Tally Hall Music to Fall Asleep To (With Rain)

As stated in the video, this is my first video like this, so I want as much feedback from it as possible.
I made this video because I like the music, but there's only one video like it, but I'm not the biggest fan of the song selection.
The inspiration for this video (and the thumbnail) is here:
• listening to tally hal...
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I own NONE of these songs, and if you want to listen to them from their original sources, the channels are listed below.
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/ @tallyhall
/ @robcantormusic
/ @hawaiipartii / ミラクルミュージカル - topic
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Timestamps:
00:00 - Spring and Storm
04:51 - Hidden in the Sand
06:24 - I Know (It's Just the Same)
12:01 - Introduction to the Snow
13:39 - Stranded Lullaby
17:26 - Go
20:42 - Keep Up the Good Work (Incomplete Demo)
21:28 - Miss Melodi
25:14 - Lonely but not Alone
27:48 - At the End of the Day
31:17 - Dream sweet in Sea Major (Demo)
Thanks For watching!

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thank you so much... :,) I NEEDED THIS