big blue ocean (original song)

this song means a lot to me, and i've really enjoyed making it. i know it's not perfect, but that's alright.
here are the lyrics:
a big blue ocean
the goal was always to be above surface
recently though i’ve found myself diving
deeper down going into hiding
the setting sun may look so pretty
but it’s so far away from the city
i’m going down
down where i fear you can’t find me
i’m way past the goldfish
looking straight into the eyes of a shark
above the surface is only a fin
a big blue demotion
i’ve changed my views or at least they changed me
pulling myself under, can you even hear me?
please don’t let me drown
the setting sun may look so pretty
but it’s so far away from the city
i’m going down
down where i fear you can’t find me
i’m way past the goldfish
looking straight into the eyes of a shark
above the surface is only a fin
don’t let me drown
take me into town
i’ll put on my best gown
i’ll just be glad to have been found
i’ll just be glad to have been found
even though i was so far down
i’ll just be so glad to have been found
in this big blue ocean

[@RF-mc8cx]

I’m going to have this on repeat for the next century, your vibrato is DIVINE

[@pedrodelaluna4326]

Your as serious as your music 🎶. Really makes it great that you're into it. I'm a musician and songwriter. I will follow you. 👍👍👍🎶🎶🎶🎶🖤🖤🖤

[@vvalu010]

Woaaah sis thats awsone dont give up ur big

[@ddssnfnd9929]

beautiful