[@tongyan2378]

The background music is kinda depressing though..but this really helped, thanks!

[@OceansAnthology]

I agree

[@ezo1993]

I agree too

[@umeshmore2843]

Hope I will do it. Tomorrow is my Story telling competition. Thanks 🥰🥰📖📖
Finally, I am selected today. Thank you very very much 😃😃

[@enigma7395]

Hey me too....
Mines tommorow..
Which class???

[@enigma7395]

Hey me too...
Mines tommorow...
Which class??

[@umeshmore2843]

7 th STD 🥰 All the best

[@gourangakhanduala2774]

8 class

[@crispyattucks]

How did it go?

[@LoveIshii]

Thank you. I am relatively new in the writing business and this helps me in several aspects such as creating a scene for your readers. ❤️❤️

[@felipecifuentes4031]

I think this video is really interesting because its true, I mean when someone tells a story and keeps telling unimportant details it gets boring but when someone tells a story fast changing the voice tone it gets funnier and quicker

[@ClipTellerMedia]

Thank you, I am not a writer by any means, but I found your video very straight to the point with great examples and I feel like I got a really huge idea of what is like storytelling and I am planning to apply your advice to my next video.

[@octane2344]

The second story connected the emotional impact of every event & detail for oneself and others

[@GeekyMino]

Another great tip is to tell the story in such a way that the end in not know and walk the listener step by step only telling him/her what you knew at the time. Interesting exercise I’ll try it.

[@FreedomKingdom]

That's also a great way of telling a story, thank you for mentioning it!

[@GeekyMino]

You’re welcome :)

[@storiesworthtellingwiththe6810]

This is a Story Worth Telling! Please let us know if you'd like to be in our show!

[@allanleahpodcast5320]

Very unorthodox style of teaching how to tell a story.
Very much appreciated. Thank you.

[@jovanarajek]

This indeed helped me. Thank you so much, a truly appreciate it!😊🧡

[@justlisten9861]

I'm a learner. And your video is so fascinating. Thank you for your guidance.

[@deepankarranjan5577]

There was also a sense of positivity in the second version.

[@andyjohanson1104]

This was really helpful for me. Now I know I shouldn't be monotonous and make it more excited by changing my tone.
Thanks !

[@d3nxel953]

Thank you! I need this for a very big storytelling! ❤

[@stariidusk8046]

Awesome video, and I love the background music, it's pretty calming!

[@shiro9371]

same makes me feel sleepy

[@jannyharsono593]

Thanks it really helpful your tips. I learned a lot.

[@VarshaManoj]

This made me realize a lot of things. I have a lot to work on.. Being a teacher.. Story telling skills are extremely important for me. Thank you so much for the video!

[@sabbirahmed-fq9wg]

please pray for me..

[@neonpee]

love this!

[@HispleMedia]

This is exactly what I was looking for...I will come back look at your channel. Thanks

[@abiodunfeyisayo6379]

Thank youuuuu so much...this was helpful. I love your accent BTW and the background music blended just as great. I subscribed already. Looking forward to more videos . lots of love

[@FreedomKingdom]

Thank you so much for this lovely comment!🥰

[@aavishahi757]

This Video was Very Good To become a storyteller

[@nickivlachou3117]

This were great tipps. Thank you!

[@XIBLEE]

It was nice. Helped a lot. Thank you very much.

[@istikomahtarup9718]

Thanks for the tip i have storytelling comp and i just practiced with my teacher who is gonna be listening to me for the competition and when i read it she said i need eye contact and a scene to make everyone listen and interesting also foucused

[@julitasoriano9144]

Equipped me with tangible ideas of how to become effective storyteller

[@Nhinami]

Such a great example! I've learned a lot thank you so much 😍😍

[@serkangurluk]

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[@Kat87018]

Wonderful video. I have learnt a lot about about storytelling. Thanks :)

[@PMCHIJILLIANEHALEYCACLAN]

Thank you now I know what to write in my individual project thank you

[@Guiter00]

I loved this video and it is helping me a lot. Thank you 🙏 for this
And i also love your voice ❤️

[@IAmLukarumodoshi]

I've been looking for this video for a long time

[@akmdigital2907]

It's amazing please make more vedio like this...

[@navshri]

Thanks for the video. Very helpful.
Like already mentioned, you may put a little more upbeat happy music.

[@rudolphsimmonds1382]

Excellent advice. Thank you

[@nadamokhtar1887]

So helpful, thanks ❤❤❤

[@thatskindacreepystorytelli520]

Thanks for this video. It's really helpful.

[@macvotechutiya8777]

Thanks a bunch! I really loved it! 💗💗

[@julitasoriano9144]

It helped grasp ideas to become effective, better parent

[@gcl_arduino]

super video now i can tell my stories in the story period in school

[@MariaMilenovasArt]

Great video, it was helpful

[@OiLaddie]

ty this helped for my school project

[@nina.tarot.23]

Very useful video ❤Thanks 👍

[@RanjuLimbu]

Beautiful illustration.... 🙏❤️ very helpful for people learning story telling ❤️

[@Mr.Sanjay_Mahato]

Thank you 😊❤️

[@Max-kn8mz]

This would help me a Lot for my Roman Report next week thanks

[@Graceunderfiire]

Thank you

[@bhargavsharma5385]

Thanks lady

[@shainaanandiera6047]

Hello, thank you so much for these tips. This REALLY helps, I have a storytelling competition and im the one who was chosen by the school to presentate againce OTHER schools! I am very nervous, but now i feel fine thanks to you :)
PS. A random nervous 4th Grader

[@FreedomKingdom]

Good luck! Hope you win :)

[@shainaanandiera6047]

Thanks! The resulta are coming in Nov 14! Eeek

[@dustyyhazzy]

​@@shainaanandiera6047did you won it?

[@jdci75]

What you didn't mention is that your first story talked about "I" a lot and sounded egocentric. Your second story said "we" and "you" instead and was therefore a lot more engaging.

[@papahdzaki4494]

Jazâkillâh khair sis

[@LeviatHan0208]

i've feeling i should make a story about this today

[@chelseacarpets918]

sweet voice

[@eldisa013]

Thanks

[@khelzing]

Than you ❤️

[@aarikablossom2402]

Today my daughter will say a story so I showed this video 🙏👏👏👏👏

[@PopleBackyardFarm]

As I am sitting here I am looking at the colorful lights of my colorwheel speaker.. I have food in the microwave and my husband is watching the news... I am wondering, yes I am wondering am I able to do this? Yes I can but.. How? I think and ponder and think practice... I can practice.. but how?... who do I know that tells such wonderful stories.. then I think of Someone.. Look at the birds of the air... there was a Father who had two sons.. and on and on the stories go.. I think to myself.. I know who can help me tell better stories.. and I will keep practicing and keep learning from the story teller.

[@ArquitecTuya]

I'm just thinking about making videos telling stories in spanish (since it's my native language).

[@KingKelechiMusic]

thanks so much

[@jasminejoydicla7264]

Omg that made a lot of sense

[@shalinisingh4727]

It's nice

[@bhadrarathod7362]

Which app did you use for editing?
Please tell, I would really appreciate that!

[@hopebelievemagic]

It's awesome

[@isabellawynter4932]

I liked a lot the background

[@dameanvil]

00:00 📖 Storytelling isn't just for authors-it's a valuable skill applicable across various fields, enhancing self-marketing and engaging others.
00:42 🖼 Creating a vivid scene while storytelling allows listeners to visualize, feel the atmosphere, and anticipate the narrative's development.
01:51 🌟 Crafting engaging stories involves more than just recounting events-emphasis on scene-setting, tone variation, and prioritizing essential details is key.
03:15 🗣 Recognizing audience engagement is crucial-observe reactions, body language, and interest levels while storytelling to adjust and maintain engagement.
04:11 🧩 Story structures vary widely, focus on the core content and delivery, allowing flexibility in narrative construction.
04:39 📝 Practical exercise: Write, edit, and rewrite stories, emphasizing scene creation and intrigue, as practice significantly improves storytelling skills.

[@Dosh_Martin]

hi can i know the background music thank you!!

[@Idontlikeships]

N i c e

[@carverkain5226]

The crazy thing is my brain didn't comprehend a single word from the first version

[@healthybodyisahealthymind9726]

Hahaha, hi mate

[@easytops2086]

that was a good vidio

[@priyastotaleducation9385]

Good

[@RobbinX]

anyone watching in 2019?

[@michaelfacherty6722]

Yes, us!

[@mailaotero5832]

2023 🥲

[@ofomatapaschalchidubem4881]

2024 😀

[@WatchTech]

Beautifull
#kahaniyabachpanki

[@krishjhaoplegend276]

ITS GOOD

[@TheGeniusBrain]

Which editor

[@tocaraise8333]

❤️👍🏻👍🏻

[@Vaninahypnotherapy]

🌟

[@ummefaraz5191]

How did you record your this video?

[@jenellejames_mars6623]

ihave so

[@hadim_mc]

The background music is annoying to me, but thanks :)

[@priyankaroy184]

One day I will become a storyteller in my life It's my dream

[@harshitpoddar3795]

I dont know why ,but i cried seeing this video😂

[@forkeepsake]

👍

[@mr_brown5974]

Good advice but that second version of the story you said was still boring. Could be way better.

[@KevinElmoreArkansas]

Please change your background music it's depressing.

[@FreedomKingdom]

Really? I thought it was calming...I'll think about it, thanks for the feedback :)

[@pyonsuba]

@@FreedomKingdom ohmygosh youre so sweet

[@osagupta3103]

@@FreedomKingdom I think it's very relaxing, in my opinion.

[@ALPHARISHU12]

this is very good story and i😅😆😆😅😅

[@ThatoneSaverXD]

Anyone watching in 2024?

[@tubemovie6754]

Yes

[@realistUPLOAD]

Me!

[@ThatoneSaverXD]

@@tubemovie6754 pe-pe-pennywise? MY CHILDHOOD PHOBIA?

[@thelmangwenya2243]

Yes

[@Funinaminute1]

1:43

[@kiraaudr1]

I entered a contest for storytelling hopefully this helps ;-;

[@venkateshbattu7620]

anybody here for tomorrow's story telling competition😉🤗🤗🙂

[@leomaier7938]

I`m from Germany for school here. Who else ?

[@prabhudmishra4520]

꧁•⊹٭thanks٭⊹•꧂

[@mahendrajain3284]

Please you have translate the hindi

[@aimil_chan]

Pov:you watching this because you have storytelling competition upcoming 👁👄👁

[@SuryaChandraRaoGandreddi]

Inspired from storytellers, we've made this: sem.community/
Also, we are conducting a Story writing contest, please visit sem.community/competitions for more info.

[@DTravller]

For me both versions were same.😏

[@HANSUNG-nc4cu]

I want to be a great story tellerrrrr

[@sergiocortes3042]

sapos solo #teamgodzila

[@Crippopotamus]

ye

[@chuu5856]

Your accent is weird, are you from the Fillipines?

[@elesterio7520]

I think she's indian
Filipino don't have that kind of accent
Byw its Philippines

[@samikshabidari6904]

Chuu , do you really think accent matters in 2019? She must be from Japan and she is wonderful.

[@parfaitmombo966]

There is no such a thing as weird accent. You just maybe not familiar with that type of accent. Her accent is very close to a person who has a language from the Latin language family in her repertoire. I would venture myself to say probably Spanish as primary or secondary language, and that can also explain your reference to her as from the Philippines, as Tagalog is heavily influenced by Spanish since the Spaniards made it a colony.
The most important thing in communication is to get the message, and she delivered it well. I like her accent.

[@osagupta3103]

@@elesterio7520 she isn't Indian at all, because I'm an Indian and I have a completely different accent.

[@osagupta3103]

not that it matters.

[@mohammadameen9057]

Bad

[@rehanadaulatkhan3502]

Trash 🗑

[@rjerry7218]

To be honest, I don't think it's a good story. Cause there is not problem and no solution, let alone the climax. So anyway, it's not a good story. please follow the basic structure. It's not interesting to me, so it cannot be a good story, which means you failed your titile. Sorry about that.

[@himanshumore3169]

Thank you