Honor among thieves, huh? Well, it's more of a "honor among a thief and a northern assassin". I like the spin you give to these sort of stories, it's not the first time. This format and set pieces were already present in games like Fire Emblem for example and some animes, but you manage to surprise regardless. Thanks for the time you took to make this.
@@LapideVoice HUH?! Uh... well yeah. I assume you want me to tell you because YOU asked... OKAY!! 😃 1. Your accent interferes a little with the accent you're trying to give the character. I noticed you have some difficulties with that balance, because this character seems like she has 2 accents, which is really off putting lol. For example, she says "Duuhling" (Darling) or "Abzzurd" (Absurd) or "Behly" (barely), but then she goes like "tink" (think) or "rater" (rather) instead of "Ruthuh". Sensitive ears are a curse, no? 2. The english is too modern sometimes. This character is supposed to be flirty, mysterious, and most importantly, living in an ancient time no? Medieval, I assume? Because you mentioned guards and royals. So it's kinda "huh?" when I hear stuff like "Let that slide" or "It's okay". Now, this would be better if that english is consistent with all the script, but then she uses fancy english and actually says stuff like "Do NOT worry" instead of "Don't worry". 3. You stumble sometimes! It's cute!🤩But it unfortunately affects the audio. Is it because of nervousness? For example, you said "And why is someone like you coming all de way from Yggdrasil coming to this pesky little place?" Why do you repeat the word "coming"? It really sounded strange. Btw I don't know if that's how yggdrasil is spelled. Let me give you another example: you stumble mid-sentence from 8:47 to 8:49. Also, I noticed you... "kinda" stumbled when you said "“Due to the fact that I do not know 100% if I can trust you" (5:41), because you spoke WAY too fast and I had to rewind to understand what she was saying. I assume you stumbled, but tried to pick yourself up. 4. The sound effects at the beginning of the video. The one that kicks it off is way too loud, kinda like a jumpscare for people that expect ASMR. Also, the guard's voice sound far from the mic, so it's an unpleasant contrast from your voice, which sounds LOUD (in ASMR standards) and CLEAR. Also, not a big fan of profanity, but I understand because in medieval times people kinda didn't care about feelings like we do today xD. Also, I was going to say that the guard's voice don't sound intimidating (they sound funny and like a parody), but then I remembered some of the guards of "The Witcher 3: Wild Hunt" so... yeah. Kinda makes sense! Some guards come from humble places. Finally, the "running" sound effects don't sound like someone's running; it sounds like someone is knocking on wood. Hope this helps! Good night!!
That voice changer works quite well. Still recognisably you, but great for adding an extra character here and there. The Crimson Rose is pure cool. She was worth waiting for.
So we stold a small amount of food and a whole bunch of guards show up to catch us. Any else getting Aladdin vibes from this like how he stold some bread
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We getting sent back to the medieval time with this one 💯🗣🗣🗣🔥
kinda? Idk what time she is in but I suppose medieval would work!
Such a unique setting and characters, it’s very impressive!
I am glad you enjoyed the video!
Honor among thieves, huh? Well, it's more of a "honor among a thief and a northern assassin". I like the spin you give to these sort of stories, it's not the first time. This format and set pieces were already present in games like Fire Emblem for example and some animes, but you manage to surprise regardless. Thanks for the time you took to make this.
I was inspired by zorro myself for this one! I am curious, were there things I can improve in this one?
@@LapideVoice HUH?! Uh... well yeah. I assume you want me to tell you because YOU asked... OKAY!! 😃
1. Your accent interferes a little with the accent you're trying to give the character. I noticed you have some difficulties with that balance, because this character seems like she has 2 accents, which is really off putting lol. For example, she says "Duuhling" (Darling) or "Abzzurd" (Absurd) or "Behly" (barely), but then she goes like "tink" (think) or "rater" (rather) instead of "Ruthuh". Sensitive ears are a curse, no?
2. The english is too modern sometimes. This character is supposed to be flirty, mysterious, and most importantly, living in an ancient time no? Medieval, I assume? Because you mentioned guards and royals. So it's kinda "huh?" when I hear stuff like "Let that slide" or "It's okay". Now, this would be better if that english is consistent with all the script, but then she uses fancy english and actually says stuff like "Do NOT worry" instead of "Don't worry".
3. You stumble sometimes! It's cute!🤩But it unfortunately affects the audio. Is it because of nervousness? For example, you said "And why is someone like you coming all de way from Yggdrasil coming to this pesky little place?" Why do you repeat the word "coming"? It really sounded strange. Btw I don't know if that's how yggdrasil is spelled. Let me give you another example: you stumble mid-sentence from 8:47 to 8:49. Also, I noticed you... "kinda" stumbled when you said "“Due to the fact that I do not know 100% if I can trust you" (5:41), because you spoke WAY too fast and I had to rewind to understand what she was saying. I assume you stumbled, but tried to pick yourself up.
4. The sound effects at the beginning of the video. The one that kicks it off is way too loud, kinda like a jumpscare for people that expect ASMR. Also, the guard's voice sound far from the mic, so it's an unpleasant contrast from your voice, which sounds LOUD (in ASMR standards) and CLEAR. Also, not a big fan of profanity, but I understand because in medieval times people kinda didn't care about feelings like we do today xD. Also, I was going to say that the guard's voice don't sound intimidating (they sound funny and like a parody), but then I remembered some of the guards of "The Witcher 3: Wild Hunt" so... yeah. Kinda makes sense! Some guards come from humble places. Finally, the "running" sound effects don't sound like someone's running; it sounds like someone is knocking on wood.
Hope this helps! Good night!!
That voice changer works quite well. Still recognisably you, but great for adding an extra character here and there.
The Crimson Rose is pure cool. She was worth waiting for.
Yeah I think it's not the best idea but sometimes I think it's nice to use it as something to add more characters in if they aren't big
I enjoyed this hope you do a sequel
There will not be a sequel for this one
@@LapideVoice pity but still nice audio
@@sheb2000phoenix Glad you enjoyed it!
Keep up your good work
Will do!
So we stold a small amount of food and a whole bunch of guards show up to catch us. Any else getting Aladdin vibes from this like how he stold some bread
That was the inspiration for this scene, yes. I watched the movie soon
@@LapideVoice the original one or the l a version
@@yuukithehedgehog original, i don't like how they portray genie in the live action
@@LapideVoice I guess
Amazing audio!
thank you!
Whats that whip for? 🤨📸
Wouldn't you like to know weather boy
weapon -v-
•Great Video!! I hope you’re doing well!!❤•’
I am slowly getting better, I am still recovering from a small burnout but I'll be okay in a minute
💚💚
^^
I… is there a part 2?
Sadly not