[scrapped] wrong floor,assembly cut, abandoned

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  • čas přidán 16. 11. 2012
  • I dont' believe the piece will work as a completed film, Though each scene was solid on it's own, togethery they did not make a film to my satisfaction. I have been releasing each scene alone instead, here is the longer cut the logical inconsistencies are due from me writing and rewriting this many times after scenes were done, If I were going to finisgh this I would go back and fix all the logical weirdness
    Some people might have noticed I did not post wrong floor during the saxxies. Here is the story with that, about three months ago I did an edit of everything I had done on wrong floor, Though each scene alone was good, the whole thing cut together was very disjointed. This can be attributed to the fact that the project was my "learner" project for SFM, and wasn't following much of a script for a while. Since the project was not to my satisfaction when cut together, and already outside the time limit for the saxxies, I decided to turf it for now. I dont know if I will return to it, this is unlikely , as I feel I can make a more compelling film from scratch than to finish this project. I'll definately do more portal 2 and pboyd/atlas stuff, but it wont be wrong floor. I'm posting up the bad cut that I used that decision here. this cut here is unfinished and lacks a lot.
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  • @NoName-ef3jq
    @NoName-ef3jq Před 4 lety +955

    Nearly 8 years later, It's still sad to see that this project was abandoned for such a long time.

  • @richardpurbaugh8911
    @richardpurbaugh8911 Před 5 lety +299

    Atlas: can we keep him
    P-body:no, he might be defective
    Atlas:we can kill the bird with it
    (Atlas and P-body laughed)

    • @stay_awsome1238
      @stay_awsome1238 Před 2 lety +7

      P body : This is why i never let you keep things
      Atlas : atleast we made friends
      P body : someone help....

    • @emmajeanjones6552
      @emmajeanjones6552 Před 2 lety +2

      AHAHAHAHAHA

  • @Kanerade
    @Kanerade Před 4 lety +1040

    I love how Chell just comes out of no where..

  • @ayberkkurucay7760
    @ayberkkurucay7760 Před 4 lety +214

    5:40 ah yes the best ending

    • @gamesgo6724
      @gamesgo6724 Před 3 lety +6

      now its looks like that he s gonna go crazy

    • @ForestofTwilight
      @ForestofTwilight Před 2 lety +4

      AAAAHG

    • @MarcoS_Tourist
      @MarcoS_Tourist Před 2 lety +4

      @@ForestofTwilight after that, everyone died. The end

    • @blankspace6918
      @blankspace6918 Před 2 lety

      with the great rendering and lighting, OH look it has such a stab noise! and a NOT bland ending!

  • @firegodjr8331
    @firegodjr8331 Před 8 lety +704

    It's too bad this was scrapped. The animation was excellent, the story was funny and fairly well done, even with the logical inconsistency.

    • @wildadventures5606
      @wildadventures5606 Před 5 lety +5

      Ikr!

    • @morganpriest7726
      @morganpriest7726 Před 4 lety +14

      I think the inconsistency is the point tbh

    • @guysweremlg7133
      @guysweremlg7133 Před 2 lety +4

      @@morganpriest7726 yes

    • @user-bv3iu1im2c
      @user-bv3iu1im2c Před 2 lety

      @@wildadventures5606 яямюяммяямюяюямямюяюммяяяюмюмяяммяюяммямюямммююмМЮ

    • @Epikgamer1995
      @Epikgamer1995 Před rokem +1

      It's not scrapped so when he sad don't press that button that was taken from when they were gonna do a core swap again after glados turn before the ending part

  • @ArodoraaLP
    @ArodoraaLP Před 11 lety +465

    It's funny, because this is still 500x better than 7/8 of the stuff other people make.

  • @macecail
    @macecail Před 5 lety +469

    *3:10** ooooooh boi!!! Here comes the turret remix with the hello "o" glitch in beginning of the remix!!!*

  • @Deadbay
    @Deadbay Před 3 lety +63

    3:34 Hooray! **Literally falls over**

  • @Terabyte-ej2zt
    @Terabyte-ej2zt Před 6 lety +1732

    My heart melted at the “take me with u, I’m different”

  • @teadrinkingkris9466
    @teadrinkingkris9466 Před 4 lety +108

    "Take me with you! I'm different!" *really REALLY really... Really really cute turret's look*

  • @BertSCPSL
    @BertSCPSL Před rokem +28

    9 years later I come back to this amazing master piece of an abandonment. Sad to see it.

  • @grimm7507
    @grimm7507 Před 5 lety +236

    Peabody:*stabs*
    Weatley:ah
    End

  • @nonoboy9565
    @nonoboy9565 Před 8 lety +1663

    When the turret said "sleep mode activated" I expected a beat drop

  • @bittersweetvictory8541
    @bittersweetvictory8541 Před 6 lety +121

    As someone who personally looks into doing SFM animations with Portal/Portal 2 assets, it's very reassuring to see that the program is more than capable of doing what I need it to do - and that I won't be the only person doing it either. Kudos to your skills, I have to say!

  • @hotdogkiller3905
    @hotdogkiller3905 Před 5 lety +52

    “Dad where do baby’s come from?”
    “Vital apparatus vents?”

  • @NoOb-tr3vr
    @NoOb-tr3vr Před 3 lety +36

    3:10 i used to listen to this when im was stressed cuz theyre soo cute and are calming me

  • @husk_xrl5511
    @husk_xrl5511 Před 6 lety +479

    1:17
    S̸͟͞M̸͟͞A̸͟͞S̸͟͞H̸͟͞Y̸͟͞ S̸͟͞P̸͟͞I̸͟͞K̸͟͞E̸͟͞ P̸͟͞L̸͟͞A̸͟͞T̸͟͞E̸͟͞

  • @digimonalvatrax2738
    @digimonalvatrax2738 Před 8 lety +98

    i just noticed that turrents are the most cutest/deadliest robots ever.

  • @gravity1537
    @gravity1537 Před 3 lety +11

    4:32 I can't be the only person who heard "CANADA."

  • @OPmoth
    @OPmoth Před 4 lety +109

    “I never liked her” Damn the turrets are sassy!

  • @purple4800
    @purple4800 Před 4 lety +206

    When the turret said: "sleep mode activated"
    I was expecting it to blow up or shoot everyone😂😂😂

    • @daspedal2730
      @daspedal2730 Před 3 lety +4

      cause things do so much when they sleep huh...hm...got it!

    • @mattrug730
      @mattrug730 Před 2 lety +3

      3:38 I like turrets bec they sounded cute and says:"sleep mode activated goodbye"

    • @zonebro6205
      @zonebro6205 Před 2 lety

      Woken in a nutshell

  • @motherofdragons7048
    @motherofdragons7048 Před 7 lety +2687

    anyone else think the turrets are kinda cute?

  • @TehEpicMike
    @TehEpicMike Před rokem +40

    almost 11 years later and still looks like a completed animation. Good work!

  • @thatonecrimsonecho
    @thatonecrimsonecho Před 2 lety +10

    I remember watching this years ago and loving it. Still holds up even today.

  • @spacecorewheatley3711
    @spacecorewheatley3711 Před 9 lety +380

    IT'S THE BIRD! RUN AWAY! I HAVE NO PLAN FOR THIS! ABORT MISSION! RETREAT! RETREAT!
    Wait.. That's not my line.. That's GLaDOS' line.. I mean uhh.. SPACE!

    • @SmooglePouch
      @SmooglePouch Před 9 lety +1

      Lol

    • @veryberrysaber
      @veryberrysaber Před 9 lety +2

      You failed me.

    • @hushhushhush874
      @hushhushhush874 Před 9 lety +7

      GLaDOS told me to say (clears throat) I AM THE BEST AT SPACE!

    • @thegamingowl901
      @thegamingowl901 Před 9 lety +4

      Space Core & Wheatley SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACE

    • @Indee___
      @Indee___ Před 9 lety +1

      Space Core shut up you pile of fucked up in the head scrap metal

  • @bonytv
    @bonytv Před 10 lety +43

    2:20 cute turret

  • @eohq
    @eohq Před 4 lety +81

    0:30
    Wheatley: *nods* no!
    Logic?

  • @Lunarcreeper
    @Lunarcreeper Před 5 lety +135

    3:05 wtf is wrong with chell's eyes

    • @NO-pf2gp
      @NO-pf2gp Před 3 lety +1

      AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

    • @YoYo-kh4tl
      @YoYo-kh4tl Před 3 lety +3

      I farted

    • @mahi_mahi962
      @mahi_mahi962 Před 3 lety +3

      It's pronounced chell

    • @jakelight6750
      @jakelight6750 Před 3 lety +6

      It's a scrapped animation so it's not finished

    • @soudelnoop
      @soudelnoop Před 3 lety +3

      @@jakelight6750 its because in her character model there is no pupils so thats why it looks weird

  • @billdrew7229
    @billdrew7229 Před 7 lety +565

    OMG CHELL's EYES ARE BLANK 3:07

  • @satriabu0516
    @satriabu0516 Před 5 lety +18

    2:55 turret sound is amazing

  • @twinkiecat.5794
    @twinkiecat.5794 Před 4 lety +10

    That turret remix was a cliff-hanger.

  • @wujek7616
    @wujek7616 Před 5 lety +220

    1:55 G man in toliet

  • @spartanwar1185
    @spartanwar1185 Před 9 lety +95

    Best video ever..so far

  • @rangerarion6937
    @rangerarion6937 Před 7 lety +243

    2:07
    I SPY WITH MY LITTLE EYE A SPY IN THE BOTTOM RIGHT CORNER

  • @umutcaganucanok4109
    @umutcaganucanok4109 Před 5 lety +1

    The Different Turret finally has its own video.

  • @Minecrafter6818
    @Minecrafter6818 Před 5 lety +16

    3:10 - 3:50 I loved that! I wish u made a song of it alone like just the music

  • @wingy9309
    @wingy9309 Před 7 lety +15

    2:38
    OMG THIS IS TOO CUTE!!!

  • @Blockybodyguard
    @Blockybodyguard Před 10 lety +57

    5:21 background turret king

  • @allo_es_me_sam
    @allo_es_me_sam Před 5 lety +14

    Although this isn’t finished. Props to all the effort put in.

    • @ZachariahScott
      @ZachariahScott  Před 5 lety +5

      To be fair it’s unfinished because I put more effort than thought into it. But it was fun to make these bits

  • @Breadn
    @Breadn Před 3 lety +16

    The scene at 3:16 reminds me of that one episode of Spongebob with the jellyfish vibin.

  • @TawpShelf
    @TawpShelf Před 10 lety +16

    I love how this is organized like a fairytale. The two gain allies to overcome obstacles.

  • @Tommygun_
    @Tommygun_ Před 7 lety +267

    I liked part that turrets were singing 3:10

  • @sebastianwest5533
    @sebastianwest5533 Před 4 lety +8

    I really like this concept and I'm sad it was scrapped. A full vid for this would be awesome

  • @TheIsleMercenariesReal
    @TheIsleMercenariesReal Před 3 lety +3

    The freaking core is killing everyone!

  • @PostalDudeTF2
    @PostalDudeTF2 Před 5 lety +12

    3:33 "i never minecraft"

  • @LegoRandomness243
    @LegoRandomness243 Před 11 lety +16

    This is probably one of the few SFM videos that I've seen to coming close to being an actual movie. There seems to be so many scenes and scenarios, yet they all would coincide with one-another if done right. I surely hope you pick this up again as it would be even more beautiful finished than it is now.

  • @anonymouspotato7294
    @anonymouspotato7294 Před 3 lety +5

    I remember watching this.
    Such nostalgia!

  • @handlenottaken
    @handlenottaken Před 11 měsíci +2

    2:18 that was heart warming

  • @MikhailRothenberg
    @MikhailRothenberg Před 10 lety +16

    Aw too bad. I would've loved to see this as a full film. I love the concept of different valve games coming together.

  • @yolomationanimation9784
    @yolomationanimation9784 Před 6 lety +53

    Sad that this short was scrapped, I'm sure if you had some help with connecting the shorts to together it could be good, like the scene where they find the safe turret room that could've been the same room where they raid the defective turrets for armour

  • @SAYVARELO
    @SAYVARELO Před 3 lety +5

    Turret:sleep mode activated
    Me:DAMN THAT SO NICE DU-
    Me:sleep mode activated- EY YO WHAT THE- *sleep

  • @Ins0mniBat
    @Ins0mniBat Před 4 lety +19

    AAAUGGGGHHH - *_ends_*

  • @cryptidcadaver
    @cryptidcadaver Před 9 lety +537

    Ok i love wheatley and all... but am i the only person who hated wheatley when he was in charge of the facility?

  • @imadedumbcommentsandicantf5452

    Weathlys last word
    "AAHAUOOAA!!"

  • @Fspoke_
    @Fspoke_ Před 2 lety +1

    this makes no sense but so much sense at the same time and i love it

  • @mont9150
    @mont9150 Před 2 lety +1

    how can i miss this masterpiece

  • @pikejohnson6409
    @pikejohnson6409 Před 8 lety +12

    3:07 oh crap... 😁 3:32 dang man! These turrets got bars!

  • @clankplusm
    @clankplusm Před 6 lety +84

    5:30 look they broke the *fourth wall*

  • @RUGER5264
    @RUGER5264 Před 5 měsíci +1

    This video sparks so much nostalgia for me. Really wish it got finished.

  • @Megan59
    @Megan59 Před 5 lety +1

    I love how wheatly is just like no please come back

  • @rhager842
    @rhager842 Před 7 lety +49

    1:16 Hehehehhe... MASHY SPIKE PLATE!

  • @paintit5116
    @paintit5116 Před 8 lety +4

    "THAT WHEATLY IS A SPY!"

  • @thestriker135
    @thestriker135 Před rokem +1

    The way chell just appears is amazing

  • @stoneforest2639
    @stoneforest2639 Před 5 lety +10

    I feel bad for the turret. It’s just like “please stop touching me. I like to have privacy. I will pinch your hand now.”

  • @fally15
    @fally15 Před 11 lety +3

    Awww i hate it when someone produces something this good but they feel like it didnt come out the way they wanted it. Its an amazing piece of work but as always dont feel forced into continuing if its truly not what you wanted it to be. Just know its been enjoyed by a lot of viewers :D

  • @Ambr
    @Ambr Před 7 lety +59

    5:29
    Such Physics.
    But anyways, WHY DID YOU SCRAP IT!!!! WHY!

    • @cheeriosboy1026
      @cheeriosboy1026 Před 3 lety

      The car was attached to a rail.

    • @Ambr
      @Ambr Před 3 lety

      @@cheeriosboy1026 Damn, replying 3 years later. Neat to see this video is still getting attention. I don't even remember writing this comment, but you made me rewatch the whole video again.

    • @cheeriosboy1026
      @cheeriosboy1026 Před 3 lety

      @@Ambr Couldn’t you just click on your own timestamp?

    • @Ambr
      @Ambr Před 3 lety

      @@cheeriosboy1026 ah no, I just meant I wanted to rewatch it again.

    • @cheeriosboy1026
      @cheeriosboy1026 Před 3 lety

      @@Ambr Oh lol.

  • @CHITUS
    @CHITUS Před 2 lety +3

    Turret: Target Aquired
    Also Turret: Shoots Nothing
    Turret Again: Opens eyelids in sudden realization

  • @rngesus66
    @rngesus66 Před rokem

    I remember watching this WAY back when it came out. Now YT just decided to put it in my recommendation,
    Thank you.

  • @tiantian329
    @tiantian329 Před 6 lety +15

    0:30
    “NO!”
    You selfish little beast

  • @TheGmodGucker
    @TheGmodGucker Před 11 lety +14

    This is actually REALLY well done, and the scenes fit beautifully together.

  • @MapleSyoutube
    @MapleSyoutube Před 2 lety +1

    i watched this when i was young nice to see it still here!

  • @nemostf2161
    @nemostf2161 Před 3 lety +7

    3:54 Heavy is gone!

  • @preskopresko
    @preskopresko Před 6 lety +67

    3:11-3:39 thats what i heard from the turrets:Hello-o-o-o-o-o (ouch x12) hello again hi like lemonade please stop (h-hey x2) **sentry turret shooting** hello hey nevermind sure who are you-zvooo **sentry turret shooting x3)hello hey nevermind sure hurey-ey **DED** (CH x8) sleep mode activated goodbye **DED**

  • @oneoneword
    @oneoneword Před 11 lety +3

    Want to see more Portal humor with just the co-op team, with animations this good and such clever humor, do hope Valve catches wind of you sir and give you some serious applause or a damn job at least. *nods*

  • @Macadamica
    @Macadamica Před 2 lety

    God, that ending thou. That ending was fire, even an unperfectly cut scream

  • @DoubleThink-jc2dp
    @DoubleThink-jc2dp Před 4 lety +32

    00:30 when some asks me for some of my snacks

    • @SnowyTulip0707
      @SnowyTulip0707 Před 4 lety

      @Glitchy have you got the mashy spike plate yet?

    • @8-bitjams134
      @8-bitjams134 Před 4 lety

      @Glitchy well theres 2 problems
      1 cleaning the remains
      2 it might mash your cookies

    • @8-bitjams134
      @8-bitjams134 Před 4 lety

      @Glitchy what if your incinerator becomes selfaware and begins to feel horrible for what it has consumed

    • @8-bitjams134
      @8-bitjams134 Před 4 lety

      @Glitchy so how do you plan on moving the over 4000 degree kelvin metal incinerator without melting when you go near it

    • @8-bitjams134
      @8-bitjams134 Před 4 lety

      @Glitchy i cant think of any flaws anymore

  • @lunapony3
    @lunapony3 Před 10 lety +40

    Why abandon this? Why?!

  • @lincolnmarsden234
    @lincolnmarsden234 Před 7 lety +8

    I love the part we're one of the turrets say HARRAY and jump up

  • @teadrinkingkris9466
    @teadrinkingkris9466 Před 4 lety +8

    4:14 This scanner's laugh xd.

  • @xzem613
    @xzem613 Před 7 měsíci +1

    i STILL Remember this, amazing animation haha

  • @angela22778
    @angela22778 Před 6 lety +53

    On 4:24, i can see its computerized

  • @rulerpestilence
    @rulerpestilence Před 6 lety +8

    one turret said "make lemonade"

  • @spookyplant2868
    @spookyplant2868 Před 5 lety +12

    0:13 *inhale * WHEATLEYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙

    • @whyhello6561
      @whyhello6561 Před 3 lety +1

      The insane lil british robot we all love! 💙💙💙

    • @flpfl.p5378
      @flpfl.p5378 Před 3 lety

      @@whyhello6561 despite the fact that his one goal for the entire second half of the game was to kill us, he’s still our favorite 💙

    • @SAYVARELO
      @SAYVARELO Před 3 lety +1

      THE LITTLE BRITISH IS BACK YYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAY👏💙💙💙💙💙

  • @sorceressful
    @sorceressful Před 2 lety +1

    I love how chell holds potato GLaDOS

  • @derssy1363
    @derssy1363 Před 7 lety +310

    if you like this you will hear the rest of the portal remix

  • @XxgamerxX-wd6rz
    @XxgamerxX-wd6rz Před 9 lety +32

    Why on earth did you scrap this masterpiece why!?!? >=(

  • @Alex_hisfriendfromschool
    @Alex_hisfriendfromschool Před 3 lety +5

    1:37 thats so cute

  • @FMHikari
    @FMHikari Před rokem +2

    The fact they believed the turret side mount could serve as a shield tells wonders about their intelligence

  • @damiannotmyles
    @damiannotmyles Před 8 lety +87

    i loved this part xD 3:11 - 3:39

  • @Kuavatree
    @Kuavatree Před 6 lety +3

    “Do not press that button!”
    Lol no
    *presses it*
    TROLOLOLOL

  • @sirankleknocker3122
    @sirankleknocker3122 Před 4 lety +7

    R.I.P that one boi with the “01” plate on his forehead

  • @hontom11
    @hontom11 Před 5 lety +2

    0:29 nods and screams: "NO"

  • @walmartadine984
    @walmartadine984 Před 7 lety +28

    still better love story then twilight

  • @filipzivko8463
    @filipzivko8463 Před 9 lety +6

    i love the turet song part

  • @RikaShinePY
    @RikaShinePY Před 4 lety +34

    5:36 *The ending is just epic but one question Why are the robots scared of a damm bird 😂*

    • @jeffreynolds8830
      @jeffreynolds8830 Před 4 lety +5

      I have a bird, and god does he love to chew up any wire and break it

    • @cheeriosboy1026
      @cheeriosboy1026 Před 3 lety

      ŘĒÃPËŘ ĐĚĀŢH Yeah, Ikr.

  • @cool-birb
    @cool-birb Před 4 lety +3

    This is from 7 years ago but it’s still a great animation for today’s standards

  • @DeltaBot
    @DeltaBot Před 9 lety +69

    Pause at 2:07 anyone else notice the Blu Spy from TeamFortress2?

  • @felixbrb
    @felixbrb Před 3 lety +7

    why abandon this? it's a true masterpiece!

  • @MatHat1
    @MatHat1 Před 4 měsíci +1

    That beat was FIRE

  • @AnAverageOhioStickmen8893
    @AnAverageOhioStickmen8893 Před 6 měsíci +1

    Holy Sweet Merciful Crap.
    This is my Childhood after 6 - 7 Years...