उत्कृष्ट रचना, आपकी प्रस्तुति उम्दा दीदी
Bahut acchi kahani hai... Jab pita hi kisi poorvaagrah se grast ho toh betiyon ke paas kya vikalp reh sakta hai... Seemit vikalpon mein se ek ek chun liya bacchiyon ne....
Shach me paristhiti varsh ham apni baat na to kah paate Hain Na kisi Ko Bata paate Hain Rachna bahut Sundar thi man mein bus gayi
Story feels incomplete. End is unsatisfactory .Father should be punished
Very beautiful and very pathetic story.
Bahhut hi dukhbhari kahani .aisy pita bhi hoty hay .