer Science and East Asian Studies with a concentration on China. His college admissions essay was featured in the New York Times, and he specializes in essay writing, college admissions strategy, and life coaching. He has served as a Student Ambassador to the Yale Admissions Office, written extensively about college admissions on Quora and has taught courses on motivation, passion, and leadership while sponsored by the US Embassy in Tokyo.
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Hi bro. Could you also make a video about approaching "Why us?" College essays? I mean, yes, there are many tips, but there's just no video on CZcams giving detailed info. So, would be happy if you did that :)
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Thanks for the idea! I will
Why us! yes pleeeeeease I hate them
Can you make videos regarding extracurricular activities?
I 'm very clueless because some say that your activities should point in a particular direction ,while others say that your activities need to be all rounded.
Hi Kevin! Just small request as your internet younger brother... can you please make a similar video for college interviews as well. I have mine coming up in January and I really don't know how to guide myself through it... it would be of great help if you could. Thanks
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Won't you do your free essay review this month?
please help guys